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posted by DestinyGirl
Thanks so much for the reviews! Here's the long-awaited chapter that I really hope you like, most of the dialogue is from Twilight.



1. New World


MY MOTHER WALKED WITH ME TO THE OUTER WALLS OF THE SANCTUARY. The place that served as my home ever since I was born.

The sanctuary held only one climate -- spring. Always sunny weather, green grass and wildflowers with a crystal clear blue sky. This was what I was accustomed to.

I was wearing my favorite shirt -- sleeveless, white eyelet lace with a carry-on item, a simple parka.

The entrance (and exit) of the sanctuary opened up to a small town called Forks within the state of Washington. It exists under a near-constant cover of clouds and is the rainiest place in all of the United States of America. It was in this town that my father, Charlie Swan, was captivated by the most unique being on the planet -- my mother, Renee. And by 'unique' I mean she was one of the last remaining angels left.

Angels are a sacred race that have lived on this world since the dawn of time, of course, that's what Renee told me. We're special beings that are now becoming extinct. The last of our kind were hunted down long ago by the fallen angels -- the good that have went bad, those with black wings of death.

There monsters in human form, they have no souls, cold black eyes with absolutely no life in them, and they are said to resemble . . . well, almost like zombies.

Except without the eating-your-brains and creepy skin peeling part.

After Renee found out she was the last angel, she gave up her angelic powers to make a sanctuary to house me and herself away from harm.

But that also meant leaving the rest of the world behind, along with Charlie. I was always awed by her selfless act . . . how she gave up so much, and then raising me too.

"Bella," my mom said to me -- the last of a thousand times -- before we reached our destination. "You don't have to do this."
My mom looks like me, except with short hair and laugh lines. I felt a spasm of panic as I stared at her wide, childlike eyes. How could I leave my loving, erratic, hare-brained mother to fend for herself? Of course she had plenty to do here in the sanctuary, what with it made to fit an angel in every way, but still . . .

"I want to go," I told her, and I knew she knew it. She's known for years now of my yearning for the real world. Especially after reading so many novels, making me want to live in their world even more . . .

"Tell Charlie I said hi." And so much more, judging by her longing look.

"I will."

"I'll see you soon," she insisted. "You can come home whenever you want -- I'll come right back as soon as you need me."

"Don't worry about me," I urged. "It'll be great. I love you, Mom."

She hugged me tightly for a minute as we stood before the grand entrance, and then I went through it, and she was gone.

Charlie was waiting for me on the other side.

He gave me an awkward, one-armed hug since it's been a few years since we've seen each other. I've only been outside the sanctuary twice in my life.

The first was when I was born, and the other was when I was only fourteen years old; I bonded with Charlie faster than I thought I would. We had a lot in common, I got to spend the whole summer with him, learning some of the things of the world.

"It's good to see you, Bells," he said, taking my very few bags as we walked to his police cruiser. "You've grown, how's Renee?" he asked, trying to be subtle but I could tell he missed mom as much as she missed him.

"Mom's fine. It's good to see you, too, Dad." I wasn't allowed to call him Charlie to his face.

I shuddered once when we reached the car. Nothing attracted attention more than a cop with red and blue lights in traffic. Charlie was the Police Chief to the good people of Forks.

Once we were strapped in, he drove to the small white house I stayed in a couple of years ago.

"I bought you something," he spoke casually as we neared the house. "A little homecoming present."

"Ch-Dad, you know I don't like presents." I protested.

He cracked a smile. "Well, I have a feeling you're going to like this one."

And he turned down the familiar street and I saw a second vehicle sitting in the Swans' residence driveway.

It was a very old Chevy truck with a faded red color, with big, rounded fenders and a bulbous cab. To my intense surprise, I loved it. I didn't know if it would run, but I could see myself in it. Plus, it was one of those solid iron affairs that never gets damaged -- the kind you see at the scene of an accident, pain unscratched, surrounded by the pieces of the foreign car it had destroyed.

