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The untold reality ( part 1)

posted by r260897

( Hi I am here with another story. In this where ever is ‘I’ please consider yourself there )
Mei was busy with her laptop, Tia and Rocket were sitting in a corner D’jok and Thank were enjoying funny performance of Micro Ice. Ahito was sleeping and I was sitting in one corner waiting for Sinned. There was a loud sound coming from another room. Arch was scolding Sinned for his deeds he did in match. When he came he was a bit angry but when I went there he looked with his caring eyes and said “hey l’ll sis I’ll come to take you. Till then live here coz my life is kinda unsettled…”...

A Little Too Curious (part 8)

posted by noahnstar1616

"What does it taste like", asked the girl who gave me the piece of meat.

"Blueberry pancakes."

"Is that your favorite food?"

I nodded. "Why does it taste like that?" Before I could get an answer, the other girls sat in a circle around the fire. We went and joined them.

"Sisters", said the girl who gave me that piece of meat. "We have a new family member."Meet Sister Vanessa."

"Welcome Sister Vanessa", said everyone.

"How do you know my name?"

"We're Sisters, Vanessa. We know everyone's name."

"I don't know any of you."

"That's because your not at full power."

"Oh." I was sure she meant I wasn't done...

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Bare Bone's chapter 1 part 2

posted by Lore_Master

As the Hero awoke he found himself in a dark hallway "wha...what happened?" he thought to himself as he wondered aimlessly down the hallway trying to get his bareings, he saw a faint light flickering only for a moment giveing him only enough time to make out where he was "wait.... no it can't be." he said running down the hallway toward's the light, while he was running he noticed picture's of his family confirming exactly where he was "this couldn't be..... my old house burnt down 5 year's ago.." he said stopping to notice one of the door's open with barely any light barely any light comeing...

Koun no neko (Lucky cat) Character guide

posted by madening_mahem

The main characters' Profiles and about them.
Name:Miki Nakamura
Age:15
Gender: female
Creature:human
Height:167 cm. (5'6)
Skin:Peach
Blood type:AB
Hair Color:Blue (and purple, and pink, ect.)
Hairstyle:semi-long
Eyes:grey
About Me:A very unlucky girl. Her parents are most always overseas, and she has no grandparents, so she's always alone, she has friends but she's always busy so she usually can't hang out with them except on holidays and weekends. she can cook and clean, so she maintain's her house fairly well. she's also very curious, which would explain why she found the box, that the male Neko -...

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(The First Story I Wrote) In The Eyes Of Death: Chapter One

posted by wolfclan121

The car crash changed my life. It changed so much, that i'm not even living anymore. I walk the earth as a kinderd-spirit. Dead, forever. I follow my family sometimes. At one stage they actually thought they had a mouse infestation. For the one hundredth time i'm sorry I broke your vase,Jannet. My daughter, she loves collecting china and other lovely trinkets and stuff like that. For a sixteen year old she does have a lot. But Mike on the other hand, he loves cars,wants to become a famous race car driver. I worry for him, making his dreams so young, I did too. And look where it got me! Dead in my husband's car right in front of my kids! Of course, that was many years ago. On the road to becoming a famous song writer.

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Smothered-Prologue

posted by dawnisbeauty

Prologue
Randall regarded her with pride.His finest.Her skin was ebony-black,her eyes a sinister grey,hair pale,wintry white.She stared at him blankly,her tall,slender frame tense.Randall stroked her cheek and tucked a lock of her hair behind her ears.Lethal,she was.Designed to perfection for the task she was set.Despite the obvious arrogance in her gaze,he deemed her the best."Tell me,who are you?"he tested."Layla"she answered."And I?".
"Master."she said."Tell me,"he asked her,taking her large,clawed hands."how do you use these..assets?"."To serve Master."Randall smiled."Good'he said."Very Good indeed.""How do you do that,my lovely?"he purred.Her eys stared straight ahead."Kill"she whispered."Kill for Master"

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Diamond of Destiny 1# Me? Chapter one: Her royal Highness

posted by -Awsomeness-

Mica and Amanda walked out of Maya's house, followed by Maya herself. The air was crisp, not a cloud in the sky, and the sun beat down on their heads. Day birds sang their songs. Male and female Cardinals caring for their young. Their bikes were stationed at the end of the culdasack. They all jumped on their Seastar bikes and rode down to the Castle where Hannah and Jett live. Amanda ran up to the door, followed by Mica and Maya. She knocked the door 3 times and Hannah and Jett's butler walked up to the door and answered it.

