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posted by alicia386
June 18
Today was the first time I saw her. It was the annual festivals for them. It began today and ended June 25. I happen to be hiking today. I had heard myths and legends about how they fall from the skies to dance and celebrate among the humans,

Back to the girl. She had light blue eyes and a thick head of hair. The part of her that really caught my eyes were her angel wings.

They had a noticeable sparkle to them. I was certainly bewitched by her beauty the moment I saw her.. It was hard to get her image out of my head.

Eventually, I had to leave. Those angels would pick up on my scent and fly to a different location. They wanted to remain a myth in our eyes,

June 19
I came again to only see the, dancing their hearts out. The blue eyed angel was learning against a tree far from the others. This was my chance to talk to her.

I plain as day walked up to her. If I tried sneaking towards her, she would alert the others,

She saw me coming but then ignored me. I knew something was wrong.

"Um hi," I said. She didn't even turn her eyes to me. I kept talking though as if that didn't bother me, "I couldn't help but notice that you are all alone."

"They know me too well," she hissed. "They think they are so much better then me but they aren't."

"Is there anyway I could help?"

A slow smile appeared on her face. She finally looked at me and I got the full impact of her good looks. "I know that you could do for me."

At this post, I was willing to jump off a bridge for her. "Tell me," I begged.

"Tomorrow, those angels will be having their feast around midnight. All you have to do is get some humans and crash it. If you do this then I will take you with me when I leave."

"Okay, I will," I said breathlessly. I couldn't stop looking into her eyes. The color seemed to sway like the ocean.

June 20
I did just as I was told. I gathered up some of ,y friends and a few strangers and we made our way back to the forest.

The other angels were eating in a tent. You could hear their joyous laughter. It disgusted me as I heard the sounds of happiness from them. They were having a splendid time while the blue eyed angel was all alone. How cruel could they be?

My men and women charged at the tent. They were startled at first but quickly became angry. My army were stunned at the sight of their wings.

Just before the angels could beat me with their wings, the oldest angel stepped up towards me. He out his hand underneath my cheek to lift my head but I slapped away his hand. "This one has been cursed by none other then The Black Angel." There were gasp coming from every angel in the room.

"I have not been cursed," I said defiantly. "If anything you guys should be cursed."

"Louis, Harry, you know what to do with him."

I saw one angel walk slowly to me while the other second hit me upside the head with a bat. I was our cold.

June 23
They said it was June 23 when I finally awoke. My head was still pounding but they clarified it would go away shortly.

After I was awoke and could clearly walk and see, they sent me away. At this point, my memory wasn't clear so I was confused when blue eyed angel tackled me to the ground.

"Where have you been?"

"Uh, unconscious," I replied.

"Look into my eyes and tell me everything." Her words were no longer sweet honey but venom instead. I felt ONKY hatred for her so I told her lies. She believed me and hung on to every syllaby I said.

She began to shake with anger. White strips began to peel off her wins. He white strips exposed a black layer that I was hoping would peel off too.

It all made sense now. She was an Angel of Darkness. She used her powers for evil. She was using me to make the other angels leave. I bet she was planning something.

Lost in my thoughts, I didn't see the gigantic net being pulled over her.

The End.
After the war was finally finished, three years, seven months and twenty weeks, people waited at the hospital. Hoping, praying for their loved ones to be found. Kyle Goodman's Foster Dad; Angus, his two sisters; Tiffany and Mariah, brother James and girlfriend, Summer Thorn waited. Their friend, Katherine Dreamwhisper. They called her Katie for short, had finished her shift, working as the nurse and went to join them. "They'll find him" she said. Nobody spoke, they just sat there. Three hours past and it was getting cold, the night air was coming and the warmth from the sun disappeared. Katie...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~     
Chapter 21
    Just a lovely game
    I wasn’t even worried about our run in with Talia, in fact, I almost forgot about it. The rest of the day was spent on purely fun and I found myself humming as I unlocked the front door to my house. It was eerily quiet but I just shrugged, entering the house I found Ryler sprawled on the couch again eyes opened blankly.
    “Are you dead?” I asked. “Because if you are it’ll be a pain to move your body.”
    He...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 20    
    When a psycho is near, chaos occurs
    Guess what? I was right! Adam’s team did lose, victory for Pam! You could hear his sad frustrating voice on the other end as I was hanging out with my gal’s and surprisingly Grey. He just invited himself but I’m not complaining.
    “That movie was awesome!” Sage announced as we exited the movie theater.
    “Of course it was, I paid good money for it.” Grey replied.
    I...
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A/N: I love love loved the feedback I got for Part One! Not to mention the prompts :) I love you guys and I hope you enjoy this one! More feedback equals faster posts. Happy reading :)
ALSO: If you're new here, here's part one: link Anyways, enjoy!


