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posted by GummyBears_11
Me & Alyssa three days before she was kidnapped.  Alyssa is the one on the bottom.
Me & Alyssa three days before she was kidnapped. Alyssa is the one on the bottom.
When I was 13, I heard the worst news ever.
My best friend had been kid-napped, and murdered.

I couldn't believe it.

As a matter of fact, I didn't.

I yelled and screamed. I kicked. I cried and tried to convince myself that it was all a lie.

I finally cracked and admitted it to myself when the news came on.

And they showed her dead body, lying there.

I missed her.

~

Two months later...

There was a knock on the door. I got off my bed and went to answer it.
It was the detective.

"Miss Johnson?" "Um.. yes?" "We found out who killed Alyssa." I gasped. "Come in!" He stepped inside. "I am only informing you because Mrs. Carnin told me that you were like family." "I nodded. "There was a questioning before the court trial. The killer admitted." I sniffled. "He also gave this note to the deputy." He handed me a crinkled sheet of paper. My hands shook and as I took it.

Dear family & friends,
Hi guys. I know that this note will be that last thing I write in my earth life.
I just wanted to tell you to go on with your lives. I will always be with you, no matter what. Please don't let this ruin you.

Adam- I love you. So much. I want you to know that there are other girls and I will never ever forget you and I pray you won't forget me. Love you. ♥

Kaytlin- Hi besty (: I love you! Don't forget me. I'll always be with you. I won't forget our mani pedis or our sleepovers/moviedates. Our plan to be besties forever is still in action. Stay beautiful. ♥

I started crying.

Mommy, Daddy & Sierra- Mom & Dad, I learned everything I know from you guys. You brought me up in the perfect way and I know that did the right thing. I love you guys.♥ Please don't tell Sierra about me till' she's 16. I don't want her to be devastated. She should just live her life. She'll know when she needs to. And when you tell her, let her read this part.
Sierra- When I had to change you and feed you, I complained. But I realize now that the short amount of time I had with you was so important. Please, remember that your big sissy is watching over you and loves you. ♥ (:

Granny, Grampy, Mawmaw, Poppy, Aunt Kayhsen, Aunt Melody, Uncle Dominic, and Uncle Matthew- Thanks for being the best family ever. You guys, mom, and dad should know that I love you guys and owe you all I know. I love you sooo much! ♥

I'll always be watching over ya'll. Stay gorgeous. Oh, and put me in something teal, my favorite color.♥ Love you all! ♥♥♥♥♥

Love times infinity,
Alyssa Marie Kayhsen Carnin ♥ (:

I dropped the note and sobbed.
~

Twenty years later

My name is Caroline Abigail Johnson, and I am a kindergarten teacher. When I was 13, my best friend was killed. But she told me not to let that ruin me. And I didn't.

I married a friend of her boyfriend. He is perfect and beautiful and I was she'd been my maid of honor, dressed in yellow like I swore she'd be.

She was watching from Heaven though.

I thank her for the time she spent with me. For the tears she cried with me when my first boyfriend dumped me. When my cat ran away. For the facials at the spa and all the shoes, nail polish, and clothes she lent me. I thank her for the giggles, the tickets to all the Twilight movies, the help with math, for the time she spent with me. I thank her for being there.

I remembered her like she asked. I know she remembered me.

~
Me & Alyssa...
Me & Alyssa...
RIP Alyssa Carnin
RIP Alyssa Carnin
RIP Alyssa Carnin
RIP Alyssa Carnin
RIP Alyssa Carnin
RIP Alyssa Carnin
posted by XDRoseLuvsHP
I literally just wrote this five minutes ago. It popped into my head, and I was bored, so I jotted down a sort of preface of an idea. I probably won't end up using it, but I thought I might as well get some feedback. It would be historical fiction, which I don't usually do (I'm more of a fantasy girl), so bear with me. Here it is:


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I have seen many a young girl wishing that she could be a princess. Beautiful dresses, fancy dances, luxurious meals, flourishing gardens in a majestic palace... who would deny this?

