Nat walked down the tunnel, hand against the wall and flashlight on. She walked around until she came to an open room. Nat walked around gazing at how big the room was. She shone her flashlight around and then something caught her eye. The light was reflecting off of something. She walked towards the shining object. Then she stepped on something. She looked down and noticed some purple crystals. "What are these doing in these tunnels?" She looked up and saw a mountain of treasure. She stepped back in awe and tripped over something. She got up quickly and was face to face with eight giant eyes. A spider as big as a car was towering over her. " Oh no..." She whispered. The spider looked at her and walked away. She got up quickly and ran to the wall, trying to find the door. The spider seemed pretty occupied trying to find something and not noticing Nat. " I have to get out of here!" Nat whispered and tried to find the door fast. She picked up the flashlight and tried turning it on, but it was busted. The clicking of the button caught the spiders attention. It marched over to Nat. " No! No Please stay away, I'm afraid of Spiders! Ahhhhhh!!!!"~
Rose walked down the tunnels, looking at everything she could. " He's got to be in here. Nat wouldn't keep having those dreams if he wasn't." She traveled down farther until and big room. She looked around and then noticed something on the wall. A mirror. " What's a mirror doing in the middle of a pit?" She walked up to it, and instead of a reflective surface, it was a deep purple. She then heard screams and saw fire reflecting in the mirror. She turned around and saw the whole room on fire. She looked around for who was screaming, but the smoke was thick in her face. She was about to panic when she saw where the person was. There was two of them. They were crying, but not trying to get the fire off of them. "Hey! Come on we have to get out of here! I got some water in my-" She reached for the backpack Crystal gave her to carry their supplies but, it was on fire as well. Panicking, she threw the backpack across the room. She saw the people still standing there crying. She thought they looked familiar. She tried using her powers, but they didn't seem to be working. Rose ran to the people, who were still not doing anything about their burning bodies. " Come on, we have to get out of here! We'll burn to death! Come on!" Rose grabbed their arms and turned them around. she gasped in shock of what she saw.
To Be Continued.
Rose walked down the tunnels, looking at everything she could. " He's got to be in here. Nat wouldn't keep having those dreams if he wasn't." She traveled down farther until and big room. She looked around and then noticed something on the wall. A mirror. " What's a mirror doing in the middle of a pit?" She walked up to it, and instead of a reflective surface, it was a deep purple. She then heard screams and saw fire reflecting in the mirror. She turned around and saw the whole room on fire. She looked around for who was screaming, but the smoke was thick in her face. She was about to panic when she saw where the person was. There was two of them. They were crying, but not trying to get the fire off of them. "Hey! Come on we have to get out of here! I got some water in my-" She reached for the backpack Crystal gave her to carry their supplies but, it was on fire as well. Panicking, she threw the backpack across the room. She saw the people still standing there crying. She thought they looked familiar. She tried using her powers, but they didn't seem to be working. Rose ran to the people, who were still not doing anything about their burning bodies. " Come on, we have to get out of here! We'll burn to death! Come on!" Rose grabbed their arms and turned them around. she gasped in shock of what she saw.
To Be Continued.
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power or darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. Friends that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for reading this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start next week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for reading this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start next week. 1/12/12)
