Writing Article: Bloody Black Rose part 1

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posted by Ninano1998

Fire, every were ,no escape,so many dead, another
nightmare...
"Liana,Liana wake up!" I opened my eyes ,and groaned. Mami stood over me. "Come on sleep slough" she said "or you will be late for P.C.S" P.C.S is my school . It stands for power control school. I sighed and got up. Still sleepy, I brushed my teeth and got dressed. I grabbed a banana and ran out the door.Outside sat Hikaru." What took you so long?" he asked." Sleep.""Ha ha ha!" he laughed. Hikaru is my best friend. He has beautiful green hair with two long stripes of yellow and has big brown eyes that always sparkle.Nothing like my violet eyes or white hair.As we headed for P.C.S Hikaru noticed the worried look on my face."Another nightmare?"he asked." Yea," This time it was a fire spreading through our village. men with silver iron on their arms,as an armor were holding weapons ,surrounding the escape exits.It was not the first time I had this kind of dream.Once I dreamed of big boats with more than 20 of those men on it.Another time it was of man shooting huge fire blazing balls at our village."How come you are having this kind off dreams?" Hikaru asked."I don't know" I answered.As we entered P.C.S,I stared to get this strange feeling, like something unexpected will happen.I sat down at my table made off redwood .I could see my own reflection in it.When I stared at myself i felt like the person looking back at me wasn't me." Attention everyone!" My teacher, Mr.Lin called. I looked up startled." Today we will learn to read people's dreams.""Just perfect!" I thought"I just hope he doesn't chose me for the example." Miss Liana Row, could you help me do the assignment?" asked Mr. Line. " Um, do I have a choice?"I asked."Come on Liana, we don't have time for this." I sigh as I got up and stood in front of the class.I felt like I was a big plump mouse being watched by a pack of cats. "First you must concentrate on the person you are working with," My teacher was saying."Then you think in your head about connecting thought's with your partner and..."Suddenly there was a clear view of my nightmare.The class gasped.

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Life Styles

posted by CullensFinest13

This is how you breathe; this is how you look; this is how you understand; this is what you need to live; this is how you laugh; this is how you smile; this what makes the world go round; this is what makes you cry; this is what takes you places; this is the beauty of the dreams; this is how you sing; this is how you breathe; this is what you feel; this is how you dream. Don’t be the victim; be the strong one; be the back bone; be the things all you want to be. Never doubt; never question; never stop believing; please understand. This is how you scream; this is how you play; this is how you...

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Gods: Chapter 1: Love

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

I was holding it in my hand; this man’s heart well not actually his heart but his pendant it was a dark rouge colour so pretty, how he felt for this woman his passion for her. My name is Sadie and I am a goddess of love, I have been for the last 400 years, but I have always had a problem with my place, I don’t understand it, love I mean it sounds like some club in L.A that everyone needs to go to and when they do they either get kicked out or stay and even some times they stay and then get kicked out. I lived in California with my family who are gods to, and they all have a place that...

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Green Eye Blind. (New member's story)

posted by TheHiddenCane

She watched them as they moved down her street.
They never saw her, took great care in looking away before she noticed their shamelessly wide eyes were glued to her body... or, more importantly what she embodied: this world they lived in wasn't perfect.
Her presence there seemed to pollute their pretty city and just like the odd beer can or stray McDonalds bag, they ignored her. She wasn't stupid though... she knew she was just as much an ornament as the ribbons that decorated the streetlights at this time of year, that she in fact blended in with the rest of the pavement and she herself was...

HP fanfiction: Healing. Lily/James. Chapter Three.

posted by lucius_malloy

Chapter Three

All throughout their patrol, it was all James could do to keep his attention (and eyes) on the task at hand. He was still going over the hour before patrol in his head, trying to make sense of it. Lily Evans, always the stoic one, afraid? It was hard to get his head around. Lily had always been the one to keep her head in the most panic-worthy of situations – like the time she found out that Remus is a werewolf.

It had been a particularly difficult full moon, the last one of their sixth year at Hogwarts. Wolf-Remus had been more vicious than usual and both James and Sirius were...

Walk With Trepidation

posted by Epismatic

The inky sky pours in gradually,

Silver stars mingle casually,

Fire has left a stain on this land,

Trace the blackened ground with one hand,

Been a while, but I remember,

By waning light, a glowing ember

Fades out in silence, into dust,

Until the breeze will leave it crushed.

My frame, a statue, barely breathing,

As the wisps of smoke are leaving,

Now, my muscles start to thaw,

And heat from ashes leaves them raw,

I catch myself before my landing,

For as long as I've been standing,

I've stared out at a ruined nation,

Now I walk with trepidation.

