Twilight Series Article: My Twilight Review

posted by Robssesed

Ok so I'm not too good at reviews but lets see what I got.

Twlight:
The start of Twilight is the Cullens hunting I think that is a gret start but what could have been another great one? Maybe one of Alices visions or Bellas nightmare? Then Bella digging a cactus I love it! I think it is something you woud do to have a little bit of home with you and phil calling I love you both but we have a plane to catch sutch a typicall guy! Thenn when Bella was with charlie and they were talking about her hair growing so funny! Then when Bella hit Jake with the truck and didn't give a damn that was also funny. At school Jessica was so jaulous<- soz bout spelling. When she seen Edward in Biology you could feel the tension from then on. The baseball scene next then..... With Rose and Emm so funny and cute but when the three others come up well you cant help but scream. Then the ballet scene soooo scary but I was so realived when Edward turned up and felt so sorry for him when he had to drink Bellas blood. The hospital was such a sweet scene. And finally PROM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 The best scene ever it was soo sweet!!

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New New Moon, 9

posted by renesmeblack

OOOOO!
Jacob came to the rescue! Now to continue the story.
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I was tearing at the female, also taking note of Bella's faint heartbeat. The female shreiked, and tried to throw me off. When she did, she tore out of the house with pieces missing from a leg. I followed her.
"No! I'll kill her the first chance I'll get," she screamed. "You can't guard her forever! You'll see!"
She ran into the trees, me in hot pursuit.
Sam, need a little help, I thought, hoping he was in wolf form.
Where are you? was Sam's thought. He was.
The old Cullen's place. Bella might be... I couldn't bear the...

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Renesmee Black's Story, Chapter 10

posted by renesmeblack

10. Discovery
Jacob

I spent the last three days watching the babies, trying to figure out what else they can do. I've descovered that since they have both vampire and werewolf genes, they developed faster than Renesmee did. During an "experiment," I told Casper to sit in another room and try to attack me from across the hall.
The cold wave hit me about three seconds later.
"Daddy, I can't get into Bella's mind!" Karrie once thought to me. They took on Renesmee's habit of calling everyone by their names.
"Karrie, stop trying so hard. Bella has a sheild," I told her.
"Like Jeffery?" Karrie asked, surprised....

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Letters From Edward Chapter 10

posted by team_robward

Chapter 10.
Shopping Around:

We got out and Gemma locked the car behind us. We started walking towards the mall doors. As we started getting closer I could see Mia, Dean, Phoebe, Marissa and some other boys I didn’t recognise standing outside the side door. Laughing and smoking.
“Uh, let’s go” I looked at them, and then quickly looked away. We started walking, a little faster than we normally would. I kept my eyes straight ahead focusing only in front of me, but in the corner of my eye I saw Gemma look towards them. Why, Gemma, why? I thought to myself. I picked up my pace, Gemma seemed...

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moonshining night/day part 5

posted by leisha4

hey ive done the next part. i think that carrie ann said that sue and charlie got married in the book which would be carried on from the end of BD. i hope you enjoy this and i isnt too long but it was all i could write in half an hour.

part 4
Jacob called 5 minuets later “what was the rush?” I asked.
“Bella?” he asked. “Yes?” I responded. “Edwards going to kill me.”
“Probably depends why?”
"Nessies has been kidnapped by the Volturi.”
“What?” I shouted, and then abruptly ended the call and rushed out the house. I needed air...
could my day get any worse??

Part 5
I didn’t...

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Starless Dusk Chapter 2

posted by KrystenPeres

Dylan (Matt Dallas) and Gianna (Krysten Peres)

2. The In-Laws

The rest of the 'Cullen Clan' lived down the road. Their house was the largest, by far. It was almost 6 times the size of Dylan and my house. It was modern and new, with its boxy shapes and its glass walls, it didn't belong here. It seemed like it belonged in the hills of L.A..
"Wow. It's beautiful..." I gawked.
"My parents built it when we moved her a year ago. My mother, Esme, designed it." Edward explained.
"She designer it!?" I gasped.
"She is very talented..." Bella added.
"Alright, alright, let's go inside now." Edward said quietly.
"Okay." Bella said softly. She grabbed...

