ok i know this has nothing to do with TWILIGHT i was just bored and i got to writing my own stroy not to sell or nothing just becasue i was bored so i don't know if i should go on PLZ give me ur
opinion on what u think so..... yup here it is
o and yes i know i kept the name EDWARD and yes i know the girls name is close to BELLA so this was just for fun!!!
CHAPTER 1
“I hate it here” I said in the most mad voice I could ever say As I looked back I could see my mothers face looking at me with a look that could just make you fell like killing your self. When I got to my room I could see that I would be stuck up here until things would cool down or just until school started. As I got ready to go to bed I could hear my mother making dinner so I knew she would call me to go and eat. I waited and waited to hear her even though I knew what I was going to say “I ‘M NOT HUNGERY “but nothing no one called. That is when I found she must be REALY mad at me. RING, RING, RING I shut my alarm off then woke up and there was a note “GET READY AND BREAKFEAST IS ON THE TABLE.” Wow that really scared me for a moment but then I heard my dad call “are u ready” even though I was mad at bought of my parents I had to take that 5 min. ride to my school High School. Well my mother Mary Ponce and my father David Ponce got married just a couple of years ago .I know I was born and everything and they still didn’t get married. After I was 13 the finally got married which made thing worse because they spend haft of the time fighting and never think of anything but them self. So that was the fight me and my mother had this morning I told my mother the way I really feel about my father and her .As I got my thing s for school I could hear the anger in my fathers voice as he yelled again “U READY!!!!!” so I ran to the stairs . For a whole 5 minutes no one talked then we got to the school I said goodbye like I always do but I heard nothing from my father’s part. As I got to the first hour History my friend Melissa stopped me in the middle of the hall way and told me a whole bunch of gossip I blanked her out until she said “there is going to be a new kid coming today he is coming all the way from Washington I hope he is cute” I laughed to that last part then said bye to her and started to walk to my History class. As I walked to the class I thought about that new kid even though I didn’t want to think about nothing about school I wanted to think about how I was going to say sorry to my mother and father. Even though I really don’t think I should say sorry when all I said was the truth. As I went in the class every eye in that class way on me as MR.CARTER of course he told the whole class that I already had gone 5 times late to that class. So after getting trough the “TALK” I sat in my seat and took out my homework and passed it up.
CHAPTER 2
As I sat in my seat not paying any attrition to what the teacher was say I thought of that fight I had with my mother I thought of all the things I told her of how she and my father where destroying my life with all the fights they have all the time. I hope she would talk with my father to stop all the fighting they were having. RING, RING, RING class was over I thought when was I going to see the new kid everyone was talking about but I soon forgot about that when I meet up with my best friend Aaron when I talk to him I feel a lot better because he goose through what I have to his parents always fight so when I feel down he knows how to make me feel better and when I see him down I know what to do to make him happy again.”HI AARON “ “ Hey Isabel” “did u hear about the new kid he comes here this hour “ “O I really don’t care about the new kid at all he just another person in this school I really don’t give a crap about” “ wow you really don’t give do u” “NOPE” “dang I better get to class bye Aaron” “bye”. I walked in class right as the bell rang and I went straight to my seat as I sat down I saw there was a empty see where I was I thought maybe my best friend Lucia was not here today but I saw here in the back row I saw her try to pass me a note so I got up acting like I need help from her as I got there I picked up the note from the floor and walked back to my seat. I opened the note and in big letters it said “TEACHER MOVED ME YOU WILL HAVE TO SIT WITH THE NEW KID!!!” I looked back at her and she had a look on her face like if she was trying to hold in from laughing her but off. I looked back at the teacher as he started class say something about Science as I was putting my head down I heard the teacher stop talking a say “well look who is here the student of the school” as I heard him say that I pulled my heard up just to see what the new kid looked like. And there he was his beautiful brown eyes and brown hair he looked like an angel. I didn’t know what was going on me like a guy I never had liked anyone in my whole life not even guys that everyone liked but still this guy was different he looked so sweet and so different then any other guy. I thought to myself “STOP LOOKING AT HIM” and of course the teacher told him to sit buy me and he looked at me but I had my had my head down so he couldn’t see my face. When he sat down I couldn’t hear that will but I thought I heard him say “hi” so I looked up at him and said “hi” he smiled and that made my day I felt like everything I should be worried about disappeared nothing else mattered I liked that feeling. Then as I was going to talk to him the bell rang and he was gone before I could ask him anything. “So…...what do you think