Ok I've never written anything before, this is my first shot and if no one likes it it may be my last. I want to write between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn from Edwards perspective.
A lot of the first chapter is taken from the end of Eclipse, just to set the tone for the rest.
Chapter 1:
Remembering the happy day
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I sat on the couch in my bedroom thinking back on the day that Bella finally agreed to marrying me. We were in the meadow relaxing when I realized that she was just doing everything for everyone else. She wasn't thinking about herself like usual and had already agreed to let Alice plan the entire wedding with only a few limitations that Alice had to agree to. Those were that the wedding had to be planned by August 13th, that Bella had the ultimate veto on the guest list and finally that if she went overboard on anything Bella would NEVER speak to her again. Now Bella should have realized that Alice already knew all of this, and had already started the planning but she could find out all of this after the wedding.
We were lying there when I decided that it wasn't fair that she was always the one that had to give in, she had to give up most of her "normal" life to be with me and maybe I should just give in to her one....well she called it her demand. She said that the only thing that she wanted was for us to be together before she wasn't human anymore. I had argued and tried to convice her that this was all very dangerous and could end with her hurt or worse. She was explaining why she was giving everyone what they wanted before she had to break ties with them for either a long time if not forever when I stopped her with a kiss. She fought me for a second before giving in and began kissing me back. I could feel that she was not fully into this and pulled back far enough to look her in the eyes.
She explained that she wanted to do all of this "right" before she joined my family forever. I layed on my back stairing up at the sky trying to figure out this woman that I loved more then anything. She was defined by what she thought was right and wrong, she knew that she wanted to be with me no matter what I was and that meant giving up a lot of what she knew. She also knew that it was wrong to cut out the family that was her world and the friends that made her who she was.
I was lost in my thoughts as the rain began to fall, I heard Bella sigh and knew that this meant it was time to leave our perfect little place and return her to her house.
I was about to get up when she said that she wanted the ring back and it was time to tell Charlie the truth. I sat there staring at her for a minute before i realized that she was serious. I smiled and reached into my pocket pulling the glittering ring out and placing it on her finger.
I started laughing, looking around my room. I realized that in a few days time I would be married to Isabella Marie and she would be mine forever, well longer then forever but who was keeping track?
A lot of the first chapter is taken from the end of Eclipse, just to set the tone for the rest.
Chapter 1:
Remembering the happy day
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I sat on the couch in my bedroom thinking back on the day that Bella finally agreed to marrying me. We were in the meadow relaxing when I realized that she was just doing everything for everyone else. She wasn't thinking about herself like usual and had already agreed to let Alice plan the entire wedding with only a few limitations that Alice had to agree to. Those were that the wedding had to be planned by August 13th, that Bella had the ultimate veto on the guest list and finally that if she went overboard on anything Bella would NEVER speak to her again. Now Bella should have realized that Alice already knew all of this, and had already started the planning but she could find out all of this after the wedding.
We were lying there when I decided that it wasn't fair that she was always the one that had to give in, she had to give up most of her "normal" life to be with me and maybe I should just give in to her one....well she called it her demand. She said that the only thing that she wanted was for us to be together before she wasn't human anymore. I had argued and tried to convice her that this was all very dangerous and could end with her hurt or worse. She was explaining why she was giving everyone what they wanted before she had to break ties with them for either a long time if not forever when I stopped her with a kiss. She fought me for a second before giving in and began kissing me back. I could feel that she was not fully into this and pulled back far enough to look her in the eyes.
She explained that she wanted to do all of this "right" before she joined my family forever. I layed on my back stairing up at the sky trying to figure out this woman that I loved more then anything. She was defined by what she thought was right and wrong, she knew that she wanted to be with me no matter what I was and that meant giving up a lot of what she knew. She also knew that it was wrong to cut out the family that was her world and the friends that made her who she was.
I was lost in my thoughts as the rain began to fall, I heard Bella sigh and knew that this meant it was time to leave our perfect little place and return her to her house.
I was about to get up when she said that she wanted the ring back and it was time to tell Charlie the truth. I sat there staring at her for a minute before i realized that she was serious. I smiled and reached into my pocket pulling the glittering ring out and placing it on her finger.
I started laughing, looking around my room. I realized that in a few days time I would be married to Isabella Marie and she would be mine forever, well longer then forever but who was keeping track?
Why is Rosalie so unpopular in the Twilight fandom?
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can you imagine being shown up by someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after reading a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can you imagine being shown up by someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after reading a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.