1) The wedding is something that Bella doesn't want to do and so she should be making a huge deal about it and Alice should be going crazy and overboard with stuff for it but nope it just comes right on out in a couple of pages at the beginning.
2) Wait...what bachelor party? bachelorette party? Denali who??? where's the whole jealous stare off with Tanya and Bella?
3) Immortal children....wow that's convenient...wonder why it wasn't mentioned earlier in the series...
4) makeout session at the wedding in front of everyone...oh yeah bella is sooo self conscious
5) another waste of pages with the whole edward actually eating thing...i mean come on please just save him from the pain of it already
6) another classic case of Bella's stupidity at times
7) Isle Esme...such a creative name and all psh...i mean i expected Edward to go all out and take bella everywhere and let her do tons of once in a lifetime human things before changing her and all...oh and what's with Bella's sudden craving for sex????
8) yep the wonderful character of Bella was completely lost...it was semi-there during the honeymoon scene but that was it...haha "Jacob drawer" that's pretty bad Steph
9) the beach scene was pretty much the only one that I really enjoyed and reminded me that bd was part of a series, hence that it was the only scene with good bella characterization
10) I liked the pillow stuff...it was good humor to the story
11) gotta love eggs right?
12) Bella seducing a vampire...haha wow i really cant picture that...and why on earth would she think about staying human? I mean i was like waiting for the gotcha part through that entire chapter.
13) very convenient that the cleaning crew (who has a cleaning crew on their own island?) is a bunch of superstitious ppl
14) ok with the pregnancy thing i was like wha??? Did this get switched with one of the twilight fanfiction cliches on the internet? nope
15) ya heck if i was the superstitious cleaning lady i'd be like "Ahhh vampire!!! Run away!!!" and not even speak to him let alone tell him what he wants to know
16) yes I hated Jacob with a huge passion before bd...now he's like the only real character for me
17) I agree
18) Is Edward a flipping idiot???? How about adoption instead of being like "okay Bella you have sex with me tonight and Jacob tomorrow night and vice versa until you get pregnant with the werewolf's (cough i mean shapeshifter's) baby"
19) I can't believe observant Bella would be so blind to Rosalie's desires like that...ugh
20) I got bd at the airport and im a pretty fast reader and my plane was delayed so i got to his pov and once i read the titles, i started cracking up laughing which caused the ppl next to me to stare at me like i was a complete idiot haha i liked them
21) I agree
22) I love Leah and I actually wished that Jake would end up with her instead of Renesesmee(*cringe* the name ew)
23) Yep the vampire IQ keeps on depleting...I wonder if a mentally retarded person that was changed into a vampire would be like normal or still mentally retarded...hmmm
24) mutant spawn hahahaha i like that...yep just ANOTHER convenient story
25) ya Bella and blood aren't supposed to mix so what's up with that??? and she's still human!
26) I suffered too.
27) Again, I love Leah haha. plus even though im blond, i liked the jokes haha... You. Got. Food. In. My. Hair.
28) Rosalie=territorial
29) I don't do blood and now I'm terrified of birth scenes...thanks Stephenie! now i know to just adopt and faint at the sight of blood
30) we all bend the rules for bella cuz she's special...wtf?!?!
31) RENESMEE?! Steph lost her creativity by a long shot...even cheesy Carlie would have been better cuz its an actual name!!!
32) how cliche is that? jacob still gets a part of bella with re-whatsherface...ewww stephenie turned into a pedophile
33) ya so I was expecting more of like edward being against the whole transformation and a lot of angst leading up to her changing but nope...it just comes out of nowhere..."oh no she's dieing cuz of her mutant spawn! here's some venom Bella! BAM!!!! vampire Bella
34) Hello??? what happened to crazed newborn???
35) yep may as well have just gotten a vampire, named her Bella, and put her in the book
36) "my little nudger" ha! that sounds sooo wrong
37) i know...where did all that protectiveness come from? and what's with the maternal side of her?
38) Totally fanfic.
39) I know! she totally is trying to make everyone happy with the whole Charlie thing and I actually said wtf out loud when I read it...WTF!?!?!?!
40) *cringe*
41) I agree
42) and she actually wears the jumbo diamond thing!!!
