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Garinina's POV

I stared at the young woman, thoughts running through my mind. How did she obtain that bruise on her forehead...when she is facing up? There is no obvious evidence that she hit her head on the tub. Unless...she was moved or...she didn't die in the bath.

I stared long and hard at the rather large bruise on her forehead, and I noticed something was not normal about it.

I touched her forehead, it felt unusually hard. It did not feel like skull. Curious, I pulled out a scalpel and began slowly cutting the skin of her forehead; this earned a surprised and sickened gasp from my new partner, Kenfi.

After I was done cutting the skin, I didn't expect what I pulled out: a metal plate.

I've now had an idea what her cause of death could be. I know for a fact that if someone is striked hard enough in the head, the hit could literally rattle the person's brain. And with a metal plate, the risk of brain damage is increased.

I examined the metal plate. When I turned it over, I noticed a strange marking. It was a small scarlet red hand-print. Curiosity aroused, I put the metal plate in my pant pocket for later research on that mark...

What happened next surprised me yet again...

End of Chapter 2 Part 1
posted by unknown99
She is mostly shy because off her secrets. She is mostly silent in front of everyone. But, if you set off her mood she will probably freeze you into a block. Born in the City of Ice, Snow is a shy girl with a special talent. Because she is shy, she mostly don't want to talk to anybody. She was happy to be sent to the Andromedian Pyrokinetic Academy. She had 5 roommates because they are the only girls in the academy. Snow mostly spend time in her room thinking about what is going to happen, then she only goes out for classes and breakfast, lunch and dinner. At those times she mostly spend her...
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posted by iceandsummer
Name: Aurora Centauri
Age: Currently 16
Personality: Competitive. The rest are for you to find out.
Status: Single
Race: Fox (forgot her tail...)
Family: Unknown
Occupation: Hero...ine
Friends: Need to RP for her friends.
Enemies: Need to RP for her enemies.

Her Name is based off of a star I know of. It's called Alpha Centauri. Lawl, cool, right?

If you wanna role-play, send me a message. She needs some friends and enemies....

BIO: Aurora isn't from the planet Mobius. She comes from a different planet called Solaris. Her home planet is infected with a plague and the Solarians need to rely on her. The plague started when she was little. Her family lost her when she was young, but that doesn't ruin her life. She is satisfied with all the remaining Solarians and she considers all of them her family. Aurora can phase for a short period of time and her main power is currently unknown.
Mancer had done nothing but stand there in silence as he watched what was going on around him. He was starting to wonder if he was even noticed anymore, not that he was complaining at all. He just stood where he was and slipped his hands down in his pants pockets, not knowing what to say or what to do, so he just continued to stand there in silence. He didn't have to stand there for long, however, before Cinder turned her head and noticed him.

"Oh, who are you?" Cinder asked in curiosity. "Are you a friend of Kyle and Kagen's?"

"Yes, I am in a way. I suppose you can call me their friend. I...
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posted by mephiles97
Chapter 1: A Snow Day and a Simple Errand
Location: Waktini family residence, Northern District, Freedom City
Date: Friday, January 2nd
Time: 7:30 P.M.


"Hey, Mom? Can I ask you something? Please?" A somewhat tall, slightly chubby yellow hedgehog asked with excitement in his voice as he walked up to a tall, long black-haired woman.

"Yes, Kyle? What is it?" The woman asked with a bright voice, turning her head to look at the hedgehog with a smile.

"Um... Well..." Kyle looked up slightly at his mother, taking a small breath. "Kagen and I wanted to hang out together and maybe play out in the snow...
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...Have you ever felt like...you are being watched?Ⓧ

One day,a hero who is named MTL journeyed through the woods...In search of the remaining fragments of his past...however,He was not aware of the legend of the woods...and it's terrible dark evil that resides within...MTL traveled deep into the woods,passing many rocks,trees,shrubs,and owlsⓍ.MTL started to approach a bazaar area putting off a magnetic field which disrupted his nanite code and he had to revert to watch form in order to continue traversing...

