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posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 9
    The Seven Deadly Sins
    Greed, gluttony, envy, lust, sloth, pride, and wrath. The seven deadly sins, we all know what they are. Commit one and you are sinner, commit all, you are very bad sinner.
    If I have ever believed I committed one it would be wrath, I have a good temper, believe me, but when it is broken. When I’ve met my breaking point, that is when I am at my most unpleasant.
    In the bible, it tells us about all kinds of sins, but those seven our are one way ticket to the underworld. You cannot commit them, or you are in danger of where you’ll go. Because thou shall not sin.
    After spending half the day at the mall, I went back home to put my new stuff away, and still wearing my fancy attire. I kept the clothes on, and went to a church that was open twenty-four seven. Without thinking I entered the holy place, and went to followed the low buzz of noise, people religious music played as people lightly talked to one another. Or read bible scriptures together, or bowed there knees and heads and prayed. Mind you, it was still Saturday, very late at that.
    But still a lot of people had come. I must of looked out of place, because someone came up to me and asked if I needed anything.
    “Um…I’m okay, I just wanted to visit, and now I don’t know what to do,” I said, feeling my cheeks heat up.
    The women hugged my sympathetically. “Don’t worry sweetie, a lot of us are lost. You came to the right place, and the first step to beginning is to believe.”
    She led me to the front of the room near the stairs, where the people where praying.
    “Do you want to…?” The kind woman asked, looking at me expectantly.
    I nodded.
    The woman hugged me, and whispered. “Your strong dear, don’t let anyone break you down.”
    I don’t know why but at those words, I felt my eyes tear up and tears fall down. “I won’t.”
    After giving a quick kiss to my cheek, the woman helped my kneel and then left me when I could cope. I bowed my head, closed my eyes, and I prayed.

    Sunlight filtered through my window, and I opened my eyes. I almost freaked at the setting but I calmed down when I remembered the nice women offering me a place to sleep. I knew from the text message I got yesterday that my brother and father would be gone the whole weekend, so I didn’t have to worry about to furious men when I went back home.
    I walked out of the room and went back to the main room again to have a delicious aroma assault my nose. I followed the scent all the way and entered a kitchen, the nice lady from yesterday was cooking with some other girls.
    She looked up and upon seeing me grinned. “Good morning Sweetie, want some breakfast?”
    She laughed at my eager nod, “it’ll be done in a few, in the meanwhile why don’t you join the group outside.”
    I nodded and following her instructions, I found a group of people sitting on the grass, in a circle formation. Close by was a beautiful garden, water fountains dotted the area around it.
    The group were silently discussing something, two of whom looked familiar.
    “Summer!” Cory and Corrie yelped, causing everyone to swivel their heads toward me.
    “Ah, a new arrival, Summer?” A boy, probably nineteen yeas old, said.
    I nodded.
    He grinned. “Join us.”
    I smiled back as I sat in between Cory and Corrie, who so graciously offered the spot. I tried not to gawk at Corrie, who’s usual dark rainbow hair was now a normal dark brown as her brother. It was weird to see her look…normal, I was used to her rebel look, but now she looked like any other pretty normal kid.
    How I longed to be normal.
    “So we were discussing the Seven Deadly Sins, the things that we shouldn’t do. You know what the sins are, Summer?”
    “Yes,” I said.
    “Good, were also talking about the good things we can do.”
    “Like forgiving and forgetting,” Corrie put in helpfully.
    “Yes,” the man said, smiling charmingly at her. “An important one two.”
    Cory rolled his eyes, while Corrie blushed smiling back.
    “A good deed, is a good deed. A bad deed, is a bad deed. We ask the Lord to forgive us for our sins and he does, so we have forgive other people for their sins…” I zoned out on the rest.
    Forgiving and forgetting, and if you don’t you’ve committed a sin. Was I angry at him? Or was he angry at me?
    “So let’s continue on our discussion. What sin were we talking about?”
    “Pride,” the group said.
    “Pride, when someone feels there superior, better than everyone else. Have you ever felt that you were more important than anything else, even God himself? Pride is like the love of one’s own excellence, an antonym would be guilt. And when someone is prideful, they are sinful.”
    The group nodded, me among them. The love of one’s own excellence.
    The love of one’s own excellence.
    The love of one’s own excellence.
    Those words kept replaying over and over in my head. I remember one time when father boasted and sounded like that definition. He kept on saying how he was better than everybody else, and how no one could compare to his genius.
    Father always brags about his excellence, often too.
    Does that mean it’s too late to save father, or is he still hanging there waiting to be saved.
    Waiting to be rid of that monster who kills.
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I quickly ran over to the nurse that was closest to me. She looked very startled, so I gave her about .333 seconds to compose herself. "Who is that man?!" I demanded. "I don't really know, but as it looks refering to his condition, he doesn't look like he is going to make it." She replies. My heart sinks into my stomach. I start to see fog, and the next thing I know, I am falling onto the tile floors.


