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Third Chapter! Yay, I'm so happy with myself!
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Anakin looked like he had just been slapped across the face, punched in the gut, and banged in the back of the head all at the same time "W-what, h-h-how do you know my- who are you?" Anakin stuttered. Ahsoka studied the woman's face, which sported a smirk from how terrified Anakin must look. She also had purple-green eyes, long lashes, a petite small chin and facial build, and a small, feminine mouth. But what caught her eye the most was her complexion. It was tan, like most beings from Tatooine, but it also had an orangish, greenish tint to it.
"Master Hunalo, at you service" the humanoid said tauntingly as she bowed deeply.
Before Ahsoka could stop herself, she found herself blurting out, "what are you?" the woman just laughed softly, glancing at Ahsoka through her heavily lidded eyes. She stared at her for a couple seconds, deciding if they should answer this question.
"Well, obviously I am mostly human foolish youngling, but i'm impressed that you noticed that I'm not completely human. I’m partially Nautolan, and I am a descendant of the Korun tribe. And I think I may be part Kattsaki, why?" 'Master Hunalo' answered cautiously.
"Oh, no reason..." Ahsoka said, as Anakin studied 'Master Hunalo'
"Well, that is not important right now. What is important is why you're here. Do you have a good answer, Anakin?" she asked, redirecting her attention to Anakin, then she added, "or is it Master Jedi?"
"It depends... who are you?" Anakin said. The alien/human Hunalo sighed and looked at Anakin with an expression that clearly stated, 'are you really that dim witted?'
"Well, since you are such a big shot now and can not even remember me, I guess you can live without knowing who I am. But, still, what are you doing here?" she said quite seriously.
Anakin sighed, seeing that this person was too stubborn just to tell him who she is, and said, "We are here on a rescue mission. We are looking for an Obi-Wan Kenobi."
The person looked thoughtfully up, muttering to them self, "Obi-Wan, Obi-Wan, i think I may of assistance to you, follow me." and with that, they ventured out into the jungle of hallways again.
When they reached the front door, Hunalo opened the second door, adjacent to the one they just came out of, and called for 'Dwar' and 'Ewar', apparently they were two of the person’s slaves. As soon as they realized that the two were slaves, Ahsoka saw, out of the corner of her eye, that Anakin stiffened. ‘That’s strange’ Ahsoka thought to herself.
As the servants came into the room, Master Hunalo whispered something to them in Huttese. Anakin seemed to slightly blush though… “Dwar and Ewar will escort you to where your friend is now, but don’t talk too loud to him, his head has been hurting. After you are done there, they will show you to your rooms and bring you back to the kitchen at six for dinnerr.” Once the Jedi and Clones got a closer look at the men who were escorting them, they noticed the two were twins. They walked in peace for several seconds, then Anakin tried to break the silence.
“So, uh… what would be your master’s first name? I mean uh… why do your name’s sound so much alike? Wait, no… um… how can you guys find your way around here? Oh, wait, that’s a stupid question, isn’t it? Don’t answer that” and he just kept rambling on until Ahsoka motioned him to stop. The men were futilely trying to muffle their laughs by the time Anakin was quiet.
“With all due respect sir, our names sound the same because we were born in the same month. Mistress Hunalo’s family has owned our family for a little more than two hundred years, along with another slave family, when a new member of our family is born, Mistress Hunalo’s family gets to name them. When two or three infants are born within one month, their names usually rhyme. Get it? And if our master has not told you her name, then it is up to her to tell you, not us.” One of them said with a ‘your such a dimwit’ look on his face. Anakin seemed not to notice, he was too busy thinking.
Ugh, but I really want to find out the identity of our saver!” Anakin whined.
“Wouldn’t the term be ‘savior’?” Ahsoka corrected him. Anakin looked confused; obviously he was never taught proper grammar, or just doesn’t have a very large vocabulary.
Finally the two slaves stopped in front of one of the doors. Dwar; or was it Ewar? Well, one of them opened it. Inside was Obi-Wan, laying on a bed sleeping. He had cuts and scars everywhere, on his face, arms, torso and legs. He was wrapped with bandages nearly everywhere. His head was also bandaged. No wonder his head’s been hurting.