MTL came upon a large three,massive.it's roots where the size of houses and it literally...
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posted by ripperoo1
CHAPTER 2
"Serrations"

I held the sword, feeling it's cold steel in my hand. My door creaked open. A man with a cloak and a dagger in his hand stood in my doorway. He strode over towards me, raising his dagger. I stepped back with each step he took.
"What do you want?" I asked, my voice shaking. I took a few more steps backwards.
He pulled out a rope. Pushing me up against the wall, he put the rope around my neck. He raised the dagger up in the air. I raised the sword as far as I could move it, and slit his leg. He fell down to his knees and dropped the rope. I tackled him and put the rope...
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posted by Scorch-Werehog
Name: Tyler Andrew Gold
Nickname: Falcon the Vamphog
Attire: Black, blue, and red sneakers
Fur Color: Gold and brown
Eye Color: Green
Bio: When Falcon was young, he was turned into a vamphog. The reason he became a vamphog was his father came home from work with some sort of chemical. When his father wasn't looking, he took it, and accidentally broke the bottle it was in. The chemical got all over his fur. Once his parents realized, it was too late. It got into his blood stream and made him a vamphog.
I've never been used to death...

Tension in the workplace, a jealous ex-boyfriend...

All I have to do is to piece together the evidence and finally close the case file...

But what's bothering me?

I know I'm missing something! There's something else here!

There's a strange fluid in her lungs...I don't buy the claim that she died in the tub.

The stage was set...

...the poor girl was murdered...

[AUTHOR NOTE: Hello everyone! I am going to be writing a new story and I would like to know if I should continue or abort the idea. So please critique and tell me what you think. I appreciate it. :) ~Juli]
posted by shadowknuxgirl
G-Sil was chokeing Silhouette, holding her above a pond. Shock, V2, Claws, Prime, and Rico stood about 5 feet from them. One step closer, and G-Sil could've dropped Silhouette into the pond. Silhouette was bleeding oil, which made it look more disgusting than blood. Her oxygen supply was running low, and she could barely move. Her ears were releasing smoke. And her eyes looked red and tired. It was like her own personal hell. The sky was red and cloudy. The sounds of sirens filled the air. But I'm starting at the ending, let's start at the beginning, shall we.........?

Stay tuned for part 2!!!!!!!
(FC's belong to original owners!)
An early interpratation of Chris.
An early interpratation of Chris.
Shadow was walking through the ruins of Ark. He coughed in the debree. He had a flashback of Maria. He sniffed. He looked at a broken panel. It had a picture of a blob with a head and tiny writing. He remembered that from when the Ark was invaded with the Artifical Chaos. Then he looked at something not that familiar. It was a giant capsule with a few cracks in it and a body. It had a green liquid inside. "What's this?" Shadow said. He punched the capsule open. The liquid poured out. Shadow picked up a stick and poked the body. "Ha. Squishy." He continued poking at him. "SQUISHY SQUISHY SQUISHY!"...
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He was suddenly transported. He still had his cool clothes on, though. He was walking. It was pitch black. "That could've been cool." He said to himself. "NESS.... NEEESSSSSS.......NNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS....... Oh, wait, I be doin' it wrong. ZIM....ZIMMMM.... ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZIIIIIIIIIIMMMMMMMMM....." He heard. It was echoey. It sounded like Gir. He started to hear strange music, no, not the giygas theme. Instead he heard "Levan Polka." He suddenly saw a red mist swirling all around him. He saw a slightly blurred Gir's face in it. "Gir?" He said. "I AM GIRGAS!! Girgas.... feels........
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Your not ment to be here. Vector mumbled, as he was walking around Bluebell, who was about the age of 7 or 9, Very young for her to be working at a consentration camp. Bluebell, you need to get outta here..and fast.[b] He then drops a bag on her lap, she looks up. [b]"But, Vector.." She said softly. I don't really know where to go... and if you told me, I'd forget... Vector then takes out a map of mobius, telling her where she should go, Bluebell nodded and stood up. She then looked at Vector, she didn't know why she said it, but she asked. I'd like some soap, please... There was silence for...
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Midnight Stormcloud
Midnight Stormcloud
(Midnight Just Got Up)
Midnight:It's my birthday!Im finally 10!
Platinum:Can I come in?
Midnight:Sure!Come on in Platinum!
Platinum:Happy Birthday!
Midnight:Thanks!
Platinum:For your present It's something I couldnt wrap...
Midnight:Thats okay what is it?
Platinum:I found out the location of a Chaos Emerald!
Midnight:OMG!
Platinum:For your birthday,we are going to get the Chaos Emerald together!
Midnight:Awesome!Thank You!
Platinum:Im your bff.It's my job.
(Downstairs)
Midnight:Mom,Dad?
Midnight's Mom:What is it?
Midnight:Platinum is going to take me to get a Chaos Emerald!Can I go?
Midnight's Mom:I dont know?What do you think hun?
Midnight's Dad:She can go I trust Platinum.
Midnight and Platinum:YAY!
Then Platinum and Midnight had set out on their adventure for the Chaos Emerald.
The End I HOPE YOU LIKED IT!
PLEASE READ PART 2!
Platinum Silverburst
Platinum Silverburst
posted by thetacoman
The hole was dark.
Estelle's body had been ripped limb from limb, and strewn around the area.
And even if she could't see anything, she could tell.
It was dark.
Then Estell found another thing out.
Some liquid as pouring around her.
Warm, beautiful liquid.
The most beaurtiful shade of red.
***
The Gaurdian lay on the sreet, his blood at the foot of the altar, with Seth standing over him, singing louder the battle hymn.
And it was working
***
The liquid flowed between Estelle's wounds, slowly repairing the damage done, slowly pulling her together.
And she could tell.
She was the most beautiful shade of red....
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posted by silvershady
This is my first fan-fiction about my fan character, so please dont leave any mean comments but be sure to let me know if you are anticipating the next chapter! Enjoy!

