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posted by stellamusa101
Caitlin is a 17-year old girl who likes socialising. She is very fun but doesn't know her family secret, her family was servants to the king of the Fire Kingdom,Hudson, 17 years ago. But Caitlin has her very own secret she doesn't know..

Caitlin is turning on her phone to chat with Nina. Just as her phone turned on, an incoming call from Nina appeared. Caitlin press green button. "Caitlin! Caitlin! Here this, Dean, your crush, has a crush on you!!" shouted Nina as Caitlin turned on dial. "Now I know why people call you the joke master," sighs Caitlin.

"I am serious talk! He told me not to tell you, but my mouth can't close!" says Nina. "I think you're insane," says Caitlin. "You're insaner!" says Nina. "believe me," Nina closed her phone. Caitlin laughs. Caitlin then walks to a mirror to look at herself after Nina said she's more insane. She saw a teen boy in the mirror. "What?" Asks Caitlin.

"You see me?" asks the 18 year old boy. "Of course. I see you, what are you doing in my room?" asks Caitlin. "You meant in your mirror," smirks the boy. Caitlin turn around to the back, the boy wasn't there, she looked at the mirror..the boy WAS there. "My name's Jake," the boy introduces himself. "Caitlin," Caitlin introduces herself. "Who are you?" Asks Caitlin. "You'll find out soon," says the boy and disappears.

Caitlin is now at Nina's house. They're at Nina's room. She looked at the mirror, Jake was there again. "Nina.." says Caitlin. "Yes?" asks Nina. "Do you see that boy in the mirror?"asks Caitlin. "I told you you're more insane than me!" says Nina. Caitlin understood that as a "no." .

Caitlin, now at her room tonight, kept thinking about Jake. She kept repeating, "Just hallucinating," many times. She went to sleep.

"Caitlin, Caitlin," called out a voice. Caitlin saw flames everywhere. Was she in hell? Caitlin saw Jake. "Caitlin, you're world is in danger," says Jake. "What do you mean?" asks Caitlin. "You are the Chosen One, you have the bloodline of our dead king, Hudson. Dear Chosen One, save your kingdom!" Says Jake.

"Aahhh!!!!!" Caitlin woke up. She sat on her bed. She takes a deep breathe. She realised something, she flipped her sleeves, and she looked at her arm. She was surprised looking at the symbol of fire on her arm...

To be continued
posted by HouseMindFreak
1st chapter: link

2nd chapter: link

3rd chapter: link

4th chapter: link

5th chapter: link




Chapter 6

“What?”

Twice in one day he’s had people saying strange things to him; Jax and his drunken dream and now a wolf skin wearin’ hobo talking about a creator.
Something just wasn’t right.


“Ever wondered why your family has treated you as an outcast? Why you weren’t regarded as normal?” the stranger asked.

How did this guy know about how I was treated? Koda wondered.

“Yeah but it’s because I’m, oh I don’t know, a pain in the ass?”

Even at a time like this he always had to give his two...
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posted by boomboombunni
This was the day Andrew's parents dumped him at a hotel with one million dollars. The hotel would be his new home. His new room was rumored to be haunted, which excited him, but it was going to be lonely without any children. When he walked in, he could tell it was a themed hotel. Everyone was dressed in 18th century clothes. He had two dumpy little bags of period clothes, and his money was in his pocket. He paid a man to take his things to his room, then he went exploring. Mainly, it was just hallways with older people, but, he saw a girl who looked about his age. When she turned to look...
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posted by irena83
A dream.
Your life is never going
to be a dream.


Dreaming of
better days,
you're hoping
that pain will
love you less,
but pain
loves you more.


You're still
that sad child,
you have never gotten
away from your past.
Your destiny
is bounded
for their sins.
You cannot wash yourself,
you cannot be yourself.


They see you
as their opportunity
to restore
their failures,
but they don't see
that your desires
are being smashed,
your identity is
being erased.


You don't remember
who that person is,
you don't dream
anymore,
you don't rejoice
anymore,
tho you're still
that sad child
trapped within
their misfortune.


They want you
to play by...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 3 of my story. It does get a bit more dramatic and a wee bit violent/scary but it will make sense as I go further along.

1st chapter: link

2nd chapter: link


Chapter 3

Koda stood just outside his school, only 10 minutes until the first bell rang. He was thinking about what Jax told him with his dream. He knew he shouldn’t let it bother him but it kept picking at his conscience like a crow was picking at his heart.
It was just a drunken dream, he told himself.
His thoughts quickly turned to anger as he began to remember how his family always treated him.

