hey, for those who did my question, this is the draft of my story, of edward and jacob for bella's protection, and when they come back, she is in fact, a vampire slayer/witch (havent decided which yet!!!)
let me know if you like it!
Prologue
I never thought it would happen like this. The Quileute’s on my left, and the Cullen’s on my right. Both people I thought I could love and trust. Both ready to kill me. I waited in weary anticipation as Edward and Jacob took two steps towards me, both looking upset yet focused at the same time. I felt my new family stir uneasily behind me, bound by the same thing that kept me from running full throttle for the other side of the world. As I looked past the two advancing monsters, I saw Alice and Esme, staring at me with sad and pained looks on their faces, looking as if they would be crying, if that were not impossible. I threw them an approximation of a smile, trying not to cry myself as the two men in my life, who vowed to love and protect me, moved closer to the kill, both coiled to spring. With one last deep breath, I took my last look at the beautiful ocean that surrounded us, closed my eyes and let a quiet tear escape, while both vampire and werewolf sprang.
let me know if you like it!
Prologue
I never thought it would happen like this. The Quileute’s on my left, and the Cullen’s on my right. Both people I thought I could love and trust. Both ready to kill me. I waited in weary anticipation as Edward and Jacob took two steps towards me, both looking upset yet focused at the same time. I felt my new family stir uneasily behind me, bound by the same thing that kept me from running full throttle for the other side of the world. As I looked past the two advancing monsters, I saw Alice and Esme, staring at me with sad and pained looks on their faces, looking as if they would be crying, if that were not impossible. I threw them an approximation of a smile, trying not to cry myself as the two men in my life, who vowed to love and protect me, moved closer to the kill, both coiled to spring. With one last deep breath, I took my last look at the beautiful ocean that surrounded us, closed my eyes and let a quiet tear escape, while both vampire and werewolf sprang.
*You need bigger hight heels
*I Put all your new clothes on the roof
*Jasper told me that you are not good at sex
*you would be perfect for the role of the dwarf in Snow White
*Jasper told me he thinks I'm hot
*Esme told me that I'm her favorite daughter
*Your power is useless, the visions change
*I think Jane is taller than you
*Your hair looks like a broom
*Bella hates you
*What was your human mother name?
*I donated your new clothes to Jacob and Sam
*Edward told me that when Charlie first saw you he thought that you were Bella's 8 years old cousin
*Last night Emmett and I had sex in your car and broke it
I really just wanted to put this out there, How many of you would like to read about the honeymoon from Edwards perspective? I have alot of stories running around in my head but I think they would not be for anyone under the age of 16, due to the sensitive content. Also I was wondering if you would like to see it from Bella's point of view. I don't want to offend anyone so please give me some feedback. I chose 16 as that is the legal age in most countries, let me know. Sorry if I have offended anyone with these questions there was no offence intended. I was just curious.