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I was sitting in my hotel room minding my own business reading a book when all of a sudden the glass window doors flew open. The bed room was dimly lit and the sun had completely gone down leaving no sunlight to light the room.

I fell off my bed leaving my bed in between me and the window. I would have gotten up to shut the window doors but that was before a figure entered the opening.

There was enough of a shadow cast over the body that you couldn't make out any features. But I could tell that it was a man. He stood with a sturdy pose his legs locked in place, his arms on his hips, his head held high with no fear.

He hopped down off the seat that was placed in front of the window and onto the old carpeted floor. His pose loosened as his feet hit the ground, quite silently considering how old the house was.

He slowly walked around the room. I stayed kneeled at the side of the bed, my eyes peering over the unmade sheets. I watched him pick things up and study them then just drop them back into place.

"And what daughter are you?" He asked. My eyes widened, he knew I was there the entire time. But I made no noise I didn't make one move and yet he was talking to me as if we had been in a conversation since he burst threw my hotel windows.

"I'm sorry, daughter of who?" He spun on his heels, his bear feeted heels, facing right at me. I stood straight up as straight as I could. He took a few steps towards me.

"What generation of her granddaughters are you?" He asked again, slowly as if I was a complete idiot missing the conversation.

I had a total stranger burst into my hotel room, not by the door but by the second story window. Not only that he was completely mad. I decide the only way I was going to make it out alive with out him killing me in some psychopathic maniac way was to try to play along.

"What would my grandmother," I shook my head and changed the word. "great-grandmothers name be." He looked at me a bit confused as he placed his hands on his hips again just like when he had barged in. "Wendy"

"Okay and what is your name?" His hands that laid on his hips slid off to his sides. "Your grandmother hasn't told you about me? My name's Peter Pan."

I shook my head, as a child Peter Pan was my favorite story. My mother read a couple chapters a night and when she finished the book she would read it over again. In fact the reason I chose this small not so 21st century comfort hotel was because this was the house that J.M. Berrie based Wendy and her two brothers house on.

So this kid well not so much a kid as maybe a eighteen or nineteen year old things that he's Peter Pan a childhood fairy tale character.

"So now that I have explained myself to you, what granddaughter are you of Wendy's?" I shook my head. "I'm not related to Wendy." He looked as if he didn't believe me. "Then what are you doing in her house." His voice was getting angry and I was becoming a bit scared.

"Peter, this house is no longer owned by Wendys family, it hasn't been for years. It's ow a hotel." He looked at me odd. "How many years?" "Its been a few decades."

His strong featured face turned turned softly into a heartbroken disappointment. He slowly sank to the floor. His eyebrows pushed together. My body loosened up and moved very slowly to his sunken body. I sat down on my legs in front of him.

Softly I asked, "If your Peter Pan, why aren't you a boy? You don't look quite like a man but you certainly don't look like a boy." His teary eyed face looked up at me. "You've heard my story?" I raised my eyebrow quickly then let it drop. "Your story is quite famous." He smiled to himself. "Wendy was truly an amazing story teller." I shook my head and agreed.

He took a deep breath composed him self and sat up straight. "I am not a boy because of Wendy. If you know my story then you know that I did not come and stay with Wendy and the lost boys but went back to Neverland." he paused and waited for my response in which I smiled and nodded.

"I'm not quite sure how long it had been since I left Wendy and the lost boys but Wendy was not a child when I came back to hear more of her stories. I'm not quite sure why I chose to stay but I did and she took care of me. Years went by and I started to grow up; one evening I was looking out that window." He pointed to the still open windows. "and I saw the star, big and bright and Neverland came flooding back into my mind." he pause and waited a bit to continue.

"So that night I went threw my little chest I had under my bed and I found pixie dust. It was quite easy to remember how to fly." I smiled. "A little faith and pixie dust." I said with a little smile remembering my mother saying it to me. "I got up in the air and just went straight forward out the window and towards the star." He looked away from me and at the ground."I guess it's been quite a lot of years since I came back the last time I came it was Wendy's granddaughter who stayed in this room."

I was pulled into his story so much that if felt 100% true, I didn't know what to say what to respond that story.