Name: Rocha the Bat
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Colour: Silvery-black fur with a white streak down her back. She has tan coloured skin and black wings.
Her wings are an unusual shape and she has grey eyes. She wears a white tube-top with a grey strap around the bottom and a pair of short white shorts with a grey belt and grey straps around the legs. She doesn't wear any gloves but there are long grey straps wrapped around her wrists....
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posted by NickleBackFan
While Bullet is still pondering about his future, Dark Fire flys in the room. She stops and sits close to him. "Hiya cutie and cutier." She says in a cheerful tone. Bullet leans back in shock. He looks at her up and down. She is wearing blue dress with a blue bow and blue boots?! She reachs down and scatchs P-Do tummy. "Why don't i make you two some pie?" she said. "Heh no thanks. hmm Dark Fire you seem alot nicer today." Bullet said uncomfountly. Just then Dark Fire grabbed him by the neck and pulled him close to her face. "Let's get one thing stairght i am only like this becuse Ghost dared...
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(WOAH WAT. :U Yes i'm bored. So all the smart peeps in TGOL get a story. TAKE THAT BROTHER.)

Conner's POV:

I've never liked stories, much less one's like this.

People look down at me, but what they see is so little. I

may be eleven, but I know more then you'll ever

understand. But before I tell you my tell, listen close, and

take my advice by heart. Don't trust him. Don't trust

Drake....

It all started one hot day, my father had come

back from the bank. But I felt something wrong. Very

wrong. My father was always a calm guy, but today,

he had the most worried face I've ever seen.

"Hey, dad....what's...
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added by AmbiDev45
Source: 05/26/2023
posted by CrescentHedgie
Hey guys! Long time no post! Anyway... here, I'm gonna talk about a particular subject that has been bothering me for the longest time. And that would be... mary-sues. Note: If you yourself have a mary-sue/gary stu character, make sure you read this please. Maybe you can learn something. Let's do this!






So... if anyone here doesn't know already, a mary-sue is, and I quote directly from Urban Dictionary, A mary-sue "is usually written by a beginning author. Often, the Mary Sue is a self-insert with a few "improvements" (ex. better body, more popular, etc). The Mary Sue character is almost always...
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My heart rate was untellable. All I can say is, it was fast. And I don't mean just as if you finished a suspenseful movie or anything like that. My heart was racing as if I just ran 10 heart-throbbing, unforgivable miles.
The man jerked his hand forward, palm up, inches away from my face. But it was fuzzy, considering he was standing on the shattered glass that was my glasses.
"I'm not gonna tell you again," he growled at me angrily, panting between each word, "Give me that BOX. You don't want to know what happens if you don't put it in my hands this very minute!" His voice raised louder, word-by-word,...
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