I wake up in a room. There are doctors everywhere, and I try to sit up, but there is a restraint holding me down so that I can't move. I look the my left, and I see the farmiliar macine that shows...
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posted by 1999jacko
5 years ago
Leo stood at the edge of the plane as 3 men stood watching him intently.They were chanting over and over"Take on the life of Survival. Even though he was 8 he still knew they would set the bomb and push him off sooner or later. Leo turned around and tried to keep his gaze on the men, but he was to scared of them to do it. They had trained him for 4 years about the skills of survival and how to fight but the still scared him to death. As Leo turned back to the door the men stopped chanting, they moved as one being and picked up the bomb together setting it to 10 seconds, they then...
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There's a possibility
That if we believe in our souls
Then the doubt that we will fail
Will melt away

We must believe
There's no better time to do this
And we shall never give up
Because a helpless creature is dying

We shall help the creature
And if we come together and sing
All hope will become stronger and stronger
Like a candle building flame

We shall care for it
We shall be its shoulder to lean on
We shall never give up hope
If it dies, I die with it

It shall survive
If we give up all our hope
Nothing ever shall be alive again

The hope still blazes
Inside of each and every one of us,
And we believe that we will
Defeat our obstacle

There will be nothing to fight us
After we look inside ourselves
And find our strength

I have a dream,
That my little amazing creature
Will survive and get a new leg
It shall not die.
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The sun was sitting on the horizon as the troops of UFS reached Nindell. The air hung heavy as they trudged through the streets swamped with garbage, crumbling buildings and the occasional body. Talow stuck close to the group as he heard gunshots firing from the distance. The walked until they had reached the far end of the city. Talow could see a large hill with the jungle starting at the top and doors at the bottom. They marched up to these doors which opened to reveal a hidden building inside.
“Welcome to HQ.” Luca whispered in Talow's ear as he passed. Talow looked at the open area he...
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Chapter Nine

      Unless, Reese was working with Hazel. How else would Hazel be able to release Reese from jail for just an event like this. There was no other way. Dakota stopped at the door and tried smiling but it was so stained you could tell it was fake. Reese didn't smile. She appeared sad. She wouldn't mumble a word. All she did was slowly stand up and prance on Dakota. She was able to hold Dakota down and lug her towards the bed. She handcuffed Dakota to Hazel's bed. It happened so quickly that Dakota wasn't able to put up much of a fight.
      "I am so sorry for this Dakota but...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasy :)~
Chapter 36
        An angel in disguise
    I feel my blood run cold as I hear the door open and I quickly enter the room, the guys are on the phone, and I motion them to be quiet, not loud. Meredith nods and whispers into the phone, quickly, she sound hysterical and the door slamming shut makes us all jump, and the two girl’s start to whimper.
    I put a finger on my lips and they nod, clutching each other.
    I have to think of something, and fast. We...
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Chapter 5
        Daredevil’s plus mall equals disaster
    The end of the day was finally over, and I was shaking with enthusiasm. At first we were going to Lara’s house, but then we decided to go a mall (that I didn’t know existed until now) that was close to my house.
    “First things first, were going to the arcade.”
    “Arcade? You guys always hog the games.” Corrie complained. “How about we eat first?”...
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The Big Three are Zeus, Hades, and Poisedon. You never call the big three unless it is an extreme emergency. I knew the results if this didn't go well with them. I would most likely be zapped into a cockroach or something odd like that. That is something that I didn't want to happen to me but we needed to stop Elysia before Earth was next. I grew very fond of this planet.

Gabriel and I were the sons of Zeus and w knew our father very well which was abnormal because Zeus hates demigods. He really hates them. I went to Mount Olympus alone while Gabriel stayed behind to become a spy for us. Gabriel...
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    “Kayden!” Sebastian-my band’s manager-had a look of dismay on his simple features. I couldn’t hear him, but I could read his lips. Anyone who knew me knew to get my attention before they spoke.
    “What?” I asked. Though I’d been deaf since I was five I knew how to speak as well as anyone with full hearing.    
    “You still haven’t made your set list,” he stated, his face screwed up into a frown. “The first performance is tomorrow night.”
    “I’ll have it finished...
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it's now worse than just nightmares ,Kat seeing her bad wraith in the real life ,and sometimes that driving to her cry ,cause she really want to end all these hallucinations but she doesn't know how

and Kat always having that dream ,when her wraith giving her a knife in the dark and when the light turn on ,she's seeing the day when her mother killed ,but this time she's the one who have to kill her mother not the swordsman ,she's fighting in her dreams to stop and to save her mother ,but that girl is very strong ,she's forcing her to kill ,and when Kat does ,she always wake up from the nightmare...
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posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 8
Are you a daredevil or a murderer?
    After taking as many pictures as I could, from my trusty phone, I went back up stairs and walked out the door.
    My friends were busy with their families, and my one had abandoned me, so I decided to go out. I went to the mall we visited recently, and went to the movie theater’s we sabotaged, thankfully it was still open and I paid for a movie (what movie I don’t know I just kind of zoned out at that part) and it didn’t matter what movie it was anyways...
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