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posted by alicia386
Chapter Ten
Book Three- Sophie

TIME GOES BY FASTER THEN YOU REALIZE. MAKE THE BEST OF EVERY MOMENT. -Erica

      "But I am not mentally unstable," I said as dad whisked me out of the hospital with Carrie close by. 
      "If I believe that then we wouldn't be having this conversation," dad said. The doctors had ran multiple test and most of them were taken when I was sleeping. I was given the results back this morning. They described me as a mentally unstable person who should be checked into a mental institute very soon. Apparently, I was a danger to myself and others. 
      Madison had left a couple of days ago. She and her mom came by to check in me yesterday but. I haven't heard a word from her since. Another thing that bothered me was my sister's absence. "Please don't send me to the looney bin! I promise I am stable. It was just a freak out over the move and . . . her." I glanced sideways at Carrie who was too busy texting to notice my rudeness but dad noticed.
     He bent close to my ear. "Get over it, Soph," he said. "I love Carrie and soon you will might feel the same way. You might even accept her as your mother."
      "When pigs learn English," I said in an equally whispered voice.
      "I can make you some of your favorite spaghetti. Would that  are you feel better?" Carrie asked as she slipped her iPhone quickly in her Gucci knockoff.
      "Unless you can make it the way mom use too," I murmured stubbornly. That took her off guard for a moment but immediately regained composure. She engulfed my dad into a conversation about different spaghetti recipes.I refused to speak to any of them until we got home.
      The number one thing that had to be waiting for me at home with Zoe. She must have stayed behind to throw me a party. That would explain Madison not calling or texting me today. It would also explain why Zoe wasn't there with me at the hospital. It couldn't possibly be because I had been ignoring her lately. That couldn't be the problem. Sure we fight but she never takes it personally and neither do I.
      If I was going to be the guest of honor, I had to make sure I looked my best. I was decent when I left the hospital but now I had to be gorgeous when I stepped inside. My shoulder length black hair couldn't be anything less then perfection. The curls that I had spent hours curling last night were miraculously still in tact. Carrie had brought some clothes from home which was a huge mistake. Instead of just bringing me my stylish line green skinny jeans and ripped white shirt that goes over my lime green t-shirt. She brought me shrunken leopard print pants, a bright yellow crop top and sandals. She is out to get me. I swear it. 
      When we pulled up in the driveway, I half expected lawn guy, who Madison later told me is Shane, to show me inside. He would be shirtless and wrapping his arm around my waist. Nonetheless, I put together everything I could to make me more appealing then usual. It was much harder in these clothes. I braced myself for a loud welcome from the crowd as we stood by the door. Dad was fumbling with the keys. 'We must get you to Th Grey Realm soon. A ghost transformation will be occurring soon and since you are next in line for princess, you must attend.' The demon inside of me was back. I had to seem stable.
      As we stepped inside there was no crowd or anyone shouting welcome. It was just a dark house with a light from the tv shining from the living room. In the living room was Emma. She was relaxed on the couch watching some old film. If it was for my demon urging me to converse with her, I might have just ignored everything. I took one painful step after another until finally I was standing over her. 'Can you please move. This is the only episode I have left to watch before the season finale.'
      I didn't want to look unstable in front of dad so I told Emma to come with me to the attic. She followed me up their. The pain of no celebratory party was still on my mind but demon had a better control over me then I had over myself. I wish someone would come and save me but of course it does work like that. 'Repeat after me,' demon said. 'Emma you must take me to The Grey Realm and you must bring along my sister also.'
      Choking back a few tears I obediently repeated him. "Emma you must take me to The Grey Realm and you must bring my sister also."
      Emma stared quizzically at me. 'I see you have inherited your roots. Your sister should already be there waiting for you. Shall I take her to the castle, m king?' Emma glanced at me but it wasn't me. Sure it was my body and my eyes but she was looking past that. She was actually looking into the eyes of the beast. Or demon.
      'You shall do just that. Make sure they go to the holding cell and not a regular one and are you sure that Zoe is waiting for us at the castle? If she isn't then it will be your life and not Erica's,' The demon's voice was projected out of my throat and into the air. It took all of my energy to stop him. It was like trying to stop a speeding train.
     'I understand, my king,' Emma said. 'I swear on my life that Zoe is there.'
Writing Tip #1: Put off editing

Each of us works at writing on two levels:a creative, unconscious level and a critical, conscious level.

The unconscious produces creative and powerful words and images. It makes surprising and original connections. It shuts down if the critical "editor" part of your mind goes to work too soon.If your High School English teacher's voice runs through your mind as you write, if you worry about spelling, grammar, or how to sell your book while you write, you are writing with a dull pencil.