The Stranger's Musings: A Collection of Drabbles (Part Two)

Prompt 1: Darkness (requested by SweetHoneyBunny)

The darkness suffocates me.

I can’t see, I can’t breathe. My hands claw at nothingness as I
attempt to find a way out.

My breathing escalates. It feels as though my lungs are constricting.
Cold sweat breaks on my forehead and I find...
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posted by 1999jacko
fantasy
1 week later
Walter stood in the room where he had first used his wand, fighting off creatures coming out of Libras wand. Suddenly Will dropped his wand and looked at the monsters and oddly they all turned and started to attack Libra, "sorry Libra I can't use that power properly," Walter said and with a tendril shooting out of his wand and destroying all the monsters and quickly jolting back to his wand. " Walter don't worry your almost there you'll just have to be put under some re-,"Libra stopped mid sentence with a thoughtful look before continuing," go against me I will try my hardest...
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posted by flabaloobalah
Sadie and Claire's Ride
Sadie and Claire's Ride
I was so nervous as to what we would be doing out in the woods in the middle of the night. I couldn't tell Claire, I decided. That would only scare us more. So I laid out the outfit they instructed I wear and took a shower in the bathroom. The water was, at first, very cold, but I figured out how to work the nozzle and turn the freezing water into comfortable, steamy hot water. I made as many bubbles as I could and tried to distract myself, but I just couldn't. Sadie, I told myself, stop overthinking this. You'll be alright. We're just gonna play a game out there at night. I slicked my clean...
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This is reality
This is what you call the Earth
This is what people call the world
This is what we call life

We can't go on pretending day by day
That good things will always happen
Stormy days will come, it's not a miracle
But the storm will end soon, and all will be clear again

Heavy rain's crashing against my windowsill
I think, when will this ever stop?
The thunder's crashing against the trees outside
Today's not going to be a fine day, but it will end

I woke up this morning and guess what I saw
Bright sunny mornings with a clear future
No one's gonna stop me from believin
The rain stopped and the future's bright again

Good and bad create our lives
We can't pretend that everything's gonna always be alright
It's hard to think that something's gonna be wrong
But it's the truth, the whole truth.

We can't go on day by day pretending
Everything's gonna be alright
But we know that sunny days will come out
Soon or later.
posted by flabaloobalah
Genre: Realistic Fiction, Drama/Romance

I like Blake. He seemed to enjoy having company with our six cousins, and they all looked excited to do whatever they were going to do tonight. That reminded me: what exactly were we doing? I had no idea. I decided to just forget about it and enjoy the rest of the day. We all ran out back and explored th backyard. Past the shed were woods like the ones we traversed to get to Blake's. I guess they were all around us. Dark and inviting and creepy.
We had a few hours to run around outside, then we were called in for supper. Jeb stood by the creaky back door...
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posted by alicia386
Interview with Simone Rivers

Me: How do you feel about the book The Deadly Truth? Was everything in it accurate?

Simone: I guess the book was okay. It didn't give a good description of my beauty. The author didn't describe how brilliant my hair looks in the light or how my eyes shimmer when I smile. The author didn't even mention my glamourous white teeth. [shakes head disapprovingly].

Me: [ignores vain comment]. Can you tell the viewers out there about your relationship with the pastor?

Simone: [smiles lovingly]. Of course! I just want to smash all of those comments about him dating Faye. He would...
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posted by rory2011
some people think if you did something good to someone ,one day the person will takes your hand from your problems hole ,but that won't happen this time, that low is only in the fantasy stories ,not in the real life , Kat was very stupid to believe that she would reward for what she did and realize she must stop being that nice girl who does everything people tell her and she can't say no to anyone

David start taking his medication ,he stood in the hospital cause Mac wanted to fix that old house and give it his soul again
Kat is very busy with her work ,but everything happening taking all...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 15
        A Gal’s talk
    “Talia, I’m so sorry that you have to leave so early, but my parents, not very trusting. Plus they already have a full plate…so…the gal’s are leaving soon, again sorry, looking forward to the next sleepover.”
    Gosh, I almost believed myself!
    “Sure!” Talia beamed, clueless. “See you later, Pal!”
    “Buddy,” I saluted her.
    Ryler shook his head as soon as the...
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posted by Problematic129
*In case were still doing this, Genre:realistic fiction, humor. Also I do not own Doctor Who, or anything in it, it's just mentioned in here.*
Chapter 14
    The boy named Ryler
    It was quite refreshing to not be thinking of the fact that my crush Cal, nearly ignored the fact that I existed but showed up to my house, insulted me, and then made out with his girlfriend in front of my face.
    Yeah, if I had been thinking that I’d probably be flinging something out my window. But Ryler is totally distracting, he’s funny and different...
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posted by 1999jacko
action or fantasy I am really not sure