"Yes?" He asked looking firm and tall. "State your buisness Miss Amanda,...

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Love is Wild: Chapter 2- Wild Man

posted by sawfan13

Sun shining like a holy light. After getting out of the tent, I was welcomed by such greenery and wildlife. Such green lush beauty in the glowing morning light made everything just pop and colorful. So many different shades of green and nature all around. I definitely didn't get this New York! The lush vegetation, the scenery, the little cute monkeys climbing around, it was like being in a zoo almost. I heard rustling in the bushes, and prepared myself for an animal attack. As soon as I saw my sister's pink tennis shoe pop out of the bushes, I was slightly relieved. The girls walked out of...

The Edge of Mental Health-Chapter 2: Meeting Janice

posted by sawfan13

We sat down on the couches near the right corner of the room as we entered. There was one girl sitting there by herself. She was smoking (of course!) and she looked like she had been dragged into a basement by some kidnappers and starved for many weeks. Shannon looked over at us and whispered,"That's Dina. Don't judge her sickness. It just makes it even worse. Don't even stare at her teeth when she smiles. She's very sensitive." Dina flashed her teeth at us. They were a dark yellow almost brown color, and her gums look like that they had dried blood on the bridges between the teeth and gum...

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Hells Outlaw -- Chapter 22

posted by HouseMindFreak

*NOTE* I had to change the town of Cayden's and BJ's town. Las Vegas, NM is too far away from Big Spring, TX and it didn't fit with the storyline.
It's now Carlsbad, NM.

Chapter 22

Bone walked into the police station of a small town on the border of Texas and New Mexico. He had become what he feared most…a monster. And now he was hunting down the only person that was a threat to him. He was naked except for his deer skin pants and wolf pelt around his shoulders. His hair had become thick and shaggy; everywhere he went now people feared him.
You should fear me...
A young deputy greeted him, “Need...

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Hells Outlaw--Chapter 21

posted by HouseMindFreak

Rae speaks Irish again in the story but you wouldn't want the translation...but what she says fits her attitude.

Ask for translation at your own risk.
Or use your imagination.

Chapter 21

He ran towards the barn where he heard Rae scream, hoping it was not a demon. If it was, his real self would be known. As he came closer to where she was he let out a huge sigh of relief. It wasn’t a demon but something else that was much more powerful.
Iah had come back but only in his wolf form and unfortunately was found by a human who was standing 5 feet away and preparing herself to throw a large rock at...

Hidden Secret Chapter 4

posted by DxCFan123

I shopped all over the mall. I even got some dresses. As I turned to thank the woman of the last store in the mall I hadnt shopped at, I smiled. She cringed and screamed. Then I realized why.

" Thank you maa'm. Great service!" "AAH! AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!" "JULIE, CALM DOWN! You are scaring our customer!"

I am a monster. A vampire.

I got out of that store as fast as I could. I looked around to see if anyone was around the cemetery. Nope. Stepped inside. The world swirled around me until I was in my room. I put all my clothes in my closet. Ready for school. School. SCHOOL! I NEEDED TO SIGN UP! I...

SOUL Experiment #0012 Chapter 3

posted by Skitty_Love

"Yum! This lasagna was amazing!" I said after dabbing my mouth with the folded napkin. Professor Rhinestone smiled, which was very unexpecting! I hadn't seen him smile in quite a while! "Well then, I should get to the dishes." I stood up from my chair and began to go towards the sink. "Ah! Soul, why don't I clean up, hmm?" I tilted my head. "Um, th-thank you Professor.." As I walked away thoughts burst inside my mind. Why was professor being so much kinder than usual? Okay so first he excused me for making dinner, which I was totally fine of doing, than he smiles, than he insists on cleaning...

