So this is my first try at a songfiction! Its Perfect, by P!nk, and this is for all those Lalia/Thuke fans out there! Constructive critism is appreciated:D
PERFECT
(THALIA'S POV)
I walked into the Artemis cabin, tired from a long game of capture the flag. I was going to go to bed when I noticed a packgage sitting on my bed. In neatly written cursive, it had the name Thalia on it. Curious, I opened it and found an Ipod in it. I put in the earphones and started listening,
Dear Thalia, I know that by the time you will be reading this, I will be long gone, but, the feelings are still there, so please....just listen to this for me...
Made a wrong turn, once or twice
The song paused and I gasped as I heard luke's voice.
When I was leading you and Annabeth to camp, I led you both into so many traps
Dug my way out of blood and fire
As fun as it was being on the runn with the two of you, we had practically escaped every possible monster...
Bad decsions, thats all right
I know it was wrong to give myself over to Kronos, but...
Welcome to my silly life
Honestly, do the Gods really expect us to lead a normal life? We're fricken demigods for Zeus' sake!
mistreated, misplaced, misunderstood
Iv'e always been treated horribly, take for granet, never taken seriously, and I am just so done with it!
"Miss, no-way-its-all-good"
but yet, whenever you come everyone relaxes a little, knowing that you've got everything under control
It didn't slow me down
When you were a tree, it was hard to keep going, but somehow i managed...barely
Mistaken, always secong guessing, underestimated, look im still around
Being a son of Hermes is hard, nobody takes me seriosly, nobody thinks that I can do anything, besides steal things, but I can do soo much more than that...
Pretty Pretty Please,
Dont you ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than Perfect
Thalia Grace, Daughter of Zeus, Lieutenant of Artemis, you are perfect
Pretty Pretty Please,
Don't you ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
You are perfect, to me-
This honestly may mean nothing to you, but you are perfect
your so mean, when you talk, about yourself, you are wrong
Honestly, Thals, you put yourself at such low standards, but when are you going to accept that your pefrect?
change the voices, in your head, and make them like you instead
Again, you doubt yourself too much! YOU ARE PERFECT!
So complicated
Why does our relationship have to be so complicated
Look how big you'll make it
Your an immortal daughter of Zeus, you'll go down in history
Filled with so much hatred, such a tired game
I used to have so much hatred towards the gods, and I was just so sick of doing their dirty work, and not getting anything in return!
It's enough, iv'e done all I could think of
I was so sick of it I resorted to my lst option, which I'm not proud of...
Chased down all my demons
Personally, I think I made the right choice sacrificing myself for the gods...
I'll see you do the same
Thalia, please listen to me! I know Gaea is starting to rise! She will come after the most powerful half bloods, which means that she will come after you; as hypocrytical as this may sound, just say no...don't give in, no matter what she tempts you with, say no, please...for me?
Pretty Pretty please,
Don't you ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than perfect
It hasn't changed, you are still, and always will be perfect
Pretty Pretty please,
If you ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
You are perfect, to me-
No matter what anyone says, to me, you will always be perfect.
Luke's voice paused, then said,
I know this won't mean much to you, Thals, but...I love you
The music stopped and Luke's voice was gone, I tear dripped down my face. This was the Luke I knew. This was the real him. This was the Luke that I loved.
PERFECT
(THALIA'S POV)
I walked into the Artemis cabin, tired from a long game of capture the flag. I was going to go to bed when I noticed a packgage sitting on my bed. In neatly written cursive, it had the name Thalia on it. Curious, I opened it and found an Ipod in it. I put in the earphones and started listening,
Dear Thalia, I know that by the time you will be reading this, I will be long gone, but, the feelings are still there, so please....just listen to this for me...
Made a wrong turn, once or twice
The song paused and I gasped as I heard luke's voice.
When I was leading you and Annabeth to camp, I led you both into so many traps
Dug my way out of blood and fire
As fun as it was being on the runn with the two of you, we had practically escaped every possible monster...
Bad decsions, thats all right
I know it was wrong to give myself over to Kronos, but...
Welcome to my silly life
Honestly, do the Gods really expect us to lead a normal life? We're fricken demigods for Zeus' sake!
mistreated, misplaced, misunderstood
Iv'e always been treated horribly, take for granet, never taken seriously, and I am just so done with it!
