Well.
Like with the other two. I taking a 'blast to my past' to give reviews that I read, originally back in 2011.
First things first.
It feels weird, giving such a review for a story written by one of my closest fan fiction friends, BRAVOBRAVO.
He, ChocolateBrownPegasis and Villain84 were to first to ever make me feel welcome on there.
Much like Ecology, Applejackrocks thehumphrey, KingSimba4ever9 and probably KarinaBrony were the firsts to welcome me, and befriend me, here on fanpop, back in the day.
Uhh, anyway.
I won't 'only' focus on the neggatives.
I'll give the positives as well.
The story is set as full out war between the Western/Eastern group, vs the mennecing Southern pack.
The worst of the Southerners, is the one who started the war.
HUNTER.
An omega hating sociopath, who in his first appeance, violantly turtures Humphrey, and enjoys doing it.
At the time I read this.
I wasn't as morbid as I am NOW. and didn't enjoy Hunter as much as I probably would NOW.
Same gose to the graphic battle scenes.
I didn't enjoy them as much as I would now, thanks to my enjoyment of saw series, Freddy Krueger, happy tree friends, and MLP creepypastas (mostly cupcakes).
Its too bad to. Cause there's one in basically every single chapter. And Andrew (bravo) dosen't hold back on graphic details for each battle.
What kind of battles?
Well.
picture the brawl between Dash and Big Mac in ROCKET TO INSANITY, times ten.
Anyway.
One of my neggatives was. The langth.
Though I don't think this one should count.
I find it too long.
Others might find it too short.
Another neggative is. The story isn't exatly 'sex free'.
And when there is sex chapters.
It's not held back, on detail.
what else should I say?
I have no idea.
This story is all over the place.
Do much going constantly going on. It's like PRISONERS.
Well.
Okay. It's 'nothing' like that movie.
But who cares.
PRISONERS is awesome!
I just wanted to mention it, lol.
Though the ending annoyed me.
I hate when movies do that to you.
Well.
That's all I got.
The story can still be found.
Look it up on google, it's the easiest way to find it.
In any case.
Please leave comments and suggestions for the next review episode.
Till then.
Here's some badass quotes from the story.
"this whole Alpha and omega thing a disgrace" - Fang (or 'the traiter/bitch' as I call him)
"Today we moan the loss of a friend. A friend who taken from us from the Southern Pack.. NO MORE! We will allow them to rip our loved ones away from us! No longer, will we offer peace! IT IS TIME THEY LEARNED THE POWER OF RHE EASTEN AND WESTERN PACKS!.. We wil, rush forward!. FOR THE BLOOD OF THE SOUTH!" - Winston
"Omega twerp!" - Hunter
"WE WILL CRUSH WHAT THEY HOLD DEAR! WE WILL BREAK THERE DEFENCE! WE WILL KILL THEM ALL!" - Hunter
Like with the other two. I taking a 'blast to my past' to give reviews that I read, originally back in 2011.
First things first.
It feels weird, giving such a review for a story written by one of my closest fan fiction friends, BRAVOBRAVO.
He, ChocolateBrownPegasis and Villain84 were to first to ever make me feel welcome on there.
Much like Ecology, Applejackrocks thehumphrey, KingSimba4ever9 and probably KarinaBrony were the firsts to welcome me, and befriend me, here on fanpop, back in the day.
Uhh, anyway.
I won't 'only' focus on the neggatives.
I'll give the positives as well.
The story is set as full out war between the Western/Eastern group, vs the mennecing Southern pack.
The worst of the Southerners, is the one who started the war.
HUNTER.
An omega hating sociopath, who in his first appeance, violantly turtures Humphrey, and enjoys doing it.
At the time I read this.
I wasn't as morbid as I am NOW. and didn't enjoy Hunter as much as I probably would NOW.
Same gose to the graphic battle scenes.
I didn't enjoy them as much as I would now, thanks to my enjoyment of saw series, Freddy Krueger, happy tree friends, and MLP creepypastas (mostly cupcakes).
Its too bad to. Cause there's one in basically every single chapter. And Andrew (bravo) dosen't hold back on graphic details for each battle.
What kind of battles?
Well.
picture the brawl between Dash and Big Mac in ROCKET TO INSANITY, times ten.
Anyway.
One of my neggatives was. The langth.
Though I don't think this one should count.
I find it too long.
Others might find it too short.
Another neggative is. The story isn't exatly 'sex free'.
And when there is sex chapters.
It's not held back, on detail.
what else should I say?
I have no idea.
This story is all over the place.
Do much going constantly going on. It's like PRISONERS.
Well.
Okay. It's 'nothing' like that movie.
But who cares.
PRISONERS is awesome!
I just wanted to mention it, lol.
Though the ending annoyed me.
I hate when movies do that to you.
Well.
That's all I got.
The story can still be found.
Look it up on google, it's the easiest way to find it.
In any case.
Please leave comments and suggestions for the next review episode.
Till then.
Here's some badass quotes from the story.
