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posted by Dragonclaws
(Note: This was a blog article I wrote last year just after seeing the movie in theaters)

I recently saw the movie version of Twilight. I’ve been a fan of the book series for quite a while, before it became quite the phenomenon it is currently, and found the movie enjoyable entertainment. So, I’ve found it kind of disappointing how militantly opposed some people on the Internet can be toward the franchise. I, of course, understand if some people can’t get into it (I can’t seem to get the appeal of Hannah Montana, myself, despite its popularity), but I find the hateful criticism that has been thrown at it to be largely unwarranted. The Twilight series has been targeted mainly for perceived sexism, an abusive boyfriend portrayed as desirable, pedophiles treated as good guys, promoting Mormonism, as well as just plain bad writing. Now, obviously I can’t convince people who don’t enjoy it to do so, but I feel as a fan that the attacks thrown out at Twilight should be defended.

First of all, the Twilight series, and Twilight in particular (as that’s the book that started it off), is very much a fantasy about having a vampire boyfriend. I have little doubt that the story was created as a way of expressing the author’s own romantic fantasies through the protagonist Bella’s interactions with love interest Edward, which is also supported by comments on the official website about the story being based off of a dream. The story is written compellingly enough that a wide body of readers is able to fit into the persona of Bella and love Edward.

Edward himself is written as the most desirable guy on the face of the Earth. He has vampirically enhanced features that are model-perfect, even more so. It’s not just his handsome face that is described in worshipful detail, but the sound of his voice, the feel of his cold and marble-hard skin, and even the smell of his breath. Adding in the fact that he possesses super speed, super strength, immortality, and the ability to read the minds of almost everyone but Bella herself and he seems like a godly personification.

However, Edward does have his flaws. He is a vampire, which means he constantly feels the desire to eat people, Bella in particular. Bella smells like his favorite meal, like his “own personal brand of heroin,” prompting a fascination and stalker-ish obsession. At first, he avoids her and treats her with unwarranted anger for arousing his predatory instincts. Bella, however, continues to pursue him and he changes his mind, deciding to indulge his obsessive inclinations by sneaking into her room at night to watch her sleep and covertly following her around, eventually seeking out a proper relationship.

What is attractive about Edward as a predatory vampire is, I believe, the dangerous power associated with the character and its potential to be used maliciously. There’s something enthralling about imagining myself in the position of Bella, infatuated with this dark, beautiful, and powerful man and knowing he could kill her should he lose willpower for just an instant. He has a similar appeal as bad boy vampire Spike of Buffy the Vampire Slayer, with the noted difference that Spike is essentially a sociopath and incapable of genuine empathy (I refer to Spike without a soul, as Spike with a soul loses much of his bad boy charm in my opinion). Unlike Spike, Edward has never killed the innocent and carries guilt of his time killing murderers, and struggles to maintain his “vegetarian diet” (i.e. he only eats animal blood). Edward has the bad boy appeal without actually being bad where it counts.

Edward: And the lion fell in love with the lamb.
Bella: What a stupid lamb.
Edward: What a sick, masochistic lion!

Apart from Edward, the major issue critics have with the books is the supposedly pedophilic protagonist of Breaking Dawn, Jacob Black. Both Jacob and his friend Quil become infatuated with prepubescent children, the fast maturing baby Renesmee and three-year-old Claire respectively, as a result of imprinting. Imprinting is a condition affecting the Quileute shapeshifters in which they view a certain person as their soul mate and can only feel complete when they are with that person. Both of them honestly love the people on who they have imprinted, but it is not a sexual love.

ped•o•phil•i•a (pěd'ə-fĭl'ē-ə, pē'də-)
n. The act or fantasy on the part of an adult of engaging in sexual activity with a child or children.
The American Heritage® Dictionary of the English Language, Fourth Edition
Retrieved November 26, 2008, from Dictionary.com website: link

Jacob Black is not a pedophile and nor is Quil. What they feel is weird, yes, but I don’t see it as something on which it is inherently harmful to act. Jacob and Quil are not creepy pedophiles, but rather boys who feel the kind of love of an older family member feels toward their young imprintees. They’re like the model babysitters and preschool teachers who seriously love their kids and want to see them happy, albeit with their love situated on specific people. When the kids age to the point that the average adult would find them attractive, it can be assumed that the shapeshifters will want to pursue a romantic relationship, but at that point the playing field is pretty much level and age is no longer an issue.