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It had been a full week,since Sharp had moved in. Since then Ahsoka had had to fight him on a number of issues from going to her classes to down to the mess or training grounds. She smiled to herself as she'd begun to think of Sharp as an irritating younger brother.He'd gotten his way on everything,even going to class. Sharp was at the moment down at the mess getting a bite to eat. He'd enlisted his brother's in their squad Set-Off and K.P. to bring down food when they got done with kp. They'd gotten in trouble when they had taken some covert cams and placed them into the ceilings of some commanders....
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Sharp had come by after he'd talked to Commander Flash, taking up the bunk across from hers. Now she felt like a child, couldn't have a sniffle without somebody making a big huff about it. She rolled her eyes as he stowed away his gear. Rolling to the wall she fell asleep. In the folds of her dream Ahsoka felt herself standing on a wooden porch over looking a river. Walking out onto the floating bridge she turned and took in the surroundings. The sun coming through the
leaves gave off a greenish lite. Cabins rose high into those trees and had strong ropes dangling from their porches along with...
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Anakin checked on both women as they slept uneasy. Even with the force he couldn't stop Padame's cousin from the heavy guilt rampaging through her system. He'd given up and called the Chancellor."I need to know who's behind this and I need to know soon." Chancellor Palpatine's face was a mask of concern."Yes, I know Anakin but these things take time.The investigation could take months you can't spare away from the battle." Anakin rocked back and forth on his heels."Yes I know that,but a couple of days. At least Padame and Reaya will want to arrive in time for the funerals." Palpatine nodded...
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Lord Sideous image squawked "Have you found the rest of that splinter group?"
"No my lord there has been no trace since their disapearance. Perhaps Master Yoda could be of some assistance in this matter." Count Dooku suggested. "Yes, I will offer to bring the lost sheep back into the fold." Sideous smiled. "The mercenary scum have arrived at your request." Coughed an irritated General Grievous.Sideous' smile broadened greatly,"Oh, yes. Please have them dropped off near Mayor Remis' home,they have a small problem to take care of for me."
"As you wish, my lord." Grievous bowed to the image.Clicking off, the Chancellor leaned back into his chair. One problem taken care of. Couldn't have men such as the mayor Remis causing upheavel about the new laws."Ah, Anakin come to give me the latest reports."
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"Sir!Commander Flash!" Sharp knocked on the Commander's apartment door . Sharp needed to tell someone what he'd learned."What? What's wrong cadet?" Commander Flash opened the door, wipping his eyes he peered at the cadet.
Oh, great another one, he thought."I need to talk to you, its about Ahsoka. Sir." Flash shook his head, as he turned his dekar around to allow the cadet to enter. Closing the door he refocused on the intruder."You're not falling for her, are you? Because if you are, you can just go take a cold shower. Like I've told most of Snake squad. Of course its natural.We don't see to...
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posted by lovingflame
if you're just tunning in to my stories go back to the beginning Ahsoka loses her leg. article type is under other. I'm new, not tech savey.
"Geinosis has been taken and the queen is dead.The planet is lost to us for good."Spat an angery Darth Sideous. If he hadn't needed them he'd of dispatched both his unworthy minions. Continuing he ranted,"We must put a stop to this inventive child or risk losing the war." Count Dooku straightened as he reported."Our Force mines did reduce the Jedi number, which they can sorely afford to lose." Darth Sideous nodded, as his enraged image seemed to calm."What...
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Okay. I've got chapter six all done now.
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"Asajj Ventress? How do you know her!" Anakin exclaimed, looking through the peephole also, almost not believing her. "Our families go way back. She's the one who killed my brothers and sisters. Don't you remember be telling you? Wait, of course not. You barely even remembered me! Well, excuse me, but I must take care of this. And don't try to come with me. Obviously, Jedi always make matters like this worse." She said, stepping outside. Anakin listened through the door. "What do you want, harpy?" Lorrettai spat. "Ah... Lorrettai,...
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posted by starwarsfangirl
Chapter Five, I hope it's good.
I nicknamed this chapter, "Lorrettai's story"
And for those who noted this, yes, Obi-Wan is still really banged up, but he just decided to go to dinner. Idk.

Obi-Wan limped into the dining room, clutching his crutch, and sat down in one of the chairs at the grand dinner table. "Now talk." Lorrettai sighed, and sat down too. "It starts about three years after Anakin left." she started. "Wait, how do you and Anakin even know each other?" Ahsoka asked. "Old friends, now listen, youngling. Apparently, Anakin had some lightsaber parts and such left in Shmi's place,...
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