My name is Bella Swan. I’ve lived on this earth for a very long time. I left my family to fine my older bother Jasper Swan. To Day I was moving out of my Adopted father John Smith house in Phoenix because I thought I didn’t belong in his world and because he didn’t share the same secret as me and my adopted mother Renee Dale who was similar to me. So I moved with my adopted mother in forks. It was hard saying goodbye to my father and step mother. When I got to forks it was different instead of seeing the sun I saw clouds.
When I got settled in my old room I went to the garage to ask my mother when I would be able to go to school she was surprise.
“Well Bells You can go tomorrow” she said with a smile. “Bells while I’m at it I want to give you a gift.” she said. “Close your eyes and count to 10” she said.
I heard an engine. “I wanted to give you one of my cars before you got to school” she said. I just ran and jumped in her arms I was so happy I couldn’t talk. “Do you like it Bells.” “I LOVE IT.” I said screaming the words. “Well before you go to school”… she said laughing “let’s hunt” she said with a smile. Then we ran outback to the woods. I was mad because she caught the biggest bear.
The next day I went to school every one stared at me. I loved the attention. I got out of my car and then I smelled something I recognized it was Edward my wonderful Edward I was so happy, but I had to focus on what I was doing. I went into the office to get my papers for class. When I walk down the hall everybody stared at me with mouths open. Some kid named Toney was the first person to talk to me. He asked me to be in schools newspaper. Of cores I said no.
“Tony I am sorry but I don’t want a lot of people staring at me they are all ready staring at me now, I’m sorry.” “Its ok I see you at lunch then see ya” he said. By that time I was in my Spanish class the teacher was calling order to the class room. I sat by this girl named Jessica she was pretty nice we talked walking to lunch together. Then I saw my Edward standing by the back door looking like a male model with some people. One second later he figured out my scent and was surprised.
I started to walk his way. “BELLA NO.” He screamed in his thoughts. I looked at him shock and sadness
“I’m sorry Bella, but you mustn’t come yet these people will start to wonder how we know each other, at across my face. He looks at me sadly walking to his table. Lest not today love” he thought. “Its ok honey I love you” I said smiling. “I love you to Bella” After school I went to Edwards’s car those people were staring. One of them looked like someone I knew he stared at me for a second, and then I look at Edward. I couldn’t take it any more! “Get In” I told Edward, the people that were standing next to Edward looked at him for questions. “I’ll be right back” Edward said looking angry. I laughed, he growled.
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