In addition, Jacob’s love for Renesmee should only be worrisome, in my opinion, within the first weeks of her life. Renesmee is a half-vampire baby and has her own extraordinary abilities to give her a noted advantage in life. For one, she matures both physically and mentally at an accelerated rate. She was born into the world already aware and was drawn to her soul mate, Jacob. Her power of telepathically sending images and emotions into persons’ heads allowed her to communicate effectively while she was still nonverbal. Once she achieved the motor skills to walk and talk, I would imagine much of the concern that usually goes with adults seeking romantic relationships with prepubescent children to be irrelevant in light of the unique circumstances of this particular situation.

In response to the common complaint that Twilight is written poorly, I would have to say that the concept of good literature is highly subjective. I personally could barely get through the classic piece of literature Tarzan, which I view as cheesy pulp fiction without the kind of realistic drama that makes a story interesting to me. I recognize that Tarzan is a very popular story, however, and will accept that we people of Earth are different and different people will find different things entertaining. Personally, I can really get into the writing style of Twilight, which reminds me of the beautiful sound of the wind on a rainy day as the thunder booms in the distance. Ah, well, to each their own.

Finally, I have read numerous blog articles criticizing author Stephenie Meyer’s decision to incorporate religious themes and messages into the book series. Stephenie Meyer is Mormon and as the kind of stuff she would find entertaining would naturally fit into her worldview, it makes sense for Twilight to have Mormon themes. That said, as an atheist who often cringes at the religious messages people put into their novels, Twilight really isn’t that bad. If you don’t want to believe in the kind of philosophies illustrated in the Twilight novels, you can reject it without feeling like you’re not welcome (in contrast to much of Orson Scott Card’s work).

In conclusion, I find most of the hate against Twilight running rampant on the Internet to be overblown. Surely, Twilight is not the kind of epic, involved, and progressive story like Harry Potter or Buffy the Vampire Slayer. However, for what it is, which is an intimate fantastical romance story that can be appreciated by a large quantity of people, it is of high enough quality to achieve high popularity. This should be respected even if the story doesn’t appeal to everyone.
beeing part vampire gave me the speed being part human gave me tiedness so onse i reached italy i could feel it starting. i couldnt feel it much though.
i walked to the phile of stair i have only heard so little about. which led down to the hallway that i have only seen onse before. knocking on the big door.
"come in" a voice called
taking a deep breath i slowly began to open the door.
"oh renesmee what a delight to see you hear" as i entered the room a bunch of people had there heads together but as soon as my name was mentioned three heads snapped up.
"aro" i nodded
"it great to see you again....
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posted by twilight-7
A few days later…

“Are you sure you’re okay?” Alice asked me. Her golden eyes narrowed as she read my face.
I forced a nod and a smile while I waited for the pain to subside after another kick from the baby. Her nudges had now turned into kicks and they were becoming more painful. Each little movement from her resulted in one of my internal organs getting a beating.
I was sat in the living room of the Cullen household, with Alice, Rosalie and Esme. They were given guard duty by Edward who had gone hunting with his brothers. Alice glanced at Rosalie who glanced at Esme who watched me...
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Hello, My Name Is: Death
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[PREVIOUSLY]
    Hi, my name is Cyd, short for Cydnee, and one day while I was grocery shopping, a former member of the Death Clan of the Fallen threw a knife at my head. I ducked behind my cart, and ran out of the store once I saw the knife fly into a bunch of egg cartons. I went home, told my friend Tabra about it, and he came rushing over. He helped me get out of the aftershock feeling, and when we were eating chicken sandwhiches, mine was coated in poison. We then went to his apartment,...
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Hello, My Name Is: Death
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[SIX]
    "Oh my god," I said and sat in the chair Jerek did when I went to take a shower.
    "So, what do we do, doc?" Tabra asked.
    "We try to get him back. Tabra run outside and see if you can still-"
    "It's too late," I interrupted.
    "How so?" She asked.
    "We don't know what time he was take, we just know he was taken between the ten minutes of my shower, which means that he could...
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posted by sh0rtiinedward
As we run into the woods, a very strong part of me hold me back and yelled at me to comeback home, but i just can't do it, i knew that something was wrong but i had to be with Julius and if my parents didn't like the idea they have to deal with me leaving home

"Rennesme what's wrong love are you ok" Julius said to me as he wrap me from my waist and kiss my forehead. i can't understand this pain in his face like if something were wrong, i don't think is me or that he is worried about me.I think is something more important and i have to find out what it is.

