So this is my first try at a songfiction! Its Perfect, by P!nk, and this is for all those Lalia/Thuke fans out there! Constructive critism is appreciated:D
PERFECT
(THALIA'S POV)
I walked into the Artemis cabin, tired from a long game of capture the flag. I was going to go to bed when I noticed a packgage sitting on my bed. In neatly written cursive, it had the name Thalia on it. Curious, I opened it and found an Ipod in it. I put in the earphones and started listening,
Dear Thalia, I know that by the time you will be reading this, I will be long gone, but, the feelings are still there, so please....just listen to this for me...
Made a wrong turn, once or twice
The song paused and I gasped as I heard luke's voice.
When I was leading you and Annabeth to camp, I led you both into so many traps
Dug my way out of blood and fire
As fun as it was being on the runn with the two of you, we had practically escaped every possible monster...
Bad decsions, thats all right
I know it was wrong to give myself over to Kronos, but...
Welcome to my silly life
Honestly, do the Gods really expect us to lead a normal life? We're fricken demigods for Zeus' sake!
mistreated, misplaced, misunderstood
Iv'e always been treated horribly, take for granet, never taken seriously, and I am just so done with it!
"Miss, no-way-its-all-good"
but yet, whenever you come everyone relaxes a little, knowing that you've got everything under control
It didn't slow me down
When you were a tree, it was hard to keep going, but somehow i managed...barely
Mistaken, always secong guessing, underestimated, look im still around
Being a son of Hermes is hard, nobody takes me seriosly, nobody thinks that I can do anything, besides steal things, but I can do soo much more than that...
Pretty Pretty Please,
Dont you ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than Perfect
Thalia Grace, Daughter of Zeus, Lieutenant of Artemis, you are perfect
Pretty Pretty Please,
Don't you ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
You are perfect, to me-
This honestly may mean nothing to you, but you are perfect
your so mean, when you talk, about yourself, you are wrong
Honestly, Thals, you put yourself at such low standards, but when are you going to accept that your pefrect?
change the voices, in your head, and make them like you instead
Again, you doubt yourself too much! YOU ARE PERFECT!
So complicated
Why does our relationship have to be so complicated
Look how big you'll make it
Your an immortal daughter of Zeus, you'll go down in history
Filled with so much hatred, such a tired game
I used to have so much hatred towards the gods, and I was just so sick of doing their dirty work, and not getting anything in return!
It's enough, iv'e done all I could think of
I was so sick of it I resorted to my lst option, which I'm not proud of...
Chased down all my demons
Personally, I think I made the right choice sacrificing myself for the gods...
I'll see you do the same
Thalia, please listen to me! I know Gaea is starting to rise! She will come after the most powerful half bloods, which means that she will come after you; as hypocrytical as this may sound, just say no...don't give in, no matter what she tempts you with, say no, please...for me?
Pretty Pretty please,
Don't you ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than perfect
It hasn't changed, you are still, and always will be perfect
Pretty Pretty please,
If you ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
You are perfect, to me-
No matter what anyone says, to me, you will always be perfect.
Luke's voice paused, then said,
I know this won't mean much to you, Thals, but...I love you
The music stopped and Luke's voice was gone, I tear dripped down my face. This was the Luke I knew. This was the real him. This was the Luke that I loved.
PERFECT
(THALIA'S POV)
I walked into the Artemis cabin, tired from a long game of capture the flag. I was going to go to bed when I noticed a packgage sitting on my bed. In neatly written cursive, it had the name Thalia on it. Curious, I opened it and found an Ipod in it. I put in the earphones and started listening,
Dear Thalia, I know that by the time you will be reading this, I will be long gone, but, the feelings are still there, so please....just listen to this for me...
Made a wrong turn, once or twice
The song paused and I gasped as I heard luke's voice.
When I was leading you and Annabeth to camp, I led you both into so many traps
Dug my way out of blood and fire
As fun as it was being on the runn with the two of you, we had practically escaped every possible monster...
Bad decsions, thats all right
I know it was wrong to give myself over to Kronos, but...
Welcome to my silly life
Honestly, do the Gods really expect us to lead a normal life? We're fricken demigods for Zeus' sake!
mistreated, misplaced, misunderstood
Iv'e always been treated horribly, take for granet, never taken seriously, and I am just so done with it!
"Miss, no-way-its-all-good"
but yet, whenever you come everyone relaxes a little, knowing that you've got everything under control
It didn't slow me down
When you were a tree, it was hard to keep going, but somehow i managed...barely
Mistaken, always secong guessing, underestimated, look im still around
Being a son of Hermes is hard, nobody takes me seriosly, nobody thinks that I can do anything, besides steal things, but I can do soo much more than that...
Pretty Pretty Please,
Dont you ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than Perfect
Thalia Grace, Daughter of Zeus, Lieutenant of Artemis, you are perfect
Pretty Pretty Please,
Don't you ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
You are perfect, to me-
This honestly may mean nothing to you, but you are perfect
your so mean, when you talk, about yourself, you are wrong
Honestly, Thals, you put yourself at such low standards, but when are you going to accept that your pefrect?
change the voices, in your head, and make them like you instead
Again, you doubt yourself too much! YOU ARE PERFECT!