43) yep, totally out of character
44) there isn't any characterization at all
45) and I know vampires are supposed to be smart but with everyone's IQs depleting, doesn't Alice's plan seem a little too brilliant and coincidental???
46) It's like bd isn't even a part of the series bc everything that mattered before doesn't in bd...hello? treaty=law
47) another waste of pages
48) I wish Steph would have actually gone more in-depth with Alec bc he is actually one of my fav characters and he's like one of the most important, if not the most important, part of the volturi and so I think he should have at least gotten a couple of lines...love his power though
49) BAM! super bella comes to the rescue!
50) yeah, WHATEVER HAPPENED TO EDWARD BEING THE MOST IMPORTANT THING TO BELLA?!?!?!?!?!?
51) idk that seemed like it was just a friendship thing but again, Stephenie is just trying to please everyone
52) i loved them and thought that there could have been more pages about them
53) more fluff and waste of pages
54) Love the Volturi's entrance...yay!!!
55) another coincidence
56) either she got some bad press about them not being real werewolves or stephenie meyer has gone insane
57) PREMENSTRUAL VAMPIRES!!!!!
58) such a motivational speech...too bad its pointless cuz nothing happens
59) Annoying. Gooshey. Repetitive. Took the words right out of my mouth
60) her character just went away...like the rest of the Cullens
61) Exactly. Too perfect. Unrealistic
*I think what really bothers me is that the whole love story theme is gone. Edward and Bella's characters are completely wrong and Bella is all like "okay I have Edward, now what? Oh here comes my mutant spawn yay!!!"
*There's also no action or suspense like the other books had. I remember one reviewer had said that breaking dawn was just like a drawn out epilogue and i have to completely agree with that.
*There's too much fluff and it's not even the good kind between Edward and Bella.
*Jacob Black went insane. Imprinting on a half-vampire baby. Wow creepy!!!
*I also wish that everything would have been in Bella's pov like the other books. That just would have given it a better connection to the rest of the series
*wish there was more about the Volturi too. Like the rest of the laws and their powers and such instead of having them march out from a forest, act like they have pms, be too stupid to hear renesmee's heartbeat, and go back to volterra like cowards
*Shouldve been a better plot is all I can really say. Still in love with the first three books, but I probably won't be rereading this one. :(
2) Wait...what bachelor party? bachelorette party? Denali who??? where's the whole jealous stare off with Tanya and Bella?
3) Immortal children....wow that's convenient...wonder why it wasn't mentioned earlier in the series...
4) makeout session at the wedding in front of everyone...oh yeah bella is sooo self conscious
5) another waste of pages with the whole edward actually eating thing...i mean come on please just save him from the pain of it already
6) another classic case of Bella's stupidity at times
7) Isle Esme...such a creative name and all psh...i mean i expected Edward to go all out and take bella everywhere and let her do tons of once in a lifetime human things before changing her and all...oh and what's with Bella's sudden craving for sex????
8) yep the wonderful character of Bella was completely lost...it was semi-there during the honeymoon scene but that was it...haha "Jacob drawer" that's pretty bad Steph
9) the beach scene was pretty much the only one that I really enjoyed and reminded me that bd was part of a series, hence that it was the only scene with good bella characterization
10) I liked the pillow stuff...it was good humor to the story
11) gotta love eggs right?
12) Bella seducing a vampire...haha wow i really cant picture that...and why on earth would she think about staying human? I mean i was like waiting for the gotcha part through that entire chapter.
13) very convenient that the cleaning crew (who has a cleaning crew on their own island?) is a bunch of superstitious ppl
14) ok with the pregnancy thing i was like wha??? Did this get switched with one of the twilight fanfiction cliches on the internet? nope
15) ya heck if i was the superstitious cleaning lady i'd be like "Ahhh vampire!!! Run away!!!" and not even speak to him let alone tell him what he wants to know
16) yes I hated Jacob with a huge passion before bd...now he's like the only real character for me
17) I agree
18) Is Edward a flipping idiot???? How about adoption instead of being like "okay Bella you have sex with me tonight and Jacob tomorrow night and vice versa until you get pregnant with the werewolf's (cough i mean shapeshifter's) baby"
19) I can't believe observant Bella would be so blind to Rosalie's desires like that...ugh
20) I got bd at the airport and im a pretty fast reader and my plane was delayed so i got to his pov and once i read the titles, i started cracking up laughing which caused the ppl next to me to stare at me like i was a complete idiot haha i liked them
21) I agree
22) I love Leah and I actually wished that Jake would end up with her instead of Renesesmee(*cringe* the name ew)
23) Yep the vampire IQ keeps on depleting...I wonder if a mentally retarded person that was changed into a vampire would be like normal or still mentally retarded...hmmm
24) mutant spawn hahahaha i like that...yep just ANOTHER convenient story
25) ya Bella and blood aren't supposed to mix so what's up with that??? and she's still human!
