Twilight Series Article: Renesmee Cullen's Story, Chapter 16

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posted by renesmeblack

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Jacob

Renesmee. My beautiful Renesmee. I MUST be dead. Here she was, dancing to an unearthly melody, her long, bronze hair twisting as she spun and shining in the sun. Then the vision disappeared.
Renesmee looked at me. Her body faded.
"No!" I barked, running towards her as fast as my four legs could carry me. I got there too late. Renesmee disappeared. I looked around, and heard Renesmee laugh behind me. I turned around. Renesmee was running away, looking behind her every few seconds. She ran like I was chasing her. As she took another step, she faded. I heard her singing. I phased and looked to my left. There she was in a tree, singing one of her own compositions.
"What if you left,
Me here,
Just left me to die,
to fear?
All of my heart
Would seek out yours,
For that's the only
Thing I hold.
What if...
What if you left me,
here..."
As she finished the chorus, she disappeared. I heard a booming round of applause. I looked behind me to find Mark, well dressed, applauding Renesmee, who was now gone.
"Bravo! She's quite good, isn't she?" he taunted.
"Where is my Renesmee?" I commanded. Mark turned his head.
"Renesmee, hon, come on out," he called. Then the most beautiful figure appeared out of the shadows. She was wearing a flowing, silken dress, similar to what the visions were wearing. The white cloth looked alien. It flowed down her legs and didn't pick up a speck of dirt as it trailed behind her.
"Do you recognize this man? He seems to know you," Mark said.
"Yes," Renesmee whispered. This couldn't be Renesmee. Her pupils changed their size whenever she looked to the light. Her eyes were sparkling whenever she looked at Mark, like she liked him, but was hiding it. Her heart beat... HER HEART.
"What'd you DO to my Renesmee?" I commanded.
"YOUR Renesmee?" Renesmee scoffed. Her arms folded across her chest.
"Renesmee, you're not real. The real you is dead in the Cullens' house. You're just, an image," I explained.
"EXCUSE me?" Renesmee yelled. "An IMAGE?!"
"Yes. Mark made your body, stole your heart, and put it into a mindless shell."
"MINDLESS?!!!" Renesmee screamed.
"Oh, shoot, I meant that you don't know what Mark is, or what he is capable of."
Renesmee wiped her eyes. Tears flowed down anyways. She ran away, crying. Before she disappeared behind the trees, she turned around and yelled, "You didn't DO anything! My real body is in the house. Mark duplicated it so I can live. I'M not DEAD! Mark actually saved me when the vortex closed!" She turned and ran.
I felt a hand on my shoulder.
"Go home," Mark said gently. "I'll talk to her."
I watched as he ran in the same direction. I shifted and ran back home. I thought nothing as I went upstairs to Renemee's room. I didn't want to get Edward's hopes up. I sat down at the piano she had in her room and finished the composition she sang.
"I'll cry,
I'll die,
If I don't have you in my arms.
Please, baby,
Don't leave me,
Alone."
I held her hand as I fell asleep next to her body.

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Alice's Journal Part 18

posted by just_bella

Hi!! Ok haven't written this one in a few days. I think I might wrap this one up soon, just have to figure out how. Until I do that here is the next Part :)

Part 17

I didn't know what was going on, suddenly I felt Jasper's hands on my shoulders shaking me.

I looked in his eyes and took a deep breath, looking around to see that the sun was setting just like in the journal entry.

"What happened?" I asked.

"You were reading out loud then you stopped, your breathing got fast and then stopped completely. You started shaking and you scared the hell out of me." Jasper said as he pulled me closer to...

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.W.T.H. (.Want.Take.Have.)

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

TRUE BLOOD SEASON ONE ON DVD!!!