of the new kid what was his name again” Melissa asking right away “Edward…… Edward Gregory” I said in an annoyed voice “a yes I thought he was ok” even though I wanted to tell her that I thought he was the cutest boy I’ve ever seen. She waited for me to get my things in my bag our next hour was lunch I hated that because our lunch was A lunch that meant we where the first ones to eat lunch at 11’ock we both waited for each other to put there things in our lockers and we walked to lunch and meet up with Aaron “hello girls” I laughed hard “hello” I said in a comic way. We all walked in to lunch the same routine sit at the table we always sit at. I could see a table of 30 kids all surrounding Edward. I tried to take one more look at him but too many heads were in the way. When I finally got a chance to see him it didn’t look like he liked the attention so I thought I should go and take him away fro the crowd that looked like they were eating him alive. Then I thought if I do that then what would tell him. After lunch was over some how I got through the whole day with out have to bump into him all day. Then it was 3:02 the end of school came and I walked out to wait for my ride where I always wait for my dad come pick me up I saw him waiting for a ride today was Friday so it was most possible that my dad was going to pick me up. I waited for 10 minutes which wasn’t weird for me because I made always forgot about me at school then I waited longer then I realized that everyone was gone and I saw him go walking so I thought maybe I would walk and he would see me on the way. I looked a the woods for a minute and thought there is a shot cut through there to my house I would take half of the time. It didn’t take my time for me to decide I would go through the woods .It was cold out and in the woods it was dark because the trees covered the sun just a little of the sun could pass through the thick leafs of the tall I heard some crackling in the back but I didn’t think much of it “just some animal” I told myself and kept on walking. I felt wired like if someone was watching me and my every move I looked back every five seconds just to make sure then and there I realized that this was a bad idea at the beginning . Then I felt a hand grab me and throw me against a tree.
CHPTER 3
I felt like fainting right when I hit that tree and he grab me and I fought back I wasn’t going down with out a fight our just in till I could see that face of the man that was doing this to me I fought until I hit him where no man should be hit once I saw him move back because I hurt him I ran as fast as I could I heard him chasing me so I thought the only way I could get out was if I found a place to hide and I did I found a tree. Right when I thought he gave up he grabbed me and me proceed to try to take off my clothes when I thought all was done I heard a voice in the back yell “LET HER GO” I suddenly felt the mans touch ripped off of me it didn’t take that long for me to know who was that man who yelled it was Edward “EDWARD” I yelled so he would know I was still alive I was trying to stay up but my head fell dizzy all of a sudden and I blanked out. I heard nothing but silence. I felt safe and warm I felt him pick me up and take me to his car. Then I blanked out for the second time when I woke up again I was rapped in a warm blanket that smelled just like he did I loved it. I opened my eyes and I had no idea where I was. When he walked in the room and I saw he up close and I couldn’t stop my heart from beating so fast. After a minute of silence he spoke “um I think your going to need ice for the bourse you have on your leg” I had not even noticed that my leg was in pain. “Where am I” he looked at me like I was suppose to know this already before he answered me I heard a small laugh from his part and he looked up at me and said “your at my house this is my room you like” he said like he was mocking me “well u could fix it up a little” I laughed and so did he then he saw that I had trouble sitting up I his bed so he lead in his face just inches from mine and helped me. Then his mother walked in and we both pulled away “ I called your mother and told her that you two had to study for a project I hope you don’t mind” she said in a very comforting voice “not at all that is better then she thinking I ran away” she laughed then left the room I looked down that’s when I realized that I wasn’t wearing my shirt any more I was wearing a blue shirt which fit me way to big so I knew it was his just the thought of my wearing something his made me jump. He looked at me and like if he knew what I was thinking “its mine I just thought that your shirt was just too ripped up so I gave you one of mine”. He paused then said “you know your luck I got there when I did” I looked up at him I knew this was going to come up I really didn’t want to talk about what happened that morning. “Please I really don’t want to talk about this right now” looked straight into my eyes “I saved your life I think you at least own me that” I looked away right as he said that “ I think I should be the one asking the question” he looked at me confused “what do u want to know” I looked down at the shirt and then looked back up “ not that I’m not happy you got there when you did but how………how did u know I was there” a big smile came over his face that just made my heart melt “ the only way I can answer that one is to show you tomorrow after school” I looked at him confused “so your not going to answer right now” “nope” “well then I guess I will see you