3 Reasons that Why Gravity falls Didn't Actually End !

posted by merna_ac

Gravity falls is an amazing show, And we all cherish it.
note: I have written this article before I read a VIP article by ALEX HIRSCH, I will explain it later on this artilce
♦First: we all see in the finale episode of Gravity falls that the only weakness of Bill Cipher is this circle which All Gravity falls Fans know it since the show had started, and I was excited when ford draw it on the floor, So they collect each other and stand on this circle and defeat bill.that's the plan, but Unfortunately It didn't complete because Stan refused to stand on it. So the plan didn't complete. the...

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Battle For The Bunker of Maple Hill:Part 1

posted by Rue24

My name is Carle and I am one of the few immune humans to walk a war torn living dead infested world. Let me take you back to before it started 4 years prior to the initial outbreak a couple of millionaires bought an entire hill and fortified it. The middle and upper part of the hill was cleared and a 60 ft. steel enforced concrete wall was put up, the bottom of the hill was encircled with a 30 ft. steel encased concrete wall. Some of the surrounding flatland was also cleared and minimum defenses were put up. Obviously these millionaires knew something we didn’t. This fortress - we locals...

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Daniel Radcliffe: 10 reasons why I respect him so much!

posted by Radcliffemylife

Daniel Radcliffe: Reasons to love him

"NOTE: please comment if I got anything wrong"

10) He tries his hardest to play the part of Harry Potter and he has never ever stop from living his dream of acting and he will always be Harry Potter to us!

9) His parents said no to Christopher Columbus's offer for Dan to audition in private for the role of Harry Potter! Until Alan Radcliffe(his father) came in to the bathroom where Dan was, and told him that he got the part. Dan quickly bursted into tears after hearing that he won the part! ( that should deserve AWWWW!)

8) In every school report it said one or less the same thing which was:...

The Adventures of the Sea ( Chapter 1, Discovering Alanta)

posted by lilly0102

Victoria, a scuba diver, was getting ready to go scuba diving at the Ocean. She always loves to go scuba diving even if it's 10 degrees outside. She has always said the Ocean is too big to see everything on your first trip. Victoria has talked her friend, Ashley, to go with her. Victoria is heading over to Ashley's house to pick her up.

They just arrived to the Ocean, and they are putting on their scuba diving swim suits. "It's time to go in the Ocean," said Victoria. "Okay lets go then," said Ashley. They went and jumped into the Ocean, and they are now swimming deeper into the Ocean. They...

The Last Myth book four: Never Ending Journy Chapter Two: Saying Goodbye

posted by misscrazel

Senfinelin Forest

Aznr ran down the hill to the edge of the cliff. fallen trees scattered the ground and there was no sign of life. Aznr's hair blew back in the wind and memories of the past filled his head...

*Flashback*

Aznr heard a scream that rang through the forest.
Airellion! he thought, immediately recognizing his voice.
'Aznr! LightWater!' he heard the scream again.
This time he ran through the forest towards him. Aznr burst into the clearing and saw Airellion. He had an arrow in his throat and one in his arm. He was surrounded by an army of goblins, all heavily armed.
'Airellion!' called Aznr.
Aznr raised...

the mirror of fate chapter one: the chosen lands

posted by misscrazel

June 17th 100,000,000 BC 12 O'clock at night
Four children are born, quadruplets, the youngest born at the strike of midnight. The first child is named Queverial, the second Ceelarion, the third Ierailiasha, and the last one is named Mist. The father decides the last child should have a complex name as the others do but the mother has made up her mind that Mist is the perfect name.
Then she sends them through the mirror of fate to find there destiny. They may never return if they do not find it in time.

January 21st 9,999,990 BC 3:30 P.M.
The children grow up living in the chosen lands behind the...

Chapter one of a story... That doesn't have a name. Yet.

posted by tsmith120

My name is Timothy Roger Cole III. This is more or less my story.
Well, mine and about a half dozen others. So for the sake of convenience I'm going to tell this story to you from a third person perspective, and not always narrate it from my own point of view - since I wasn't present for some of the important stuff, and it'd be easier to tell you what happened than recount the tedious discussions on this stuff that I had to go through to get anything remotely resembling a full picture of the events.
I hope you appreciate the things I go through for you. Anyhow, let us begin.

Timothy Roger Cole...

A Land Divided - Chapter 1

posted by StarPotterRings

Hows it going do you think?