.WANT.TAKE.HAVE.
I DON'T OWN ANY THING OF THIS BELOW! I AM JUST A FAN, AND THE ONLY ONE WHO OWN'S THE SOOKIE AND BILL WORLD IS CHARLAINE HARRIS!!! SO DON'T GIVE ME ANY CREDIT ON THIS NEW WORLD, JUST GIVE ME CREDIT FOR THE CREATIVITY OF A NEW VERSION I MADE!!!-BuffyFaithfan1
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I stared at Josh like he was crazy!
"You want to what!?" I asked him.
"I want to check out the Cemetary for Bill!" He said and I laughed so hard I was on my knees.
"Why are you laughing!?" I asked me. "Why!?"
"Cause, it's just so funny!" I said and was hunched over laughing so hard my cheeks were maroon looking.
"Just...

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The twlight Zone: Part 15

posted by Edward_lover101

I was getting weaker and weaker by the minute. Edward said that he was going to change me but when? Edward walked though the door, He was carring a huge needle. He also had a little bottle of morthine. My eyes got wider.
"Bella its ok. This will make the pain go away, I promas." Edward bent down and kissed me one more time. He pulled back and took my wrist into his hands.
"It's gonna be alright Bella, I promas." Then he put his mouth on my wrist. Then he bit me. At first the venom wasn't so bad then it got to the point were I was screaming. Edward quickly stuck me with the needle, and injected...

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Alice's Journal Part 17

posted by just_bella

Ok this story has to be cursed!! Last time I put this up it took 6 tries just to get it posted. This time I had the whole thing done and went to post it when the site crashed and everything was lost. SOOOO here I go again. Hope it works this time!!

End of last entry:

"I'm here to help your first few days easier...if that's possible. I was told that you have a sister?" She asked.

"Yes, her name is Cynthia and she's 6. We're eachothers world, I don't know how I will be able to be here without her." I said as I started to cry again.

I'm sorry, I can't continue this is too hard to write. I have to...

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The twlight Zone: part 13

posted by Edward_lover101

"What was that for?" I said.
"You look worried love. I thought that might calm you down."
"Well it worked. I'm always calmer when you are around." Just then Jacob walked though the door. He had a bundle of rose's in a clear vase. He was wearing a shirt with a tie, and bluejeans. Edward looked at me.
"It's ok Edward. If I need you I'l call, just let me talk to him alone for a bit. I'll be ok."
Edward walked out of the room, I knew he didn't want to leave. Jacob walked over to the left side of the bed. He sat down in the chair.
"Hey Bella." Jacob sounded a little depresed.
"What's wrong Jacob?"
"It's....Just...

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The twilght Zone: part 11

posted by Edward_lover101

The last think I remeber was Edward and I waching Romo and Juliet. I woke up in the same hospitle bed, but in a differnt room. Where was I? I was in the Cullen's house last night. I had more tubes in me now. My heart started to race. Then a cool hand touched my arm. I looked over and there was Edward. My heart started to slow down.
"Where am I? How did i get here?"
"You in the hospitle, Bella. I carried you here."
"Why am I here?"
"Well...While you where asleep, you heart rate was really high. Your temp. was riseing, and you wouldn't wake up."
"What happend?"
"You had a heart-atack and, your liver...

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I think this should be Bellas' song in New Moon when Edward leaves her..

posted by Hellohoudini

"Stay With Me" - Danity Kane

[Verse 1]
Raindrops, Fall From, Everywhere
I Reach Out, For You, But Your Not There
So I Stood, Waiting, In The Dark
With Your Picture, In My Hands
Story Of a Broken Heart

[Chorus]
Stay With Me
Don't Let Me Go
Cause I Can't Be Without You
Just Stay With Me
And Hold Me Close
Because I've Built My World Around You
And I Don't Wanna Know What's It Like Without You
So Stay with Me
Just Stay With Me

[Verse 2]
I'm Trying And Hoping, For The Day
When my touch is enough
To Take The Pain Away
Cause I've Searched For So Long
The Answer Is Clear
We'll be OK if We Don't Let It Disappear

[Chorus]
Stay...

