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The Dark warrior
Found my life
I seen fog, darkness, but it wasn’t night, no if it was night I would feel at ease, I always felt good at night. Relaxing, my dad told my last night about Greek myths, yes he told me, his nine year old daughter that she was half Greek god. He had been drinking that night to so I figured he was just crazy, he never had anything to do with me, I was just, Here. He slept through the day and was up at night. He name is Dreke Fiser. I was done with him, I couldn’t take it, and I’m glad I left, for I found the best place in the world for me.
I was dreaming, it was a full moon and a clear night, and I was at peace. But something about this darkness was unnerving, scary even. And I was never fearful of the night. I seen a shimmer and a women stepped out, she was wearing, dark jeans and a gray tee. Weird. “Colby” I stared at the women, she looked kinda like me, she had dark black, curly hair, dark green eyes and fair skin. “..uh” was all I could respond, she smirked and walked closer, “My daughter, your father was right about the gods, there real, your real, you must go any where but west. I will guide you” She waved her hands around and handed me something, “This is Nightdancer, a sword that will only respond to you” I took the object and noticed it was a pocket knife with two sides, I flipped the bottom half and a two inch steel knife popped out, I pushed it in and flipped the other end, it popped into a sword, four feet long, and beautiful. A leather grip and three dark diamonds studded into it, but what I noticed was that it didn’t weigh much, “goodbye” I looked up to see the women fading away. “wait!” but it was to late, she was gone and I woke up in my bunk, night, great. I was leaving, I took out a note and wrote on a piece of paper.
Daer dad,
I’m leaving. Bye
Love, Colby Jayde
My dyslexia didn’t allow me to write very long letters. I got my school back pack and dumped out everything expect my note book and a few pencils. A through some clothes in and put on a pair of jeans and a tee shirt and a jacket. I placed the note on my bed and put on my boots, neon orange baseball cap, and leather belt. running down stairs a made a turn a went to the safe and pulled out a few handfuls of cash and threw it in my bag, a stunk out the door knowing my dad would be awake, doing something, in his room.
...
The night always give me a new feeling, I never knew why. The night was claming. The next morning.I was hungry so a stopped by a subway to get a sandwich when this kid started walking towards me with their eyes closed and nose in the air. She had long blue jeans on, high tops and hot pink baseball cap. She stopped in front of me. “hum… would you mind” I told her quickly, I’m sorry but I hadn’t had anything to eat yet or any sleep. I wasn’t going to be little miss sunshine. The girl opened her eyes and looked at me and grabbed my arm, dragging me and my sub away. I was about to yell and scream, when I remembered something. I checked my belt and sure enough there was a steel pocket knife on it. I pulled it out a pointed towards the girl, who now looked about 15 and was limping. “who are you” I asked the girl, she looked at me, “Caylin” “K Lon” I tried saying her name “No Cay Liyn” “Let go of me” I said she let go and asked me the weirdest question, “Why do you have the lost sword?” “What?” she looked terrified, she muttered “Not good, a mortal, with THE lost sword” pulled out the pocket knife side and pointed it at Caylin, we were behind a dumpster now, my uneaten sandwich still in my hand. “I’m hungry, your talking non sense and I’m tried. Her mouth hung open and took the pleasure of sitting down, pushing my knife back in and eating my cold sub.
“Do you know anything about to greek myths” she asked my randomly after sitting down herself,
“Yes” I said quickly, this shocked hr a bit too.
“Have you ever seen anything, umm…. Weird” she asked again,
“Yes,” thinking about it, I have seen weird things, “I’ve seen a horse with a human body, one day, painted with bright colors, A guy with one eye, and the ugliest seal, dog mixed thing EVER!”
She looked at my like I was crazy, then asked me another weird question, “will you open your knife” she was asking for it. I opened Nightdancer’s sword end four feet of bronze sprang out.
“I wonder” Caylin reached out and grabbed the sword. I let her take it. Her arm flew down towards the ground, the weight of the sword dragging her down,
“What’s wrong”
Caylin laughed “nothing, it’s true, the lost sword isn’t lost, it’s for you.”
...
After that we left off, Caylin told me she was satyr sent out to find Demigods, which I was, but she also told me she had a very bad sense of direction and all she knew was that we were heading north, oh joy. In a few days we were in new jersey,
“I’m glad I stole that money, I like walking, but not enough to walk from Mississippi to New York!” I told Caylin as we made are way to a County fair, she turned like a dime and took of running through the crowd, her limp barely slowing her down. “wait” I took of after her.