"Miss, no-way-its-all-good"
but yet, whenever you come everyone relaxes a little, knowing that you've got everything under control
It didn't slow me down
When you were a tree, it was hard to keep going, but somehow i managed...barely
Mistaken, always secong guessing, underestimated, look im still around
Being a son of Hermes is hard, nobody takes me seriosly, nobody thinks that I can do anything, besides steal things, but I can do soo much more than that...
Pretty Pretty Please,
Dont you ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than Perfect
Thalia Grace, Daughter of Zeus, Lieutenant of Artemis, you are perfect
Pretty Pretty Please,
Don't you ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
You are perfect, to me-
This honestly may mean nothing to you, but you are perfect
your so mean, when you talk, about yourself, you are wrong
Honestly, Thals, you put yourself at such low standards, but when are you going to accept that your pefrect?
change the voices, in your head, and make them like you instead
Again, you doubt yourself too much! YOU ARE PERFECT!
So complicated
Why does our relationship have to be so complicated
Look how big you'll make it
Your an immortal daughter of Zeus, you'll go down in history
Filled with so much hatred, such a tired game
I used to have so much hatred towards the gods, and I was just so sick of doing their dirty work, and not getting anything in return!
It's enough, iv'e done all I could think of
I was so sick of it I resorted to my lst option, which I'm not proud of...
Chased down all my demons
Personally, I think I made the right choice sacrificing myself for the gods...
I'll see you do the same
Thalia, please listen to me! I know Gaea is starting to rise! She will come after the most powerful half bloods, which means that she will come after you; as hypocrytical as this may sound, just say no...don't give in, no matter what she tempts you with, say no, please...for me?
Pretty Pretty please,
Don't you ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than perfect
It hasn't changed, you are still, and always will be perfect
Pretty Pretty please,
If you ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
You are perfect, to me-
No matter what anyone says, to me, you will always be perfect.
Luke's voice paused, then said,
I know this won't mean much to you, Thals, but...I love you
The music stopped and Luke's voice was gone, I tear dripped down my face. This was the Luke I knew. This was the real him. This was the Luke that I loved.
Okay, so I've decided to do a review for each of the five books, starting with of course, The Lost Hero. These are my opinions so please respect them, thank you:)
Character/Narrator Review
Jason: I didn't quite like him, but I didn't hate him either. I guess I'm more neutral to him than anything? When I rank the seven from best to worst, he'd probably be number 6, but before I read The Mark of Athena he would be number 7.
Anyway, onto reviewing his actual character. I don't know, I kind of found him to be the most boring character in this book, and I wasn't quite as hyped reading Jason...
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Character/Narrator Review
Jason: I didn't quite like him, but I didn't hate him either. I guess I'm more neutral to him than anything? When I rank the seven from best to worst, he'd probably be number 6, but before I read The Mark of Athena he would be number 7.
Anyway, onto reviewing his actual character. I don't know, I kind of found him to be the most boring character in this book, and I wasn't quite as hyped reading Jason...
*Round of applause for John Rocco*
Fire in his hands
Love in his heart
Pain in his eyes
Trouble about to start
Moving in rome
Finding his home
On the outside
Though he feels so alone
All the joking and laughter
Justbhides the pain
It hides all thenpain
That keeps him sane
He looks to his hands
And sees the flame dancing
He sits wishing
Wishing he could be special
You might say hes special
But he doesnt think so
Fixing everyones problems
Instead of his own
Feels like an ousider
Abandoned, and cold
Lost and lonley
Afraid and alone
He wants to fit in
To be a subject of power
But he just slides back down
Like nothing.
Though he isnt nothing
He is a special guy
And if you look him in the eye you will see
That all he wants is to be happy
And to remain that way for eternity.
the end
Love in his heart
Pain in his eyes
Trouble about to start
Moving in rome
Finding his home
On the outside
Though he feels so alone
All the joking and laughter
Justbhides the pain
It hides all thenpain
That keeps him sane
He looks to his hands
And sees the flame dancing
He sits wishing
Wishing he could be special
You might say hes special
But he doesnt think so
Fixing everyones problems
Instead of his own
Feels like an ousider
Abandoned, and cold
Lost and lonley
Afraid and alone
He wants to fit in
To be a subject of power
But he just slides back down
Like nothing.
Though he isnt nothing
He is a special guy
And if you look him in the eye you will see
That all he wants is to be happy
And to remain that way for eternity.
the end
