#1: FOR THE BLOOD OF THE SOUTH:
First things first.
It feels weird, giving such a review for a story written by one of my closest fan fiction friends, BRAVOBRAVO.
He, ChocolateBrownPegasis and Villain84 were to first to ever make me feel welcome on there.
Uhh, anyway.
I won't 'only' focus on the neggatives.
I'll give the positives as well.
The story is set as full out war between the Western/Eastern group, vs the mennecing Southern pack.
The worst of the Southerners, is the one who started the war.
HUNTER.
An omega hating sociopath, who in his first appeance, violently turtures Humphrey, and clearly enjoys doing it.
At the time I read this.
I wasn't as morbid as I am now. and didn't enjoy Hunter as much as I probably would NOW.
Same gose to the graphic battle scenes.
I didn't enjoy them as much as I would now, thanks to my enjoyment of saw series, Freddy Krueger, happy tree friends, and MLP creepypastas (mostly cupcakes).
Its too bad to. Cause there's one in basically every single chapter. And Andrew (bravo) dosen't hold back on graphic details for each battle.
What kind of battles?
Well.
picture the brawl between Dash and Big Mac in ROCKET TO INSANITY, times ten.
Anyway.
One of my neggatives was. The langth.
Though I don't think this one should count.
I find it too long.
Others might find it too short.
Another neggative is. The story isn't exactly 'sex free'.
And when there is sex chapters.
It's not held back on detail.
what else should I say?
I have no idea.
This story is all over the place.
So much going constantly going on. It's like PRISONERS.
Well.
Okay. It's 'nothing' like that movie.
But who cares.
PRISONERS is awesome!
I just wanted to an excuse such a film..
Though the ending annoyed me.
I hate when movies do that to you.
Well.
That's all I got.
The story can still be found.
Look it up on google, it's the easiest way to find it.
#2: THE TRUTH ABOUT LILLY:
I'm sorry about the disappointment this may cause some people.
But this is the first time I have a GOOD review.
Witch means.
Less chances of one of my angry rants.
But that dosen't mean I won't swear in this one, if I feel the need.
Anyway.
On to the story.
Now.
The idea for something like this is very much a great one.
And I am very much glad that someone did it.
Lilly has always been. What can we say. "different".
Not only is she the only omega of her family.
But she is literary the only white wolf of the whole pack (unless I missed some).
The thought that Winston and Eve aren't her real parents.
It actually makes a shit load of sence.
Anyway.
Lilly finally discovers Winston and Eve aren't her 'real' parents. Her parents died or something. Understandably this news effects her dramatically. And she now lost all trust towards her family and runs away.
And joining her new found anger she ends up knocking herself into a coma. DUMB BITCH! Haha. I'm joking. *pets Lilly*..
Uhh..
Anyway.
From here the story continues into a sequal called COMA.
And everybody uses flashbacks of certain moments of her life to try bringing her back to being conscience (it's more touching then you think).
laughing) You probably expect to use My Little Pony references from here.
Hahahah-
(almost angry) Well I will!
In fact.
This somewhat reminds me of The Pink Temptation.
When Pinkie reveals her back story to Mr Cake.
But anyway.
Eventually Lilly comes too.
And all becomes normal eventually.
#3: THE PROMISE:
It's clear now, that some people simply don't enjoy the idea of my reviews.
But not everyone has to like it. It's a free world, and these reviews aren't meant to insult th writers, or say I'm better then them. It's just me expressing how the stories made me feel.
This counted as the first time I read a Humphrey X Lilly. As, with any other Humphrey X Lilly, Kate nd Garth become the angonists, and cheat on them for no complete reason. In the one. Kate and Garth are killed off at the very begining. Are killed when trying to kill carribu (kinda ironically).
Like most of these stories, Kate's last words involve Humphrey needing to take care Lilly.
No.. Not sexually. Get your minds out of the gutter.
starts off somewhat boring. As Humphrey and Lilly are always moaning about there loss's. Till eventually they leave the park for several months or something.