She stopped at a fruit stand, I walked off towards a strawberry stand. I saw a guy sitting there his head threw back, snoring. “humph” I muttered as I reached over to wake him, the he jumped up, a sword threw in the air, it left a cut on one of my fingers and he looked shocked,
“Your…. You’re a-”
“A demigod, I knew that, what did you do that for!” I screamed the last part at him, he cringed a bit then stood up, He was tall, lean, had light brown hair, and bright blue eyes. About 13.
“Caylin” I called over to the fruit stand, in moments she was standing beside me, talking to mean dude.
“Treston!, you cut her, why” I thought Caylin was about to faint. My ADHD wondered and I was thinking that maybe she was part fainting goat.
“Clam down Caylin, She’s fine” he tried soothing her
“Tristan’s right-”
“TresTON”
“whatever, he’s right, I’m fine” I showed here the tiny cut on my finger that has stopped bleeding
“ok” she said, “lets get to camp” And by the end of the day I was sitting in the big house Chiron, in horse form was sitting (or standing) there looking at me, “I’m not sure who she belongs to” I felt like saying, I don’t belong to any one!, but I keep my mouth shut like the good girl I am, ok trying to be. “We will talk more tomorrow, Treston, please take her to the Hermes cabin,
Treston sighed and walked my over the Hermes cabin, after wards he left. I stuck my tongue out at him as he walked over to the last cabin a expected, the Zeus cabin.
"he'snot the niceiest person in camp" a sandy haired, guy said. "I'm Zeke, and you must be.. um... Cailey?"
"Colby" I said gentaly,he was close, I looked him over again, he looked like an over-grown elf, tall, lean, pale blue eyes.
"I see you met Treston< yah, he's hard to warm up to"
"But I"M not" A new voice said, I turn to see a boy, about my age, blode hair and amber eyes.
"I'm the coolest, hottest," He smirked like it was an inside joke "And don't forget-"
He was cut off by Zeke "most selfcentered"
"No! Fastest runner" HEe smricked at me, and I walked over to him and wisperd in his ear. He blushed light pink, and walked backwards and tripped over a wood plank, blushed more, got and ran to the Apollo cabin.
Zeke Eyed me and asked, "What did yu tell him?"
"He had a note on his back" I repiled very calmly
Zeke eyed the boy's retreting back,"no he didn't"
I Smiled my evil smile and walked into the cabin, "I know"
...
The Dark warrior
Found my life
I seen fog, darkness, but it wasn’t night, no if it was night I would feel at ease, I always felt good at night. Relaxing, my dad told my last night about Greek myths, yes he told me, his nine year old daughter that she was half Greek god. He had been drinking that night to so I figured he was just crazy, he never had anything to do with me, I was just, Here. He slept through the day and was up at night. He name is Dreke Fiser. I was done with him, I couldn’t take it, and I’m glad I left, for I found the best place in the world for me.
I was dreaming, it was a full moon and a clear night, and I was at peace. But something about this darkness was unnerving, scary even. And I was never fearful of the night. I seen a shimmer and a women stepped out, she was wearing, dark jeans and a gray tee. Weird. “Colby” I stared at the women, she looked kinda like me, she had dark black, curly hair, dark green eyes and fair skin. “..uh” was all I could respond, she smirked and walked closer, “My daughter, your father was right about the gods, there real, your real, you must go any where but west. I will guide you” She waved her hands around and handed me something, “This is Nightdancer, a sword that will only respond to you” I took the object and noticed it was a pocket knife with two sides, I flipped the bottom half and a two inch steel knife popped out, I pushed it in and flipped the other end, it popped into a sword, four feet long, and beautiful. A leather grip and three dark diamonds studded into it, but what I noticed was that it didn’t weigh much, “goodbye” I looked up to see the women fading away. “wait!” but it was to late, she was gone and I woke up in my bunk, night, great. I was leaving, I took out a note and wrote on a piece of paper.
Daer dad,
I’m leaving. Bye
Love, Colby Jayde
My dyslexia didn’t allow me to write very long letters. I got my school back pack and dumped out everything expect my note book and a few pencils. A through some clothes in and put on a pair of jeans and a tee shirt and a jacket. I placed the note on my bed and put on my boots, neon orange baseball cap, and leather belt. running down stairs a made a turn a went to the safe and pulled out a few handfuls of cash and threw it in my bag, a stunk out the door knowing my dad would be awake, doing something, in his room.
...