26) I suffered too.
27) Again, I love Leah haha. plus even though im blond, i liked the jokes haha... You. Got. Food. In. My. Hair.
28) Rosalie=territorial
29) I don't do blood and now I'm terrified of birth scenes...thanks Stephenie! now i know to just adopt and faint at the sight of blood
30) we all bend the rules for bella cuz she's special...wtf?!?!
31) RENESMEE?! Steph lost her creativity by a long shot...even cheesy Carlie would have been better cuz its an actual name!!!
32) how cliche is that? jacob still gets a part of bella with re-whatsherface...ewww stephenie turned into a pedophile
33) ya so I was expecting more of like edward being against the whole transformation and a lot of angst leading up to her changing but nope...it just comes out of nowhere..."oh no she's dieing cuz of her mutant spawn! here's some venom Bella! BAM!!!! vampire Bella
34) Hello??? what happened to crazed newborn???
35) yep may as well have just gotten a vampire, named her Bella, and put her in the book
36) "my little nudger" ha! that sounds sooo wrong
37) i know...where did all that protectiveness come from? and what's with the maternal side of her?
38) Totally fanfic.
39) I know! she totally is trying to make everyone happy with the whole Charlie thing and I actually said wtf out loud when I read it...WTF!?!?!?!
40) *cringe*
41) I agree
42) and she actually wears the jumbo diamond thing!!!
43) yep, totally out of character
44) there isn't any characterization at all
45) and I know vampires are supposed to be smart but with everyone's IQs depleting, doesn't Alice's plan seem a little too brilliant and coincidental???
46) It's like bd isn't even a part of the series bc everything that mattered before doesn't in bd...hello? treaty=law
47) another waste of pages
48) I wish Steph would have actually gone more in-depth with Alec bc he is actually one of my fav characters and he's like one of the most important, if not the most important, part of the volturi and so I think he should have at least gotten a couple of lines...love his power though
49) BAM! super bella comes to the rescue!
50) yeah, WHATEVER HAPPENED TO EDWARD BEING THE MOST IMPORTANT THING TO BELLA?!?!?!?!?!?
51) idk that seemed like it was just a friendship thing but again, Stephenie is just trying to please everyone
52) i loved them and thought that there could have been more pages about them
53) more fluff and waste of pages
54) Love the Volturi's entrance...yay!!!
55) another coincidence
56) either she got some bad press about them not being real werewolves or stephenie meyer has gone insane
57) PREMENSTRUAL VAMPIRES!!!!!
58) such a motivational speech...too bad its pointless cuz nothing happens
59) Annoying. Gooshey. Repetitive. Took the words right out of my mouth
60) her character just went away...like the rest of the Cullens
61) Exactly. Too perfect. Unrealistic
*I think what really bothers me is that the whole love story theme is gone. Edward and Bella's characters are completely wrong and Bella is all like "okay I have Edward, now what? Oh here comes my mutant spawn yay!!!"
*There's also no action or suspense like the other books had. I remember one reviewer had said that breaking dawn was just like a drawn out epilogue and i have to completely agree with that.
*There's too much fluff and it's not even the good kind between Edward and Bella.
*Jacob Black went insane. Imprinting on a half-vampire baby. Wow creepy!!!
*I also wish that everything would have been in Bella's pov like the other books. That just would have given it a better connection to the rest of the series
*wish there was more about the Volturi too. Like the rest of the laws and their powers and such instead of having them march out from a forest, act like they have pms, be too stupid to hear renesmee's heartbeat, and go back to volterra like cowards
*Shouldve been a better plot is all I can really say. Still in love with the first three books, but I probably won't be rereading this one. :(
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