(This is based on my first fanfiction "Continuation of Burning Low" I made my own character named Emily Hallison she a human from the town Goldlion)
(it was just another regular day and as usual pb was kidnapped by the ice king and as usual finn and jake were running and trying to save her)
Finn: let her go Barf breath!(running)
Jake: yeah she'll probably faint because of your breath haha (running too)
Ice King:What?! (stopping in mid-air) I'll have you know that I brush my teeth 3 times a day!!
Finn: And I'll have you know I'm gonna kick your butt!!(doing a flying kick on ice Kings face)
Emily's POV
(its Sembreak school doesn't start for the next 2 weeks. It was just a normal day in Gollion the trees were decorated with the most wonderful shades of orange and red, just as I was halfway home Amanda Tuffwood the most popular girl in school and her group blocked my path)
Emily: What do you want Amanda?
Amanda: Just a little something Ms. Jayloon gave you.
Emily: You mean the lead role for the play?
Amanda: Good girl, now I want you to tell Ms . Jayloon that you don't want the role and say that she should give it to me.
Emily : What no way!!(she said furiously) I'm not like you little maid that will do everything you want!
Amanda:(she glared at her evil-like) Fine I guess i'll have to take it by force , girls!! (then two of her accomplices charged after her but dodge all of them and ran and ran until she could run no more)
(then she found a cottage with The name "Ooo Royal" she saw that the door was left open and knowing that Amanda and her friends will catch up to her soon she had no choice but go in the old cottage and wait. When she turned around the cottage was rather small and dusty but what caught her eye was the words in red on the wall it read "The gate of the Land of Ooo is upon you, say it once say it twice and it will open for you)
Emily: (she began reading it) The gate to The Land of Ooo is upon,say it once say it twice and it open for you
(in an instant a potal sucked her into the Ooo)
Finn's POV
(they finally defeated Ice King and freed pb when a portal opened and something came out of it and it landed on Finn)
Emily: ahh off!(as she landed on finn and they both fell down on the snow)
Finn and Emily: Owww (both raising there heads and at once there eyes met)
to be continued-
(well tell me what you think about this, I know its not [perfect but I love it, ohh and tell me what you think about Emily)
(it was just another regular day and as usual pb was kidnapped by the ice king and as usual finn and jake were running and trying to save her)
Finn: let her go Barf breath!(running)
Jake: yeah she'll probably faint because of your breath haha (running too)
Ice King:What?! (stopping in mid-air) I'll have you know that I brush my teeth 3 times a day!!
Finn: And I'll have you know I'm gonna kick your butt!!(doing a flying kick on ice Kings face)
Emily's POV
(its Sembreak school doesn't start for the next 2 weeks. It was just a normal day in Gollion the trees were decorated with the most wonderful shades of orange and red, just as I was halfway home Amanda Tuffwood the most popular girl in school and her group blocked my path)
Emily: What do you want Amanda?
Amanda: Just a little something Ms. Jayloon gave you.
Emily: You mean the lead role for the play?
Amanda: Good girl, now I want you to tell Ms . Jayloon that you don't want the role and say that she should give it to me.
Emily : What no way!!(she said furiously) I'm not like you little maid that will do everything you want!
Amanda:(she glared at her evil-like) Fine I guess i'll have to take it by force , girls!! (then two of her accomplices charged after her but dodge all of them and ran and ran until she could run no more)
(then she found a cottage with The name "Ooo Royal" she saw that the door was left open and knowing that Amanda and her friends will catch up to her soon she had no choice but go in the old cottage and wait. When she turned around the cottage was rather small and dusty but what caught her eye was the words in red on the wall it read "The gate of the Land of Ooo is upon you, say it once say it twice and it will open for you)
Emily: (she began reading it) The gate to The Land of Ooo is upon,say it once say it twice and it open for you
(in an instant a potal sucked her into the Ooo)
Finn's POV
(they finally defeated Ice King and freed pb when a portal opened and something came out of it and it landed on Finn)
Emily: ahh off!(as she landed on finn and they both fell down on the snow)
Finn and Emily: Owww (both raising there heads and at once there eyes met)
to be continued-
(well tell me what you think about this, I know its not [perfect but I love it, ohh and tell me what you think about Emily)
