Back to the story.....
Brawny: Applejack, you stay here. I'll go get some money out of the bank. *swims off*
Applejack: *looks around* My, My...
*Suddenly, 3 other merponies swam to AJ, surrounding her*
MP1: I see that your a new loser here *laughs*
Applejack: Loser?!? Have ya looked into a mirror?!
All: Oooooo
MP2: Wait a second girls! She's not one of us! She's an earth Pony!
Applejack: *sneezes*
MP3: *laughs* I see that your sick...It's better to let you go with the flow, shall we?
Applejack: What? *coughs*
MP1: We don't want you to die with pain, Sugarlame.
Applejack: *is weak* Please...Just leave me alone, I ain't that sick...
MP2: Bye! See you at heaven...but your probably going to hell.
MP3: *pops bubble that was giving air to applejack*
Applejack: *coughs* *coughs* *chokes* *turns purple*
MP1: *smirks* It's better for all of us.
Applejack: *closes eyes* *drowns to floor*
All: *laughs*
MP2: Hey Day Light!
MP1: What?
MP2: Go distract Brawny, NOW!
MP1: *salutes* (swims off)
Applejack's body started to glow. Suddenly..She grew fins on her back hooves. She had turned into a merpony, but still blacked out.
MP3: WHAT?!?!
MP2: We gotta kill her..before she kills us!
MP3: *nods* (grabs AJ)
MP2: You guys didn't see anything! *looks at everypony* OR ELSE!
All: *nods fast*
The two merponies swam to a deep cave, along with AJ still knocked out.
To be continued.....
Brawny: Applejack, you stay here. I'll go get some money out of the bank. *swims off*
Applejack: *looks around* My, My...
*Suddenly, 3 other merponies swam to AJ, surrounding her*
MP1: I see that your a new loser here *laughs*
Applejack: Loser?!? Have ya looked into a mirror?!
All: Oooooo
MP2: Wait a second girls! She's not one of us! She's an earth Pony!
Applejack: *sneezes*
MP3: *laughs* I see that your sick...It's better to let you go with the flow, shall we?
Applejack: What? *coughs*
MP1: We don't want you to die with pain, Sugarlame.
Applejack: *is weak* Please...Just leave me alone, I ain't that sick...
MP2: Bye! See you at heaven...but your probably going to hell.
MP3: *pops bubble that was giving air to applejack*
Applejack: *coughs* *coughs* *chokes* *turns purple*
MP1: *smirks* It's better for all of us.
Applejack: *closes eyes* *drowns to floor*
All: *laughs*
MP2: Hey Day Light!
MP1: What?
MP2: Go distract Brawny, NOW!
MP1: *salutes* (swims off)
Applejack's body started to glow. Suddenly..She grew fins on her back hooves. She had turned into a merpony, but still blacked out.
MP3: WHAT?!?!
MP2: We gotta kill her..before she kills us!
MP3: *nods* (grabs AJ)
MP2: You guys didn't see anything! *looks at everypony* OR ELSE!
All: *nods fast*
The two merponies swam to a deep cave, along with AJ still knocked out.
To be continued.....
one of the most infamous and hated episodes of the show.... and for good reason, too.
where to even start with this thing? it gets EVERYTHING wrong! literally everything! from the lame premise, to the horrible execution, the brutal butchering of the characters, the pathetic "comedy", the Student 6 being pushed to the sidelines, the mean-spirited tone.... i literally can't think of anything they got right in this episode.
people say this one would've been better if it happened during the earlier seasons (like from S1-S3), but for me personally: i think it would've been better if Non-Compete Clause NEVER happened at all. like seriously, you could delete the episode from the overall canon, and nothing would change. no value would be lost.
this episode is nothing more than a waste of time and space.
where to even start with this thing? it gets EVERYTHING wrong! literally everything! from the lame premise, to the horrible execution, the brutal butchering of the characters, the pathetic "comedy", the Student 6 being pushed to the sidelines, the mean-spirited tone.... i literally can't think of anything they got right in this episode.
people say this one would've been better if it happened during the earlier seasons (like from S1-S3), but for me personally: i think it would've been better if Non-Compete Clause NEVER happened at all. like seriously, you could delete the episode from the overall canon, and nothing would change. no value would be lost.
this episode is nothing more than a waste of time and space.