"That part of you story has never been told." He stood up fast and into his pose. "Do you tell stories at all." I stood up confident and smiling. "I do, just I put them on many layers of paper." He gave me an are-you-serious look. "Like a book?" my lips pressed together as I nodded.

"I write teenage novels and children's books and don't give me that look, have you ever read a book or even picked one up?" He shook his head a little embarrassed. "Wendy always read them to me, but yes I would pick books up all the time, who do you think got the book off the bookshelf?"

I giggled s bit at his comment. I looked up at him and his face in a matter of seconds went from serious to creeply excited. "Come to Neverland with me." My smile faded and I grew terrified he was loosing his mind again. What do I say?

I started backing up towards the door as he ran towards the open window. I stopped as I realized he wasn't going to stop then he flew out of the window and went down. I ran for the window and as I reached it and peered down he zoomed up and back into the room and spun around in the air.

I must be sleeping, that was it, I fell asleep while reading.

I stood completely still as he lowered himself to the ground in front if me. He walked around me and stood on the window frame. He just started at me with a little smile on his lips. He held out his hand and said "Lets start a new generation of Wendy's, come to Neverland." I believed him every word. I took his hand and in a fast movement I was in the sky slowly watching the house shrink behind us.
blood fills the faces of my fantasies
no mercy,you're trying to put me down
i can see clearly as you're taking a swing at me
come and i'll push you to the ground
what are you doing? what do you think this is doing to me?
you're taking all my faith
what are you leaving me now?!
i will make you suffer just like you made me suffer
i will watch you screaming and begging for forgiveness
all my hate can not be bound
i will not be bound by your darkest demons
so try to take my life and put me to the ground
i will follow you and torture you and i'll watch you screaming
look at the bloody faces smiling at you,taking you down and making you drown
i wanna kill you the same way you killed me
leaving me thoughtless
you can try to tell me that i'm worthless
but you can not break me down
gonna take you down because nothing in this world is going to save me
posted by Karartegirl99
Once upon a time There was a girl named Abby. She loved to talk. Her teachers eventually stopped calling on her.

One day, she talked during a fire while a kid in her class was telling her teacher where the 17 other children were.
The teacher couldn't here her, and the search for the children lasted twelve hours. During that time, a gang stole five computers, three cars, seventeen dogs, and blackmailed the mayor into giving them seven grand.

Abby was expelled from the school.
When she told her parents, they imediately looked for a school for her to go to.
But the only school that gave her acceptence was the class in the juvinille deliquent center.

So she was home schooled.

But she caused her parents so much trouble that in a week they lost their all hair and were standing on the thin line between sanity and the nut house.

So they duct-taped her mouth shut.

THE END
posted by Flana_2
The forest was so beautiful. Even though it was raining, I thought of the sun peering through the trees. There were animals all over. It was like Japan only slightly less busy. Lots of unfamiliar animals gave Minrough high-fives and hugs. After a moment, I scanned his mind. Patients? I thought he said he was a soldier not a healer! After a minute, I demanded to know who they were.
“Patients”. Just like I thought.
“I thought you said you were a soldier at the war”!
“Yeah, a war of diseases”.
“But you’re only a kid! How could you be a doctor”?
“Not a doctor, healer”.
“How...
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posted by Flana_2
Hi! I’m Lisa, the newest of the Hoycan clan. My story of how I got here is a tale of braveness, bullies, and ocean water. So snuggle up with a great friend and a big bowl of popcorn and begin a journey like none other you ever come by!! GO ON!!!
Two gorges animals were running off into the moon light. Ones name was Lisa, the other was Brad.
“I love you Lisa” Brad said
“I love you too Brad”! They were a short distance away when RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The school bell rang for lunch. I awoken from my daydream and hurried out the door. Hi, I’m Lisa the average...
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posted by Funnygirl77
love bites
love bites
Zack was still in his car, wanting so bad to go back to Kisa. He walked up to his house, opened the door and was immediately sucked into a vision. Kisa was going to get kidnapped and it was all because of Zack. Kisa got up and walked to her window, when she opened it she saw two guys in black coming up towards her.
She ran and locked the door, and all the windows, for some reason she just didn't fill safe. She opened her closet to hide, when a voice beside her said: "That won't work. The can smell you the can hear your heart beat." Kisa sung around ready to save her self, not looking at who...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
9: You and Me

