Writing Article: Escaped chapter 1

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posted by fiestagirl12345

Kaylie's P.O.V

i was running in the woods hoping they wouldnt catch me. the scientist who were trying to test me. cause i was super natural. i didnt know i was. until they had me tied down. i dont know what happened i lit it on fire then drowned the guys. i was shocked my self. i was runnig trying to climb the trees. i found the perfect one. i ran and climbed it to the top. they were shooting lazers i was doging them. they were supposed to numb you then knock you out. they finnally gave up and walked off. they droped some weapons. i smile and get them all. i keep runnig ti'll i heard the most beutiful voice. i looked and saw a girl with curly blonde hair. green eyes. and a flower on her hair. she was singing to the birds. the birds were repeating. i smile and walk by her. "wow wha a gift you have"i say walking by her. she tunrs her eyes meeting mine. "oh thanks i can communicate with animals and control earth"says the little girl. "im anny you are' says anny reaching to shake my hand. "i am kalylie i control fire and water"i say we shake hands and talk a bit. eating some berries. trust me we checked them. we got up and we began our journey again. we were walking when we see a big shock and a huge boulder run accross. i wuickly grab anny and throw her behind. i check and see a boy with brown hair. hazel eyes. and medium lenth. "hey nice skills this is anny i am kaile whats your name"i say waiting for a reply. ''i am caleb" he says getting some things. "you guys runnig frm the testers to?' i ask scared. they nod and we walk out. we were walking our guns pistols arrrows ready. we were walking when we hear rusting we check. and see a zombie coming we shoot it. and see a whole gang coming. so this is a apocalypse great.

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Psychoanalysis: Chapter 21

posted by Insight357

I didn’t know where I was going, but I had to go somewhere. The fight with Grey had been bad. I didn’t feel guilty, and that bothered me. I always felt guilty after a fight, but this seemed to be an exception. I was…happy? No, that wasn’t the word, more overjoyed, I guess.
I kept walking; it was around seven when I sank down on the sidewalk. I was tired, and I had nowhere to go. I didn’t know what I was supposed to do…I could always look for Xander, but knowing him, he knew how to cover his tracks. The only person who seemed to know where he was at all times...

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Chapters 7 and 8 of my book-Flame Boy-

posted by coolie

Chapter 7

The Front Desk

Jason walked up to the front desk. The front desk manager was asleep, with his head facing the back wall. It seemed as if there were one million pictures and folders scattered along his desk. Right on his lap was the gold coin Jason had given him.
Jason reached for it. He was just about to lift it up, when the front desk manager rotated his head in a perfect circle with the front of his body facing the opposite direction. His facial expression and face was completely different. He wasn’t a human. He was a monster. His red eyes were not exactly eyes. They were more like...

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The first 3 chapters of my book- Flame Boy

posted by coolie

Jason: blonde spiky hair, green eyes, wearing his favorite guitar shirt for almost three days straight, and he’s a teenager, but a rather short one. He has orange braces that are spotted easily when he smiles. Jason has an arm that can oddly twist all the way around in a
perfect circle. One of the strangest things about him is a black thing in the shape of a flame on his left leg. People think it’s a poorly drawn drawing, but he was born with it, and as he got older it grew with him.

Jason was sitting by the fireplace watching the flames blow from side to side. His eyes liked to find themselves,...

Stardom - Chapter 1 - Letters From Home

posted by Vampiyaa

"IDIOT!" the King screeched. Toyo flinched as if the King had struck him.
"DO YOU KNOW WHAT YOU'VE DONE?" he continued to yell angrily.
"The Vampire Society figured out that Aiko was at X Aacademy," Toyo said quietly. "So I sent her away."
"Without the protection of other vampires," the King hissed. "Suppose they find out where she is now. Who will protect her? She's as good as dead now!" The King sighed irritably and strode towards the door.
"Inform the Society that I will not be available for the next year," he said coldly. "And this time, don't mess it up." The King strode out of the...

Hells Outlaw -- Chapter 16

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 16

A loud noise woke Bone from his sleep. Becoming more alert he felt a sharp pain in his neck from laying his head over after falling asleep on his shop couch.
Opening one dry eye he could see Jax rustling around the shop benches and he appeared to have his shotgun strapped to his back and somehow he got some old work boots over his injured foot.
He looked like he was prepared for battle.
“The hell you doin’ preparin’ for war?” he said.
“No, goin’ huntin’. Koda hunting”
Bone was wide awake now.
“You are not going to kill my nephew,” he said forcefully stopping Jax in...