An outcast, a screw up…

The bell rang...
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posted by jacob_lover5253
I really thought he was going to kiss me. Boy, was I wrong. I swear he was moving closer and closer but then suddenly he was on his feet pulling me up. I frowned but then put on a fake smile so he wouldn’t realize. ‘I really liked him but if I told him…’ I sighed as I thought to myself. We picked our stuff back up and I slipped hos shoes on and he didn’t complain. Nick carried my shirt and shorts and handed me his short to throw on over my bathing suit. I smiled and gratefully put it on.

My mind was racing. Racing fast. Did he really just give me his shirt!? I wanted to jump up and...
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posted by irena83
Chapter 4: Sunny day

These were the days of peace and happiness.
Days were spent in peace and love.
Jack loved his job, even though he wasn't that patient with children who didn't pay attention on his classes.
But, he knew. He was doing something
important, something useful.
And most of all, he knew that his lovely wife
and beautiful little Gwenny were waiting for him
at home.
Dana was amazing at kitchen.
Jack loved everything she made.
One happy family they were.

Like every morning, Jack would go to work,
and Dana would make a breakfast and some coffee to wake them up.
Morning coffee was something wonderful
for both of them.
After having breakfast, Jack would drink coffee
with Dana, looking at her with the same gentle
and passionate love that never fades.
"I'll see you later, darling." - Jack said and
went to work.

Dana was still sitting and enjoying in the coffee,
watching through the window the sunlight.
She could smell the flowers that were growing
in the yard.
posted by Percysclique
Chapter 4 – An Old Friend Returns
Kaolin was about to pass out in the middle of the well-travelled dirt road. He hadn’t gotten any sleep since Amorite had freed him. Kaolin felt that happened days ago rather than last night.
Tanis was dozing in Kaolin’s arms. Ileana was dragging her feet and trying her hardest to keep up with Kaolin’s strides. Kaolin had spent the journey taking turns carrying the children. They were weak and hungry. There was no way they could make the five mile trek on their own.
“How much longer, Kaolin?” Ileana clutched Kaolin’s brown tunic with her small grimy...
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posted by ilovehouse345
I lied
I lied to them and got caught
I confessed up and told them the truth
but they get more upset
I walk down the dark hallway
into my lonely empty room
I lie on my bed, thinking
I go to move and I can't
I fall down
pain shooting threw me
they walk in
saying I'm faking to make them feel bad
they walk out
leaving me on the ground
crying out in pain
I finally give up
crawl over to the closet
get the gun and cocked it
put it to my temple and pulled the trigger
life...filled with hate
I've chased down all my demons
but it wasn't enough
mistreated,misplaced,misunderstood.
I can't write this anymore.

I feel like its a copy of Avatar the last airbender. And the companions quartet. I never intended on making it like that. But whenever I imagine my characters using their powers I see them bending. I know you are all going to get. mad. Really mad. Really really mad. Really really really really mad. But my stories need more *sparkle*. A better writer with better talent. I think it needs more thought. I think I should create something that is REALLY from my imagination. Thats why, no matter what you all are going to say....

I'm stopping Girl who cried wolf.

I know your...
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posted by poseidongurl10
Why bring a 10 year old to a crime Scene?Why even kill her parents in the first place?I'm Agent Lauren Klozwesk.I work for the FBI.I'm stationed i'm Arkanas.And I'm being wanted by my home country I escaped:Venice,Italy.

I'm currently working on a case that involves a murder.The Ivashkov family was recently killed in their urban Arkanas house.My motive is Why?Why kill Them?Why leave the Daughter?

Lately,I've been with the daughter,Violet."So Violet,would you like a danish for Breakfeast?"I asked.She shook her head.Who could blame Her?She saw her parents die."Ok,you want Cereal?"I was trying...
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"He was soooo cute!" I told my firends. sad thing is, I can't even remember what he looks like. But something feels special about him. Something makes me feel like I shouldn't care....

I would never of thought I'd be waiting by the phone. Most of the time i just think "Well if a guy doesn't want this, he can't have it." But something is amking me feel like I want him more than anyone else. Something is drawing me towards him. something makes me feel like if anyone's heart will be broken it'll be mine. And I just met him! Wait....I don't even know his name!


While Luna was worried about that....
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posted by hannah_vampire
I can only hope that this is good.

Adrian Dante – 1864
My horse ambled along for a considerable distance, I watched as the faint fog hung over the hallows. Katherine hid in the shadows praying not to be seen. “I have tasted your blood Katherine so you cannot hide” She appeared in front of me “what do I own you Mr Adrian Dante” My bear smile alone scared her “Why do you think? I’m here to kill you my love” Her face went cold but then she smiled.

Present
The cold winter chills hung in the air and the lake’s waters were crystalized. An arm snaked around my waist “I thought you...
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Hey, here is the end of the last chapter!