“So Tristan, how do you fit into all this?” Alice asked him. He was sitting on a chair closest to the front of the carriage. He looked up from his book and sighed.
“Well, I was created in 1408, by two warlocks known as Magna and Dejan. They took me and molded me into the perfect creature-a creature with the ability to change into anything at will-human, animal, whatever-telepathy, soothsayer, I was the perfect creature. But there are some limits even the could not look past though they are few: I can’t grant wishes, not the way a genie can, I can’t kill anyone at all,...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
6: Uninvited

Three tall men, dressed in dark cloaks, stopped upon seeing the girls and simply stared. “Why have we stopped?” called a male voice from behind them. Suddenly, a man appeared from behind them, though they followed him like a shadow. “Ah. Company.” Rosalie and Alice looked at each other then back to the men. “No need to fear” the man that had come from behind the three much larger ones said. “We come in peace.”
“All of you?” Rosalie asked wearily, eyeing the three men suspiciously.
The man smiled and turned to the trio. “Stand down” he said firmly, though...
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"this cant be!" Vanessa screamed.it was so loud,the walls began to shake.

"Vanessa,"her mom said."Come down! you need to learn to use you powers,and to control them.

"bu,bu,bu------This is all a dream!yeah,in a second,ill wake up,and not be a vampire."

She blinked 3 times,but she was still there.Not in bed.

"but,but,but,but,vampires aren't real!"

"thats what i thought,too.But,its true,its all true.You are a vampire,Vanessa,and you cannot tell anybody,ok?"her mom said with wide eyes.

"ok,"vanessa said."i understand. but really,she didt.



the next day,Vanessa didnt want to go to school.This was becuase...
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Hey this is the l;atest chapter to the story, it is set when Nessie isfive months pregnant...x Hope you enjoy and keep your eys peeled for the next chapter...x
Amber/Twilightsauce

I slipped mums wedding dress over my head, it fitted perfectly. Mum smiled and sighed as she wiped a joyous tear from my eye.
“Don’t cry baby, Alice will kill us if you ruin your makeup she has spent all morning getting you ready.” She laughed looking at me with a delighted expression on her face,
“Oh mum! I am so happy; Jake is waiting down there for me isn’t he?” I asked nervously. I had felt a little queasy...
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The wind blowing through my hair was an exhilarating feeling. Jasper had taught me how to ride his bike a couple of months ago; I was surprised when he said yes because he was usually quite responsible. I hadn’t been much good at first but after a few hours I had got the hang of it, no one else knew that I could ride his bike and it was nice to be able to take it out for a private drive now and again.
When I reached Forks, instead of slowing down I sped up, making sure no one saw me. I parked outside the chemist and rushed inside. I knew that I had to do this but my stomach was filled with...
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posted by I_love_Mikey
It would be nice if the world worked like a remote.

Where, if you were in a bad situation, you could pause it, and still keep moving yourself.
Where, if you happened to be in a bad situation, you could press “pause” and think of what to do next.
Where you could completely abandon certain aspects of life, like selecting a different episode.
But, if you skip an episode, you don’t learn what you need to learn from it, and you get confused on the next one. You’ll be behind, and unable to catch back up. Because you just can’t stand to watch that episode that comes first.
It’d be nice if we...
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posted by TeanRose424
this is just somthing that describes me :)
this is just somthing that describes me :)
I could feel everything i could feel my muscels ripple. I could feel the warmth flooding around me. I could feel my joints streghthen. I could feel myself becoming a god. It feltjust as he had said. i couldnt beleive the plesure.

He looked at me then. His face looked concern. I had been moaning from the pleasure. I had been calling out for more. The pleasure was leaving me though i could feel it. It had been many days i could feel it. I was relunctent to have it leave me, i was relunctent to have the feeling of my life leave. It was unbelievable.

