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posted by Problematic129
*Hey guys, I'm back :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Summary:
Three years ago devastating news hit the Loreans, there eighteen year old daughter was found dead in the lake. For years police tried to find her killer, but never got anywhere. Soon, everyone gave up, even her parents. But not Destiny, everyday she would try to find police reports similar to her sister. Destiny is no ordinary girl, she has visions and can see things that no one else can, and lately she's been having dreams of her sister about her sister. When it looks like all hope is lost, a young detective comes to her aid, together they uncover the secrets and unanswered questions to her sister's death. But the more closer they get to solving the case, the more dangerous their lives become.
Prologue
All I remembered was running, or at least, that’s all that mattered at the moment. I was being chased, my predator a few feet from me. Why did I have to be so dumb to walk alone on a creepy night like this?
    All I wanted to see was my sister Destiny, it was her that kept me going. She was my little fourteen year old sister and she needed me.
    If I hadn’t taken Destiny away from our parents to live with me, she would have to suffer the shouting and yelling that you’d often hear in my parent’s house.
    “Help!” I yelled to no avail, this was a deserted grassland no one came to, except victims and killers.
    Which I’d soon be.
    I ran into the woods nearby, my breath becoming louder. My muscles screamed and ached, I felt like I couldn’t run no more, but I had too.
    And it was just my luck that I tripped over a small rock and fell, I heard a small crunch. I think I’ve broken my ankle, it burns, but right now all I feel is panic and fear. What do I do?! My killer could be here any second, I have to hide!
    I looked around quickly, but all I saw was trees, but they’d have to do. Despite the protesting ankle, I climbed up the tree as quietly and carefully as I could. By the time I was close enough to get a good view of the ground, but high enough to be obscured by the leaves, my ankle had this searing pain, but it felt dull enough to ignore. I stayed still and everything was silent for a full moment. But then I heard the sound of foot crunching and leaves, and I saw my killer walk past the tree. All I could see was there head, nothing else, not one single identification of who they were.
    They were all dressed in black, and either that was a black cap or hat on the person’s head, or my killer had black hair. But right now I was too disoriented to tell the difference.
    After a few minutes, I carefully got off my tree, and limped in the other direction. After a while I left the woods, I was on some side walk. Yes! Almost there!
    I was just going to step on the street, when something hard collided with my head. But I couldn’t process anything after that except the intense pain in my head, my vision swam, I couldn’t comprehend anything.
    Was I being carried?
    It felt like hours, but was possibly minutes, when my mind started to work again. I blanked for a second, but then I noticed I had a blindfold on, I tried to pry it off, but I was weak. I felt this weird like movement, even though I was sitting, then I realized that we were in a car. Yes! Driving in a car! But my joy at my brightness was short lived, when the car came to an abrupt stop. My head started to thud against my skull, as another intense pain came, but I managed to keep my insanity intact.
    I felt hands, going to my hands, and tying something there. I didn’t know what, but it was pretty hard, my hands ached at the weight of it. Then I was being pushed out of the car and dragged to only god knows where.
    Then my blindfold was off and I was faced to one of the most beautiful lakes I’ve ever seen, with an amazing waterfall. It was then I understood, at least I’d get die somewhere beautiful.
    It was the last thing I saw before I was pushed into the lake, I felt the panicky feeling grip me again as I tried to swim up, but something was holding me down. So I looked down and my eyes widened, my hands were chained together, and the chains led to a very looking heavy weight.
    I couldn’t get out, I was going to drown.
    Destiny! I thought, thinking of my loyal sister, who’d be there to protect her from mom and dad’s infamous fighting, to help her with her homework, to hold her in there arms. Our parents couldn’t, they never did with me, always too pre-occupied. Please, protect her.
    My throat was on fire, my nose felt ready to explode, and my eyes started to burn. I fought and I screamed in the water, being the stubborn person that I was. But that wouldn’t help me not now.
    I kept on moving and fighting until I altogether stopped, and I died. I’ve must’ve looked crazy, I knew I would look crazy. The determined look in my eyes mixed with the emptiness, the last thing on my mind was of my sister.
    
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posted by AlOoOosh
I am that one who sleeps away
I am the one who spends the night …
reaching his dreams by counting the stars…
I am that one who carries his sadness on his back

I’m not sad…
but inside of me there’s a country crying
There’s a thirsty land
And there’s a fear of losing what I’ve never had…

Every night I talk to the sky …
hope I find you up there someday…

call my name once
and see what will I do

I am here in the mess alone
Trying to find the pieces of my mind
I’ve lost everything
And now I am losing myself

I want you to come and protect me from that loss
You are the one who can find me…...
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I held my breath. I adjusted my goggles. I tightened my black swim cap. I got onto the diving board, slowly and cautiously. I loosened my body before my big dive.
The timers got their stopwatches. A voice came over the speakers.
"Swimmers, get ready," I shook my body. "Set," I relaxed and thought of the pure heaven as I would dive, and break the surface. The moment I was waiting for would soon come. And...it did. "GO!!!"
The crowd roared. We were off to a quick start, I supposed. I thought of nothing but fire, fire, and only fire. I moved my arms in blind fury. I kicked my feet like I was...
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posted by para-scence
If someone wouldn't mind reading and commenting, I'm kind of in need of feedback. Thanks in advance.