"Wow, Dad, I love it! Thanks!" I told him graciously, knowing my day tomorrow would be less dreadful now.

"I'm glad you like it," Charlie said gruffly, embarrassed by my thanks.

It took only one trip to get all my stuff upstairs. I got the west bedroom that faced out over the front yard. The room was familiar; it had been belonged to me since I was born. The newest items were the bed and an old computer. The rocking chair from my baby days was still in the corner.

One of the best things about Charlie is he doesn't hover, a near impossible feat for my mother. I always wondered how they fell in love . . . opposites as they were.

"An invisible tie Bella . . ." My mother tried explaining. "Something so strong that it brings two people together, something very crucial to us angels, and something precious to humans. It's finding your other half, your soulmate, you'll understand someday Bella."

I gazed out my bedroom window as I remembered Renee's words . . . And how much of a connection she has with Charlie.

She has such high hopes for me, hoping I'll find my 'soulmate' . . . and further the line of angels. You see, no matter what, the pure blood of an angel is so strong that it will always make the offspring have more angel within them.

Their were only a handful of pure-blooded angels left. But now only Renee and I were left. Pure-blooded angels held more . . . gifts than average angels, or any being for that matter.

Abilities to communicate with everything living around them . . . to heal the impossible, to perform miracles beyond human capability, and so much more that I don't even understand yet. And it was all through the blood . . .



So there you have it! Like it? Hate it? Plz review!!!:D
posted by AliceWhitlock
I'm writing a fanfic called "Almost Alice" about Alice, Jacob, Jasper, and Bella, and I'd really like it if you'd review. If you like it, I can put up a link to the story (which is much farther along than the first chapter, I can tell you that). And if you're gonna be mean about it, don't bother commenting. Thanks!
-Alice <3

Almost Alice
Chapter One: Smoke


“I win,” Alice said smugly, holding out her hand towards Edward. “Again.”

Edward rolled his eyes as he searches his backpack for Alice’s “prize.” I smiled. She was getting to be exactly like Jasper, always betting on something....
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posted by anna0789
bella's pov

edward took my hand and we walk toward my parents

when my mother look at me her eyes got wider and my dad look surprized
edward was still holding my hand i was getting more nervous with each step a took foward

"Hello mother , father" my mother nodded and also my father
after a minute of silence
then my father look at edward
"Are you carlisle younger brother Edward??" my dad ask and look at me when he said his name

probably remembering when i interrupt him and said edwards name i look at edward and he was repressing a smile probably someone was thinking something funny
my edward was...
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posted by anna0789
bella's pov ( another strange version of twilight remember is in like 1800's)

Edward's hands turned to fists
"WHAT" edward yelled

James jump back a little by the sound
but then he grab my waist and pull me closer to his body

"Yes you heared me right Isabella is soon to be my wife so.." james stop talking
because edward's face change into a deadly and devilish glare james let go of me and step one step back
"Hey why don't you go mind your own buisness" james said trying to sound angry but he sounded terribly scared i smile

edward was still looking at James and he took one step foward but then 2...
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TWILIGHT:
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Bella Swan’s move to Forks could have been the most boring move she ever made. But when she meets the mysterious and alluring Edward Cullen, her life takes a thrilling and terrifying turn. Up until now, Edward has managed to keep his vampire identity a secret in the small community he lives in, but now nobody is safe, especially Bella.
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NEW MOON:
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Star-crossed lovers Bella and Edward return find themselves facing new obstacles, including a devastating separation, the mysterious appearance...
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posted by Bella_Cullen902
I'M SOOOO SORRY!!! School just started and i haven't had enough time to do much of anything with my writing and thank you Leisha for telling them that message for me!! So here we go!


Girls are always asking him out but it's always the same old answer "I don't date"

But what he didn't know is when the time would come is when he would have to say yes to some body. But he made a pack with himself.

"If i never find the one for me then i will grow old alone.Forever."