I myself was born a princess. I was...
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posted by TeanRose424
When you think you think your in love. Its just a trick. When you feel like your falling you are. Your fallin down and down intill you fall on spikes. The spikes peirce every part of your body but most of all they hit your heart. Thats why you fell like your bleeding from the inside to the outside. Thats why it hurts so badly.

Love can be a trick. But sometime it can be real. It takes a long time to see if it is. During that time your in danger of falling on spikes. BUt if it is real, then, when you fall, your falling into a heaven on earth. When you fall with the one your supposed to be with then your arent in danger with the spikes anymore.


Tell me what this artical makes you feel. If you think Im right, or if im wrong, im curios to what you think. Thankyou!
posted by TeanRose424
This is when he leaned in to breath down her neck
This is when he leaned in to breath down her neck
When he said the word vampire I thought he was bluffing. Then he started to explain it. It sounded just like the twilight book. All the charecteristics of a vampire, they were the same. Stephanie meyer just got one thing wrong. The Changing.


"When you change it isnt agony," said Zach. " It feels like heaven. Your being transformed into a God. It feels like a comfortable warmth. It's so relaxing, you wish you could do it again, and again." he said
" That sounds..." I was trying to find the word. "Exilarating" I finished. He smiled. I decided to turn on the lamy next to my bed so i could get...
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posted by dragonrider
That same day - At home Athena's perspective

I glance at Tom who was standing right next to me "Well that was weird," I said. I looked down at his device
He nodded "Yup. He was never like this before," he said putting his hands in his pockets
"What is wrong with him? He seemed pretty freaked out," I asked
"Yeah I don't know. Maybe there is something wrong with his boy or something because he didn't come back when he went to the bathroom," he said
"That's because he didn't go to the bathroom. I found him in my room. He was gaping at my drawer of undergarments," I said smirking
Tom grinned "Maybe...
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posted by OCFan123
In hours, days, months, and years to come, I would not know what posessed me to say yes to tutor Ryan Calving.
Maybe it was the way he was staring at me, those eyes glaring right into mine, impossible to look away. Maybe it was the way a girl with red hair was looking at us, raising her eyebrows, whispering to her brunette friend. I don't know what it was.
But I do know I had said yes.
The minute that single word left my mouth, I regretted it. Even when Ryan smiled at me, and started writing in his notebook.
But it didn't matter now. I was Ryan Calving's tutor. Fantastic.
I could have just said...
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posted by JaCoB_LoVeR_26
How did this happen, nothings write like a plane not taking flight? It’s wrong like a song with no end. Or a paper but no pen. Were this is coming from I cannot explain. Maybe its ur pointless silly games. Like in hide and go seek am I not aloud to peek. You were wrong and so was I. Are arguments are now in the sky. There done. No redo's or undo's to bring it back. There finished almost deminished.But you bring them back. Back again to haunt me. To taunt me into your little game. But it wont work. You wont get me. Not this time.Cuz my life Is mine.
posted by twilight-rocks9
Chiron was happy to see us back unharmed. Maybel kept staring at me evilly when I was around Tyler (witch was a lot). We were one of the camp couples. Jose told me he liked sherry from Aphrodite’s cabin. She had dark red hair that shined, tan skin and light blue eyes. She had a boyfriend but Jose was sure shed dump him. That night I had the same dream but it was sort of different. “Sorry I haven’t told you my name daughter I hate these interruptions.” he said. “It’s ok now can you tell me who you are?” I said this started to irritate me. “Of curse I’m Hades and I sent you...
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posted by marissa
“What do you want me to do… repent or something?”
“What do you want me to do… repent or something?”
Chapter Four:

Jeremy:

    
“Yeah, right.”
    
“It’s the truth,” Benny said, holding up his hands to show that his fingers weren’t crossed.
    
“Whatever you say, man.”
    
Benny thought for a moment. He had just let Jeremy Greene, a twenty-one-year-old mechanic on his way to visit his girlfriend, in on the fact that he was God.
    
“Okay, don’t believe me, that’s fine. I’m used to it, really,” Benny said with a laugh. “But, humour me.”
    
