True Writers Article: A Death in the Forest, Chapter 2

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posted by 1999jacko

crime

Detective James Whitaker stood at the homicide scene, inspecting the body as thoroughly as he could, until he figured out what had happened. With all the forensic scientists gathered around him he started to tell them what had happened," well what happened was the killer was chasing the girl through the forest, and the girl tripped up and the killer slowly walked oveeer." James made his way swiftly through the branches and twigs until he reached a large tree and took 3 steps forward, and then continued." Here, he raised his gun and aimed at the head and shot then ran as fast as he could away."Every single scientist stood shocked, their mouths wide open.

After about 2 minutes one shook out of it and said," sir, how could you possibly know all that?" James stared intently at the scientist until explaining himself," well Jameson, if you must know. Behind me are a set of footprints where the killer would of stood, then just below that bush over there a but of a gun is sticking out, so he would of dropped the weapon on the run. So that's how I know... please you Jameson."As Jameson nodded, with only the slightest bit of embarrassment showing, James decided to show just how cool he is by leaning against the tree. Just as he lent back though he missed the tree and, with a squelch, landed in the biggest pat of dog poo any of them had ever seen.

Jameson lead the laugh at James, but not for long as James stood up heaving with anger and shouted," JAMESON! shut up and pick up that gun now!" no movement was made apart from the laughter died down." JAMESON we don't have all day so hurry up and PICK IT UP!" his face going red with embarrassment Jameson ran to pick the gun up from the bush.James knew that always works with the scientists so after all the commotion and died down and his coat cleaned they all went to work identifying the victim, getting DNA and looking for any evidence in the surrounding area.

meanwhile at the old, abandoned factory...
John stood against the wall waiting for the killer to get here. He had his pistol loaded ready for anything, by the time the killer got there John had his best fake smile on and his gun behind his back."Hey Ron." John said to the killer, the killer, called Ron, said hey back but then all hell went down." Guess what the pigs found earlier today?... no guess's well I'll tell you your gun." John said as everyone else including the leader stepped into the line of view all with pistols in their hands. " I'm sorry Ron but we have to kill you now otherwise we all go down." John said as they all raised their guns to Rons' head, then the triggers went off and Ron instantly died with a star shape placed in his brain.

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel hill Chapter 12

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (12):
Abbie and Leo were walking in the hallways during study hall, they stopped because Leo had to grab his French book , Abbie spotted Susie and Brad in the crowd of students, Susie was whispering something to Brad, after she was done his eyes widened and he glared at Susie, "Does your mom know?" Abbie heard him say, "Shh!" said Susie, then they were both whispering again, "Ab!" said Leo, "That's the third time I've spotted you like this!" he said, "I'm sorry" she said, "What are so interested in?" he asked, "Susie" she whispered, "Susie Gellar, Lily's sister?" he whispered, "Yes"...

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The Dying Leader

posted by alicia386

This is a continuation of The Dying Ashes. I am Katherine Adams and I have received this manuscript my aunt had sent me weeks ago. She has gone missing. I fear for her life and I wish not to speak of her. I must continur this tale.

I knew Dylon very well. He was like a second father to me so his death took a great toll on me. To continue my aunt's research I have had to follow those four demigods very closely. I have learned so much about them. I think that maybe it is better to move from city to city so they can't get a good lead on where I am. So far it has worked.

Gabriel and Maycen were...

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Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note From the Saukerl: Prologue

posted by hgfan5602

Saukerl

"SAUMENSCH!" I hollered from next door. Saumensch isn't really the nicest thing you can call someone, it is like an insult, that is, like calling someone a pig in America. But right now, I am not in America, I am in Germany, so live with it. You'll get used to it, don't worry. "SAUKERL!" Matna hollered back. Saukerl is about the same thing, except used to call men and boys that, while Saumensch is used to call girls and women that. Her name is Matna Johanasen.Anyways, my name is Carls. Carls Shotansen. Pleased to meet you. The story of "Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note From the Saukerl" all started on one foggy night...when everyone was asleep, except for one very peculiar being. And, he, was not German. He bore the symbol of the Star of David. He was a Jew.

Star of David

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.6

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the reviews, please don't copy and please read review*
Chapter 6
    Breaking news
    A few hours later, and you found all of us racing out of the movie theater to our car, which we thankfully parked far away from the scene. We jumped in and when we all finally stepped through Lara’s front door we burst out laughing, falling to the floor.
    “There faces!”
    “Their reactions!”
    “That was so fun!”
    “You should have seen that dude! The balloon...

