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Liz (Arabi)

Fanpopping since July 2011

Female
California
My Websites: Tumblr, Fanfiction.net
Favorite Movie: Deathly Hallows Part 2, Titanic, Indian movies, Hangover, Taken, Ramona and Beezus
Favorite Musician: I'll listen to anything except rap.
Favorite Book or Author: Harry Potter, the Hunger Games, Stargirl, Nancy Drew files, Alice series, Percy Jackson, The Best Christmas Pageant Ever, Maximum Ride

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MrsSiriusB said about Ice Age 4: Continental Drift …

It was pretty good but I dunno, I thought the first and third Ice Age films were the best in terms of plot and humor. Posted 9 months ago

alicebeautex commented…

i agree the third one was way better 9 months ago

MrsSiriusB said about FanFiction.net …

So, uh, I just dug myself into those horrible, horrible hole where I asked a person if she needed help with her story and ohmygod I do not understand a word she wrote and I keep giving her little tips and advises but she's misunderstanding everything and I really don't want to help her anymore but I dunno how to tell her that and oh god what do I do?! Posted 9 months ago

sesshyswind commented…

Wow sounds like a real jam; does she know you're having hard time understanding her work because of her grammar, spelling nonexistent story flow, plot, etc? I would say that, because you don't understand it, that you just can't help her. Just say you're very sorry, but this isn't working out. Hopefully she’ll understand. 9 months ago

MrsSiriusB commented…

Yep, told her. And I tried telling her what she's doing wrong, like giving her examples and telling her she's not exactly understanding what elements make up a story. I told her that it's great that she's interested in writing, but before jumping into a huge story which she will most likely lose interest in after a while, start small. Practice before even thinking about putting her stuff up in the 'net. She hasn't replied back yet. I'm not really surprised. :/ 9 months ago