There are many books written on how to unlock your unconscious and let the writing...
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posted by dragonsmemory
(Dear Reader,
The story you are about to read is another Eden book. "The Guardian of Eden" is part of the Encounter series. Please keep in mind that some parts may be spoilers for other Eden Chronicles books.
The following story was originally written spring 2011 under the title "Hirach." It has since been changed. I hope you all enjoy this tale from Eden.
Jo)
A FANTASY NOVEL


PROLOGUE
THE FIRST GUARDIAN

Centuries ago, when humans began to exploitthe dragons' Knowledge and power for themselves, something had to be done. A special meeting of Parliament was called to address the problem. The king, who,...
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posted by alicia386
Sunday

There aren't that many places in Brunswick for kids my age to hang out besides the mall. There is the bowling alley which is kinda fun except they treat us like babies. The skate place is fun except there are so many cracks in the ground that make it hard to skate. There is, however, one awesome water park called Summer Waves. It has to be the best thing since slices bread. Jennifer told me that Tammie and Hazel would be there today. She dropped the hint because she knew I wants to get back together with my friends. She didn't tell me that Kyle would be there. I'm over Kyle now. I realized...
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posted by BlondLionEzel
Prologue

Once upon a time... there once was a Beautiful Princess... named Twilight...her hair was White...her eyes were blue...and she was the most beautiful in the land...

But there was only one problem... she had never loved... and that was her undoing... she had brought a young Wizard into the Castle... She was the most rude and mean person he had ever met...

So the young Wizard cursed her... and she was turned into a terrifying Dragon... and no one visited her ... Now no one would ever love her... everyone was afraid of her...

But she knew she would embrace love someday... someday ...

And that is where our story begins...
-Before we get started-

A/N: Forgot to mention this. This is kind of the first series I've written and published. Heck, Feay is my first idea. In case you haven't caught on, I'm new to fanpop. *Insert grinning face here*

-Now, to the story!-

Kayleen walked quickly through the woods. Faster than the teen could walk. Several times she had to wait for him to catch up. He felt embarrassed that he had a hard time keeping up with her, especially since he was only a couple years older. His head was bursting with questions to ask and headaches at the same time. But whenever he opened his mouth to speak,...
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posted by Problematic129
    25
    Darren
    “I think we are the luckiest people in the world,” Brooklyn said, panting as she took a chair.
    I groaned. “So much walking, so freaking long.”
    Iris rolled her eyes. “At least you guys were closer we were mile s away.”
    Zaria nodded. “Yep, and those guys, ugh, super creepy.”
    “What were you saying to me? About the lights in the school?” Terry asks.
    Zaria shudders. “It was so bizarre...
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posted by alicia386
August 25

      Shea Wainwright wore her red heels and the white miniskirt that looked fab with her white tank top. Her mother decided that it was a little too tight so she made Shea wear a white blazer over it. She stood in front of his door. She was read. Her friend Terra was standing by a bush with a camera. This was step one in the plan to destroy Chloe. If Eric was the kind of guy she knew him to be, then he will easily be jealous. It wasn't Eric she wanted to see. It was someone else.
      She ranged the doorbell a few times before glancing at Terra. Terra was also getting bored...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 29
    The first date of many
    Ryler whistled as I descended down the stairs, and I blushed and hit his arm, but I was smiling. I did a little twirl, and dip, smiling prettily.
    Ryler smiled. “You look…beautiful.”
    I looked shyly down to my heels, and then back up. Smiling, I patted his outfit. “You don’t look too bad at all, handsome.”
    And it was true. He wore the stupid tuxedo shirt, but it looked cute on him. With these nice jeans...
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posted by E-Scope90
My song I wrote I think it's awesome and emotional.

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I love that girl.
I love that girl.

I love that girl but I can't express
Do I love her more or less?
I love that girl but I can't explain
I just want to entertain
This is rough
Gotta get tough
I hear a sound
But there's nobody to be found!
Oh!
Love is so difficult...
I love that girl but how do I
convince her to love me too?
If does she already does too?
Is there someone else?
Why must love be so difficult?
Why must love...
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posted by 1999jacko
Both boys mouths were opened in shock at Miss Reynolds. She started to look puzzled at their expressions and finally said," what is there something on my face," she lent forward as she said this wiping her face all over. Drake shook out of the shock he was in and laughed before saying," no,no it's just your dead aren't you. You died ages ago and now your in front of us."The teacher started to laugh, her face turning as red as a tomato as she said," s-sorry about that little out burst one of my students put me under... anyway well I have the same powers as you and I was sent to look for more...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Talow clutched the plans, watching his fellow United Flame and Sword soldiers as they shook their heads and muttered amongst themselves. He saw a few lower their swords and guns just to have them raised again after receiving looks from their superiors.
“You don't understand, if we continue the way we are this war will never end! We'll continue fighting with the Bellators until who knows when.” He looked towards Luca who wouldn't make eye contact with him. “You use fuel like it can be dug from the ground instead of traded for at the market. You don't see that everything is running out...
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added by hgfan5602
posted by Max277
Chapter 6