"yes i just worried, about what's going...
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posted by sh0rtiinedward
All night i started thinking in Julius, he is the most beautiful thing i ever seen, but there's something about him that make me scare but i don't know what it is.
"Nessi baby, can we talk" i turn around when i hear my dad's voice and i froze, i know that he will tell me that i was grounded of something.
"Mm sure dad, what's up?"
"Well like you know, i know what happen today in the woods, i just want to let you know that I'm not mad at you i just, want you to be happy, and meet new people, but take it easy you know that we have a secret to hide from the real word" he said as he huge me
"i know...
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Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Three
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[THIRTEEN]
    "Alright, let's begin." Jerek said and started the topic of discussion for the meeting. "You all remember Haus, and his grip of terror over us all. But here we are today, The Alliance, forming against him, for one day he shall fall, and we shall win. That day, is sneaking up on us fast. We need to be ready. We need to be quick, agile, ready to kill at will. I don't know how much of an army, or how many people Haus has under his Death Clan of the Fallen, but I will tell you that...
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Hello, My Name Is: Death
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[TWELVE]
    Ok, so here is what we figured out: We had to kill Haus, no matter how long it takes us. We have to kill him. Duh, but I mean, we can't wait for him to attack, we have to attack him! But how?
    "Didn't that doctor say he was immortal?" I pointed out and they both nodded.
    "You caught that, huh?" Tabra said and I nodded.
    "Well, he is."
    "How? Is he a God or the son of Nicholas Flamel or...what?"...
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Hello, My Name Is: Death
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[THREE]
    "Seriously?" I asked him.
    "Well, seeing how I still need to heal, yea."
    "Oh yea," I wondered what would happen if we were running from the cops and I thought that we would be caught. For one thing, having a wounded man named Tabra, would probably be hard to run from cops in. I could probably make it, but Tabra probably couldn't. And I can't, I won't, let this happen to us, or him.
    "So, how long do you think it'll take...
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Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Three
BuffyFaithfan1
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[PREVIOUSLY]
    Hi, my name is Cyd, short for Cydnee, and one day while I was grocery shopping, a former member of the Death Clan of the Fallen threw a knife at my head. I ducked behind my cart, and ran out of the store once I saw the knife fly into a bunch of egg cartons. I went home, told my friend Tabra about it, and he came rushing over. He helped me get out of the aftershock feeling, and when we were eating chicken sandwhiches, mine was coated in poison. We then went to his apartment, knowing...
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( Some of you who have read my previous chapters know that in Renn and Jake's Life Chapter 23, I mentioned events of Nessie's "17th" birthday. I decided to write a chapter on the story of that event. I hope you like it! )

I woke up and noticed that it was still dark outside, but I didn't care. Today I, and my family would officially consider me an adult. It felt so good, that I was just jumping with excitement.


I was tired of them making decisions for me. I wanted so bad to be free, and this was my chance.

I glanced towards the window, and could see just barely the reddish tint around the edges...
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posted by sh0rtiinedward
i didn't know what to do when i saw Jacob in front of my house, so as soon the car stop i got out but as soon he saw me he took off running to the woods, i follow him for 2 minutes until he stop.