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Alice's Journal Part 11

posted by just_bella

So for some wierd reason I have decided that writing 3 stories sounds like fun. I'm not sure how long I will be able to keep them all up, but I'm gonna try :) Thanks for the comments!!
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Last time:

He came up to my father and shook his hand, he smiled at my mother and knelt down to say hello to Cynthia. When he came to me he seemed to look longer then he did with my sister.

"Mary, it is very nice to meet you. I have heard a few things from your father, and he thought that it might be a good idea if we had a conversation." He said in a jolly tone....

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The Other Way (Liz's POV) Ch. 10

posted by CharmedVamp101

We pulled up to the beautiful white house. I sat back in awe. Who had the ability to design something so simple, yet so extravagant at the same time? Probably Esme. Edward had said his family was a lot like him, which meant they were vampires too. They were all beautiful and pale skinned and had the eyes that changed from black to gold to black again. I wonder what made their eyes change.
I thought back to the ride home. It had been very quiet, Edward watched me a lot, so I starred out the window, when I felt his gaze upon me.
We didn't say a lot, I answered the questions that Edward asked me,...

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10 Ways to Annoy Rosalie Hale

posted by meeek

10. Tell her that, because everyone thinks she and Jasper are twins, they should get together. When she asks why, say that Incest is in at the moment.

9. Call her “Ice Queen” behind her back and to her face.

8. Whenever she argues anything, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”

7. Claim that being a human ain’t so great.

6. When she argues the above claim, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”

5. Try to exorcise her and her evil ways.

4. Tell everyone that Edward didn’t go to Italy because Rosalie said Bella was dead – he went to Italy because he envisioned Rosalie’s ugly face.

3. Call her...

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Erin: Chapter 8

posted by xxEmo92xx

"Ahhhh. Stop! Stop! It hurts!" I felt like I would scream myself to death. By the time he was done, I had stopped screaming. The venom hurt so bad, but I wanted to prove to Sam I could handle it. My phone started ringing. Sam answered and hung back up, he knew it was Alice. "What-about-Daniella's-wedding-?" I said between breaths. "The venom lasts for three days, I'm sure it won't hurt as much. It will be like a pulsing in your neck." He said.
Edward rushed through the door. He looked very upset, but furious. Upset when he saw me lying on the bed, furious when he saw Sam leaning over me....

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Bleed It Out ChApTeR oNe!

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

----Chapter One: Cryin' Wont Help You Now!...----
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I looked out my window, and saw Rachel pull into the driveway. She hopped out, and ran inside just as hail started.
"Pretty good storm out there!" She said and I met her in the kitchen.
"Yeah!" I said and she looked at me.
"Okay Mile! Listen up. Kandice may be dead..." Racehel said and I grabbed her by the throat.
"DONT say that!" I said and let her go. "Sorry!"
"She may be...but that doesn't mean you can't live your life with only yourself...who cares! I do and you do and I dont mean it like...

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Storyteller *^*CHAPTER thirteen*^*

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

We All Want The Same Thing!

(this is in KANDICE's Part Of View, after the symbol:---, then its in Mile's Poing Of View! ENJOY!)

S T O R Y T E L L E R
b y: B u f f y F a i t h f a n 1
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CHAPTER 13: The Desperate Kingdom Of Love...
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I looked at Mile, who was freeing himself, and then I looked back at Mandy who was surrendering. I then blinked twice, and pulled the trigger! The bullet flew out of the chamber, as I flinched at the sound of it, and I looked at Mandy. Her eyes widened for the quickest second, and she fell to the ground....

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Cliff Diving Continued

posted by Alice_President

Once again, constructive criticism is welcome <3

This is my version of Bella's cliff diving experience in New Moon, continued:

“Breathe!” A husky, anxiety filled voice barked at me. Water was pouring from my mouth, and the familiar jagged stones from the La Push beach were digging into my back. A large rock slammed into my now upright upper back, directly between my shoulder blades. More water than I thought possible flew out of my mouth as I tried to breath. I could not obey the command. My lungs were burning.
“Breathe, Bella! C’mon!” I suddenly recognised...