Eventually Humphrey gets into a brutal fight against some nut job. I think Humphrey got injured in the leg but still the best part so far. There is a lot of other exciting things in the story. But I won't go though all of it. This is a review, not a plot summery.
point being.I have nothing but respect towards this with all the long sequels what I never read the third of.
This story has so many great things.10/10 for me.
Well I'm busy, and that's all I got.
I'm not done with these reviews, will make new for A&O real soon.. And probably unlike Wind (i don't know).. I review stories that the writers themselves ask me to review (sometimes)
First things first.
It feels weird, giving such a review for a story written by one of my closest fan fiction friends, BRAVOBRAVO.
He, ChocolateBrownPegasis and Villain84 were to first to ever make me feel welcome on there.
Uhh, anyway.
I won't 'only' focus on the neggatives.
I'll give the positives as well.
The story is set as full out war between the Western/Eastern group, vs the mennecing Southern pack.
The worst of the Southerners, is the one who started the war.
HUNTER.
An omega hating sociopath, who in his first appeance, violently turtures Humphrey, and clearly enjoys doing it.
At the time I read this.
I wasn't as morbid as I am now. and didn't enjoy Hunter as much as I probably would NOW.
Same gose to the graphic battle scenes.
I didn't enjoy them as much as I would now, thanks to my enjoyment of saw series, Freddy Krueger, happy tree friends, and MLP creepypastas (mostly cupcakes).
Its too bad to. Cause there's one in basically every single chapter. And Andrew (bravo) dosen't hold back on graphic details for each battle.
What kind of battles?
Well.
picture the brawl between Dash and Big Mac in ROCKET TO INSANITY, times ten.
Anyway.
One of my neggatives was. The langth.
Though I don't think this one should count.
I find it too long.
Others might find it too short.
Another neggative is. The story isn't exactly 'sex free'.
And when there is sex chapters.
It's not held back on detail.
what else should I say?
I have no idea.
This story is all over the place.
So much going constantly going on. It's like PRISONERS.
Well.
Okay. It's 'nothing' like that movie.
But who cares.
PRISONERS is awesome!
I just wanted to an excuse such a film..
Though the ending annoyed me.
I hate when movies do that to you.
Well.
That's all I got.
The story can still be found.
Look it up on google, it's the easiest way to find it.
#2: THE TRUTH ABOUT LILLY:
I'm sorry about the disappointment this may cause some people.
But this is the first time I have a GOOD review.
Witch means.
Less chances of one of my angry rants.
But that dosen't mean I won't swear in this one, if I feel the need.
Anyway.
On to the story.
Now.
The idea for something like this is very much a great one.
And I am very much glad that someone did it.
Lilly has always been. What can we say. "different".
Not only is she the only omega of her family.
But she is literary the only white wolf of the whole pack (unless I missed some).
The thought that Winston and Eve aren't her real parents.
It actually makes a shit load of sence.
Anyway.
Lilly finally discovers Winston and Eve aren't her 'real' parents. Her parents died or something. Understandably this news effects her dramatically. And she now lost all trust towards her family and runs away.
And joining her new found anger she ends up knocking herself into a coma. DUMB BITCH! Haha. I'm joking. *pets Lilly*..
Uhh..
Anyway.
From here the story continues into a sequal called COMA.
And everybody uses flashbacks of certain moments of her life to try bringing her back to being conscience (it's more touching then you think).
laughing) You probably expect to use My Little Pony references from here.
Hahahah-
(almost angry) Well I will!
In fact.
This somewhat reminds me of The Pink Temptation.
When Pinkie reveals her back story to Mr Cake.
But anyway.
Eventually Lilly comes too.
And all becomes normal eventually.
#3: THE PROMISE:
It's clear now, that some people simply don't enjoy the idea of my reviews.
But not everyone has to like it. It's a free world, and these reviews aren't meant to insult th writers, or say I'm better then them. It's just me expressing how the stories made me feel.
