You spell it STORIES ... and judging by that I had a fair idea what to expect. I read the first one, not impressed. Full of spelling errors, and grammar is poor. Stay at school & study comprehension & creative writing. You might learn something ... sorry you ask for opinions, you get it.
I love them even though you spelt a few things wrong there really gd and i think you should keep witing will you read some of mine? it's on a club called Jacob and Renessme and the story is called Wedding day