Twilight Series Article: black moon chapter 17

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posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 17
Bella pov
We were playing chess on the sofa and as always I was winning! Hehehe it feels so great every time I beat him
-u lose again!
I said and clapped my hands
-yeah your good at this thing
-well what can I say……………
He sttood up and hugged me
-tell me how you do this?
He whispered
I touched his head and tapped it hard and said
-just think.
-ok
He kissed my forehead and went upstaires to change cause we were going hunting
He came back and we raced deep in the green greeny jungel I always hated that color I like bron ,warm colors like the sun…………………….
I stopped at my place not moving there was vampire scent every where there was 12 of them I could tell from the diffrebt tastes matt just looked at me confused he really isnt good at this stuff
-the scent do you know it?
He breathed the aire and gasped he turned white as a ghost whiter than any vampire I have ever seen in my life
-oh yes
He said and pain filled his eyes
-what
-they are the ones that killed her……………..
Oh the ones that killed her mate suzi! So what are they doing here?
He looked so sad so I rushed to him and hugged him he hugged him back he hugged me tighter then I realized he was shaking ……he was subbing tearless subs
-what's wrong?
He took a deep breath
-theire back….for me they told me they would come back in a few years but they never came and know theire here……………
-I wont let anyone hurt you!
I said and kissed him hard on his lips he dragged me to him and kissed me like this was are last moment I kissed him back with all the force in my body not wanting to let him go. I was feeling his pain I couldn’t stand 1 min away from him let alone the rest of my life but I will do anything in my power to help him I wanted to ask him if he can teleports us when he saw the question in my face
-I cant teleport when there here one of them the darck browm haired guy has a power he can controll ypur power so then u cant use it .
I sighed and kissed him another time
-I love you,I love you I love you I love you I lovr you……………………………………
O broke into subs
-shhh shhh its ok…….look they are getting closer every second so run as fast as you can and save yourself..
-no!no…I will never leave you
I shook my head disgused at the idea when I heard footsstepps I turned around matt was in fron of me in his crouching zone
-hello matt long time no see
-yeah I hoped there wouldn’t be any at all
-so you found a new mate that's cool……..poor suzie…..im sorry for your loss bythe way…you know she diserved to die
-what do you want?
-I just came to fullfill my promise as I told you 360 years ago I would come and kill you soon ……..none of you diserved to live …..
-what did she do to you?
-she killed my daughter when she was a new born …my little angel was wanderring in the jungel chasing a butterfly when YOUR suzie kille my only CHILED!!!!!!!!!
He screamed
-what have I done to you?
He was confused
-matt you protected her from me 4 times you kept teleporting her different places you knew what she had done but YOU TOOK HER SIDE I thought we were friends……..WE WERE friends before she showed up and changed you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Then you became like me …so then we could have had lots of fun! But you…………..CHOSE her againe!!!!!!! YOU DISERVE TO DIE TOO!!!
Matt just looked at him then at me
-I will do you one favor and I wont kill her cause she didn’t have a part in this!
-no!
I shouted
-Bella he's right you have no part in this you should live a long happy life………………….
I went to attack the men in front off matt but 4 huge hands caugh me not letting me go the other ones moved closer to matt
-no PLEASE PLEASE DON’T DO THIS…….
-Bella…….
Matt said
-no no no no no no I don’t want to let go of you I LOVE YOU I don’t want to be alone again I don’t want to suffer PLEASE
I begged the dark haired guys standing in front of matt they looked so cold wsith red eyes like they couldn’t understand the pain I was in
Matt just looked down closing his eyes
-please don’t do this please DON’T KILL HIM HE'S EVERY THING I HAVE PLEASE……………
I used all my energy and loosend the hands that were grabbing me rushing towards matt but I hit something hard and the hand caugh me and pulled me back there hold was so strong that my dress had 1000 holes in it already I tried to fight them but there hold was so strong but I still didn’t give up
-please don’t please
It felt like tears were running down my cheeks but……….nothing
They didn’t pay attention to me and went closer to matt
-I love you
He said his eyes fulll of pain
-I love you too
I said my voice shaking
The big guy went closer to matt he broke matts neck matt screamed in pain then every thing went silent
-no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no
I kept saying sheking violently matt was dead
This pain was too much it was like my life had ended likei was empty this lose wase too much even worse than edward or when my parents pased away
-eeeeeeeeh eeeeh eeeh
I was subbing so hard and kind of creepy noises came out of me I didn’t want to live anymore I wanted to die
I looked at matt hoping he will wake up or move but nothing the huge guy ripped matt into pieces and burned him a purpel smoke filled the sky
-no no no no no no no no no no no no no
I kept saying again shaking my head like it would go away or I will wake up from my night mare I was shaking again I couldn’t controll myself the guards let me fel on the ground and ran away with their masters
I was punching the ground as hard as I could I was alone I was alone I was alone……….no I cant take this I just lay there on the ground still shaking when I fainted……………………………………………………………..

