Warm (Courtney and Duncan)
''It's so freaking cold out here. Where's Chris?''Gwen asked, shivering.''He probably left us out here to freeze to death''.Courtney sighed. Everyone was freezing like hell outside, everyone but Duncan.''Princess, you don't look so good, wanna share my blanket?' he asked kindly.' Sure Duncan, I owe you one''.she smiled. Duncan draped the thick blue blanket over their shoulders, smirking at Courtney.' What are you staring at?' she smiled."You, of course. You're pretty even when you're freezing to death''.he laughed.''HahaHA!'' Courtney said, sarcastically.''You know you like it, Princess''.he smiled, as he kissed her warm lips.
''It's so freaking cold out here. Where's Chris?''Gwen asked, shivering.''He probably left us out here to freeze to death''.Courtney sighed. Everyone was freezing like hell outside, everyone but Duncan.''Princess, you don't look so good, wanna share my blanket?' he asked kindly.' Sure Duncan, I owe you one''.she smiled. Duncan draped the thick blue blanket over their shoulders, smirking at Courtney.' What are you staring at?' she smiled."You, of course. You're pretty even when you're freezing to death''.he laughed.''HahaHA!'' Courtney said, sarcastically.''You know you like it, Princess''.he smiled, as he kissed her warm lips.
Okay I'm curious as to what you readers want.I only have 1 comment for my new chapter and its been 2 days.I don't know if i'M just impatient or if my story really sucks.I know most of you rpobably like it and don't comment but,I have a low self esteem and when i don't see comments i don't feel too confident to continue because i think no one will read them.My WHY DO YOU LIKE HER story is the most popular now.And that was one of the first ones I did.Now I think I peeked too early.
Anyway,it helps me to see more comments about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Anyway,it helps me to see more comments about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Courtney-um hey so how u doing Duncan-fine fine very nice Duncan-hey can i talk to u in private Courtney-sure sure they walk to a a hallway Trent -im gonna go listen to them be right back dudes .... Duncan-so Courtney um I broke up with Gwen Courtney-why u guys were perfect for each other Duncan-we were cause u were really mean and mad Courtney-i was but then i gusse i got over u Duncan-u did Courtney-i dont know how but i guess i did Duncan-look im sorry if i hert u so would u like to be um Courtney-to still be friends thatll be nice Duncan-sure we can but i ment more than friends Courtney-oh u mean boyfriend and girlfriend Duncan-yeah Courtney-but What will be diffrent this time Duncan-look will be honest and not crazy I just want to be with u Courtney-really? Duncan-really then they kiss
Narrators POV:
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do you Duncan Paine Take Courtney Flower to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do you Courtney Flower Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce you man and wife you may now kiss the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best day of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best day ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got home they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched movies on cable.
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do you Duncan Paine Take Courtney Flower to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do you Courtney Flower Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce you man and wife you may now kiss the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best day of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best day ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got home they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched movies on cable.
Okay; This.. May possibly sound wierd. But! It's kinda related. So.. I was reading Twilight. Then; All of the sudden... The love triangle popped into my mind. Do you know how Edward is protective, somewhat strict about Bella, and who she hangs out with? Well... Edward is like a male version of Courtney. then; Theres... Gwen. -_-. Gwen is layed back; Protective when she wants to be; and knows how to have fun. See? Jacob's a male version if Gwen—Not goth though. Then, Bella is a female version of Duncan. You see how in NewMoon; she got into tons of trouble? And; Thats how Duncan is.
Now.. What do ya think?
Now.. What do ya think?
Duncan`s POV:There was nothing to say.Courtney pulled her fangs back in and started to fastly walk away.I followed her."See.I am a monster."Courtney said."No you are not.So don`t say that."I said grabbing her by the shoulders.She was cold,but I didn`t care cause I loved her.I`ve never loved a girl like Courtney.There was just something about her that made it alright.It felt good though."Thanks.But you don`t understand.I`m a killer."she said."I don`t care."I said.I bent my neck over."You don`t want this."Courtney said."I want you."I said."You are sure?"she asked."Yes."I said.Courtney`s fangs quickly came back out again and sank into my neck.