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Hourglass - Chapter Three

posted by alicia386

~Please read it and comment at the bottom~
Thanks!

Chapter Three

Mason stared off at the window. Was this new emotion joy or sadness? He couldn't tell. When you think about it, his life isn't all that complicated. He could be in a worse situation like having to remodel the house after a natural disaster hit. Instead he was a millionaire with girl problems. His father offered to have "the talk" with him but he refused. Cassidy had came by this morning. She asked him out on a date and he said sure. He couldn't believe he said that.

There was something interesting about Cassidy. She had long black...

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's

posted by Problematic129

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Summary
Zyanna Connor is just your not so average girl, and she’s in the middle of a tough decision. You see her father is the legendary killer of his hometown, though nobody knows it. And when her and her brother move back with her father, his identity is at stake and the legendary killer may be found. The threat is a group of kids that claimed to have seen him, and the only way to ensure safety is to silence them. But as Zyanna gets closer to them she starts to see different people, and she starts to care. Now Zyanna has to choose her family...

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The Boy Who Cried Wolf Spider Prologue.

posted by sawfan13

Prologue

Beep Beep The monitors from the hospital bed were rapidly going off. The violent shaking and movements made
them go faster and faster. "We're losing him! We're losing him!" They cried out, trying to turn the boy to his side. The
violent shakes stopped, as the one continuous beep on the monitor showed one never ending line.

It's been a year, since the arachnophobia slowly developed into agoraphobia. How, you may ask? It had developed from extreme arachnophobia, slowly and slowly growing so irrational that the kid won't even leave his room. His parents look at each other with misunderstanding,...

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Troy, The Almighty Fatty

posted by alicia386

Last weekend, Ciara, Zaria, and I, Teresa, traveled from Hollywood, California to Paris, France. We planned on living there for a year and see how it goes. Zaria wanted to study fashion, Ciara wanted to study art, and I wanted to study the french boys there.

We bought an apartment about a month before we started packing. Ciara is the organized one so of course we had our plane tickets, some snack because airplane food is cheap and disgusting, and we had our suitcases. Unfortunately, I am the complete opposite of Ciara. I forgot my suticase in my mom's car. Luckily for me, she didn't drive off...

Confessions of Laurie B. Ch.13

posted by alicia386

Wednesday

First day of summer and I'm already bored. I'm not bored enough to want to back to school. I'm just lonely bored. L. J called me several times this morning wondering if I was okay and if I wanted to go some place with him. I kindly rejected him. If it wasn't Jennifer or Tammie calling then I don't want to hear. Velvet signed me up book club thing. I do like to read books and she thought that maybe I could meet some new friends that have something in common with me. I think she is full of baloney. Velvet made me promise to go to the first meeting tomorrow. I don't know. We'll see how my mood is by tomorrow.

An Introduction to my mystery novel

posted by adamk

After much debate, I have decided to try my hand at writing a mystery novel. I've always loved mysteries, especially the original "Sherlock Holmes" stories, and shows like "Monk" and "Twin Peaks". The summary for the story I'm writing is in the in the section below. If you like the idea, let me know, because I'm really excited for the story!
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Summary:School's out and fifteen year old Harold McCormick is headed for his annual summer getaway at Science Camp, but when an accident occurs, Harold is detirmened to prove it is murder, despite the doubt of the police and everyone around him believing otherwise, and in order to save the camp, Harold must find someone who believes him, crack the case, and bring the culprit to justice before he strikes again.

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the keeper of the forbidden light chapter 7

posted by Annabeth788594

I got dressed and slipped my jacket with badge on and went down the hall. And then someone bumped into me. Hey watch where you’re going! “Sorry you Agent Montezz?” Yes who are you?

“Doesn’t matter Kyle said for you to meet him in the shooting arena.” Where is that? “Take this hall straight down then make a right you will see a stair well go all the way down then make a left first door on your right.” Thank you.

He walked away then leaving me alone in an empty hallway. I followed the guy directions and stepped into a combat arena compete with targets bows, arrows, guns, and many...

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Charmed and Dangerous Ch. 12

posted by alicia386

Chapter Twelve: Small Rooms Makes for No Escapes

Their headquarters was nothing more then a room with monitors everywhere. They had enough in the budget to get a bigger space and tons more gadgets, they just chose not to. Some of the monitors showed different views of the outside building. One monitor was showing a desert somewhere in Africa. It is odd how they got one out there and why they have he out there. I didn't ask questions. I wanted to appear as if I knew everything about everything in the room. Marlo wasn't going to get the best of me.
Darrell stayed by my side...