when school ends I think” he laughed so hard it made me laugh “how about I see you at school and we talk about what we are going to do” I looked at me and then looked away “ is there something else you want to know” I thought for a moment I know I didn’t want to ask this but I had too “ so………. What ever happen to the guy that did this to me” he looked at me right as I said that “the police got there and arrested him you will never have to see that jerk again” I could see that he got mad because I asked that. “When are you going to ask me who changed you” I looked at him right before he could finish that sentence “WHO CHANGED ME”I demanded he tell me. But him not looking worried all he did was laugh and look at me with comic eyes “don’t worry my mother did” he looked down trying to hide a bigger laugh. I looked down and laughed with him. That’s when I looked at the clock on his wall 8’o clock. I jumped out off the bed when he looked worried when I said almost yelling “IT’S EIGHT” I looked at my things and grabbed them right as I was on my way out of his room I felt a tug and I realized that he had grabbed my bag so I wouldn’t leave “what” I said and he looked at me with the same look he had given me when I asked him ‘where was I’ he took a step closer to me and looked at me his eyes staring straight into mine “ you know if you don’t go to school tomorrow I will not be able to answer your question about how I found you” it looked like of he really wanted me to go to school but all I could think of was the time it was “fine, fine” he looked at me with a half serious look on his face I looked back seeing that he still didn’t let go of my bag I looked down and back up “ I promise” then after saying that he looked at me for a minute and finally let go of my bag. As I was running down his stairs I could hardly hear him say “I hope you’re not lying to me” I laughed on my way down when I was on my way to the door I quickly said to Mrs. Gregory “thanks for all your help and for the phone call” she laughed and said “no problem” when I was half way out the door I heard her say “hope to see you again” “me too” I said in a cheerful voice. And I got in my then I realized I had nothing to go in. Before I could even turn to go back he was in front of me laughing “seems you forgot who brought you here” he said trying to hold in laughing “ well if your going to take me you better hurry” he opened the door for me “ a true gentlemen” I said mocking him . When got to my house before I could get out he leaned in just inches from my face like last time he told me “ remember you promised me you would go tomorrow” I looked at him and just a few seconds before answering “ I know I will be there….. I am always true to my word” this time he had a small laugh and then he got out of the car and opened the door for me again. “Thanks” I ran to the door and looked back to see if Edward was leaving and he was.
opinion on what u think so..... yup here it is
o and yes i know i kept the name EDWARD and yes i know the girls name is close to BELLA so this was just for fun!!!
CHAPTER 1
“I hate it here” I said in the most mad voice I could ever say As I looked back I could see my mothers face looking at me with a look that could just make you fell like killing your self. When I got to my room I could see that I would be stuck up here until things would cool down or just until school started. As I got ready to go to bed I could hear my mother making dinner so I knew she would call me to go and eat. I waited and waited to hear her even though I knew what I was going to say “I ‘M NOT HUNGERY “but nothing no one called. That is when I found she must be REALY mad at me. RING, RING, RING I shut my alarm off then woke up and there was a note “GET READY AND BREAKFEAST IS ON THE TABLE.” Wow that really scared me for a moment but then I heard my dad call “are u ready” even though I was mad at bought of my parents I had to take that 5 min. ride to my school High School. Well my mother Mary Ponce and my father David Ponce got married just a couple of years ago .I know I was born and everything and they still didn’t get married. After I was 13 the finally got married which made thing worse because they spend haft of the time fighting and never think of anything but them self. So that was the fight me and my mother had this morning I told my mother the way I really feel about my father and her .As I got my thing s for school I could hear the anger in my fathers voice as he yelled again “U READY!!!!!” so I ran to the stairs . For a whole 5 minutes no one talked then we got to the school I said goodbye like I always do but I heard nothing from my father’s part. As I got to the first hour History my friend Melissa stopped me in the middle of the hall way and told me a whole bunch of gossip I blanked her out until she said “there is going to be a new kid coming today he is coming all the way from Washington I hope he is cute” I laughed to that last part then said bye to her and started to walk to my History class. As I walked to the class I thought about that new kid even though I didn’t want to think about nothing about school I wanted to think about how I was going to say sorry to my mother and father. Even though I really don’t think I should say sorry when all I said was the truth. As I went in the class every eye in that class way on me as MR.CARTER of course he told the whole class that I already had gone 5 times late to that class. So after getting trough the “TALK” I sat in my seat and took out my homework and passed it up.