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Nightfall (A Sequel to Dusk) Chapter 17: Awakening (Nessie's POV)

posted by lovethecullens

Chapter 17: Awakening Nessie’s POV

    My eyes slowly opened. I noticed that I could see a tiny bit clearer and my sense of smell was a little more finely tuned. I didn’t feel exhausted or weak anymore and there was no pain. I looked down in a panic, I was wearing different clothes and my stomach was flat. That is when I realized that I must be dead.
“Renesmee?” Jacob asked his voice breaking
    As I sat up in confusion he was at my side. He was looking at me so strangely.
    “Oh god, did you die too Jake?” I gasped at...

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Sunrise Part 40

posted by Bella_Swan3

-Renesmee-

I was now the human equivalent of six months pregnant, and watching a small grey shape moving on a monitor. My child. My little baby.

My mom, Esme, and Jacob were here with me too. Aside from Carlisle, of course.

"There he is. Speaking of which, I presume you and Jacob would like to know the gender?" Carlisle asked. I didn't immediately answer. I was too mesmerized.

"Renesmee?" Jacob asked me.
"Yes," I managed to say.

"You have a little girl. Well, not yet, but you will."

A little girl.

Esme sighed contentedly, almost as fascinated as I was.

From downstairs, Alice squealed.

Alice had...

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Jacob Black-My sexy werwolf

posted by AdaLove

**Jacob was born to Billy and Sarah Black. Sarah died in a car crash when he was very young. Jacob remembers Bella from when they were younger, though she does not remember him.**

**********Twilight*************

He has a small but very important role in this book. After Bella Swan flirts with him (as a way to get information),
he introduces the idea of Edward Cullen being a vampire by telling her Quileute legends. According to Stephenie Meyer via her official website, Jacob was originally just a device to tell Bella about the "Cold Ones".However, both she and her editor liked Jacob so much that...

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Renesmee Black's Story, Chapter 2

posted by renesmeblack

2
Renesmee

How could he? The love of my life, now ready to rip the thing I feel I MUST keep away from me. I could hear sobs outside the door. I could hear sobs inside this room. We were both hurt. Before he closed the door, I threw something unthinkingly at him. It's now outside with him right now. It's something that probably hurt him more than anything else in the whole world. It was my ring. I was now crying. I felt naked without it. My heart felt ripped to shreds. It felt like a werewolf clawed at it. It probably looked like the half of Emily's face, only it may never heal.

Jacob

I started...

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Kayla's Secret, Chapter 32

posted by twilight-7

Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep.
I half opened my eyes, wondering what the hell was beeping so loudly.
Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep.
Was that my alarm? I reached out to turn it off. I didn’t need to wake up; I had no school to go to. I touched a square box that was way too big to be my alarm and didn’t feel like anything that should be in my room.
Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep.
I opened my eyes fully and almost screamed when I saw where I was. I wasn’t in my room. I was in a room but it wasn’t mine. It was too clean and full of medical equipment. I was in hospital. There was a drip next to...

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Why Me? - Chapter 1

posted by Bella_Cullen902

Hey!!! This is my first Story so take it easy!! Please comment!! And I'll shut up now!!

I tried to call Jacob today...no luck. I don't know what to do, ever since the Cullens came back he hasn't talked to me. Jake wont answer the phone when i call and when somebody does pick up, Billy usually says that he's not home or that he's asleep.

But tody was different. When i called Billy picked up and said "Jake doesn't want to talk to right now Bella. Sorry." Then the line went dead.

Edward say not to worry about it. That he'll get over it...eventually.

Me and Edward were in my room. He was laying across...

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Starstruck Chapter 3, (Renesmee's P.O.V) True Love,x

posted by thecullensftw_x

It was dark outside, and I was in my room, finishing off some homework. My C.D player was on loud as I worked, but that didn’t matter. I was the only one in. It was late, around 10; 45pm, but I wasn’t tired. Mum and Dad had gone up to Grandpa Carlisle and Grandma Esme’s house to talk with everyone about something important. They had suggested I stay home and study. It was a huge surprise when Jacob turned up.
“Whoa Jake, it’s you!”
“Oh my God, really?!” he laughed, and I found myself laughing too.
“What I mean is; why are you here at nearly eleven pm when my parents are out?...

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Renesmee Cullen's Story, Chapter 15

posted by renesmeblack

15
Jacob

"Helluva way to spend your birthday, Ness," Emmett joked. WHAT?!!! It's Renesmee's BIRTHDAY?
"I'm surprised," Edward whipered across the room to me.
"I was busy!" I yelled back. Renesmee looked at us as though we were going crazy. I got up from the corner I was in and sat next to Renesmee. I looked at Edward warily.
"Hey, at least you're not Mark," he said. I laughed and kissed Nessie's nose.
"Okay, we need to figure out how much this vortex'll grow until Mark returns," Heram said as he flew back into the room. "Cullens, follow me."
Nessie started to get up. I grabbed her wrist.
"Renesmee,...

