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Naruto Shippuden Fail

posted by LeoPenguino

Alright, well as all you naruto fans may know, the new movie Blood Prison has recently came out. I finish watching the movie and it made me completely mad...
The main conflict in Naruto Shippuden is Akatsuki and their plan to rule the world with the Eye of the Moon Plan. In this movie, the Grass Village wants to accomplish the exact same thing... but with a box that grants you any wish.
The Akatsuki is know to be the toughest and have the most skilled people in its clan... so why would they have not just used the box from the Grass Villa the from begging if it holds such immense power. Why would the masked guy known as Tobi go through the process of capturing all the Jinchūriki when he could just grant a wish for all his plan to happen...
This is what left me thinking what in the world is this...

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Arrowbound- Chapter 1

posted by Skitty_Love

Heather. Illustration(c)PhoenixRoyale

It was a cool Autumn, just like any other. It relaxes me, feeling the cold press up against my face. My elder sister, Allisyn loved this time of year, because that was the time of the Archer's Tournament. I never really cared, even if she asks me to support her. It was such a dull & tedious event. I've always thought that it was lame, even when I was little. Not exactly my cup of tea.
"Honey, do you think you might feel like going to your sister's Tournament this year? I don't see why you never want to go, you could learn a thing or two from her, if you decide to learn how to handle a bow...

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Forbidden Love (CHAP. 5)

posted by DxCFan123

MONTH 10

Kat's POV
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"I think they're dating..." some girl said to her friend as we passed them, holding hands. We didn't care what they said, and all of it was true. We were dating, we were in love with eachother. We kissed eachother in public, we held hands, we told eachother we loved them every 5 minutes. I didn't like to wonder what would happened when Will found out about this, or what I would do when his time came.

AFTER SCHOOL
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"Love you, Sadao." I told him.
"Love you, too, babe."
We kissed eachother, and thought of what to do, considering it was Friday. "We could go out to eat again!" I suggested. "Just somewhere except for that sushi place, I'm getting tired of that place." So, we decided to go to a pizza place a couple blocks down.

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Excuse the shortness of this chapter.

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A Dark Mark and a lightning bolt scar.

posted by GryffindorGirl2

Jasmine's POV

The freezing darkness pressed down on me,Harry,and Dudley.
"S-stop it you two.Now.It-it's not funny." Dudley stammered.
"We're not doing anything Dudley!" I shouted over the wind.
"I swear,if you don't stop it,I-I'll hit y-you." Dudley said again.
"Shut up Du-.." Harry began.
WHAM!
The sound of Dudley's fist connecting with Harry's jaw sounded beside me.
"Ow! God Dudley!" Harry shouted.
Before I had time to react,my feet were kicked out from underneath me and I fell to the ground,slamming my already hurt head on the ground.My spine seemed to jolt out of place,then back in,making me moan...

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A Dark Mark and a lightning bolt scar.

posted by GryffindorGirl2

Jasmine's POV

Harry and I walked to the park.The hot,dry,humid summer air blowing at out backs.My hair wipped around me,hitting my face and getting in my eyes.No sooner had I moved it away,that the wind blew it back.My sweat shirt fell around my shoulders,but I pulled it back up.The wind continued to blow,and as I listened,fell into a rythem.The sound of Harry and mine footsteps falling on the quiet street sounded like clapping.I raised my arms to the sky and began spinning in circles as I walked.I began to sing,my voice blending with the wind and our footsteps.
"What doesn't kill you makes...

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Screams of the Hunted Ch.2

posted by DarkGirl23

The first time I went on a hunt, was the first time I really saw death in any sort of being’s eyes.
I don’t know who I am, what I am. I mean, I couldn’t possibly be considered part of the Hunters. Yet, their blood runs through my veins. They may own an incapability of understanding the true emotions of life, for we have been Genetically-Altered Experiments planned all the way back in 2012. Our bodies and our emotions have become that of a true fighter, a warrior of destruction itself in a world of Nature’s grace that becomes altered in the palms of our Humanoid Species.
We can defeat...