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Takaya Dreams chapter 1

posted by Skitty_Love

"Takaya's grades have been decreasing, there is a chance she may not make high school next year.." Ms. Mitsuba says calmly to my mother. "Takaya! Is this true? Why didn't you tell me you were failing school?" She snaps at me, who was sitting next to her on the cushioned chairs placed across the marble desk. I silently shrug, looking down at the patterned carpet. "Tell me!" She continues to order. "I just-" "Your father is gonna be furious!" My mom cuts me off of my sentence. Thats when I had snapped. "Quit talking! Let go of my now!" I cry, my voice thundering. Ms. Mitsuba grabs my wrist,...

Unforgivable Ch. 6

posted by para-scence

When I woke up, all the windows were covered in snow, surrounding me, isolating me from others. My stomach growled, but I didn't want to leave. I feared if I didn't get a job, I'd lose everything. I got out of the car, still wearing my clothes from yesterday, which was nothing but jeans, converse, and a black turtle neck. Not wanting to waste valuable gas, I walked around town. My stomach growled again, and the thing inside me kicked a series of blows for a couple seconds.

The buildings here were tall, and far away I could see the new, fancy skyscrapers. But here, the buildings were old and...

Just something I tweaked at for a little while....criticism please!

posted by dramarama

Masquerade

Brightly colored masks
Lined up on the wall.
Waiting to take part
In the masquerade ball.
Smoothly shaped plastic
Fitted to flesh,
Each of their disguises
Much like the rest.
Hiding the scars,
Unsightly disfigurements,
Ways they are marred,
Ways they are different.
Each of them has one,
Hiding the truth,
Things that are ugly,
Battles of youth.
Smothering plastic
Hinders my breath,
Tightly laced ribbon
Cuts into my head.
"Just take it off"
The insistent voice says.
"Then you could breath.
You'd be free again.
Remember the days
When life was so simple.
The whole world was good,
And yours soft and simple.
Those...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 3

posted by Insight357

    Grey pulled away from the house. I sat inside on the couch. Our house had deep brown walls, and light brown hard-wood floors. There were knick-knacks everywhere. Pictures of Grey’s family hung on the walls. None of mine, though, I prefer to keep mine in my suitcase.
    It may seem odd, but I keep all my belongings in my suitcase. I’m afraid if I unpack something bad will happen.
    The brown couch I sat on, and musty smell of the house grew old on me. I walked outside to the front porch. It was one of the nice, white, wrap-around...

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Unforgivable Ch. 1

posted by para-scence

My whole body was trembling. I sat up in my bed, the covers everywhere and messed up. My heart was pounding and there was a ringing noise in my ears. I scanned the room for him, and even when I saw he wasn't here, I still couldn't release my fears.

I had been raped.

Trying to keep calm, I grabbed my clothes off the floor, my shirt had a rip in it, so I grabbed another shirt from my closet. I ran a brush through my hair, getting out all the knots. Then I decided I couldn't live with myself this way and decided to take a shower. I turned the water on to blistering hot, and I scrubbed my entire...

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Hells Outlaw - Chapter 14

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 14

The wolf did not move but Koda was already on the attack. His teeth grew into their long and dangerous bite, the claws tore through his fingers and black fur sprouted from his arms to his hands.
Before Iah knew it, Koda was on him but he was well prepared for the young Skinwalker.

Why do are they always go for a fight first? He thought to himself biting into Koda’s neck careful not puncture his skin.
Iah was much more powerful than Koda expected as the wolf easily threw him and pinned him to the ground.
Koda growled and bit at him but Iah lunged for his neck and locking his jaws around...

Love is Wild: Chapter 24

posted by sawfan13

Lilith, still frozen from the question her beloved Howl had asked her. She so badly wanted to unleash an answer, but couldn't.

I really wanted to tell him. Yeah, I want to marry him, but I cannot speak at all. I started to breathe deeply and my voice was dry, so he could barely hear me when I said,"Yes. I will be happy to marry you." Howl and Debbie couldn't understand me, as tears started to roll down my face. Odd, whenever I get emotional or excited, or both like in this situation right here, my throat dries up like Beatrix Kiddo's did after digging herself up after being buried alive by Bill's...

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"i will not marry you " introduction

posted by peaceanddisney

this is my first story that i made on here i'm still decideing if i want to make more of this book or not i am still decideing on a tittle name.please do not hesitate to criticize i need it.thank you <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 I Taylor Ann Smith was not happy.I was very mad.How dare them! i thought angrily to myself.how dare them decide who i marry!.this all happened when i came down for breakfast."Good morning mother,good morning farther."i said happily.Mother was cooking eggs and toast while father was waiting."Hello darling"said Mother cheerfully as she sat a plate of eggs and toast in front of me."good morning taylor" farther answered. his plate."what's happening today?"i asked still eating."well.. mom started looked unconfertable...we decided who you were to marry"."What!" i cried almost chocking on my food.