So complicated
Why does our relationship have to be so complicated
Look how big you'll make it
Your an immortal daughter of Zeus, you'll go down in history
Filled with so much hatred, such a tired game
I used to have so much hatred towards the gods, and I was just so sick of doing their dirty work, and not getting anything in return!
It's enough, iv'e done all I could think of
I was so sick of it I resorted to my lst option, which I'm not proud of...
Chased down all my demons
Personally, I think I made the right choice sacrificing myself for the gods...
I'll see you do the same
Thalia, please listen to me! I know Gaea is starting to rise! She will come after the most powerful half bloods, which means that she will come after you; as hypocrytical as this may sound, just say no...don't give in, no matter what she tempts you with, say no, please...for me?
Pretty Pretty please,
Don't you ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than perfect
It hasn't changed, you are still, and always will be perfect
Pretty Pretty please,
If you ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
You are perfect, to me-
No matter what anyone says, to me, you will always be perfect.
Luke's voice paused, then said,
I know this won't mean much to you, Thals, but...I love you
The music stopped and Luke's voice was gone, I tear dripped down my face. This was the Luke I knew. This was the real him. This was the Luke that I loved.
GUYZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HAVE AN OBSERVATION!!!!!!!!!!(Big word)
This has nothing to do with death.........................sadly.
I have noticed that:
A: Percy and Jason are alike.
Ex. Both are son of a Big Three God
Both have defeated more than one titan.
(Jason-Krios and Porpion or whatever the spelling
Percy- Cronus, Atlas, Iapetus,Polybetes)
B: Clarisse and Reyna are alike
Ex. Both are daughters of warlike gods
Clarisse-Ares, Greek god of WAR
Reyna- Bellona, Roman goddess of WAR!
Both don't like Percy in the beginning
C: Annabeth and Hazel are alike
Ex. Both trust Percy
Both are smart
Both(I think) have trouble expressing their feelings
D: Nico and Frank are alike
Both have trouble expressing their feelings(in different cases.
Nico-How he was mad a Percy
Frank- How he loves Hazel)
F: Thalia and Hylla look alike
Ex. Both swear off boys
Both are skilled in fighting
Both get mad easily by Percy
What's your opinions?
This has nothing to do with death.........................sadly.
I have noticed that:
A: Percy and Jason are alike.
Ex. Both are son of a Big Three God
Both have defeated more than one titan.
(Jason-Krios and Porpion or whatever the spelling
Percy- Cronus, Atlas, Iapetus,Polybetes)
B: Clarisse and Reyna are alike
Ex. Both are daughters of warlike gods
Clarisse-Ares, Greek god of WAR
Reyna- Bellona, Roman goddess of WAR!
Both don't like Percy in the beginning
C: Annabeth and Hazel are alike
Ex. Both trust Percy
Both are smart
Both(I think) have trouble expressing their feelings
D: Nico and Frank are alike
Both have trouble expressing their feelings(in different cases.
Nico-How he was mad a Percy
Frank- How he loves Hazel)
F: Thalia and Hylla look alike
Ex. Both swear off boys
Both are skilled in fighting
Both get mad easily by Percy
What's your opinions?
now this is not the real first chapter ok it's mine:
Percy
I walked out with Hazel and Frank, the boat was already starting to land. I started to think about who was on it, I knew Annabeth would be but other then that I had no idea. There was a huge thud breaking me from my thought, the boat had landed. I watched with anticipation, then Annabeth came out of the boat scaning the crowd when she saw me she froze and began running tored me wnen she got to me she kissed me and i kissed her back.
I know it's not long but it is NOT REALY the chapter it's what i thought the book would start as when i finished th son of neptune
Percy
I walked out with Hazel and Frank, the boat was already starting to land. I started to think about who was on it, I knew Annabeth would be but other then that I had no idea. There was a huge thud breaking me from my thought, the boat had landed. I watched with anticipation, then Annabeth came out of the boat scaning the crowd when she saw me she froze and began running tored me wnen she got to me she kissed me and i kissed her back.
I know it's not long but it is NOT REALY the chapter it's what i thought the book would start as when i finished th son of neptune
FORGOTTEN
He who is Doomed to walk The Forgotten Road,
Knows only sorrow and pain ,
For he himself is a shadow,
with nothing but death to gain.
Refuge
The boy in shadow sheds a tear,
as the Scent of Dawn draws Day near,
for it brings with it the time for talking,
and the Lies he must tell send him walking,
into the shadows,and out of the Light,
as he seeks Refuge among the Night.
Well ,hope you like it!
If there was another cliffhanger what would you do?
Instead of just asking that how about we create on that would drive us crazy.
For example to you Percabeth lovers what would happen if Annabeth steps out of the shadows and says,"Do you remember me?"
Or to others the last sentence was, there was a ship heading towards camp.
I know if there was another cliff hanger i would burn the book or rip it to shreds. It's just ugh...
Oh and what if they got together (greeks and romans) then they goton the ship and were attacked *shakes head* We all either love or hate cliffies!
Instead of just asking that how about we create on that would drive us crazy.
For example to you Percabeth lovers what would happen if Annabeth steps out of the shadows and says,"Do you remember me?"
Or to others the last sentence was, there was a ship heading towards camp.
I know if there was another cliff hanger i would burn the book or rip it to shreds. It's just ugh...
Oh and what if they got together (greeks and romans) then they goton the ship and were attacked *shakes head* We all either love or hate cliffies!