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Darkness Locked Into The Heart: Chapter Two, OutSider

posted by InvadaMiz

Over most of the left side it's face was a skull mask, three long tusks, the shortest one in the middle, the other two were the same length.The room grew colder, Meggan shivered."Wh- what do you want?"Meggan asked.The room got cold enough to see one's breath."Your mortal soul, why else?"StarBurst told her, his teeth as sharp as a razor-edge.Meggan scrambled against the wall, she had her eyes wide open, her mouth also wide open.StarBurst climbed onto the bed, he was the size of a wolf.He put a paw over her heart, then faded away.Meggan felt another stabbing pain in her heart.She hit the nurse button and passed out again.

The next day, Meggan woke up at home.Another wolf like demons sat at the foot of her bed.She rubbed her eyes, it was still there."Wh- who are YOU?"Meggan asked scaredly."I'm Outsider."The demon said, then it wandered around.Every step it made shook the ground a bit.He walked through the wall, and didn't come back.

StarBurst

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Story I Came Up With In Class, For NO Reason

posted by InvadaMiz

The Demon Locked Into The Heart

Meggan was your average school girl.Blue glasses and short dark blue hair, Meggan was always the one they picked on.She only talked when her best friend was talking to her.Her name was Claire, Claire was the happy-go-lucky type of girl.Claire's joyfulness has gotten her out of arguements every time she tried.Meggan and Clair were walking down the hall as usual."Hey Claire?"Meggan said looking over to her."What?"Claire asked looking over to Meggan.Some random kid walked by and knocked the books out of Meggan's arms, Meggan gave a glare that just said "Drop dead,...

Perfectly Crooked - Chapter 1

posted by GummyBears_11

As screwed up as my life was, I always found joy in singing. I sang everyday, no matter what happened. Singing helped me remember a better time. A time when 'he' wasn't around. A time when my mother WAS around. A time when I wasn't alone.

Chapter 1- Ring Around The Rosies

I jerked awake. I was covered in cold sweat, and I still had flashbacks of the nightmare stuck in my head.

"No! Mother, please, don't go!"

There was no use in falling asleep again. It was already 6:40, and soon enough, my stepfather would barge in my room, yelling at me to get up, calling me names, threatening to beat me....

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The girl in the sundress and biker boots

posted by problematic124

Let's say your walking down the street and you see a girl on the other side of the road.Looks like a sweetheart or a nice person wearing a light green sundress. At first glance you don't give the girl a second thought but if you looked more closely you would have seen the biker boots and the heavy jewelery. And yet her face and her dress looked like sunshine.
You may think the girl weird or strange but that's just how she dress. Though you don't have the guts to go up and ask her about it. Why? Because it's rude to ask why she dresses like that and you just want to keep on going to your destination....

Tangled Love- Chapter 1: Surprise, Surprise...

posted by cutie_hunter123

"Oh my gawd! Lauren, you like Jack?!" Said Koshi. I blushed and replied,"... Yeah, so what?" she gave me a puzzled look, and then she caught up with my question of curiosity and rolled her eyes and said, "So what? Do you even know the reason why it's a problem?" I shrug and say, "No," her face starts to get red like a cherry. I cross my arms, and shifted my weight on my left leg. "Why? Is it a problem if I like Jack?" Koshi looked down and looked at me like I should've heard."He wasn't a good boyfriend." I raised my eyebrows.What? Why hasn't anybody told me that Koshi and Jack were going out? Why? "Oh.My.GAWD!"

Wands and Spells: Chapter 3

posted by Skitty_Love

Celeste's POV

As I walked through the leave-crunching forest, a familiar scent started past my nose. "I know this smell, I just can't name it.. Hmm..." I tried to forget about it and move on but it began to bug me. Soon after I stomped through, the irritating smell getting my temper up. "Teehee, w-wow.. I love this spell book my father gave me!" I perked up anxiously. A voice? A-a girl voice.. She didn't sound like anyone I knew.. Should I find her? What if shes a wi.. No, she couldn't. I cautiously walked toward the voice, and you know what was weird? The smell began to rose. I was itching...

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Love is Wild: Chapter 25

posted by sawfan13

I got out my cooking bag and my little travel oven. I was going to do my best making Lil and Howl's wedding cake. I know I seem like a nerd taking a travel oven and a cooking bag, but I love cooking wherever I go. It's weird, but you never know when you need it! I was rummaging through my bag, but there was one important thing missing. The flour. I can't make this cake without flour, and wedding with no cake just doesn't make any sense to me! I just wanted to get started on it while Howl is teaching Lilith to vine swing. Not to sound rude about my sister after reconciliation, but Lilith isn't...

