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posted by VAMPirella1997
End of Part 79:

Edward's POV:

Bella pushed the leaves aside, and I stood beside her as I peered down at the unfamiliar girl kneeling there. Bella gasped; the small child looked up.

The first thing I noticed was how her huge, sad, chocolate brown eyes were exactly the same as Bella's had been when she was human.

Suddenly, for one second, I felt a vague recognition... but it dissappeared as soon as it had came, so I could no longer remember what I remembered about her.

Part 80:

Edward's POV:

There was a moment of silence as Bella and the small girl gazed at each other. I felt I was missing something.

The girl's thoughts were full of joy and hope. She couldn't put her feelings into words, though, so I had no idea what was making her so excited.

Bella's voice broke the charged silence. She spoke so quietly, her shock muting her voice.

"Nessie?"

I growned inwardly. She thought this child was Renesmee. Oh, no.

"Nessie, is it you?" Bella continued.

My eyes flickered toward the girl, prepared for shock, maybe even fear to be showing in her eyes. She was human after all. Even if she didn't smell quite normal for a human...

But the girl replied, and she didn't look - or sound - scared. In fact, she sounded... joyfull? No. That wasn't possible... was it?

"Yes," She breathed. "Yes, yes! Yes, I am!"

What? She was... Renesmee? What? I was confused, shocked, and more than a little scared.

Bella grabbed the girl - I couldn't believe she was actually Renesmee, the fictional character Bella had dreamed up - and swung her up into her arms, spinning the child around.

"Oh, Nessie!" Bella cried. "Nessie, I'm so glad to see you!"

This lasted for a few minutes, while I tried to understand what was going on. I had just come to the practically impossible conclusion that Renesmee was real; we had all forgotten her, as Bella had claimed, when Bella turned to look at me.

She looked nervous, almost scared. I looked from... Renesmee to Bella, and - not wanted to upset the girl or Bella - tried to smile. I doubted it was convincing. My mystification probably showed on my face.

Bella sighed, then I watched as she frowned in concentration.

Suddenly, I was inside her head.

You don't remember... She thought sadly. Do you think you ever will?

I forced a laugh, worried about scaring the small girl, Nessie.

I wrapped my arm gently around Bella, wanting to comfort her.

"Give me time, love." I soothed. "I'm sure it will pass."

Oh, Renesmee thought. They're talking about me.

Then she reached her hand out toward me.

"Maybe this'll help." She said as she pressed her warm palm against my neck.

Seeing what she showed me wasn't that unusual to me. But the way that she showed me, by pressing her hand to my neck, was strange.

I didn't expect it, so I gasped unwillingly.

She showed me what seemed to be her memories. Memories of her with us, her with Bella, her with... Jacob. I felt a fury at that. Especially when she was alone with Jacob.

And it all came flooding back, forcing the anger away. I remembered how Bella had almost died for this child, how Jacob had imprinted on her, how everyone who saw Nessie loved her, cared for her. And I remembered how the Volturi had come for her. I remembered everything.

Despite how horrible some of these memories were, I felt an overwhelming joy. Renesmee was my daughter. And now she was back here, safe, with Bella and I. Our family was complete once again.
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Please comment and rate! It means so much to me.

-vampi x

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End of Part 106:

Rodrigo's POV:

"Oh, Rodrigo," she murmured as I set her back down, her hands knotting in my hair. "Oh, Rodrigo! You came back!"

She pressed her lips to mine, and I crushed her tight against me, knowing that, if I had my way, I would never, ever let go of her.

I was back, back with Cassandra. Nothing could ruin this now. Nothing.

We were together, and no-one was ever, ever going to change that.

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Part 110:

Rodrigo's POV:

Cassandra...
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This song is the inspiration for Ariel in Eternal Midnight. Diane Birch is a really good singer and pianist, and her lyrics are amazing. Love her and this song.
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posted by VAMPirella1997
Sorry I haven’t been writing much. I guess I’m running out of ideas for this story. It is coming to a natural ending. I have an idea how to end it. I’m going to try and reach 200 parts before it’s over. I have a Seth Clearwater Fanfic in the Team Seth spot. Read it if you want.

-VAMPi
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End of Part 177:

Jemima’s POV:

“I know,” he whispered, his face close to mine. “I know it burns. That’s thirst. I told you about that, remember? You have to feed.”

He pulled me upright, and I followed him as he walked towards the massive doors that stood, shut tightly, about twenty feet...
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[End of Part 82]:

[Jacob's POV]:

So I let the fury consume me; it drove me faster, and, before I knew it, I was out the forest and onto the bank of a river.

I caught scent of vampire - a leech had been here recently. I recognized the scent; I knew it was some of the Cullens. I didn't care enough to work out who.