groovychicklisa, teamalice_0 and 6 others like this

joe-edwardfan chap 17! i really love this chap i hope i described how much pain bella was in i kinda was crying when i was writing it because like i could feel the pain ...like when you lose someone you really love its just so hard to cope with it.... and tell me should i continue or start a new cool story!!!!

GothicGirl0525 AWSOME AS ALWAYS CANT WAIT FOR MORE.

Sacred_Love1550 Yes, you MUST continue this story I'm so addicted! I cried too, but I still love it!

twilight_james but please continue!! PLEASE!! otherwise I WILl DIE! love it love it love it!

Rob_patt_fan Ah.... I'm addicted 2 your story gij! You nailed it...! I cried myself! Lots of love.... XoXo

bella01 continue i begged of you it is part of my life now

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100 Places To Go During The Summer: Cullen Style! Chapter 2

posted by alice_cullen_12

For some, it's true...

100 Places To Go During The Summer: Cullen Style

Chapter 2: The Opera House

Emmett's POV

I am very excited!!! Jasper had the best idea!!! We're taking the girls to The Opera House! Edward didn't want to, but we forced him to. He's so weak...Ooops. He can hear my mind...

"Emmett," he growled sharply.

"Sorry, bro. No hard feelings...Right?," I said nervously.

"Ugghrggghhh, you are sooo very intellectually infected with dementia," Edward complained.

What the hell does that even mean??? I'm confused. I've gotta remember to look up dementia online. And intellectually...He's right. I am kinda stupid. Ooops....

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Kidnapped- Chapter 12

posted by ktbminnie12

Bella’s POV

    I didn’t know how much later it was. It seemed like two minutes. Then I heard Aro’s voice saying, “Bella, wake up. You’re home.”
    I opened my eyes. We were in front of the Cullen’s house. I was overjoyed. But wait, there was something off. The lights were off just like when they left. Did they leave?
    “Where is everyone?” I asked.
    “I don’t know. Their scent is almost four months old,” Aro said.
    “They must have went looking for me,” I said....

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Alice's Journal Part 6

posted by just_bella

I wasn't sure where this was going at first. I've figured it all out now, hope people like it :)
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LAST TIME:

I apologized to everyone and explained that Edward and I were going to go hunting. I had to tell Jasper that I would be back, and that I just needed to get away from the house for a while. He didn't want to let me go, but knew that this is what I needed right now. He sent a wave of love flowing over me, I smiled up at him and kissed his hand as I walked over to the doors.

"Don't worry, I will explain what I read as soon as I have time to...

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99 Things A Twilight Fan Should Do

posted by mad_mackem28

1.You risk being grounded in the name of Twilight!
2.You check the twilighters site more than your facebook/myspace pages.
3.Every thing that you talk about, some how relates back to Twilight!
4.People ask you if you want to go to the movies and you automatically try to convince them to see Twilight for the millionth time.
5.Everywhere you go, you’ll think of the Twilight characters and wonder if they have ever been there.
6.You cried even when you were in the same building as Nikki Reed and Edi Gathegi even though you didn’t see them.
7.You risk getting fired at work by using the off limits...

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Emmett Story Part 7

posted by just_bella

I probably should be doing some work for school, but this story is all I could think about. I hope this works out, enjoy :)
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Quick Flash Back from the last one:

It seemed like it took hours to get out of the woods, but we stepped out of the woods and onto the edge of the homestead. Aaron was starting to turn pale, and his breathing seemed like it was different then it had been. I knew that I needed to get him to the house, but was afraid that he wouldn't fair well with me running.

I looked into his eyes and made a quick decision.

"Aaron, I am going...