"I came to fix everything, Bella call me to come and talk to you, but now you have things more important" he said very angry and with tears in his eyes, i never saw him like this.
"Jacob I'm sorry, mom never told me anything, and nothing is more important than get all thing straight up with you" i said to him as i try to hug him but he move right away.
"You know what Rennesme, i have to go, go and have...
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Hello, My Name Is: Death
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    I ran inside, and the receptionist told me room 10 but to wait a few hours until the doctor told me I could visit him. I went to the waiting room and sat down. The news was on, and I listened as they talked about the Wal-Mart we just fled.
    "Thanks Tammie, it seems that a young girl and her boyfriend have went into this Wal-Mart and murdered innocent people. We have more from this survivor Haus Triggsom. Haus?"
    "Thanks Jim, yea I was attacked and...
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posted by BuffyFaithFan1
Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume One
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[SIX]
"By killing you."
I jumped up and started walking backwards, how could I trust Tabra if he was going to kill me!?
"What?" I asked.
"I mean, I'll call them up and bring you to them, after they think I'm back on their side, we pull out the big guns and kill them before they kill us."
OH MY GOD, BIG SIGH OF RELIEF!!! Am I right? "Oh," I sat back down and we fished out our game plan.
Two hours later, we had a good, solid plan that will work perfectly...if they buy the fact that Tabra is "back on their side". It seemed like a good plan, and even though I knew that I'd be the main subject in this little cat-and-mouse game of deadly horror, I knew it was the best thing to do.
I looked at Tabra as he asked me if I was up to doing this. I looked him in the eye, and said, "Yes, I am."
posted by BuffyFaithFan1
Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume One
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[FIVE]
"Oh my god!" I said and backed up into the wall.
"Don't worry! Don't worry! I'm not a member, I used to be, but I'm not anymore. Once I saw how...how evil they were, I couldn't stay. They told me all they do is bring justice among the world...and once I got there, they served themselves with murder. I couldn't stand that. I was only a member long enough to have this brand branded on me...and then I fled the place like a bat out of hell!"
I couldn't believe Tabra was a member of the Death Clan of the Fallen! I mean,...
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posted by BuffyFaithFan1
Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume One
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[TWO]
Okay, so around a half hour later, my friend Tabra finally got here. I'm feeling a little bit more at ease, but I'm still holding the gun when he entered.
"Are you okay, Cydnee?" He asked me, sitting down on the couch by my feet.
"Yea, I'm fine. Just feeling the aftershock of almost getting a knife impaled to my face." I said and looked at him. "How are you?"
"I'm doing good actually. But, I'm really worried for you, Cyd." He saw the gun and his eyes widened. "What are you gonna do with that gun?"
"Use it."...
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"so you whole name is renesme? and nothing els?"
i smiled. " my name is renesmee carly cullen black but most people just call me nessie for short"
"so you single?" jay asked.i thought he was ment to be shy?
"jay you just carnt go asking random people if there single or not" sam mock punched his arm "but are you?"
"guys leave her alone if she dont wonna answer she doesnt have to" i gave a nervouis chuckle
"thats allright and yeah i am" i admitted as i tried to supress a sigh.
"wow really? i mea no offence but that shocks me cause your fiiiiiiine" jay spaced the word out placing his hands on the...
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Nessie Black
Nessie Black
I sat at the kitchen counter, gazing at the ring on my finger. I'm not ready to take off the ring Jake gave me, not yet. I know if Will sees it that he will be frustrated with me, but my heart still can't let go of Jake.

It has been the hardest thing for me to make Will think I love him. Kisses with no meaning, words of love, that on the inside I am taking back. It is like Jake is stuck to me. Imprinting is really powerful, because it is sure causing me physical strain.

I look over and see Micah appear. He is wearing his cute blue feety pajamas. He also has his treasured blanky in his hand....
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A Youtube Script:
Episode Three:
*Dead Soon*
(Jasper’s P.O.V):
*Thinking*
I never thought about how short a life span is.
And Bella’s was very short.
Mine was everlasting.
Forever.
I couldn’t be trampled.
I wished I could.
And I certainly do not blame Edward for wanting me dead.
I would want me dead too.

(Black Screen)
*Reminder: this is two days after the accident*
Alice’s P.O.V:
Bella: Ever since the accident Edward’s been freaking out.
Alice: Well I’ve been *vomits*
Bella: Ali what’s wrong with you? *worried*
Alice: I’m not sure but *vomits*
Bella: You have got to Carlisle. *pats her back*
Alice:...
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posted by a-jforever
Ok heres the start of my new fanfiction. Enjoy.XX

I dropped the gun to the floor. I was thirsty enough not to care about what Kate would say; she needed to get a life. I mean she seriously needed to get a life. She lived off reading about the deaths her crew committed. I sprung out of the tree landing neatly on my feet.

“Who...” The woman asked.

“Shhhh...I won’t hurt you.” What a lie I thought to myself trying to keep the smile off my face.

“What...what do you want of me?” She stuttered. I instantly flashed to her side, taking her hand leaning closer to her.

“I won’t hurt you.”...
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