I just threw myself forward and into the river, running through it and splashing water all around. The warm water felt good, soaking through my fur coat, but it wasn't enough to calm me enough so I phase back.

But, I wanted to. I wanted to go back, back to the cave. I felt as though...
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End of Part 78:

Renesmee's POV:

"I remember everything." He murmured in my ear, answering my thoughts.

I smiled up at him. My mother, unable to bear the distance between us after the long time apart, came and stood closer, wrapping her arms around me and my dad.

We were together, again, at last. Now there was just the minor problem of reminding the rest of the family. But that was for later. For now, we could just be content together.

I was more than content, though. I was extatic, happier than I'd ever been. I'd missed both my parents so much.

Part 81:

Renesmee's POV:

The cold touch of my...
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Oh, my God! Part NINETY!! How the HELL did that happen!? It's so close to hundred now! WOW!! Thank you, everyone, for reading Eternal Midnight so that it could get this far! Thank you, SO much!

-VAMPirella xx

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[Part 90]

[Edward's POV]

I watched as Bella brought Renesmee back over to us. Nessie reached around and held Jacob's hand. He smiled down at her, hiding his thoughts and feelings well.

He was practically screaming in his head, and I could read his mixed emotions in Jasper's mind. Everyone was pretty much feeling the same.

How could I? How...
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[Part 85]-

[Leah's POV]-

I listened with my ears and mind to the fight outside. Edward got a hit at Jacob, and I winced, feeling Jake's pain.

Seth winced too, but when Jacob clawed his way back, getting a swipe at Edward, he winced again. Seth wanted Jacob to lose, but he wanted the bloodsucker to lose too.

Seth's loyalties were divided; it made me mad.

I heard Bella screaming at them to stop. I hoped they didn't listen to her. It would serve her right if she lost them both. She deserved all the pain in the world for the agony she'd caused Jake to have.

Then Bella was yelling about "Renesmee"....
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End of Part 139:

Jodie’s POV:

His mouth opened in shock, and I quickly told him the rest, insisting that he not tell anyone apart from the other elders. He nodded, not questioning me. I did mad things, but they knew there was always a reason, even if I didn’t know it myself.

Peter, can you go and get the other elders? Tell them about what I saw. I requested. Peter nodded, swimming off the go and find Chief; his second in command, Fred; and the other elders, Gerald, Tony, Richard and Thomas.

When he was gone, I wondered how we would dispose of the vampire girl. In secret? Or should we inform...
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Ivan’s POV:

Everything is going perfectly to plan...
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Mariella’s POV:

“I know that there are some people you plan to kill,” I hissed, unable to sit here any longer, waiting.

He raised his eyebrows; Jemima bared her teeth at me. I stood up.

“Or maybe you don’t plan to do it yet. I don’t know. But I have it on good authority that soon you will, and we’ve come here to stop you.”

Ivan smiled. Then he was laughing.

I felt my hands clenching into fists and my nostrils flaring. He was laughing. How dare he laugh? How dare he?

Then I heard a ferocious growl from somewhere....
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13 parts left until 200 parts and THE END if my maths is right. 200 takeaway 10 is 190; take away 3 more and it 187. Yeah. Cool. Enjoy. 

Part 187:

Jemima’s POV:

I decided that I didn’t want to stay in the same set of clothes for ever, nice as my old, black – well, sort of grey – jeans are. And I like my Paramore T-shirt, but I fancy a change. So I went searching around the castle for any clothes that had maybe been left lying around.

The only problem was, the castle was so bloody big! For starters, there were five doors in the room I was already in. One of them was the one we’d come...
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This part contains lemons.

-VAMPi.

End of Part 183:

Jemima’s POV:

“You,” he rasped, “you killed Mary. It was you.”

I smiled. “Such is my life.”

I stepped closer to him, kneeling down on the ground. It was wet from rain; tiny puddles were clustered between the cobbles, soaking through my jeans. I didn’t feel the cold of it. I reached out and took Steve’s hand; even though he must have been freezing, it felt warm. The pulse beat against my palm, racing with fear. It smelt good.

“Thank you, by the way,” I told him. “Thank you for arguing me out of the flat. You lead me to my...
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It’s been ages since I’ve written. Sorry. I’ve just been lacking inspiration. I know what I want to happen and how I want this story to end; the only problem is getting it written correctly. Please forgive me for all the delays.

Here’s a re-cap (this is not an extract from a previous part, by the way):

Last time we were with the Cullens, Alice had just had a vision. Here are the Cullens’ reactions (this part is an extract):

(End of Part 180:)

“She saw Mariella and Cassandra going to attack Ivan,” Edward continued. “And they’re going to die.”

Silence. Never ending silence....
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