The bear backed off my body and charged me again. I screamed in fear, and it stoped about 10 feet away from me when it backed up and did it again.
I realized the bear was toying with me, I wished that it would end this already. I was in so much pain, everything hurt and the forest around me was beginning to blur probably from blood loss.
The bear backed up again, hopefully to end my life when I hear another animal coming into the area.
There was a moment of complete silence, which only lasted for a minute. The following sound was something I won't forgett, it was the sound of the bear fighting.
I figured a larger bear had come across our fight and was fighting the bear for my body. I sat there taking deep breaths, praying to God that he would end it quickly because I knew I wouldn't be able to hang on much longer.
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I was beginning to die, or at least that's what I think it was. Everything was starting to fade around the edges, and get blurry. I tried to look around and focus on something but that just made the blurring worse.
I knew that I was loosing a lot of blood from the scratches on my front and back as well as from the bite that the bear had take out of my shoulder. I figured that the blood loss was making me dizzy and most likely I was going into shock.
I knew my time was limited so I thought of my family one last time. My father and I had fought just hours ago, and I would never get the chance to tell him I was sorry and that I didn't mean to hurt or disappoint him in any way. My mother would be heartbroken, she was so sweet and caring and loving. I couldn't imagine anyone having more love then she did. My brothers and sisters, they would be hurt as well.
I prayed to God in my last minutes that my family would forgive me, and that no one else would be dumb enough to come and try to find the bear like I did. I also prayed that God would end this pain soon, I was a strong person but the pain was winning and I couldn't fight any longer.
The sounds coming from my side were strange, I knew that the bear was there and so was something else. I thought it was anothe bear, coming to claim my body as its own. Then the animals started fighting and still were at this moment.
There were gutteral sounds coimg from somewhere and the bear growling and roaring. I wanted to look and see what was going on but couldn't focus any longer.
I closed my eyes and accepted that I would die when I heard a sound that I had never heard before. I remember the bear growling and roaring, then the sound was cut off completely.
I heard something fall off to my side and the sound of footsteps. I managed to open my eyes for the last time and look to the sound.
I had to be dead, it's the only explanation that works. What I had thought was another bear was now coming closer to me. It bent down and looked directly into my eyes.
I knew I was dead, because there was no other reason that a woman would be standing infront of me now. She knelt down and took my head in her hands, and continued to stare at me.
"Please, please don't die. I don't know how to do this. I'm not strong enough. I can't. Oh, please. Just hang on." Her voice sounded like it was coming through a long tunnel.
I opened my eyes and focused on the face that went with the sweet voice I had just heard.
I swear to this day that I was looking into the face of an angel. She was the most beautiful woman I had ever seen. Her long blond hair seemed to move even though there was no breeze, her skin glowed in the moonlight, and her golden eyes were the color of honey.
I tried to smile up at her, even when dying I tried to be smooth. My body convulsed at the same moment and she gasped.
"Ok. I need to...we need to go. I have to take you home. They can fix you. They have to fix you. I can't loose, not this time." She said quietly.
I tried to figure out what she meant by that but at the same time I was lifted into the air like I weighed nothing more then a feather.
"Who are you?" I whispered.
"Shhhh no more talking, please save your energy. I need to get you home to my family, they will be able to help you." She said quietly.
"No, take me to my house. It's closer." I wimpered.
"No more, my father is a doctor. He isn't too far away, he will help you. Now please, please no more talking. Just hold on for me until I get you there." She begged.
I was going to say something else when the dizzyness came back again. I closed my eyes and focused on the angelic face that I had just seen. I realized that apparently it would do me no good to argue with her, and since her father was a doctor that hopefully I could be saved so I could see her again.
She started off walking and I thought it was odd that she didn't seem burdoned by my weight. She walked for a few paces and then began to run like I weighed nothing at all.
Well I guess you could call it running, I never could run this fast. It seemed like we were flying, I knew this was heaven. She was my angel and she was flying me back to heaven where life would be good again.
I didn't mind that I was dying anymore, she had asked me to hang on and I would try my best but if we were going to heaven why would I need to hang on?
I passed in and out of conciousness, trying to hold on like I had promised her. I remember one point where she stopped and put me down on the grass and I came too.
The surrounds were diffrent, it looked like we were just out side a town. The strange thing was that it was unlike any town that I had ever seen. There were many buildings that I could see from this far away. There were also a lot of lights, it seemed like we should be just outside of my home town but we were somewhere strange that I had never seen before.
I thought about that and her face appeared again in front of my face.
"Please, hold on a little longer. We are out side of town and I will take you to Carlisle, my father and he will help you." She said pleading.
I could not leave her, I smiled up at her and noticed that we were running again. I closed my eyes and triedd to focus on my breathing so that I would hold on for her until we met her family.
***Ok guys, I'm thinking about writing another characters story. Ideas on who would be great. Oh and this is only half of what I was planning to write. I might get the other half up tonight, if not it will be up tomorrow. Thanks for the comments!!***
I realized the bear was toying with me, I wished that it would end this already. I was in so much pain, everything hurt and the forest around me was beginning to blur probably from blood loss.
The bear backed up again, hopefully to end my life when I hear another animal coming into the area.
There was a moment of complete silence, which only lasted for a minute. The following sound was something I won't forgett, it was the sound of the bear fighting.
I figured a larger bear had come across our fight and was fighting the bear for my body. I sat there taking deep breaths, praying to God that he would end it quickly because I knew I wouldn't be able to hang on much longer.
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I was beginning to die, or at least that's what I think it was. Everything was starting to fade around the edges, and get blurry. I tried to look around and focus on something but that just made the blurring worse.
