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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the review!!! :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 9
    The Seven Deadly Sins
    Greed, gluttony, envy, lust, sloth, pride, and wrath. The seven deadly sins, we all know what they are. Commit one and you are sinner, commit all, you are very bad sinner.
    If I have ever believed I committed one it would be wrath, I have a good temper, believe me, but when it is broken. When I’ve met my breaking point, that is when I am at my most unpleasant.
    In the bible, it tells us about all kinds of sins, but those seven our are one way ticket to the underworld. You cannot commit them, or you are in danger of where you’ll go. Because thou shall not sin.
    After spending half the day at the mall, I went back home to put my new stuff away, and still wearing my fancy attire. I kept the clothes on, and went to a church that was open twenty-four seven. Without thinking I entered the holy place, and went to followed the low buzz of noise, people religious music played as people lightly talked to one another. Or read bible scriptures together, or bowed there knees and heads and prayed. Mind you, it was still Saturday, very late at that.
    But still a lot of people had come. I must of looked out of place, because someone came up to me and asked if I needed anything.
    “Um…I’m okay, I just wanted to visit, and now I don’t know what to do,” I said, feeling my cheeks heat up.
    The women hugged my sympathetically. “Don’t worry sweetie, a lot of us are lost. You came to the right place, and the first step to beginning is to believe.”
    She led me to the front of the room near the stairs, where the people where praying.
    “Do you want to…?” The kind woman asked, looking at me expectantly.
    I nodded.
    The woman hugged me, and whispered. “Your strong dear, don’t let anyone break you down.”
    I don’t know why but at those words, I felt my eyes tear up and tears fall down. “I won’t.”
    After giving a quick kiss to my cheek, the woman helped my kneel and then left me when I could cope. I bowed my head, closed my eyes, and I prayed.

    Sunlight filtered through my window, and I opened my eyes. I almost freaked at the setting but I calmed down when I remembered the nice women offering me a place to sleep. I knew from the text message I got yesterday that my brother and father would be gone the whole weekend, so I didn’t have to worry about to furious men when I went back home.
    I walked out of the room and went back to the main room again to have a delicious aroma assault my nose. I followed the scent all the way and entered a kitchen, the nice lady from yesterday was cooking with some other girls.
    She looked up and upon seeing me grinned. “Good morning Sweetie, want some breakfast?”
    She laughed at my eager nod, “it’ll be done in a few, in the meanwhile why don’t you join the group outside.”
    I nodded and following her instructions, I found a group of people sitting on the grass, in a circle formation. Close by was a beautiful garden, water fountains dotted the area around it.
    The group were silently discussing something, two of whom looked familiar.
    “Summer!” Cory and Corrie yelped, causing everyone to swivel their heads toward me.
    “Ah, a new arrival, Summer?” A boy, probably nineteen yeas old, said.
    I nodded.
    He grinned. “Join us.”
    I smiled back as I sat in between Cory and Corrie, who so graciously offered the spot. I tried not to gawk at Corrie, who’s usual dark rainbow hair was now a normal dark brown as her brother. It was weird to see her look…normal, I was used to her rebel look, but now she looked like any other pretty normal kid.
    How I longed to be normal.
    “So we were discussing the Seven Deadly Sins, the things that we shouldn’t do. You know what the sins are, Summer?”
    “Yes,” I said.
    “Good, were also talking about the good things we can do.”
    “Like forgiving and forgetting,” Corrie put in helpfully.
    “Yes,” the man said, smiling charmingly at her. “An important one two.”
    Cory rolled his eyes, while Corrie blushed smiling back.
    “A good deed, is a good deed. A bad deed, is a bad deed. We ask the Lord to forgive us for our sins and he does, so we have forgive other people for their sins…” I zoned out on the rest.
    Forgiving and forgetting, and if you don’t you’ve committed a sin. Was I angry at him? Or was he angry at me?
    “So let’s continue on our discussion. What sin were we talking about?”
    “Pride,” the group said.
    “Pride, when someone feels there superior, better than everyone else. Have you ever felt that you were more important than anything else, even God himself? Pride is like the love of one’s own excellence, an antonym would be guilt. And when someone is prideful, they are sinful.”
    The group nodded, me among them. The love of one’s own excellence.
    The love of one’s own excellence.
    The love of one’s own excellence.
    Those words kept replaying over and over in my head. I remember one time when father boasted and sounded like that definition. He kept on saying how he was better than everybody else, and how no one could compare to his genius.
    Father always brags about his excellence, often too.
    Does that mean it’s too late to save father, or is he still hanging there waiting to be saved.
    Waiting to be rid of that monster who kills.
Remembering the Past, Hope for the Future
by hgfan5602