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New New Moon, 3

posted by renesmeblack

I flipped open my phone. Alice sounded angry on the other line.
"I saw you returning to Forks. Why? Bella's heart won't heal in time. I see her screaming in the night right now. And yesterday I saw her do almost nothing interesting. She DID trip," Alice scolded me.
"Alice, I can't do this anymore. I can't. I-"
"Listen to me right now! If you walk back into Bella's life, she'll kill herself. I can't believe you want to go back, like nothing happened."
The line went dead. Most of my weird vampire dreams are reality. Bella screams in her sleep now. She'd kill herself if I ever appear. All my fault....

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Sunrise Part 38

posted by Bella_Swan3

-Jasper-

Rosalie had been especially difficult to be around for the past few weeks.

When Edward decided to play "Let's make Rosalie really, really, mad, and see if she tries to kill us!", in particular. It was scary enough to make mortals cower in terror.

Edward was stressing over the most recent developement; namely, his daughter becoming pregnant with a human/vampire/werewolf hybrid.

Carlisle said it would be fine, no reason to worry, *normally indescernable medical terms* and about three months left.

Typical day at the Cullen residence. You know, half vamps and werewolves reproducing. But...

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Esme Cullen Story Chapter 2

posted by Edward_Bella234

I'm sorry that this article is really short. I'll post another later tonight.

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“How are you feeling?” he asked in that musical voice.
    “Fine” I lied.
    “Hmm, doesn’t look fine. I think your leg is broken but I’m not positive. How did you injure it?”
    “Well…I slipped out of a tree I was climbing” I muttered embarrassed to tell him I was a 16-year-old who still climbed trees. I chose to tell him the truth, though, rather than lie because I knew he would talk to...

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eternal night part 21

posted by _madz_

okay, big news. i have finally made a spot just for eternal night. it has articles, pictures, links etc...
im not forcing you to join, but it would be great for anyone who is interested. im encourging anyone to add things to the eternal night spot, any ideas are welcome :)

this is part 21, and its a little longer than usual to celebrate the new spot! enjoy :)

“Really?” I managed to get out. “Then what would be your greatest problem? That would make Victoria’s returning for you seem like such an inconsequential matter in comparison?” I finished trying to hold onto my calm. Werewolves,...

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Renn and Jakes life cahpter 6.

posted by WritenOnTheSand

"Calm down Rennesme." She says as she softly pushes me back down.

"Mom Where is Jake?" I ask again this time sitting up all the way.

"Honey he is in the other room. Grandpa is taking a look right now." Right as she finishes my grandpa walks in. His expression is grim.

"Whats going on Grandpa, whats wrong with him?" I ask with a shakey tone.

"Bella why don't you let me talk to Rennesme. Edward is out in the hall." My mother stands up at his comand. My grandpa walks slowly towards me and sits down on the edge of the bed. "Rennesme Jacob is not healing. I think that the injury is so great that...

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Nightfall (A Sequel to Dusk) Chapter 8: What Is and What Should Never Be (Nessie's POV)

posted by lovethecullens

Chapter 8: What Is and What Should Never Be

My head snapped up, my attention directed away from the little cherub that I was holding. I met Emily’s eyes; they held a sisterly wisdom to them as if she was prepared to bestow some vital understanding upon me. She took a deep breath, “When Sam and I were dating I was attracted to him of course, but it was vey different from anything that I had ever experienced. It was magnetic, I couldn’t concentrate on anything except for him and he became my entire life. After we were married, we discussed having children and the minute that I got the idea...

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Nightfall (A Sequel to Dusk): Chapter 3: Feliz Sempre Após Começa Agora (Nessie's POV)

posted by lovethecullens

Chapter 3: Feliz Sempre Após Começa Agora
Jake and I had decided to use my 16th birthday presents from my grandparents as well as the Denali coven for our honeymoon. We were going to visit Zafrina. For our wedding gift, my grandparents extended the stay by two weeks and Tanya had switched the reservations from a hotel to a private chalet in the rain forest. We got on the plane, hand in hand. I couldn’t remember ever being happier. My family was safe, I was Mrs. Jacob Black, my father approved of it, and Jacob and I were together forever. A smile spread upon my lips at the thought. He looked...