Okay, so were was I last time before I got hurt? Oh right now I remember. So battling demons, to be honest it scares the living soul out of me. Pretty much that's what those evil things are after. Alright your probably thinking what in the world is she talking about, She was hurt! Yes I realize that. I am just going to give you some info about those ugly things. Okay.
Rule 1-Never try to reason with them. That's just stupid and they will take your soul.
Rule 2-Please don't look into there eyes! If you do let's just say you will be sorry.
Rule 3-Always have a wepon.
Rule 4-Don't and I mean don't let them ever sneak up on you. You'll be a goner.
Rule 5 last rule- Never have a really hot guy helping you trying to fight these things. You will be focused on him! Not the demon!
That's why I blame Nick. Damn why did he have to be so darn hot.

I open my eyes and lucky me. Guess who's hovering over me? A demon.
posted by amoremusic
I don't envy you for the life
that you had lived, you kept
yourself guarded by all of the
horrible things that could've
happened to you.

You tell me that you
don't want or need my
sympathy vote that you
won't take it from some-one
like me.

you came through the
most devastating part
of your life and that is
why i admire you so much.

I know that I don't
fully understand the
ignorance that you lived
in, I pray to God that i
never will, but you didn't
let that put you into a position
that left you feeling bitter-and
hating every-one who came
to know you and love you.

You survived and came
out of...
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posted by alicia386
Thursday

Lots to blog about. Today was interview day. The principal made all 8th graders go through a mock interview for the experience. We had to dress appropriate and respectable. I wore a tight black and grey dress with a black belt above the waist with black wedges. My interview guy was this old fart whose wrinkles hid his emotions. His face was so wrinkled that I couldn't tell whether he was smiling, frowning, or laughing. I think my interview went okay. When I got back with my circle of friends, they told me how their interviewers were complimenting them and saying how much they loved this resumes and cover letters. He didn't say anything nice or mean. He did however joke with me. In other glorious news, Kyle took me out for ice cream. How cool is that?! He had chocolate and I had vanilla. We sat and talked. It was just the two of us. By next week, Kyle will surely be my boyfriend.
posted by alicia386
Friday

The Preps decided that I was the girl on Chirps causing them drama. Chirps is a social network founded by Twitter that is only for teens. Chirps is a safe site that allows teens to just talk or in this case, cause some serious drama. Today they thought that I was the one causing drama on Chirps. As if! Do they honestly believe that I do not have life? Why would I waste my precious time trying to humiliate them on the internet. People who cause drama on the internet are only cowards. If I have something to say to you, then I will say it to your face. That isn't all that happened today....
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posted by sadiebugz00
3
WHAT TO DO?
Carter’s Perspective


No matter how shocking, yes, we dogs can think. Gasps galore, I know. Anyways, I sat there, somehow knowing that we weren’t playing hide-and-go –seek in this… place. I decided to get out of the road as I had realized that I was in the middle of the lane.
I faltered for a second, wondering if I should stay there just in case Derek was to come back. I finally decided there was no chance that he would be coming back. I wander out into the desert a bit, and then I looked back at the way that I had come from. I realized I couldn’t see the road anymore. Great…....
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posted by CatiePotter
"What happened?" I questioned myself as I got up. I was in my bed; how did I get there? I looked around my small bedroom. The house was scilent, the usual voices of my mother making breakfast was not there. There was no smell of pancakes or coffee as the usual breakfast was.

I looked across my bed to the stand with my alarm clock. 5 o'clock in the morning."Odd they should be up by now" I wondered.

There was a bang downstairs, like the car grauge door." What are they doing?"I asked myself. I stretched as I headed downstairs to the kitchen. As I krept down further there was more noises coming...
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posted by Weasel1999
II The Kitchen.

Unsure where to go Ember dithered in the corridor outside the nursery for almost ten minutes the next morning. But soon the delicious smell of apples and cinnamon reached her nose.
She followed the scent until she reached a large old fashioned kitchen. An old, wooden table, worn and scrubbed filled the middle of the room. It was the biggest kitchen Ember had ever saw. One side of the room was simply all cupboards and drawers of all different shapes and coloured. Ember’s curiosity burned but she was distracted by a large woman wearing an apron. She was taking a steaming apple...
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posted by alicia386
I'm hiding in my mom's closet. IT was the only way for me to be safe from . . . the mirror. I know this sounds ridiculous but you wil understand when you hear my story.

It all started when my friend, Bella, received an ancient mirror from her grandmother. Her granny had said it shows the truth within someone.

Everything was okay at first. Bella used the mirror rarely to fix her hair or something. Then things took a change for the worst.

Our other friend, Hanna, was sitting next to Bella at the lunch table so I sat next to them. Hanna was desperately trying to tell bella about her encounter with...
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