I sat there, at my desk, next to my bedroom window, thinking about the past events in 2012...and remembered the time...when I was at Relay for Life. It would not be soon before I, myself, passed from cancer also. My doctor said that I would only have a few months left, so I decided to make the most of it.
Our team had raised $6864.88 for cancer patients across the globe. We had all been preparing for this one special time. I was walking the Survivor's Lap, and watched as all the survivors of cancer walked a lap together. It was so cheerful!!!...
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Chapter 12
        The lovely fun of kickball
    “School, school, school,” I shake my head. “I blame the smart people.”
    Beth looks at me. “Pammy, were in gym, technically not school.”
    “But still in it,” I say.
    Beth rolls her eyes as our gym coach leads us outside, to the very hot air, oh my goodness someone call the rain! I then feel my spirits lift up when I learn were playing kickball! Yay! I usually hit someone in the face with my powerful temper...
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posted by CapShunsuifan13
Just a sample of a fanfic ive considered writing. Tell me what you think.
All SOA characters belong to Kurt Sutter aside from my OC

He was back in his own country, it had been so long but he was finally back.
No that wasn't right, he wasn't in his own country, he hadn't been there in 18 years. No he wasn't there, but he was home, it had been ten years since he was last here. Ten years.....
He stepped out of the SUV, the cold air hitting him in the face like a ton of bricks. This was California it shouldn't be this cold. He nodded to the driver, letting him known it was okay to leave. But the black...
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added by hgfan5602
posted by Max277
Chapter 7

Okay right now, my brain was on over load. Nick was dieing, Luke was mad at me, the gang was a bit hurt. Best of all. We were trying to stay alive. That plan wasn't working so well. I glanced over at Nick. He began to close his eyes. No. I slapped him on the cheek. His eyes flew open." Don't close your eyes" I hiss at him." Slapping me is working so well for you isn't it?" He snapped at me. Then there was a loud painful sound. Right now, Nick, Me, Luke, the gang. We were all hidding in a very big cave. Not the best place to be, It was better than nothing though...
Few hours later......
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posted by 1999jacko
Rick lay still on the street almost lifeless as the ambulance came round the corner and the men jumped out of the back door and hefted him up onto a bed sort of thing, covered his face with an oxygen tank and then wheeled him up into the ambulance, as soon as they were all in the ambulance the man started to drive off quickly towards the hospital just as Rick started to see dots in the air and slowly faint.

Alli sat at her dinner table talking rapidly with her rich parents about how school had gone and if there had been any more of the usual violence that had been happening in the school lately...
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In the morning James returned. The others were already there. Kyle laid in his bed, asleep. They left James a spot next to Kyle, where James had sat last night. The white wallpaper was slightly ripped. James sat in his seat. "Did anything happen last night?" asked Katie desperatly. James shrugged. They could tell something had the others looked at Katie all wondering the same question. She pointed at the security camera that nobody had noticed. James sat on his seat with his knees under his chin and his hands clasped around his legs and head facing down. Memories of last night were nagging...
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posted by vampirefreak_26
I jogged my way to home, trying to get my thoughts straight. As I entered the house I smelled the warm velvety smell I knew all too well and hated. It reminded me every time of what I was and what it meant to me. As I followed the smell I found an open bottle of blood on the dining table with a note lying beside it. Drink or I’ll come and make you! “Curse you Dimitri!” I could feel how my body reacted to the smell; my fangs began to lengthen my body tensed as it knew what the bottle held. Strength! I tried to survive as long as I could without the blood, but over time my body weakened...
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posted by rory2011
Kat took the paper leaving the room quickly ,she went to where she and Hayley always sit
" we're leaving ,change your clothes and take the most important things you need " Kat said
" what ! ? " Hayley said
" we don't have too much time ,please just do what I said " Kat said
she took the paper and put it in the printer ,she want something to improve Mac's intentions and the government Intentions

Hayley stood near the house door waiting Kat ,but unfortunately Mac came , he saw Hayley wearing her coat and carrying her bag
he know that Kat planning to leave so he sat on the stairs which are close...
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posted by 1999jacko
Leo picked Sarah up, because she was going to slow, and started to jump to the nearest tree skilfully. After jumping to 8 different trees they finally reached their home tree and, at the same time, whispered," Jason you there." They heard movement from a different branch and saw a shadow move clumsily over a small rack of weapons that that they had made," Jason stop trying to scare us and come out." Leo hissed loudly, the person came around the othe side of the tree and said," I don't think Jason is ever going to try and scare you ever again." The person had a serpent like smile and held a...
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posted by Problematic129
*Previously called the book that promised death, but changed it, unpublished it and posted it here :)*
Prologue
The girl ran and did not stop, for it would cost her her life. She clutched the book tightly in her hands, keeping them at her sides…hidden. But they knew she had it, and they would not stop for nothing at all.
They will kill her for it and if its in their hands then the world would be doomed. And that must not happen the girl thought willing her legs to run faster.
Although running in a dress that was tied together so hard that she couldn’t breathe didn’t help her at all....
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posted by alicia386
Power