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The bus ride to school is always the same to me. I first step foot on the bus and i am...
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this one was fun for us to wright. hope you enjoy it.




Charlie's pov


Bella's here.....I said to Sue.

" Thats great " Sue said.

I went to the door to open it up for her. It looks like she brought Nessie,Jake and Alice as well.
"Hey guys come on in."

"Hay dad."

"Hi Grandpa"

"Hi Charile" Jake and Alice said together.

"Sue is here I see'' Jake said.

Ya she and I have somthing to tell you. But frist would you like anything to eat. Sue made breakfest.

"Sure" Jake and Nessie said.

"We just ate" Bella and Alice said.

So Sue made up a plate for Jake and Nessie.

" This is really good even better than Edwards'' Jake...
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posted by twilight-7
Rosalie hesitated before she began speaking. I could tell she wanted to just plough into an entire hour long speech but she considered her words carefully. She didn’t want to upset me which was weird but good.
“First of all,” she said. “I don’t hate you, Kayla. I never have and never will.”
I nodded. “That’s good. I wouldn’t know what to do if you did hate me.”
She smiled. “Probably run in terror, I think.”
“Probably,” I laughed. Rosalie even managed a tiny laugh.
“But,” Rosalie turned serious. “I do have to stress that I do not approve of you marrying Edward....
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posted by patrisha727
One for today! ^_^


I looked around, for my seat, K13. Angela already found her seat.
"I'll meet you once we are out of the plane." Angela told me.
I smiled. "Sure thing."
I took my seat, and settled. I got the window seat. I took out the book, Wuthering Heights and began reading. So far, no one took the seat next to me. I'm praying that I'll have this row to myself. I wasn't the talkative type, and I like to have privacy. But then I groaned quietly when a girl took a seat nect to me. She was about my age, but was like an average teenager. She wore makeup, lots of jewelry, and wore designer clothings....
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posted by WritenOnTheSand
"Come on you two. Let's go inside we have company comming over for diiner." How can me spirts drop so quickly just moments after they were lifted? Grandma Esther's sudden announcement made my stomache turn. I'm not ready for company let alone my grandparents.

"Who's commin Esther?" Grandpa asks as he pushes me into the house.

"The Clearwaters, no Layla your room is the upstairs bedroom to the left. Why don't you take your stuff up." Grandma Esther says as she heads into the small kitchen. The stairs creak as I walk up with my stuff. The door is already open. As I set my bags down I hear Grandma...
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Maria Hunter found life pretty dull.
For example, living in the barren eastern middle-of-nowhere of Northern Ireland, with little to do and endless countryside stretching in every direction, Maria could think of very few things to lift her from the gloomy silence she retained whilst making her way home from school each day. She wasn’t a difficult child, but she found life so ordinary. School was repetitive, and being one longing for more, Maria did not fit in well and had few friends. Her home life was uninteresting, living in a bungalow with her elderly grandmother, after the unfortunate...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
The next morning I woke up to the birds chirping and a knocking well a banging on the door. I grabbed my gun out of the side table. I cocked the gun and headed down stairs. I looked out of a window that was over looking the drive way. There was no cars, so that means its probably one of the warwolves. I was happy cause it wouldn't be Jacob, he off hunting with the Cullens. Even though I was part of the family, I wasn't a Cullen yet. I have to be a vampire to become a Cullen. I saw Seth, Collin and Brady. Hey guys. Hey, we didn't mean to scare you. Oh its okay, you didn't, you just never know...
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posted by Edward_Bella234
Ok guys, I have chapters 9 and 10 posted on my spot if you want to read them to please join my spot to continue reading this story. Thanks!!