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Stardom Chapter 2 - Elaine and Blaine, Mischievous Twins

posted by Vampiyaa

"This is beautiful!" Aiko breathed. Elaine beamed and laughed, "I knew you'd love it!" Elaine had called Aiko's apartment at five in the morning, telling her (well, more like yelling at her) to come to a spot in the park. In that spot was a bench facing a brilliant, crystal-clear waterfall that flowed around the bench like a sparkling moat. An authentic wooden bridge with white and blue roses woven in the railings connected the park with the solitary bench.
"We're going to meet your brother in such a beautiful place?" Aiko gaped.
"Yeah!" Elaine exclaimed, flopping down on the bench and grinning...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 11

posted by Insight357

I sat on the floor, looking outside. It was snowing, and you could see icicles hanging from the top of the window. It was so cold in the room I could see my breath.
    I looked around the empty room; I was alone. In that moment I felt if nothing were inside me. As if, something had devoured my soul. I was resigned, and nothing seemed to phase me.
    Suddenly, lightning flashed, and hail came down. Making pops as it hit the roof. Black clouds filled the sky, making for an ominous feel. I stood, and went to the window, to find the snow gone.
    The...

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Hells Outlaw - Chapter 15

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 15

Jax felt he had been pounding on the door of Bone’s garage for an hour. Finally, he heard the click of the lock and they door opened and he was greeted by the barrel of a shotgun.
“Whoa Bone come on its just me,” Jax said quickly with his hands up in surrender as Bone stepped closer to him without lowering his gun.
“Yeah I know it’s you, the hell you doin’ here?” Bone replied. His voice was raspy like he had a sore throat.
“I’m not drunk if that’s what you’re thinkin’.”
“No? Then why are you here?”
Bone kept his shotgun pointed at Jax.
“Look, I just escaped...

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Hells Outlaw - Chapter 13

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 13

The hallways of the hospital were dead silent except for the beeping noises of the heart monitors from the patient rooms and random coughing. Jax slowly and silently stepped passed each door not wanting to spook anyone and draw attention to him. So far it was working.
Finally, he reached an elevator and pressed the down button, hoping that no one was on the other side of the door.
The door binged loudly as it reached his floor and Jax held his breath waiting to see a doctor or security on the other side. It opened and he let out a huge sigh to an empty elevator.
He stepped inside and...

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Love is Wild: Chapter 23

posted by sawfan13

Howl looked over at Debbie, as Lilith was gone helping the baby monkey find his mother. He looked over at her and said,"I want to marry Lilith." Debbie stared at him and said,"What?" "I want to marry your sister, Lilith. Please." Debbie stared at Howl for the longest time, as Howl patiently waited for her answer. Debbie smiled and said,"You really do love her, don't you?" Howl smiled and said,"Yes. She's my everything. Without her, I would be alone and not know what my purpose in life is. Now I know, and I know it from looking at her and from what she has taught me. I always thought my life...

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Love is Wild: Chapter 21

posted by sawfan13

I awoke to Howl's victory yelling. Urgh! I don't care how awesome and attractive that yell may be, but it is WAY TOO LOUD for early in the morning!!! I threw my pillow, trying to hit the tree branch, as my sister woke up, doing the same thing. Debbie yelled,"Howl! You woke up me and Lilith! Look, your yell is cool and all, but not so early in the morning!" Howl looked at her and started growling and barking like a wolf, but Debbie was brave and said,"Don't you give me that! Stop giving me that dirty look! You know better than that!" I started giggling and said,"So what, your Mother of the Jungle,...

Hell's Outlaw--Chapter 8

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 8

The highway was strangely quiet tonight.
On a typical Friday night Officer Ranald would see 20 cars every 5 minutes but since the early evening there hasn’t been one car except for a few semi-trucks. In his 25 years as an officer, this was a rare occurrence.
His patrol car sat parked in a shallow ditch in the darkness so that any driver going over the speed limit would never see him until it was too late. One of the many perks of being a highway patrol officer.
But tonight it was boring him to death.

With his window rolled down the outside air was cool and fresh making him feel more...