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My Valentine - Chapter 6

posted by dinosteph

Please excuse mistakes, It's late. I am tired.
I don't know how I feel about the ending, I might change some of tags when I think of something better.
Enjoy!

End of Chapter 5...

Edward took the empty bag from my hand as he wrapped his arm around my waist.

“He looks perfect.” He smiled, kissing the top of my head.

“Actually, It's a girl.” I smiled back.

“Of course it is.” He laughed. “She's perfect.” I glanced over, gazing into his eyes as he pressed his lips against mine softly

“Hot chocolate?” He mumbled against my lips.

“Sure.” I mumbled back. I was freezing.

We turned to head...

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She said YES

posted by lovealice

Ok I've never written anything before, this is my first shot and if no one likes it it may be my last. I want to write between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn from Edwards perspective.
A lot of the first chapter is taken from the end of Eclipse, just to set the tone for the rest.

Chapter 1:
Remembering the happy day
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I sat on the couch in my bedroom thinking back on the day that Bella finally agreed to marrying me. We were in the meadow relaxing when I realized that she was just doing everything for everyone else. She wasn't thinking about herself like...

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Visions Chp. 9

posted by 2bearz

Sorry sorry sorry! i had AIMS testin n didnt get a chance for this, i made it extra long for u! plz forgiv me! plus theres a flashback in ther!

It was about 2 hours after Alex tried to kill me, and I've learned alot about him; maybe even more than I wanted to know. First I was pronouncing his name wrong this whole time, it's Alec. And he's with the Volturi! I was so surprised when he told me that, and a little scared. Apparently he was in love with my masani. He joined the Volturi because my she refused to love him back, and now he had no love left in his heart, or compassion, or anything else...

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Starlit - Hazel and Blue (Chapter 14)

posted by Yoss

I felt despair and remorse during the flight. Could I really stand on my own two feet? Is this the right decision – leaving my family, so I could get away from Jacob? Why was Jacob following us? Did he know I’m off to college? Does he care? What might have happened if I asked my father to stop the car? Could I say goodbye to him face to face? What would he say? Would he stop me from leaving or would he just say the usual ‘take care of yourself.’ crap?

Well, some of the answers to my questions are yet to be discovered while some questions would remain unanswered.

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The despair and...

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"Unexpected" Chapter 1. Baby One More Time

posted by aexis123

Huh... I'm asleep I thought to myself thats impossible I'm a vampire and as far as I know we don't/ can't sleep. I then woke up with a jolt and realized I was hungry something else Vampires don't expirence. My husband Edward walked into the room with Renesmee and her son Jerimia. My daughter Renesmee had only months ago givin birth to the human that layed in front of me now. My daughter the half vampire/half human had had a one night affair with a human named Mike Zowe, and thus forth got pregnant with Jerimia. Now Jacob and Renesmee were once again in my room with my husband Edward. "Mom......

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Kayla's Secret, Chapter 8

posted by twilight-7

This is told from Mitchell’s point of view. I realised as I was writing that none of you would know exactly who Mitchell is just from Kayla’s point of view. So I’ve decided to write in Mitchell’s point of view. I may write in Mitchell’s perspective again.

It didn’t take a lot of effort to mesmerize Michaela Swan. Not that she isn’t clever, she is. Anyone can see it by looking in her eyes. It was just I was so accomplished at it that it came so easily. I could mesmerize anyone by just one smile, one look into their eyes, one touch. It had taken me decades to learn it but it wasn’t...

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Kidnapped-Chapter 5

posted by ktbminnie12

Edward’s POV

    I sat in my room moping. It has been 3 days. It was hard living without Bella in my life. She was the reason for my existence. The reason I’m still alive. Alice was downstairs, searching for anything on Bella’s future. Still cloudy. Still nothing.
    If I could cry, I would be spilling tears right now. I thought back to the night Bella was kidnapped, searching for anything that might lead me to her. I couldn’t think of anything.
    That night, I followed her trail before I called Charlie. Her trail ended at...

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new moon edwards POV part 6

posted by _madz_

this is the next part of the story. it's much longer than i thought it would be but i think it makes it better.
(P.S this is not my story all credit goes to steph meyer)

Caius, who was getting very frustrated, smiled hugely when Aro tacked on his little condition.
I knew this was coming, but I couldn’t mean it. I stared down at Bella, her soft, beautiful face staring up at me. “Mean it,” she whispered, agony written all over her heart-shaped face. “Please.”
I felt my expression twist at the tone of her voice. She still wanted it so badly, but I couldn’t give it to her. This good, pure,...