I knew that I was loosing a lot of blood from the scratches on my front and back as well as from the bite that the bear had take out of my shoulder. I figured that the blood loss was making me dizzy and most likely I was going into shock.
I knew my time was limited so I thought of my family one last time. My father and I had fought just hours ago, and I would never get the chance to tell him I was sorry and that I didn't mean to hurt or disappoint him in any way. My mother would be heartbroken, she was so sweet and caring and loving. I couldn't imagine anyone having more love then she did. My brothers and sisters, they would be hurt as well.
I prayed to God in my last minutes that my family would forgive me, and that no one else would be dumb enough to come and try to find the bear like I did. I also prayed that God would end this pain soon, I was a strong person but the pain was winning and I couldn't fight any longer.
The sounds coming from my side were strange, I knew that the bear was there and so was something else. I thought it was anothe bear, coming to claim my body as its own. Then the animals started fighting and still were at this moment.
There were gutteral sounds coimg from somewhere and the bear growling and roaring. I wanted to look and see what was going on but couldn't focus any longer.
I closed my eyes and accepted that I would die when I heard a sound that I had never heard before. I remember the bear growling and roaring, then the sound was cut off completely.
I heard something fall off to my side and the sound of footsteps. I managed to open my eyes for the last time and look to the sound.
I had to be dead, it's the only explanation that works. What I had thought was another bear was now coming closer to me. It bent down and looked directly into my eyes.
I knew I was dead, because there was no other reason that a woman would be standing infront of me now. She knelt down and took my head in her hands, and continued to stare at me.
"Please, please don't die. I don't know how to do this. I'm not strong enough. I can't. Oh, please. Just hang on." Her voice sounded like it was coming through a long tunnel.
I opened my eyes and focused on the face that went with the sweet voice I had just heard.
I swear to this day that I was looking into the face of an angel. She was the most beautiful woman I had ever seen. Her long blond hair seemed to move even though there was no breeze, her skin glowed in the moonlight, and her golden eyes were the color of honey.
I tried to smile up at her, even when dying I tried to be smooth. My body convulsed at the same moment and she gasped.
"Ok. I need to...we need to go. I have to take you home. They can fix you. They have to fix you. I can't loose, not this time." She said quietly.
I tried to figure out what she meant by that but at the same time I was lifted into the air like I weighed nothing more then a feather.
"Who are you?" I whispered.
"Shhhh no more talking, please save your energy. I need to get you home to my family, they will be able to help you." She said quietly.
"No, take me to my house. It's closer." I wimpered.
"No more, my father is a doctor. He isn't too far away, he will help you. Now please, please no more talking. Just hold on for me until I get you there." She begged.
I was going to say something else when the dizzyness came back again. I closed my eyes and focused on the angelic face that I had just seen. I realized that apparently it would do me no good to argue with her, and since her father was a doctor that hopefully I could be saved so I could see her again.
She started off walking and I thought it was odd that she didn't seem burdoned by my weight. She walked for a few paces and then began to run like I weighed nothing at all.
Well I guess you could call it running, I never could run this fast. It seemed like we were flying, I knew this was heaven. She was my angel and she was flying me back to heaven where life would be good again.
I didn't mind that I was dying anymore, she had asked me to hang on and I would try my best but if we were going to heaven why would I need to hang on?
I passed in and out of conciousness, trying to hold on like I had promised her. I remember one point where she stopped and put me down on the grass and I came too.
The surrounds were diffrent, it looked like we were just out side a town. The strange thing was that it was unlike any town that I had ever seen. There were many buildings that I could see from this far away. There were also a lot of lights, it seemed like we should be just outside of my home town but we were somewhere strange that I had never seen before.
I thought about that and her face appeared again in front of my face.
"Please, hold on a little longer. We are out side of town and I will take you to Carlisle, my father and he will help you." She said pleading.
I could not leave her, I smiled up at her and noticed that we were running again. I closed my eyes and triedd to focus on my breathing so that I would hold on for her until we met her family.
***Ok guys, I'm thinking about writing another characters story. Ideas on who would be great. Oh and this is only half of what I was planning to write. I might get the other half up tonight, if not it will be up tomorrow. Thanks for the comments!!***
I got ready for school the next day, as I walked out the house. I saw Danny standing in my yard. I looked down the street and saw Seth standing there. Iran up to Danny and jumped into his arms and kissed him. I felt the tears pouring down my face, not because I missed Danny, but because I hurt Seth. He put me down and hugged me.
"I missed you so much Cookie" he said. I didn't say anything."Let's go okay." He walked me over to his car and shut the door after me. Just as he was about to get in, someone pulled him from the car and punched him in his face. I got up and saw Seth standing over him.
"Stay away from my girlfriend you prick!!" I heard him yell at Danny who was laying on the floor holding his nose. I stormed past them both and hopped into my car and drove off. I felt the tears streaming down my face. Next thing I know everything went black and I could her Seth calling my name.
"Lanise!!Lanise!!Somebody call the hospital!!!sSomebody please-"and evrything went silent....
"I missed you so much Cookie" he said. I didn't say anything."Let's go okay." He walked me over to his car and shut the door after me. Just as he was about to get in, someone pulled him from the car and punched him in his face. I got up and saw Seth standing over him.
"Stay away from my girlfriend you prick!!" I heard him yell at Danny who was laying on the floor holding his nose. I stormed past them both and hopped into my car and drove off. I felt the tears streaming down my face. Next thing I know everything went black and I could her Seth calling my name.
"Lanise!!Lanise!!Somebody call the hospital!!!sSomebody please-"and evrything went silent....