Link to my spot: link

Link to chapter 9:link
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End of Chapter 7

I turned my back on her and stormed out of the room. I walked down the hall and went into my bedroom slamming to door as I entered. I didn’t cry. I was to angry for that. Eventually, I decided I’d better go out and clean up the sitting room. As soon as I excited my room I saw Charles leaning against the wall across from my bedroom...
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posted by twilight-7
Alice was forced to cut the shopping trip short after six calls from my mother.
“Get home now!” she demanded. “You shouldn’t be out in your condition.”
I rolled my eyes.
“I’m fine, mother,” I replied. “I’m not over exerting myself. Alice is doing all the shopping. I’m just sitting on a bench.”
That wasn’t exactly a lie. Alice was doing all the shopping as she was paying for it. I wasn’t sitting on a bench because there were no benches in a department store. I was in fact holding a little black dress up against me while looking in the mirror with my cell phone tucked...
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posted by pie-102
hi i dont know what to call this but heres the first chapter if you have any ideas tell me

"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I said under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't you let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I said giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
Chapter 17: Awakening Nessie’s POV

    My eyes slowly opened. I noticed that I could see a tiny bit clearer and my sense of smell was a little more finely tuned. I didn’t feel exhausted or weak anymore and there was no pain. I looked down in a panic, I was wearing different clothes and my stomach was flat. That is when I realized that I must be dead.
“Renesmee?” Jacob asked his voice breaking
    As I sat up in confusion he was at my side. He was looking at me so strangely.
    “Oh god, did you die too Jake?” I gasped at...
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posted by renesmeblack
2. Problems



The bell rang to lunch. Jacob sprinted to the cafeteria doors. I sprinted to the wall. Only a few minutes. Gotta make it quick. I desguised myself as Jacob and ran to Renesmee. There she was, looking like a goddess, her hair twisting freely in the autumn breeze.
"Boo," I whispered romantically in her ear. She jumped and started to laugh. Then she grabbed my hair and started kissing me. It was perfect. I removed the flask from my pocket and placed the potion in my fingers. Then I wove them through her silky hair. She pulled away and I took off my desguise. She gasped.
"You're not Jacob!...
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posted by WritenOnTheSand
The possibility that I would lose my vampire side disturbed me. I can't not be a vampire. Does this mean that my child will only be a human? I want to talk to Jake. Does he even know whats going on? My mind shifts from one thing to the next. Every so often looking up expecting to see eyes all around me.

"Rennesme." My dads voice booms behind me.

"What?" I ask blankly staring at the floor.

"When your mom and I learned of her pregnancy, I did not know what to think or do. The only thing I could grasp was that your mom wanted you more than life. At first I thought that you would turn out to be...
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please comment this is my first story

Bella’s POV

It was a cold day in Alaska but I didn’t care I was starting to read Wuthering Heights again when I remembered who gave it to me. I started to think of Carlisle, Esme, and my one and only love Edward when I suddenly had a vision of me living in Forks with them and Alice, Jasper, Rosalie, and Emmett. I decided that I would go and visit them. First I should call them because I have no idea how I will be able to get all of my stuff there. I wasn't planning to ride three times to get it all there.

Alice’s POV

“Alice what did you see” Jasper...
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posted by renesmeblack
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Renesmee



How could he? The love of my life, now ready to rip the thing I feel I MUST keep away from me. I could hear sobs outside the door. I could hear sobs inside this room. We were both hurt. Before he closed the door, I threw something unthinkingly at him. It's now outside with him right now. It's something that probably hurt him more than anything else in the whole world. It was my ring. I was now crying. I felt naked without it. My heart felt ripped to shreds. It felt like a werewolf clawed at it. It probably looked like the half of Emily's face, only it may never heal.

Jacob

I started...
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posted by WritenOnTheSand
The floor feels cold against my feet. My thoughts going back to my previous actions. Passing out in the hospital, throwing up at my father-in-laws home. Could I really be, no no it is not possible. It's to early for us. We want a few years just the two of us. I can't be pregnant can I? Is that what Grandpa has known these past few hours? The door slams behind me as I rush to find my grandfather. I run into Jakes room.

"Grandpa I need to talk to you outside." I say breathlessly. He slowly walks towards me and places his hand on my shoulder.

"What is it Rennesme?" His serious voice taking place...
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