CHAPTER 2
As I sat in my seat not paying any attrition to what the teacher was say I thought of that fight I had with my mother I thought of all the things I told her of how she and my father where destroying my life with all the fights they have all the time. I hope she would talk with my father to stop all the fighting they were having. RING, RING, RING class was over I thought when was I going to see the new kid everyone was talking about but I soon forgot about that when I meet up with my best friend Aaron when I talk to him I feel a lot better because he goose through what I have to his parents always fight so when I feel down he knows how to make me feel better and when I see him down I know what to do to make him happy again.”HI AARON “ “ Hey Isabel” “did u hear about the new kid he comes here this hour “ “O I really don’t care about the new kid at all he just another person in this school I really don’t give a crap about” “ wow you really don’t give do u” “NOPE” “dang I better get to class bye Aaron” “bye”. I walked in class right as the bell rang and I went straight to my seat as I sat down I saw there was a empty see where I was I thought maybe my best friend Lucia was not here today but I saw here in the back row I saw her try to pass me a note so I got up acting like I need help from her as I got there I picked up the note from the floor and walked back to my seat. I opened the note and in big letters it said “TEACHER MOVED ME YOU WILL HAVE TO SIT WITH THE NEW KID!!!” I looked back at her and she had a look on her face like if she was trying to hold in from laughing her but off. I looked back at the teacher as he started class say something about Science as I was putting my head down I heard the teacher stop talking a say “well look who is here the student of the school” as I heard him say that I pulled my heard up just to see what the new kid looked like. And there he was his beautiful brown eyes and brown hair he looked like an angel. I didn’t know what was going on me like a guy I never had liked anyone in my whole life not even guys that everyone liked but still this guy was different he looked so sweet and so different then any other guy. I thought to myself “STOP LOOKING AT HIM” and of course the teacher told him to sit buy me and he looked at me but I had my had my head down so he couldn’t see my face. When he sat down I couldn’t hear that will but I thought I heard him say “hi” so I looked up at him and said “hi” he smiled and that made my day I felt like everything I should be worried about disappeared nothing else mattered I liked that feeling. Then as I was going to talk to him the bell rang and he was gone before I could ask him anything. “So…...what do you think of the new kid what was his name again” Melissa asking right away “Edward…… Edward Gregory” I said in an annoyed voice “a yes I thought he was ok” even though I wanted to tell her that I thought he was the cutest boy I’ve ever seen. She waited for me to get my things in my bag our next hour was lunch I hated that because our lunch was A lunch that meant we where the first ones to eat lunch at 11’ock we both waited for each other to put there things in our lockers and we walked to lunch and meet up with Aaron “hello girls” I laughed hard “hello” I said in a comic way. We all walked in to lunch the same routine sit at the table we always sit at. I could see a table of 30 kids all surrounding Edward. I tried to take one more look at him but too many heads were in the way. When I finally got a chance to see him it didn’t look like he liked the attention so I thought I should go and take him away fro the crowd that looked like they were eating him alive. Then I thought if I do that then what would tell him. After lunch was over some how I got through the whole day with out have to bump into him all day. Then it was 3:02 the end of school came and I walked out to wait for my ride where I always wait for my dad come pick me up I saw him waiting for a ride today was Friday so it was most possible that my dad was going to pick me up. I waited for 10 minutes which wasn’t weird for me because I made always forgot about me at school then I waited longer then I realized that everyone was gone and I saw him go walking so I thought maybe I would walk and he would see me on the way. I looked a the woods for a minute and thought there is a shot cut through there to my house I would take half of the time. It didn’t take my time for me to decide I would go through the woods .It was cold out and in the woods it was dark because the trees covered the sun just a little of the sun could pass through the thick leafs of the tall I heard some crackling in the back but I didn’t think much of it “just some animal” I told myself and kept on walking. I felt wired like if someone was watching me and my every move I looked back every five seconds just to make sure then and there I realized that this was a bad idea at the beginning . Then I felt a hand grab me and throw me against a tree.