Our story begins with an elf gliding through the trees. His lean body let him jump from tree to tree as if he were flying.
It was spring, his favorite time of the year. The daffodils and forsythia were in bloom, and the trees were once again turning green. He stopped on a particularly large branch and looked up into the clear sky. His dark blue eyes without the memories of the horrors of war, his skin without the scars of the torture it brings. For he was yet young, and all the time he has been alive has been peaceful.
He flew once more through the trees. He loved...

Mana and the Pet, Chaper 2

posted by queenpalm

Chapter 2
"Please! Please! Please!" I begged. My parents exchanged glances, then looked back at me.
"You want a lemur, Mana?" Mr. Walker asked.
"Yes! Please! I'll take really good care of her!" I pleaded.
"How much would it cost to take care of it?" Mrs. Walker asked.
"Well, they eat fruit, and not much because they're so small. Plus, this lemur was circus trained, so she shouldn't need anything special."
"What about health, and the veterinarians?"
"I'll turn 12 in a week, so I can babysit more often. I can use that money to pay for the vet's bill," I said, really having no idea. I just agreed to...

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Nightfall #1(COMPLETE REWRITE) Chapter 9

posted by adamk

CHAPTER NINE:
On the drive back to my apartment, I cannot help but feel something is amiss. What it is, I don’t have a clue. As I continue the drive, I once more delve into my past…
CRYSTAL FALLS: 1850
I awaken an hour later, still in pain from the sun’s rays. I feel Perry’s dried blood on my face, and find myself disgusted at what I have done. I cannot believe the situation I’ve landed myself in. About ten minutes later, Perry returns to the cave. From where I do not care, or even want to know. I feel nothing but burning hatred and contempt for him. I still do not know what prevented...

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Nightfall #1:(COMPLETE REWRITE) Chapter Seven

posted by adamk

CHAPTER SEVEN:
I return to my apartment, and turn off the police radio, which is only reporting the incident I was involved with earlier that night. I suddenly feel tired once again, and this shocks me. As I lay back on the couch, I continue thinking of Pike, and my first night of being a vampire.
CRYSTAL FALLS: 1850
I hesitate, and then follow Perry outside. Only moments ago, I found myself full of anger, yet at the same time, worry, although not for my own sake, but for my father’s, who is still asleep in the other room. For some odd reason, I am in pain, not from my wound, which has disappeared...

The Guardian of Zamari chapter 1

posted by ITF

A shadowy figure silently brushed the silken curtains aside as she slipped through the open window and stepped into the dark chamber. Passing a small table and a bed, the fox quickly headed towards a cabinet that stood against the far wall.
Beaded necklaces hung above a oval mirror that was set in the center. Her eyes rested on a miniature strongbox half hidden behind the mirror.
Paying no heed to the deafening clatter coming from the oblivious guest downstairs, she skillfully picked the tiny lock and raised the lid. It was hard to tell what was what in the darkness, so she emptied it into...

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Annabelle (warning... this story is very depressing, does not end happy) (also very intense)

posted by CatiePotter

My name is Annabelle. I am sixteen and I am beaten.

I lived with my dad and mom in that trailor park on the edge of town between the bar and the strip of stores everyone avoids. We lived happily until my mom, Mary, died in that car crash five years ago. My dad became depressed, drinking alcohol and gambling. He was soon unemployed, so to keep the trailor I had to drop out of school. He is now a deep alcoholic and gambles with his buddies every other day.

Whenever we run out of spirits he hits me. He keeps hitting me until I go to the bar nearby and get more. This happens every two days by his...

Chapter 1 of My New Story (I Dont Have a Name Yet...)

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

My breath came out in a white, frozen cloud before me and smelled heavily of my mint gum. My footsteps’ sounds were wet on the sidewalk. It had rained just before I left the bookstore and, just by my luck, someone stole my car (boy, was my dad going to have a cow when he hears that…), so I had to walk all the way home in the wet night, all by myself. I prayed silently that I would be able to find my way because I was new in town and barely knew where everything was. I had to use a crappy GPS to find the bookstore. I was just lucky I found it.
The town was Cassidy....

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Keep Breathing, Just Keep Breathing

posted by brandonaz

Hiya! First stab at adding something I wrote to the writing spot. This is a cliche little story inspired by the Mayday Parade song "One Man Drinking Games." Comments would mean the world. (:

And you swore you saw me laughing, and I swore I saw you smile
And the time we've spent together was meant to last us quite a while
As I take this piece of you with me I'll carry to my grave
Knowing that for someone you're an angel sent to save

He touched the tip of his index finger to each of the freckles that dotted her arm. He drew patterns, connecting the delicate dots into hearts and butterflies and lopsided...