"this whole Alpha and omega thing a disgrace" - Fang (or 'the traiter/bitch' as I call him)
"Today we moan the loss of a friend. A friend who taken from us from the Southern Pack.. NO MORE! We will allow them to rip our loved ones away from us! No longer, will we offer peace! IT IS TIME THEY LEARNED THE POWER OF RHE EASTEN AND WESTERN PACKS!.. We wil, rush forward!. FOR THE BLOOD OF THE SOUTH!" - Winston
"Omega twerp!" - Hunter
"WE WILL CRUSH WHAT THEY HOLD DEAR! WE WILL BREAK THERE DEFENCE! WE WILL KILL THEM ALL!" - Hunter
There's a fire starting in my heart (D)
I heard that your dreams came true (S)
Don't underestimate the things that I will do (S)
There's a fire starting in my heart (D)
Reaching a fever pitch And it's bringing me out the dark (D)
Now rumour has it she ain't got your love anymore, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
The scars of your love remind me of us (D)
They keep me thinking that we almost had it all (D)
I hate to turn up out of the blue uninvited (S)
Rumour has it! (R)
I heard that you're settled down (S)
That you found a girl and you're married now. (S)
But you played it (D)
(You're gonna wish you never had met me) (D)
You played it (D)
Rumour has it (R)
Never mind, I'll find someone like you (S)
You played it (D)
We could have had it all (D)
You played it to the beat. (D)
I heard that your dreams came true (S)
Don't underestimate the things that I will do (S)
There's a fire starting in my heart (D)
Reaching a fever pitch And it's bringing me out the dark (D)
Now rumour has it she ain't got your love anymore, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
The scars of your love remind me of us (D)
They keep me thinking that we almost had it all (D)
I hate to turn up out of the blue uninvited (S)
Rumour has it! (R)
I heard that you're settled down (S)
That you found a girl and you're married now. (S)
But you played it (D)
(You're gonna wish you never had met me) (D)
You played it (D)
Rumour has it (R)
Never mind, I'll find someone like you (S)
You played it (D)
We could have had it all (D)
You played it to the beat. (D)
Hey guys, Mack Wolf here, i'm just posting this to tell you guys im writing a new artical and news on my other one.
Ok the new artical "Life with the Pack" is my second fan fic ever
it's about a week since Kate and Humphrey and Lill and Garth became mates and life is great tell they run in with a very odd 14 year old boy who know's how to hunt, and after they meet, the 3 pack leader's: Winston, Eve, and Tony make a very odd questian for the boy to join the pack. how will Humphrey, Kate, Lilly , Garth and the whole pack deal with this boy and how long befor they start a fight or become friends?
so that's the new artical, now on the news with "Life with Wolves" i have not giving up on it i'm just on writers block and i've thought of all these other articals to write so im just taking a break don't think i'm giving up im not.
well that's basically it so im done, peace bro's and bra's
-Mack Wolf
Ok the new artical "Life with the Pack" is my second fan fic ever
it's about a week since Kate and Humphrey and Lill and Garth became mates and life is great tell they run in with a very odd 14 year old boy who know's how to hunt, and after they meet, the 3 pack leader's: Winston, Eve, and Tony make a very odd questian for the boy to join the pack. how will Humphrey, Kate, Lilly , Garth and the whole pack deal with this boy and how long befor they start a fight or become friends?
so that's the new artical, now on the news with "Life with Wolves" i have not giving up on it i'm just on writers block and i've thought of all these other articals to write so im just taking a break don't think i'm giving up im not.
well that's basically it so im done, peace bro's and bra's
-Mack Wolf
The cars in my article series "The Race" are a wide variety of supercars that are modified to be race ready.
Wolfpack Motorsports: 2010 Maserati GranTurismo MC GT4
07: Sweets Spaur/Rich Spaur/Jon Gies
89: Phil Loth/Jenna Loth/Angelina Jolie
97: Colby Browning/Scar Browning/Sasha Thompson
Risi Competizione: 2010 Ferrari 458 Italia GT
12: Todd Corey/Brittany Chase/Adam Taylor
Omega Racing: Audi R8 LMS
36: Daniel Lucas/Crystal Lucas
Shadow Racing Team: BMW M3 GTS
Falken Motorsports: Mercedes SL65 AMG GT
The other cars are as follows: Jaguar XKR-S GT, Porsche 911 GT3 RS, and the Lamborghini LP560-4 Gallardo.
I'll get pics made of the cars soon, and I'll get them uploaded
Wolfpack Motorsports: 2010 Maserati GranTurismo MC GT4
07: Sweets Spaur/Rich Spaur/Jon Gies
89: Phil Loth/Jenna Loth/Angelina Jolie
97: Colby Browning/Scar Browning/Sasha Thompson
Risi Competizione: 2010 Ferrari 458 Italia GT
12: Todd Corey/Brittany Chase/Adam Taylor
Omega Racing: Audi R8 LMS
36: Daniel Lucas/Crystal Lucas
Shadow Racing Team: BMW M3 GTS
Falken Motorsports: Mercedes SL65 AMG GT
The other cars are as follows: Jaguar XKR-S GT, Porsche 911 GT3 RS, and the Lamborghini LP560-4 Gallardo.
I'll get pics made of the cars soon, and I'll get them uploaded