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my opinion on Jacob Black

posted by jacob_is_amazin

I'm writing this because I feel the need to defend Jacob Black. I would like to make it very clear that I adore Edward but I am Team Jacob, though I knew she would choose Edward.

Okay, so Jacob is extremely mistaken by a lot of Twilight fans(the Team Edward ones). I understand you guys all have your reasons for hating Jacob...things such as he's a douchebag, he trys to steal Bella, he's a jerk to the Cullens.

I really don't think Jacob is as much of a douche as everyone makes him out to be. Girls just automatically label him as that because compared to Edward he's just a normal guy. He's funny...

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Jacob and Renesmee's Honeymoon -- Chapter 4

posted by BiteMeCullen107

Smash!!! I jumped up out of bed. The winds had started to pick up just like Aunt Alice predicted. I could see the clouds getting darker; the air was think and cold. I got out of bed trying not to wake up Jake and slipped on Jake’s T – shirt that was thrown on to the lamp shade next to my side of the bed. I stood up and was a little light headed I caught myself on the night stand. God, we have to not be so ruff in bed. I get to dizzy in the morning from all of it. I thought to myself. I don’t know what it is but there’s just this magnetic pull between Jacob and me. We could help it last...

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Starlit - Eggshell (Chapter 11)

posted by Yoss

I took a deep breath and opened the door as softly as possible and tiptoed down the stairs. Of course, not calling attention to myself is something I could not get away with.

Ever since…I winced…Ever since I came back from the cliffs, my family has kept tabs on every breath I took. Dad held vigil right outside my door for…I don’t know how many days, how many nights exactly. I heard him moan in frustration as the pain knifed my heart into gazillion pieces mercilessly. I heard his teeth gnashing as I choked Jacob’s name over and over again.

All my family gave their fair share in coaxing...

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Alice's Journal Part 1

posted by just_bella

This takes place after Twilight, when Alice found out some of what happened in her past, or at least what I would like to think:

It was just like any other Saturday in the town of Forks, Washington. Every weekend someone from our family would have to drive the 140 miles to Seattle to get our mail. Now I know it seems a bit strange for a family of vampires to be getting mail, but we still have bills, magazine subscriptions, and miscellaneous mail that we get once weekly.

Unfortunately this time it was Jasper and my
turn, not that it took us the 6 hours (3 hours up and 3 hours back) that it took...

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Starlit - Promise (Chapter 7)

posted by Yoss

“I better take you home, now.” Jacob softly said as he pulled away from my face. “Your father might be hunting for me right this very moment.” He chuckled amused by the idea.

We snuck out. We wanted to be alone, away from the watchful eyes and listening ears of everyone. He took me to our favorite place here in La push –up on the cliff. We were sitting on the edge of the highest peak, our feet dangling over the edge.

The sky was a perfect setting for a night like this – the full moon hung just right overhead. The sky filled with thousands of twinkling stars.

A starlit night – I sighed...

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New Story - Chapter 9

posted by dinosteph

I reached out for his hand but he quickly moved out of reach. His eyes dark and unfocused as he took another step away from me.

“Edward?” I said confused. He continued walking backwards, getting farther away with each step. Slowly fading into the shadows. “Edward?!” I yelled after him, slowly walking forward. It seemed for every step I took, he took 5 steps farther. “Where are you going?!” I yelled after him, walking faster.

“Away from you.” He said harshly, staring me down as he stopped walking, holding his place he crossed his arms.
...

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Chapter 1 meet the cullens

posted by H20girlH20

i was in the car fast alseep. when Phil and Renee were in the front. i was going to meet my sister Bella and her husband Edward also Renessmen. i woke up "hey Karina were almost there" said Phil. I rolled my eyes. i saw a white house. i saw Bella and Edward there i got out of the car and ran to them "BELLA EDWARD!!!" i scream. i ran to them and gave them a hug. i saw a girl with brown hair "renessmen." i said "yes" she said i gave her a hug. "wow you're so grown up are you like 13 or what?" "i'm 17" she said "come one the rest are dying to see you" she said."hi hi" i said "AHHH KARINA" yelled Alice "hi" i gave them a hug