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Change or Be Changed. Chapter 6

posted by IlovePatch97

Sorry it took so long, school is crazy. i hope this makes up for it.
don't forget to comment :D

Chapter 6

“Wait! Wait!” I said, needing a moment of processing. “This is real? I’m not dreaming, I’m not hallucinating and this isn’t an extremely well executed prank?”
“No Alana I’m sorry to say but this is real, unbelievable, but real” Chris replied. I turned to look at Patricia, her face unchanged like stone.
“So then what are we going to do? Are you bringing me to this Zerokenum guy so he can cut out my heart!?” I exclaimed in sudden alarm. I didn’t think Chris or Patricia...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.17

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
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    Iris
    It felt like being hit in the gut, I just couldn’t believe it. Not saying I’m bossy or anything, but I didn’t want to walk alone in a deserted park, but I did anyway.
    What I was not ready for, however, was the real pain in my stomach when I was pushed to the ground, hitting my fragile head in the process. Ready to let people hear my screams all the way from China, I turned around, and was startled to see a black thing passing us, flying on the wind.
    I knew going...

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The Eye of the Beholder, Chapter 4

posted by 1999jacko

Orion woke up with a dark black aura slowly disappearing from his body. Libra hobbled into the room and saw Orion quickly waking up," Orion your up I have been waiting for hours, now quickly outside," he said hurriedly as he hobbled out through the other door that lead outside into a small arena. Orion stood up feeling fresh and powerful and ran through the door into the arena. Libra stood looking younger than he actually was at the other side, wand writhing about in his hand ready for a fight," come on Orion dont be afraid," Libra shouted out. So Orion stepped into his circle and drew his...

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Beautiy is the Beast Prologue

posted by Dhampires

The most beautiful creature is the most deciving creature. Foul, cruelness, and haterid are the only things that makes it's heart whole. The rest is pit of darkness not one hearty emotion lurks in it's body, it feeds off fear- the fear of it's prey.
It was only a few nights eariler that she wore an white silk ballgown to the Ball-wearing matching gloves that came just above the wrist and glass heels. She'd had that beautiful blond hair flowing behind her back, her crystal blue eyes showed off her hair very well and her rosey lips placed together her face perfectly-not to mention her slim...

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Charmed and Dangerous Ch. 3

posted by alicia386

Chapter Three: New School, New Worries

"You're lying," I said but then again, who would lie about something like this. "My father would have told me if he was in danger. We have a strong relationship."
"That maybe, but would he really want you to worry when your spy exams are coming up? Would he want to add more to your plate of stress?" Darrell raised one eyebrow for my response but he didn't need one. He already knew what I was going to say.
"You have a point but," I said. "What is the school going to do about it? Surely, they wouldn't let one of the most top notch...

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Smith, Ron Smith. Chapter 2

posted by 1999jacko

Ron was waiting outside the school building for the MI6 agent that was being sent for him. A small, black car turned round the corner, it slowed to a stop in front of him, the door slowly opened an instead of the small agent the commenter had told him would come 3 men in odd black suits, white ties and black sunglasses stepped out and shoved a pillow case over his head, blocking his line of vision so he couldn't see what happened after that but he felt the smash of a cricket bat against his head while being roughly pushed into the back seat of a car. Slowly his head started to hurt a lot and...

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A death in the forest, chapter 3

posted by 1999jacko

just a warning every other chapter will be dark with a murder happening in almost all of them so if you don't like dark stuff don't read this one

Jameson was rushing around the room his eyes blood shot with tiredness, he had received the results of the prints hours ago and had been working on it for the whole night. And when he had discovered who the killer and his little gang were he had instantly knew he was screwed, but tried to type it up so hopefully chief detective James would discover it and start arresting the people as soon as he was killed. When he finished his little message to James...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.2

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
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Alex
    “Are you okay?!” I asked as I rushed to Zaria and Iris.
    “Somewhat,” Iris said giving me a shaky smile, while Zaria replied. “Define okay.”
    I helped them out of the water, they were soaked, and kept on slipping. Which led me to fall into the water.
    “Sorry,” Iris said, looking at my now wet clothes sorrowfully.
    “It’s okay let’s just get out of here.” I said, pulling them toward the ground.
    “Wait!”...