"Evangeline! It's time to get up!" Mom called from the hallway. I grumbled and pulled the blanket over my head. Just five more minutes... five more hours would be nice...

"Evan," my older brother Joshua poked his head into my room. "Didn't you hear Mom? You need to get up." I growled at him.

"Get out," I squeezed my eyes shut tighter.

"Why don't you try and make me?" he taunted. I grabbed my pillow and flung it across the room at him. He laughed and ran out of the room. Not having anything to...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the comments and fans :) Probably tomorrow I'll post the stories later than usual, so your forewarned. Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 18
    A sleepless night
    I spent the rest of the vision following Dorothy and I, smiling at the good ole times. By the time the vision was done it was dark outside and I was exhausted. I called the doctor to notify him that I was okay, and after a few minutes I had hung up, finished showering, and was ready for bed.
    But I couldn’t sleep, I kept thinking back to those...
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posted by alicia386
Dear Sam,
I've been see my therapist - never thought I would be saying those words - for a while now. She said that I was making a major break through. I do not know why she believes that since u barely say a word during the sessions, I barely do anything during the sessions.

I had to miss a few days from work so right how my boss is on the verge of killing me. His birthday is coming yo so I will try to throw him a surprise party. Ha, can you imagine my boss at a party?!

My boss is about as all as a 13 year old . He has a tangled beard and beady green eyes, he use to have a full head of brown...
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posted by AlOoOosh
I was trying to reach the sky
I was trying to fly
That was my dream
And you made it my fault

It has taken all my life…
Staying away from you…
Thought I then can survive without you
Nothing has helped me to forget
Everything I love reminds me in you
And to act like I’ve never known you…
There’s no way
………………………

How would I ignore your smile?!
How can I forget who has created me?!
The one who has changed my life
The one who has been always beside me…

Don’t ask me to move on
Because you’ve never taught me how to do that
………………………

Nothing I need when you’re beside...
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posted by Problematic129
Part 8! I don't own any of these pictures! Most come from Alegrias.me Hope you feel inspired! Down here is a song I wrote called Breathe, hope you enjoy it.

Breathe
    Verse 1:
    I wake up today with a smile on my face, and I return back disappointments are made. Where did I go wrong? Did I even try? This world is gonna bring me down, bring tears to my eyes.
    What’s this weird feeling? I want it to go. I can’t believe that life can a cruel black hole. Time just seems to fade away, days become weeks, and I’m still, yes I’m...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the comments and fans :) Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 17
    Happy times
    “How can you not be happy, this is our first sister-sister tradition in like…ever?” My eleven year old self asked my sister, giving her a look like I thought she was mental.
    Dorothy laughed, a huge smile on her face. “Your such a loser Des, we hang out all the time.”
    “Not all the time,” I insisted. “And this is the first time we planned this to do and do again every year.”
    Dorothy...
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posted by rory2011
so I see you guys writing alot of wonderful poems
so I just want to share this with you
I saw alot of you writing in the new poetry style and no one have ever wrote in the old style ,maybe cause it's only popular in where I live ,but here's a part of my fav poem ,it won't be easy to read it for the first time ,I hope I can translate it right ,it called "be panacea " :

1-weak your feeling of love when it fall in sleep without people senses they would be like dolls

2-love ,the hut became a bright castle hate,the world became a dark prison

3- the life gave you all her treasures don't hold it back...
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posted by alicia386
September 1

Blair was almost out the door of her grandma's apartment. She was dressed and all set for today's activities. As soon as she opened the door her dad was sitting in his car. He was debating whether or not to go in. He had unfortunately heard the door click open and was out his car in a second. Blair had no choice but to continue walking to her car.
"Blair," called her dad. "Just listen to me. I can explain."
Anger filled her. "Explain what? That you cheated on my mom with her sister? What could you possibly say that could change everything? I bet the next words that will come out...
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posted by rory2011
I was in my house waiting my father and my brother
I heard something ,it's calling me since I was a kid ,and it always say "weak up" even If I'm not sleeping
I want to leave my house ,I opened the door and felt the air touching my hair ,the sun was cold in my cheeks ,it was summer ,and I feel the cold winter coming and escaping autumn
I walked away from my house , this is the first time I feel my house is very hunting that way ,while I was walking there ,I realized one thing and it was the most important thing I should realized in my dark life
I'm now a real human ,I were always close to live...
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