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Life Goes On Part 5

posted by MissMuffin38

Marissa opened her eyes, half asleep, half awake. It was 8 o’clock in the morning and she felt hungry. She clambered out of bed, rubbing her eyes so she could focus on things properly. Olivia was already out of her bed, and it seemed like she was downstairs. Marissa walked down the stairs to find her, rubbing her eyes once again. As she entered the kitchen, she saw Olivia sitting on one of the wooden chairs, placed around the table. As she walked over, Olivia looked up, and gave her a weak smile. Marissa could tell something was wrong. “Where’s everyone else?” Marissa asked, puzzled....

The tragedy of Sumiko Yamakawa

posted by samuraibond005

Young Sumiko Yamakawa, a modern samurai in training, and no more than 15 years of age. Like most samurai in training she carries around a wooden sword, a bokken, and a dagger, a Tanto. Sumiko’s older brother, Itsuki, was a samurai, one who had recently graduated from the Shinto Ryu School of swordsmanship; not only was he trained to use a sword but a short 4 foot staff as well.
It was the day Itsuki was to be promoted to the rank of a samurai, the only thing he ever wanted, naturally his sister Sumiko was able to attend. Sumiko was the youngest of her family, Takashi...

Pretender

posted by Insight357

Glance the other way
Rip your heart out
I just don't care anymore

You're useless
And uncaring
You know nothing!
Yet you pretend you do
You're a pretender

A pretender is just a liar in disguise
A pretender is a faker
A pretender hides
A pretender is a maker
Of the dark abyss

You told me once
I told you twice
Now what?
Do we forget the past?
Live for the future?
Or remember and continue on our path?

...Decisions...Decisions...
Left or right?
Up or down?
Wrong or right?
Please give me the answer
For I do not know
Right and wrong any longer

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Blind: Chapter 1

posted by Insight357

Yes, it was happening (again). Seventeen year old Wyatt Thomas was being chased by a pair of vampyres. Great. He was going to be late to school for the fourth time that week. He was sure his best friend Elizabeth would cover for him, as she'd done the other four times this week.
He spun around with inhuman speed. Blue flames leapt out of his fingers toward the vampyres. When the flames made contact the vamps flew back into the wall. Wyatt quickly ran out of the ally, and all the way to school.
Wyatt, suprisingly, got to school on time, early in fact. Even Elizabeth wasn't there yet. So, he...

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Love is Wild:Chapter 7

posted by sawfan13

I couldn't sleep very well, even if I was cuddled next to Howl. I couldn't help think of the following questions: Is this wrong? Is it bad to love someone that is so much kinder and a better person than your fiance, yet your parents are still forcing you to marry the horrible fiance? Is it wrong for a woman raised with people and society to fall in love with someone raised by animals and swings on vines. I kept thinking of Adam. Grrr! I can't stand him anymore. I remember the last thing he said to me,"You won't survive there without me! I'm your everything! You can't hide from me weakling!"...

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Love is Wild: Chapter 6

posted by sawfan13

Howl leaned down, his lips almost touching mine, when suddenly we heard screaming. He jumped off of the elephant, leaving me behind while I'm struggling to get off. It wasn't a human scream. More like a baby monkey or something. I got off of Tahji, and landed on my butt, and walked towards the bushes and leaves to where Howl went to. I see him talking to a baby monkey. It looked like the same type of monkey on "Friends". I looked at Howl and said,"Hey look! Ross has a monkey! Ha! I always wanted to say that! Hahahaha!" Howl looks at me confused, and said,"Where?" I thought of what I said was...

The Old Circus Chapter One

posted by avatarsbigstfan

Hi, AnnabethKatara here!( Old account temporarily suspended because I'm eleven:() Anyway I've been working pretty hard on this and I don't trust Fanfiction.net enough for some good critisism, I LOVE FANPOP anyway... Hope you enjoy!!! :)
Chapter One
Demyan
“Just wait until you see the auditorium, Demyan.” my fourteen year old sister Anya blabbed,” It’s amazing how much it looks like the Globe theater.”
“ Mmmhmmm…..” I said, trying to drown out her annoying speech by flipping open the windows and slamming them back down.
It was bad enough our mom had forced me to spend half my...