You are possessed
By this world
This so called better future
Is destroying you

At what cost
The fame or the fortune
It isn't worth it
Haven't you seen

The corruption 
Power brings
Too much of a good thing
Becomes worthless in the end

Don't be like that
Help yourself
Save yourself from this
This unplanned future

Power brings one thing
Death
There is no way around it
It will soon take over

It will become your life
This power that you long for
Shall be a death sentence for you
I wish you luck

I hope you see the way
The way I speak of
How power isn't healthy
And not apart of your diet

Turn away
From the temptation 
That power can bring
Forget it

Forget everything
The money
The fame 
The power

Don't look back
Behind you is the head
The head of evil
The head of power
posted by Problematic129
*Randomly came up with the idea, please comment or fan, appreciated! :)*

Verse 1:
Wings the color of diamond and gold. Heart so lovely…it’ll melt you so, oh. Their warm embrace is protecting me, there’s nothing else I would give for this, oooh, yeah ,nothing else that could make my heart twist.
    
    Chorus:
    And now, I see, the descending angel, protecting me. It takes, me in, to a whole new world that I would never give.
    And now I see, oh yes, I see

    Verse 2:
    I’ve...
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posted by Problematic129
*Game twister buddies.
~Genre: Fiction, mystery, and I guess fantasy :)*
Chapter 25
    Dorothy’s point of view
    I touch her journal. “I’m going to try something,” I tell my friends. “So don’t freak out unless I start bleeding or jerking or something unusually.”
    Jess nods, use to the routine, she turns to Cadence. “Get ready rookie, and don’t freak out, I know when to panic.”
    Cadence looking confused and a bit scared nods, as he watches me.
    I close my eyes, and concentrate...
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Now you believe that I'm not normal, huh? Well, this is going to make you tear your hair out.
So, as I was saying, I was sucked into the glass of Coke. The next thing that happened, someone pressed a cloth to my nose, and I fell into a heavy sleep.
When I woke up, I was covered in tubes. I was lying somewhere that looked like a hospital, but still in my pink X-His. Good. I tried to get out, but it felt as if there were invisible restraints holding me. A monitor next to my shoulder beeped and said, "Prisoner #2 has awoke."
Well, well, well. So I was a prisoner. Two heavily armed guards yanked...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Nine

IF WE WERE ALL PERFECT, LIFE WOULD BE BORING. -Emma

      Forgetting the fact that my old friend is now going to be the enemy's snack, I tried to focus on the words that Erica was telling me. After a lot bickering, she has agreed to teach me how to reach my sister. "Just focus your eyes onto that blank wall. Remember do not become dizzy while staring at the wall. It happens to me all of them time." I ignored that last part and focused my eyes onto the wall ahead of me. "Now imagine Sophie." That is what I did. I imagined the way Sophie would look like and unbelievable it worked....
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Chapter 2
Three Months Earlier

There was not much bright where I was. Just dull, cheap lamp-light. Ya know? The cheap light that bulbs give off. Not until I stepped out into the golden hue of this evening’s sunset could I get a good picture with my eyes. I had been in a bar with my friends or, as it’s usually called, my gang. It wasn’t a real rough bar, the one I had been in. there were a couple fights every so often, but not much. Gavin, the owner, was good about that. He didn’t want the fuzz showing up all the time, so when he wanted a fight to stop, it stopped. He could persuade...
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posted by alicia386
Reese Kingston
Reese Kingston
Chapter Five

      Reese invited her inside and they got to work on Reese's couch. Her mom was currently cooking them oysters for dinner which was Dakota's favorite. Reese really wanted Dakota to like her. It was so obvious. "Our project is on Recyclable Art. Do you have old newspapers or something?" Dakota asked. She flipped open her binder and read the list. "We can use paper, soda cans, and everyday household items like paperclips and bottle caps. Things like that."
      "My Uncle Kenny use to be a hoarder and he is always giving away his junk so he might have some useful things," replied...
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posted by alicia386
Hazel Portwood
Hazel Portwood
Chapter Four

      Dakota glanced at herself in her long vanity. She had chosen to wear the white skinny pants, a pink halter top, and a spaghetti strap shirt underneath the halter top. She had on her pink high tops. Her hair was down and curly. She looked decent but she didn't want to be decent. She wanted to be extraordinary. The necklace with the red lips at bottom would be the perfect accessory to make her outfit great. She turned back to the mirror to only find a pale figure standing behind her. Dakota whirled around to face the intruder.
      'Hmm,' thought the ghost. 'I like it....
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posted by Problematic129
*Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 19
    A messed up version of a family reunion
    The woman smiled, “Zyanna.” She held out her hand. I stood up, brushed off my jeans,and took her hand.
    Now, it may not have been the smartest idea, but she was my mother. She came for me, and after having years of her out of my life, I wasn’t going to let an opportunity like this pass up.
     She had this lithe grace, like I knew she would, and maneuvered her way through the forest. When we left it, the...
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