Jeremy huffed,...
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There was a carnival in town that week, and I decided I wanted to go. I called up my best friend Alysa and asked her if she wanted to go with me. She thought it sounded like fun, too, so we met at the entrance of Le Papillon (that’s French for ‘the butterfly’) at ten in the morning that day.
    We rode ride after ride until we couldn’t walk a straight line anymore, then collapsed on a bench. It took a couple of tries before my bottom hit the bench, but when it finally did, I laughed so hard that I toppled off the bench and into the prickly bushes. It hurt, but I...
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All the houses were the same. All rather big but looked smaller to me now that I’d grown and extra foot. I closed my eyes and tried to think of my list reasons why I would want to come back here, to the place that swallowed my childhood in one bite. “New around here, Ma’am?” The cap driver asked I looked up to the elderly man, his lazy eyes twitched. “No, I grew up here” I told him, he nodded and smiled, his yellow teeth shining. “Right...I thought you looked familiar” He admitted, I looked down at my now shaking cold hands. “You’re Cybil Jones” he said, looking rather...
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Chapter Nine

Jamie officially had nothing to wear. Even through that there were many pieces of clothes to choose from the closet that she shares with Michael, there was nothing that could impresses Sean who looked like the guy who doesn’t cares what you wear but he does want you to have some lunch with him but it was making Jamie nervous as hell.

Looking through the closet for the fourth time while Jake was sitting on the bed, playing with his toy and being his mother’s fashion expert which he had no experience on unless he had spitted on your unattractive clothes after nursing him, Jamie...
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posted by dragonrider
Ugh she's been crying all day! I'm sick of it thought one of Alex's sisters Janet
Janet was the middle child and felt she never got attention. She was never a sensitive child. She never had a close relationship with Alex. Janet was five feet one with blond curly hair with ocean blue eyes. She had on a wavy blue faded dress with a few rips in it.
Janet looked at her hysterical mother. She hated to see her mother cry " Mother stop crying! I'm sure Alex is fine!" she shouted to her hysterical mother
The grandmother in the corner of the cabin near the closed window stood up suddenly "Your daughter...
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posted by TDIlover226
Annie & Ann, The spirits of the devil and and an angel part 1.

It all started out in a little town in missouri, it was surrounded by small hills and cornfields and from it you could see the beautiful horrizon and watch the sunset. No matter how beautiful this small town was, no matter how colorful, it still held a terrible secret that the towns people struggled to keep. Outside of this town hidden away in the cornfields was the spirit, called Annie. The spirit of the devil, she was truly this, she would terrify the townspeople who went into "her" cornfield. The town did have only one good...
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posted by InnerMermaid
What u will need
Water
Salt
Pen'n paper
Cup
Shell from the sea
Your powers might be
Hydrokinisis
Hydrocryokinisis
Termokinisis
Sieren singing
Telekinesis
U might get all the powers but put your first choice on your pic.
First get a pencil and paper and draw your tail what u want it 2 look like I would recommend the u draw your chest as well for better results. Lable your pics!
After u have done that fill the cup with water and sprinkle salt over the cup and the shell. Dab your fingers in the shell and try to get some salt on them. Rub them on your legs and say:

Coaral reefs ocean floors where ever u may...
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posted by Mermaidgirl11
Hi today i will tell you haw to become a mermaid


Side effects:
-itchy legs
-drinking lots of water
-singing allot


Method:

Get into the shower take your shower.
near the end say this spell:
Mermaid magic come to me
I would like a tale not two feet beuaty be upon me fish of all kinds let me see when im finished in the sea when im dry let my feet return to me SO MOTE IT BE

When you say it make sure your wet
Then dry up
Next time you touch water close your eyes imagine you being a mermaid and count to ten out loud then you should fall over and open your eyes

FIND THE MAGIC TALE

WARNING
THIS MAY NOT WORK FOR YOU
I DID NOT MAKE IT UP MY SELF
I GOT IT FROM YOUTUBE
BUT IF IT WORKS TELL ME ILL TYPE IN MORE SPELLS
THIS IS MY FIRST ONE
STAY TUNED
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