Her whole body jerked awake.She was lying on the ground crying and shaking. The group of girls were watching in horror, Lily had a tear rolling down her face. Elyon and Rose were crounched down beside Alexis, Astrid had her hand on Alexis's cheeks.The two of them looked into each ohers eyes, before Alexis smiled.
"I bet the file didn't say anything like ths?" Alexis whisperd trying to stand. Astrid was shaking too as she helped her friend to her feet. Elyon and Rose Stood up too, Lily hugged Alexis.
"What just happened?"She pleaded not letting go. Alexis...
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posted by EmzLovesCheryl
I keep my rhythm
I tap in time,
My music is my world
An angry beat inside.
It can crash like a waterfall
Or gradually trickle down,
It can make you laugh and cry
That powerful sound.

My headphones on my head
The lyrics flowing though,
Filling up my brain
Music is the food I chew.
It can be beautiful, strange
Crazy and cool,
I couldn't live without music
There's a style to suit all.

Music is like a brand new life
Jumping around your mind,
Each instrument that is played
Is an ingredient to find.
There's nothing quite like music
There's nothing quite like me,
You can always find a friend in music
Music will always be.
I lay in bed after I woke up to the cold harsh air coming though the trailer's small window. It was another crisp day in New York. Cold, like any other winter day, but peaceful. Very unusual around here. I could hear my mom heating leftovers in the small kitchen outside my door. I decided it's better than her up and leaving for three days. She struggles to keep two jobs to pay off what we need. She's usually not around very much. I've basically been raising myself. At least today I can talk to her.
I walked into the kitchen to see her using the laptop. That thing is her life outside of work....
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posted by CheekyCheese
Sorry if this isn't very good!

Angel was so excited, her best best friends were coming for her birthday sleepover at five o clock! Time crept slowly to ten past five and still not a single soul in sight! Suddenly her little sister Summer shouted “Ha Ha they're not coming they hate you so much!” Angel ran upstairs weeping and charged desperately into her sister Friday's room.


“Was Summer being mean to you again?” asked Friday
“Yes, she said that my friends weren't coming because they hate me and that's not true!”
“Don't worry its only because she is jealous about you having the best...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
A story I am writing about a American Indian boy of the Comanche tribe in Texas. He his cursed with a supernatural evil but will have to confront his demon and the master of the underworld realm which has plans for his curse...

Hell’s Outlaw

Chapter 1

In the town of Big Spring, Texas, a 12 year old Comanche Indian boy named Koda awoke that Saturday morning with a feeling of dread and excitement.
As with any boy approaching their 13th birthday in his tribe, he was to prepare for his spiritual quest but unlike the others before him, he did not look forward to it.
He has spent many arguments...
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If there’s one thing I cared about more than my freedom it was my family. I loved my dad more than anyone though it’s just hard not to love my dad with his kind gentle nature. His eyes were big like a puppies somewhat and were a deep dark chocolate brown framed by long dark eyelashes and dark eye brows that matched his charcoal black hair that had a thick consistency but a silky feel. His skin was a medium olive color and though many didn’t find him handsome I did. He was everything in a father and in myself. He was real shy and my Uncle Drew as I called him though he wasn’t my real...
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The city of light was full of marchants and villagers. Elyon stood and gazed at them from the huge silver gate. And gurding the gate was two broad shouldered men, wearing bright white robes, that glowed from every angle.
"Excuse me?" the man with blonde hair asked. When Elyon took a shaky step forward, the men stared shocked at her.
"Elyon? What are you doing outside the city?" The man asked. Elyon took in a deep sharp breath and took another shaky step forward. She still hadnt noticed that the vilagers were watching silently.
"Elyon...my name is..?she smiled and fell into the darknes, fainted. The two gaurds rushed to her aid, and the vilagers erupted into a panicky uproar
"Quick take her to Lady Alexsis!" the man with darker ahir nodded, picked up Elyon and disapered.
"Leo? What the hell is going on? This is a bad sign," an old man closest to the alone guard asked.
"I dont know," he muttered looking up at the castle of light, "i really dont know,".

COMMENTS PLZ
posted by TomboyWriter
She is crying but Kevin is staring with no care and walks away and Connor comes up behind me and kisses the back of my neck. Dylan and Mel are playing in the sand and Debbie and Dawn and Avril are dancing around with Damon. I smile this is how I want it to be. Me and Connor sway and he pulls me close and I lean back and he kisses my neck and soon I see Kira copying me and Cody copying Connor. I laugh and jump into Connors arms where he cradles me and he whispers “ how long till we get out of here and our honeymoon can start.” I chuckle and say “soon.” He smiles and sets me on my feet...
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