The night always give me a new feeling, I never knew why. The night was claming. The next morning.I was hungry so a stopped by a subway to get a sandwich when this kid started walking towards me with their eyes closed and nose in the air. She had long blue jeans on, high tops and hot pink baseball cap. She stopped in front of me. “hum… would you mind” I told her quickly, I’m sorry but I hadn’t had anything to eat yet or any sleep. I wasn’t going to be little miss sunshine. The girl opened her eyes and looked at me and grabbed my arm, dragging me and my sub away. I was about to yell and scream, when I remembered something. I checked my belt and sure enough there was a steel pocket knife on it. I pulled it out a pointed towards the girl, who now looked about 15 and was limping. “who are you” I asked the girl, she looked at me, “Caylin” “K Lon” I tried saying her name “No Cay Liyn” “Let go of me” I said she let go and asked me the weirdest question, “Why do you have the lost sword?” “What?” she looked terrified, she muttered “Not good, a mortal, with THE lost sword” pulled out the pocket knife side and pointed it at Caylin, we were behind a dumpster now, my uneaten sandwich still in my hand. “I’m hungry, your talking non sense and I’m tried. Her mouth hung open and took the pleasure of sitting down, pushing my knife back in and eating my cold sub.
“Do you know anything about to greek myths” she asked my randomly after sitting down herself,
“Yes” I said quickly, this shocked hr a bit too.
“Have you ever seen anything, umm…. Weird” she asked again,
“Yes,” thinking about it, I have seen weird things, “I’ve seen a horse with a human body, one day, painted with bright colors, A guy with one eye, and the ugliest seal, dog mixed thing EVER!”
She looked at my like I was crazy, then asked me another weird question, “will you open your knife” she was asking for it. I opened Nightdancer’s sword end four feet of bronze sprang out.
“I wonder” Caylin reached out and grabbed the sword. I let her take it. Her arm flew down towards the ground, the weight of the sword dragging her down,
“What’s wrong”
Caylin laughed “nothing, it’s true, the lost sword isn’t lost, it’s for you.”
...
After that we left off, Caylin told me she was satyr sent out to find Demigods, which I was, but she also told me she had a very bad sense of direction and all she knew was that we were heading north, oh joy. In a few days we were in new jersey,
“I’m glad I stole that money, I like walking, but not enough to walk from Mississippi to New York!” I told Caylin as we made are way to a County fair, she turned like a dime and took of running through the crowd, her limp barely slowing her down. “wait” I took of after her.
She stopped at a fruit stand, I walked off towards a strawberry stand. I saw a guy sitting there his head threw back, snoring. “humph” I muttered as I reached over to wake him, the he jumped up, a sword threw in the air, it left a cut on one of my fingers and he looked shocked,
“Your…. You’re a-”
“A demigod, I knew that, what did you do that for!” I screamed the last part at him, he cringed a bit then stood up, He was tall, lean, had light brown hair, and bright blue eyes. About 13.
“Caylin” I called over to the fruit stand, in moments she was standing beside me, talking to mean dude.
“Treston!, you cut her, why” I thought Caylin was about to faint. My ADHD wondered and I was thinking that maybe she was part fainting goat.
“Clam down Caylin, She’s fine” he tried soothing her
“Tristan’s right-”
“TresTON”
“whatever, he’s right, I’m fine” I showed here the tiny cut on my finger that has stopped bleeding
“ok” she said, “lets get to camp” And by the end of the day I was sitting in the big house Chiron, in horse form was sitting (or standing) there looking at me, “I’m not sure who she belongs to” I felt like saying, I don’t belong to any one!, but I keep my mouth shut like the good girl I am, ok trying to be. “We will talk more tomorrow, Treston, please take her to the Hermes cabin,
Treston sighed and walked my over the Hermes cabin, after wards he left. I stuck my tongue out at him as he walked over to the last cabin a expected, the Zeus cabin.
"he'snot the niceiest person in camp" a sandy haired, guy said. "I'm Zeke, and you must be.. um... Cailey?"
"Colby" I said gentaly,he was close, I looked him over again, he looked like an over-grown elf, tall, lean, pale blue eyes.
"I see you met Treston< yah, he's hard to warm up to"
"But I"M not" A new voice said, I turn to see a boy, about my age, blode hair and amber eyes.
"I'm the coolest, hottest," He smirked like it was an inside joke "And don't forget-"
He was cut off by Zeke "most selfcentered"
"No! Fastest runner" HEe smricked at me, and I walked over to him and wisperd in his ear. He blushed light pink, and walked backwards and tripped over a wood plank, blushed more, got and ran to the Apollo cabin.
Zeke Eyed me and asked, "What did yu tell him?"
"He had a note on his back" I repiled very calmly
Zeke eyed the boy's retreting back,"no he didn't"
I Smiled my evil smile and walked into the cabin, "I know"
...
