Well..
ZenJeager737 has asked me to review his story JASPER HELL HIGH..
To be honest, I don't usually have high hopes for the fanfiction stories of these days.
The alpha and omega Fanfiction.net page will never completely be the same as it was 3 or 4 years ago.
All those people I've come know, are gone now, and I barelly come to this page anymore I read other pages, and review most of the stories from back in the day..
But anyway.
This story was better then I expected, though that probably isn't saying much, I wasn't expecting much.
I like the way it keeps switching between P.O.V's so rapidly, I don't think I've seen that before.
And as for the story itself. Not sure if I have anything worth saying.
But that's pretty common now.
I wish I could say their's no sex. But truth is.. I couldn't tell.
Its rated M so it's very likely. But I hope to god there isn't.. But the hope of 'nice' stories is becoming harder and harder these days.
But anyway..
Sorry for not ranting, swearing, or giving a better review.
This is all I could do.
Zen asked me to point out spelling mistakes also, but I don't think I'll be the best for that. Considering I suck at it myself and don't want to sound hypercritical..
Anyway..
Till next time.
Live long and prosper!
ZenJeager737 has asked me to review his story JASPER HELL HIGH..
To be honest, I don't usually have high hopes for the fanfiction stories of these days.
The alpha and omega Fanfiction.net page will never completely be the same as it was 3 or 4 years ago.
All those people I've come know, are gone now, and I barelly come to this page anymore I read other pages, and review most of the stories from back in the day..
But anyway.
This story was better then I expected, though that probably isn't saying much, I wasn't expecting much.
I like the way it keeps switching between P.O.V's so rapidly, I don't think I've seen that before.
And as for the story itself. Not sure if I have anything worth saying.
But that's pretty common now.
I wish I could say their's no sex. But truth is.. I couldn't tell.
Its rated M so it's very likely. But I hope to god there isn't.. But the hope of 'nice' stories is becoming harder and harder these days.
But anyway..
Sorry for not ranting, swearing, or giving a better review.
This is all I could do.
Zen asked me to point out spelling mistakes also, but I don't think I'll be the best for that. Considering I suck at it myself and don't want to sound hypercritical..
Anyway..
Till next time.
Live long and prosper!
Jon Looking For Kate On His Bronco.
So Eve's Children Were Kid Napped, She Houled to Call Everybody To Let Them Hear About the Event.
Everyone Was Standing In Front of Where Kate, Lilly and Humphrey Last Sat. Eve Stood on Top Of a High Rock and Said:
"About a Few Hours ago, Two humans Kidnapped Humphrey, Lilly, and Kate. (Everyone Gasps) Now, Me and Garth Are Going To Have To Search For Them, Ane We Need All The Help We Can Get. So Can You all Help Us?"
Jon Heard all the words of the annoucement and RAN PAST All The Other Wolves. "Wait, Kate Is Kidnapped?", Said Jon. "Yes." Said Eve. "That Dude Is Gonna Get It!" Replied Jon. "Let's Do It!" Yelled Jon. They Searched Every Where, In The River, The Trees, The Stumps Every Where!!!
To Be Continued.
ai is EXTREME CONTROVERSIAL but I did got curious on found one of the ai sites and so I tried it out and this is what the ai literally said:
- The wolf pack's dynamics would have changed, as the alpha pair would be Garth and Kate, leading with their own style and rules.
- Humphrey would have felt heartbroken and rejected, and probably would have moved away from the pack or tried to find another mate.
- It is likely that Garth and Kate's progeny would have a different set of characteristics and personalities compared to Humphrey's offspring.
- The plot of the subsequent movies in the franchise would have undergone significant changes, as the focus would shift from Humphrey's adventures and romantic endeavors to Garth and Kate's challenges as leaders.
Despite these differences, I believe that the central message of the movie, which emphasizes the importance of teamwork, accepting differences, and breaking down prejudices, would have remained unchanged.
- The wolf pack's dynamics would have changed, as the alpha pair would be Garth and Kate, leading with their own style and rules.
- Humphrey would have felt heartbroken and rejected, and probably would have moved away from the pack or tried to find another mate.
- It is likely that Garth and Kate's progeny would have a different set of characteristics and personalities compared to Humphrey's offspring.
- The plot of the subsequent movies in the franchise would have undergone significant changes, as the focus would shift from Humphrey's adventures and romantic endeavors to Garth and Kate's challenges as leaders.
Despite these differences, I believe that the central message of the movie, which emphasizes the importance of teamwork, accepting differences, and breaking down prejudices, would have remained unchanged.
I got this from a friends website Sofurry.com and don't say i messed up it was an idea i had [This is kate secretly doing it with backdraft