This counted as the first time I read a Humphrey X Lilly. As, with any other Humphrey X Lilly, Kate nd Garth become the angonists, and cheat on them for no complete reason. In the one. Kate and Garth are killed off at the very begining. Are killed when trying to kill carribu (kinda ironically).
Like most of these stories, Kate's last words involve Humphrey needing to take care Lilly.
No.. Not sexually. Get your minds out of the gutter.
starts off somewhat boring. As Humphrey and Lilly are always moaning about there loss's. Till eventually they leave the park for several months or something.
Eventually Humphrey gets into a brutal fight against some nut job. I think Humphrey got injured in the leg but still the best part so far. There is a lot of other exciting things in the story. But I won't go though all of it. This is a review, not a plot summery.
point being.I have nothing but respect towards this with all the long sequels what I never read the third of.
This story has so many great things.10/10 for me.
Well I'm busy, and that's all I got.
I'm not done with these reviews, will make new for A&O real soon.. And probably unlike Wind (i don't know).. I review stories that the writers themselves ask me to review (sometimes)
When you watch the more serious films, Freddy Krueger IS something that can be considered actually scary.
First off, dreams are suppose to be a safe place.
And what makes the orginal so scary, is the fact that the dream sequences themselves look and feel so spooky.
Something the remake ALSO fails at.
Freddy dosen't just suddenly appear, like in the remake.
He quietly calls out your name, he makes you feel uneasy.
And than when he dose appear in the original, most times we see him like this..
Yeah, he's in the shadows. He's mysterious.
In fact, Freddy can be compared to Steven King's IT.
He...
continue reading...
First off, dreams are suppose to be a safe place.
And what makes the orginal so scary, is the fact that the dream sequences themselves look and feel so spooky.
Something the remake ALSO fails at.
Freddy dosen't just suddenly appear, like in the remake.
He quietly calls out your name, he makes you feel uneasy.
And than when he dose appear in the original, most times we see him like this..
Yeah, he's in the shadows. He's mysterious.
In fact, Freddy can be compared to Steven King's IT.
He...
Gotta love Anderson
Here are two previews to fan fictions coming soon to this very club.
The Storm - 2015
Theme song: link
Ten miles from Ponyville, by the Delamare River is a town called Frenchtown. Hundreds of ponies live there, and together, they must survive.....
The Storm
Starring in alphabetical order
Aurora from Alinah_09
Barry from SeanTheHedgehog
Ditto from Canada24
Emerald Ivy from Dragonaura15
Fire Vi Equestria from Jordy_Dash
Jesse from SeanTheHedgehog
Joe from SeanTheHedgehog
Katana Sun from BlondLionEzel
Lexi from Sonicexeluv
Orion from Alinah_09
Saten Twist from Canada24
Snowflake from Alinah_09...
R.I.P
Song: link
Blue lines fly along the screen, then the words appear
Announcer: It's not a bright future.
Sean & Nik: *Laying down side by side, shooting S.G bronies running towards them*
Sean: So now you understand why I left the fandom?
Nik: Yeah.
Announcer: It's not something to look forward to.
S.G Brony 96: *Puts Dan in a chair* Wake up!! *Grabs a rope to tie him to the chair*
Announcer: It's 2021.
Song (Start at 0:27): link
Announcer: It's the story of how the MLP fandom got split into two, all thanks to a man, and his interest in Starlight Glimmer. 2021, coming soon.
The song fades...
Warning: The owner of the copyright in this fan fiction has authorized it's use for members of this club to read, and enjoy, over, and over again without charge of any kind. Any other use of this fan fiction including any copying, reproduction or performance of any of the material..... Ah, who am I kidding? I know you're not going to steal any of the content in this fan fiction.
Song: link
Pinkie Pie: *Talking into a radio, recording a casette...
continue reading...
Song: link
Blue lines fly along the screen, then the words appear
Robotnik: Snooping as usual I see! *Talks faster* Snooping as usual *Slows down* I see!
Pinkie Pie: *Talking into a radio, recording a casette...
