DogsLikeCheese If your a beginner in drawing its good especially off of memory your better at drawing the hands then the ones I draw, mine too small you might need practice but "practice makes perfect" good👍😊(I AM BEING HONEST) teeth might need some work maybe try not to make individual teeth and make them closed if you choose to have an open smile use pink for the back of the mouth, a smaller head , a bit bigger body and arms ears , clothing try to make wrinkles to make look more like clothes and baggy (optional light glare in the eye try both eyes it could help improve your work.)😊😀😆😉☺Good luck👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍Your good in your own way be proud yay!!!!!!!!!!🍥 To help you learn more I recommend a drawing a book that teaches you more on drawing manga I forgot what it was exactly call but if you search the author I'm sure you will find the author goes by "Sophie Chan" You can do it, well this is what i thought sorry if I went overboard hope this helps you thank you also if there anything that you did not like or possibly anything else negative sorry no harm ment. 🍰🍩🍪🍦🍧🍨🍮🍭🍬🍫🍙🍜🍥