CHPTER 3
I felt like fainting right when I hit that tree and he grab me and I fought back I wasn’t going down with out a fight our just in till I could see that face of the man that was doing this to me I fought until I hit him where no man should be hit once I saw him move back because I hurt him I ran as fast as I could I heard him chasing me so I thought the only way I could get out was if I found a place to hide and I did I found a tree. Right when I thought he gave up he grabbed me and me proceed to try to take off my clothes when I thought all was done I heard a voice in the back yell “LET HER GO” I suddenly felt the mans touch ripped off of me it didn’t take that long for me to know who was that man who yelled it was Edward “EDWARD” I yelled so he would know I was still alive I was trying to stay up but my head fell dizzy all of a sudden and I blanked out. I heard nothing but silence. I felt safe and warm I felt him pick me up and take me to his car. Then I blanked out for the second time when I woke up again I was rapped in a warm blanket that smelled just like he did I loved it. I opened my eyes and I had no idea where I was. When he walked in the room and I saw he up close and I couldn’t stop my heart from beating so fast. After a minute of silence he spoke “um I think your going to need ice for the bourse you have on your leg” I had not even noticed that my leg was in pain. “Where am I” he looked at me like I was suppose to know this already before he answered me I heard a small laugh from his part and he looked up at me and said “your at my house this is my room you like” he said like he was mocking me “well u could fix it up a little” I laughed and so did he then he saw that I had trouble sitting up I his bed so he lead in his face just inches from mine and helped me. Then his mother walked in and we both pulled away “ I called your mother and told her that you two had to study for a project I hope you don’t mind” she said in a very comforting voice “not at all that is better then she thinking I ran away” she laughed then left the room I looked down that’s when I realized that I wasn’t wearing my shirt any more I was wearing a blue shirt which fit me way to big so I knew it was his just the thought of my wearing something his made me jump. He looked at me and like if he knew what I was thinking “its mine I just thought that your shirt was just too ripped up so I gave you one of mine”. He paused then said “you know your luck I got there when I did” I looked up at him I knew this was going to come up I really didn’t want to talk about what happened that morning. “Please I really don’t want to talk about this right now” looked straight into my eyes “I saved your life I think you at least own me that” I looked away right as he said that “ I think I should be the one asking the question” he looked at me confused “what do u want to know” I looked down at the shirt and then looked back up “ not that I’m not happy you got there when you did but how………how did u know I was there” a big smile came over his face that just made my heart melt “ the only way I can answer that one is to show you tomorrow after school” I looked at him confused “so your not going to answer right now” “nope” “well then I guess I will see you when school ends I think” he laughed so hard it made me laugh “how about I see you at school and we talk about what we are going to do” I looked at me and then looked away “ is there something else you want to know” I thought for a moment I know I didn’t want to ask this but I had too “ so………. What ever happen to the guy that did this to me” he looked at me right as I said that “the police got there and arrested him you will never have to see that jerk again” I could see that he got mad because I asked that. “When are you going to ask me who changed you” I looked at him right before he could finish that sentence “WHO CHANGED ME”I demanded he tell me. But him not looking worried all he did was laugh and look at me with comic eyes “don’t worry my mother did” he looked down trying to hide a bigger laugh. I looked down and laughed with him. That’s when I looked at the clock on his wall 8’o clock. I jumped out off the bed when he looked worried when I said almost yelling “IT’S EIGHT” I looked at my things and grabbed them right as I was on my way out of his room I felt a tug and I realized that he had grabbed my bag so I wouldn’t leave “what” I said and he looked at me with the same look he had given me when I asked him ‘where was I’ he took a step closer to me and looked at me his eyes staring straight into mine “ you know if you don’t go to school tomorrow I will not be able to answer your question about how I found you” it looked like of he really wanted me to go to school but all I could think of was the time it was “fine, fine” he looked at me with a half serious look on his face I looked back seeing that he still didn’t let go of my bag I looked down and back up “ I promise” then after saying that he looked at me for a minute and finally let go of my bag. As I was running down his stairs I could hardly hear him say “I hope you’re not lying to me” I laughed on my way down when I was on my way to the door I quickly said to Mrs. Gregory “thanks for all your help and for the phone call” she laughed and said “no problem” when I was half way out the door I heard her say “hope to see you again” “me too” I said in a cheerful voice. And I got in my then I realized I had nothing to go in. Before I could even turn to go back he was in front of me laughing “seems you forgot who brought you here” he said trying to hold in laughing “ well if your going to take me you better hurry” he opened the door for me “ a true gentlemen” I said mocking him . When got to my house before I could get out he leaned in just inches from my face like last time he told me “ remember you promised me you would go tomorrow” I looked at him and just a few seconds before answering “ I know I will be there….. I am always true to my word” this time he had a small laugh and then he got out of the car and opened the door for me again. “Thanks” I ran to the door and looked back to see if Edward was leaving and he was.
thanks for reading im really new at this as some of guys can tell