Despite his weight, he was called Cloud since he is lighter than any other children. From the City of Pressure, he was a shy boy who lived in the center of the city. When he was discovered his powers of Pressure, he was immediately sent to Andromedian Pyrokinetic Academy due to his murder of a child who was teasing him. He was not studying well due to the trauma about his powers when he accidentally killed a child by squashing him by increasing the number of pressure around the child. His face was mostly pale. But, as he was staying longer there, he was studying better, recieving better marks and getting control over his own powers. He was given an immediate intermediate level of training because of the strength of his powers. he succeeded the training and continued his studies as normal. In the final test, his first opponent (if I remember) was Syke the Hedgehog, which he won by a lot because Syke's enviroment was desert and beach, unlike Cloud, which can adapt to all enviroment except space. The test goes on until his 3 opponent Joey, which his clones are helping Joey to attack Cloud from all sides non-stop. Cloud can only use his pressure blast every 5 seconds, which makes it a bit hard to battle Joey since his powers makes him as quick as lightning. As Cloud walks back to his dormitory, he stops mid-way to recover himself from the pain and electrocution that Joey gave him in the battle. Before he could reach his room, the alarm caused everyone to get to the assembly area and got evacuated to the escape pod and was launched to outer galaxy, which their home galaxy will never be seen again.
Hi. I'm Shade2145. It appears a load of you are Mary-sues. I am here to help. Unlike someother FC guides. I give advice in the best (and shortest) way possible.I don't try and offend you,this is just here to help.
So here we go!
Chapter One
Mary Sueing is when you bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.
N00b133!!!: I shoot you then telport you inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B YOU JUST MADE UP AN WORD
See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no you never.
Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we show ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do you want that? No.
Chapter 2.
Never Mary sue.
That is all.
So here we go!
Chapter One
Mary Sueing is when you bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.
N00b133!!!: I shoot you then telport you inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B YOU JUST MADE UP AN WORD
See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no you never.
Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we show ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do you want that? No.
Chapter 2.
Never Mary sue.
That is all.
Lukky, She was kind,smart,energetic and mature for her age.
"The key isn't working to my apartment..." She said softly. She went downstairs to get the key checked out. They said "It's covered in Rain, You'll have to copy another key" Lukky went outside to go to a Key Copy Machine. She put it in. "I do not see why it's not working..." Then suddenly, Someone got her from behind. She started crying. She didn't know what she did wrong.
"WHAT,WHAT HAVE A DONE TO DESERVE THIS! Then she escaped. She didn't know what happened. She didn't loose anything. She ran away. She didn't know where she was or were she went.She began to walk, Therefore cry at the same time. Rain began to fall. "Fuck, I have to get home ASAP."
"The key isn't working to my apartment..." She said softly. She went downstairs to get the key checked out. They said "It's covered in Rain, You'll have to copy another key" Lukky went outside to go to a Key Copy Machine. She put it in. "I do not see why it's not working..." Then suddenly, Someone got her from behind. She started crying. She didn't know what she did wrong.
"WHAT,WHAT HAVE A DONE TO DESERVE THIS! Then she escaped. She didn't know what happened. She didn't loose anything. She ran away. She didn't know where she was or were she went.She began to walk, Therefore cry at the same time. Rain began to fall. "Fuck, I have to get home ASAP."