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Alex' vamps, chapter 2

posted by Chrisztine

Okay guys, here's chapter 2. I hope you like it. Let me know!

Edward gave me a surprised look. No wonder, usually I’m not this ill-tempered. Guess my quota of happy was running low.
‘’Can we all just focus, please? There’s still danger out there.’’, Alice said, mildly exasperated.
‘’What do you want us to do, Alice?’’, Ryan said, in a soothing voice.
‘’Well for one thing concentrate on the matter at hand..’’, Alice trailed off.
‘’It’s off, it’s off, what else do you want?’’, I nearly screamed at her. I felt a wave of calmness go through me, and in the same...

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Kate's story 4

posted by reneesme15

Here is the next part in Kate's story hope you like it. If you have any ideas for the story plz leave me a comment and i will try and add them in when possable. As always her thoughts are in italic. Enjoy.

I'm so nervous i'm meeting James' family for the first time, god i hope the like me. There's James, i didn't know what to wear so i went for the smart/casual look. So i'm wearing my white blouse with jeans and a waistcoat,it'll do. Gosh i wish he would stop beeping the horn. I grabed my bag off my bed, took one last look in the mirror and ran down the stairs two at a time. I got to the door...

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Why we love Edward and Bella.

posted by Twilighter109

1. He tells her to stay away from him.
2. She says shes not afraid of him.
3. He lets her cry on his shirt and ruin it.
4. He just wants her to be happy.
5. She trusts him.
6. He didn't kill her
7. When the car threatened to crush her all he could think was "Not her"
8. The lion fell in love with the lamb.
9. He left her only for her protection.
10. He won't end her life for her.
11. He took her to the prom because he did't want her to miss anything.
12. He feels very protective of her.
13. He risked blowing the family secret to save her.
14. He is her "Prisoner".
15. He dazzles her.
16. She doesn't care that he is a "Killer".
17. He sayed with her in the Hospital
18. He watches her sleep.
19. She always forgives him.
20. He dove her home when she felt sick.

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MoonShine 4

posted by hayleyhoo

This is quite a long one...
He took a deep breath and started speaking slowly at first but then after a while with more confidence, “ My name is Kaleb, and my mother died saving my life as well, when my mother was pregnant with me she was ill and nearly died, she was left in the woods to die by her village, while she was in the woods, a vampire and a werewolf who were hunting found her and they fought over who would get her, during the fight they both came into contact with her and caused me. Because of what I am my mother healed quickly and survived, the werewolf and vampire had killed each...

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MoonShine 2

posted by hayleyhoo

This is the second part of my story...
Now, alone and afraid, in a strange place with no money or belongings, Meya stumbled around the streets of Newquay. And yet she still felt as if she was being followed, but the vampire would not have been able to track her as vampiwolfs are far faster than both vampires and werewolves and also the fact that they had no scent with which to be tracked with. She found what she was looking for, an abandoned house, and she quickly scanned it with her senses to see if there was anybody inside. After making sure that it was totally abandoned, she made her way...

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TWILIGHT: Domestic Total as of Dec. 7, 2008

posted by Raechelll

Domestic Total as of Dec. 7, 2008: $138,552,000 (Estimate)
Distributor: Summit Entertainment    Release Date: November 21, 2008
Genre: Romance    Running Time: 2 hrs. 0 min.
MPAA Rating: PG-13    Production Budget: $37 million

TOTAL LIFETIME GROSSES
Domestic:      $138,552,000      86.7%
+ Foreign:      $21,325,749      13.3%
= Worldwide:      $159,877,749

DOMESTIC SUMMARY
Opening Weekend:     $69,637,740
(3,419 theaters, $20,368 average)
% of Total Gross:     50.3%
Widest Release:      3,620 theaters
In Release:      17 days / 2.4 weeks

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