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BAD MEMORIES CHAPTER 2

posted by r260897

When Zean woke up he found himself on his bed and everyone busy as usual. One of his best buddy Benjamin popularly known as Ben came to him and sat near Zean saying “you were so tired that you slept on the floor. Whats wrong with you?” “No, nothing.. I am alright.” He spoke this in such a hurry that could make anyone surprised. Ben looked at his eyes which were filled of confusion, Ben said “ ohk…if there is any problem just call me,, I am going I trust you..”. Ben stood and before leaving he looked back saying “ I really trust you”. This time Zean was unable to classify if...

Wands and Spells: Chapter 1

posted by Skitty_Love

Celeste's POV:

Since a long time ago, 30 years to be exact, wizards and witches have been mortal enemies. The wars. The discrimination. It would not stop. Thankfully now, it has settled down. That doesn't mean the hatred has stopped, it just means we witches make sure we don't go anywhere near wizards.

"Wha-BAM!" I sent a powerful charge into my hand. A neon orange light fired at the object I held in my right hand. "Hahahaha! Perfect!" I cried. The sweet tea I had was now turned into a one of many healing potions. I sighed enlightened. "Another job well done, Celeste." I had to admit, I was a...

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Prologue & First Chapter of Still Castle

posted by Vampiyaa

Prologue
The Life of Amelia Grace

Mia Grace’s alarm clock rang shrilly in her ear that morning. Groaning, she rolled over, pounded the snooze button down and buried her face in the covers. She was barely able to get another few extra minutes of sleep before somebody ripped the covers off of her and a cheerful voice rang out, “Come on, Mia, you’re never going to get into eleventh grade by sleeping all day!”
“That’d be an easy way to do it,” mumbled Mia, rubbing her eyes and stretching. When she opened her eyes a black haired man was looming over her, a stupid grin on his face.
“Geez,...

A delightful baby-sitting experience is what we can deliver you

posted by RightFlorist

Baby Stroller

RightToys.In is the concern that always keeps itself busy in designing something innovative and trendy. After serving you with many intelligently crafted devices that were really great supporting stuffs for you while you were looking after your beloved baby, this time we have shifted our consideration towards the infant section. If you are a new age mother, certainly your visit to www.righttoys.in/items.asp?item=PramsStrollers_Toys_India_Online&cid=23&scat=224* is going to be a great purposeful one for you. Baby-sitting is no doubt a great pleasure to define your motherhood, but how...

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Hells Outlaw -- Chapter 18

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 18

It was relatively a quiet night at the Slade Ranch in Las Vegas, New Mexico.
Cayden Slade noticed that the horses were slightly on edge as he put them in their barn for the night, there was a storm coming so perhaps the highly charged atmosphere was causing their edginess. He shivered as a sudden chilly breeze blew by, it was odd having it be this nippy at night during this time of year but he ignored it and headed back to the ranch house.
About a 15 minute walk since the ranch was not very large, considered very small by some rancher’s standards but at times it felt like half an...

the real life of Nikki goldman

posted by smartone123

We have looked deep into Nikki Goldmans life to find some supriseing stuff as i tell you her TRUE story.Well lets go back in time to her childhood,and suprise you with something un known to everyone but her family.Her real name is lea Gliden,and her mom is dead leaving her with her father who abuses her.Ok we'll skip to her 11th birthday,the day where she runs away

"get here you bastard child"he growels,a feet away from where i hide,squahed in like a bug,a cold hard wood bottom,the shelve enough to hide me,and for him not to notice.It was all ok until my nose was itchy so i quickly scrached...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 28

posted by Insight357

    I awoke to the sound of doctors running rampant.
    “How did he near death?”
    “Why did he do it?”
    “Was it suicide?” All of these questions ran through my room. I opened my eyes, I was back in the mental institution. I looked over at my left arm. A cast ran from my wrist to my elbow. I remembered taking the meds, but I didn’t remember breaking my arm. I wonder how that happened.
    “Dr. Demidov, how are you feeling?” A tall, thin man asked. He wore glasses, and he had...