Present Day
Leo,now 13, stood on top of the tall, sturdy tree looking for any sign of the kids who kill. Luckily he'd been there for 2 hours and seen or heard nothing and decided to make the swing back to the tree he lived in with Jason and Sarah, he ran down the branch and jumped onto the branch and pushed off from what they call the watch tree.

The swinging was the greatest thing ever in Leos mind, with the trees flying by at unnatural speeds, the insects moving all around your head wondering whats going on and best of all the height your up at, because...
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It's time to rock the floor,
Break out all your dance moves like never before,
And let all of your worries vanish away,
Vanish away.

Isn't it just easy
To eat the whole chocolate cake?
Just creep over to the table
And get your face filled with sweet heaven

No, no, go over to the floor
And show me all your moves
Cuz I got DJ replaying "Party Rock Anthem"
Tonight, on this glorious night, tonight

It's time to rock the floor
Get a partner and swing them across
Show them you're workin your mojo
Tonight, tonight, tonight

It's your night
So get up everybody and dance,
Like you don't care about another thing
Just dance,...
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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 12
    One messed up sleepover
    “So should I go with raspberry yellow, or remedy green?” Sage asks.
    “Sweetie, were doing nails not a Trix commercial,” I tell her.
    Sage sticks her tongue out at me. “Bite me, the one with brown hair.”
    “Cherry head!”
    Meredith rolls her eyes, but still comes to sit closer to us as Talia’s giving her the obsessed ‘let’s be friends glance’.
    “So your one of Pamela’s friends!”...
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Writing Tip #1: Put off editing

Each of us works at writing on two levels:a creative, unconscious level and a critical, conscious level.

The unconscious produces creative and powerful words and images. It makes surprising and original connections. It shuts down if the critical "editor" part of your mind goes to work too soon.If your High School English teacher's voice runs through your mind as you write, if you worry about spelling, grammar, or how to sell your book while you write, you are writing with a dull pencil.

There are many books written on how to unlock your unconscious and let the writing...
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posted by dragonsmemory
(Dear Reader,
The story you are about to read is another Eden book. "The Guardian of Eden" is part of the Encounter series. Please keep in mind that some parts may be spoilers for other Eden Chronicles books.
The following story was originally written spring 2011 under the title "Hirach." It has since been changed. I hope you all enjoy this tale from Eden.
Jo)
A FANTASY NOVEL


PROLOGUE
THE FIRST GUARDIAN

Centuries ago, when humans began to exploitthe dragons' Knowledge and power for themselves, something had to be done. A special meeting of Parliament was called to address the problem. The king, who,...
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posted by rory2011
David couldn't take all his pain since Jack has been taken to jail from three years ago ,witch made him very ill ,David now in 47 and almost to 48 years old ,but he looks older because of his illness ,he refused to face people after what Jack did ,all the people in the country knows who's David miller is ,he's the father of the most dangerous criminal in the country, Jack got crazy in jail ,because of a lot of things happening and happened to him
Jack was getting tortured every night ,which made him crazy and pushed him kill three of the cops and two prisoners ,plus he tried to escape so many...
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posted by alicia386
I am pretty sure everyone in the world has at least one phobia. I found two but I didn't go through the whole thing. This list is only half of what I found. Shocking!

Ablutophobia – fear of bathing, washing, or cleaning
Achluophobia – fear of darkness
Acrophobia – fear of heights
Agoraphobia, Agoraphobia Without History of Panic Disorder – fear of places or events where escape is impossible or when help is unavailable. Fear of open spaces or of being in public places. Fear of leaving a safe place.
Agraphobia – fear of sexual abuse.
Agrizoophobia – fear of wild animals
Agyrophobia –The...
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posted by vampirefreak_26
My alarm went off telling me that my nightmare aka combat training with Dimitri was about to begin in a half hour. Although I wanted to go back to sleep like any other normal person in the neighborhood, I came out of bed, dressed and went downstairs to eat something light. I knew the consequences if I wasn’t on time, Dimitri would give me one hell of an ass whooping training and I would be the one who would get the post punches. Dimitri was one of my father’s best fighters and God knows how many battles he’d won, the guy was fast as hell. I could only guess what kind of training he would...
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