Zach looked at me in wonder. i stared back...
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posted by coolie
Both Crack-a-bottle and Shatter-a-glass were teens, and their names had a lot in common. Crack-a-bottle and Shatter-a-glass. Hee Hee. The question right now is how the heck do we get out of here?” said bill. Shatter-a-glass searched in her pockets. Hey my phone, the only phone in the world that lets you text and do nothing else,” said Shatter-a-glass. How will that help?” asked Crack-a-bottle. I could text a plane to fly over here and pick us up!” answered Shatter-a-glass. Shatter-a-glass was thinking for a moment. She didn’t have a clue of what number she text so she did every combination...
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For the first couple months, that's what it really feels like; darkness, always there like the puppy you always wished for to follow you around.
For the first couple months, that's what it really feels like; darkness, always there like the puppy you always wished for to follow you around.
It always starts with darkness. Just like the rumors that vampires were made to sign Satan's book with blood as the registration, it was thought that a vampire's soul was consumed by darkness. For the first couple months, that's what it really feels like; darkness, always there like the puppy you always wished for to follow you around. Sadly, I never had a puppy, so this was all awkwardly new to me.
"That's how it's going to be for a while." Adrian told me one day while I woke up from a deep sleep, facing the sunlight. I had forgotten that we were now affected by that sunlight more than humans....
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posted by sapphire007
I love my mum. More than anything but my dad has always been my favourite. It’s not that I love him more than mum but he’s fun and understanding, he has wonderful advice and awful jokes. Two weeks ago, dad left. He left mum. He left me. Mum’s sad. She’s not up to much lately. I know she’s angry at him for leaving but she misses him. She’s unhappy and lonely.
    Dad talked to me before he went. He told me to study hard, stay healthy and enjoy my life. He made me promise to look after mum. I think he’d be disappointed in me if he heard her crying at night. I...
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Two things were killing me at the moment.The fact that It was raining like crazy on his horrible to school,the day of school where I had to face my dreaded ex and try to hold back either my tears or punching him in the face.by the way,I completely wanted to do both at this moment.The second was that whole desperately in love moment with Juaney.I was mad the the "mystery girl" that Juan had fallen so hard for and she have no freaking idea.I hate seeing Juan like this.Yes at the moment he is very proactive of me but I can tell now that he just doing that so I won't look into or figure his true...
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"You know... I'm not...the one you love...so...that's why...it's time for me... to leave......" -Zelos
"You know... I'm not...the one you love...so...that's why...it's time for me... to leave......" -Zelos
There have been so many things that have happened to me in the past, present, and future, that I have had a hard time remembering them all. For a vampire, that would seem unbearably stupid; I mean, we live forever, so our brains should be more adept at handling the hardcore memories. At times I actually thought I remembered my childhood, or even WWI if I took a deep thought into it. But no, the only thing that came into my mind as clearly as the darkness that surrounds me now is this:
Chloe's eyes.
Chloe Cassalani, the one person I knew from the start upon meeting, was a threat to me. The instant...
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posted by KatiiCullen94
This is what i would say to my jacob, if i can even say he is mine.


How do i even start off, do i start off saying that i dont know how to start off,or do i pour my heart out,that first word, i dont know anymore..Because with you, nothing is the way it seems, or the way it was before. Everything changes even the way im supposed to write this, you've confused me.
OK,, i think is this part where i pour my heart out right?? if not. im going to sound.. odd. but who cares now? not you. you wont even read this my love.
ok here i go, keep me from falling.
I meet you on a saturday, on the first saturday...
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posted by amethyst44
After that, I had the courage to go into the forest. Every time I did, however, I felt a smidge closer to guilt and foolishness. His threat should have prevented me from going into the forest again, or even think about it. But no. I wasn't going to be bullied down by a snobby kid in the forest from letting me have my lovely freedom when I wanted. Besides, we owned these woods. He could file against me, or burn the whole forest for all I cared, but he would be the one to pay the price. And by the way his clothes were mangled and destroyed, I don't think the price would even match his dream sufficiency...
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posted by housefrk
The woman surveys the damage to the screen
In the window over the desk.
Her son’s bedroom is covered in posters of outer space
And crumbs from many varieties of potato chip.
The boy sits on the bed in his Superman suit
And asks to taste the cup of tea

The mother is sipping. She offers him the tea
But the boy, worried about being punished for the screen,
Spills it on his mother’s suit
And then drops the cup onto the desk
Giving it a significant chip.
He backs up to put space

Between himself and his angering mother, but she closes the space
And begins to clean out of the carpet the spilled tea
Before it...
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