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posted by Problematic129
*Hey guys, I'm back :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Summary:
Three years ago devastating news hit the Loreans, there eighteen year old daughter was found dead in the lake. For years police tried to find her killer, but never got anywhere. Soon, everyone gave up, even her parents. But not Destiny, everyday she would try to find police reports similar to her sister. Destiny is no ordinary girl, she has visions and can see things that no one else can, and lately she's been having dreams of her sister about her sister. When it looks like all hope is lost, a young detective comes to her aid, together they uncover the secrets and unanswered questions to her sister's death. But the more closer they get to solving the case, the more dangerous their lives become.
Prologue
All I remembered was running, or at least, that’s all that mattered at the moment. I was being chased, my predator a few feet from me. Why did I have to be so dumb to walk alone on a creepy night like this?
    All I wanted to see was my sister Destiny, it was her that kept me going. She was my little fourteen year old sister and she needed me.
    If I hadn’t taken Destiny away from our parents to live with me, she would have to suffer the shouting and yelling that you’d often hear in my parent’s house.
    “Help!” I yelled to no avail, this was a deserted grassland no one came to, except victims and killers.
    Which I’d soon be.
    I ran into the woods nearby, my breath becoming louder. My muscles screamed and ached, I felt like I couldn’t run no more, but I had too.
    And it was just my luck that I tripped over a small rock and fell, I heard a small crunch. I think I’ve broken my ankle, it burns, but right now all I feel is panic and fear. What do I do?! My killer could be here any second, I have to hide!
    I looked around quickly, but all I saw was trees, but they’d have to do. Despite the protesting ankle, I climbed up the tree as quietly and carefully as I could. By the time I was close enough to get a good view of the ground, but high enough to be obscured by the leaves, my ankle had this searing pain, but it felt dull enough to ignore. I stayed still and everything was silent for a full moment. But then I heard the sound of foot crunching and leaves, and I saw my killer walk past the tree. All I could see was there head, nothing else, not one single identification of who they were.
    They were all dressed in black, and either that was a black cap or hat on the person’s head, or my killer had black hair. But right now I was too disoriented to tell the difference.
    After a few minutes, I carefully got off my tree, and limped in the other direction. After a while I left the woods, I was on some side walk. Yes! Almost there!
    I was just going to step on the street, when something hard collided with my head. But I couldn’t process anything after that except the intense pain in my head, my vision swam, I couldn’t comprehend anything.
    Was I being carried?
    It felt like hours, but was possibly minutes, when my mind started to work again. I blanked for a second, but then I noticed I had a blindfold on, I tried to pry it off, but I was weak. I felt this weird like movement, even though I was sitting, then I realized that we were in a car. Yes! Driving in a car! But my joy at my brightness was short lived, when the car came to an abrupt stop. My head started to thud against my skull, as another intense pain came, but I managed to keep my insanity intact.
    I felt hands, going to my hands, and tying something there. I didn’t know what, but it was pretty hard, my hands ached at the weight of it. Then I was being pushed out of the car and dragged to only god knows where.
    Then my blindfold was off and I was faced to one of the most beautiful lakes I’ve ever seen, with an amazing waterfall. It was then I understood, at least I’d get die somewhere beautiful.
    It was the last thing I saw before I was pushed into the lake, I felt the panicky feeling grip me again as I tried to swim up, but something was holding me down. So I looked down and my eyes widened, my hands were chained together, and the chains led to a very looking heavy weight.
    I couldn’t get out, I was going to drown.
    Destiny! I thought, thinking of my loyal sister, who’d be there to protect her from mom and dad’s infamous fighting, to help her with her homework, to hold her in there arms. Our parents couldn’t, they never did with me, always too pre-occupied. Please, protect her.
    My throat was on fire, my nose felt ready to explode, and my eyes started to burn. I fought and I screamed in the water, being the stubborn person that I was. But that wouldn’t help me not now.
    I kept on moving and fighting until I altogether stopped, and I died. I’ve must’ve looked crazy, I knew I would look crazy. The determined look in my eyes mixed with the emptiness, the last thing on my mind was of my sister.
    
posted by sadiebugz00
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SAY WHAT NOW?
Derek’s Perspective


I drive up to my house and open up the front door quietly just in case Jess was taking a nap. She was not, I repeat, not taking a nap.
I walk in to find my girlfriend, the one that said she knew the best for me and would never cheat on me, was sitting there next to Landon. My best friend! She kept on trying to get closer to him, but good ol’ Landon kept pushing her away. “Come on!!” she was whining, “You know you wanna snuggle!”
“No. I absolutely don’t want to ‘snuggle’,” he replied, I could see horror on his face as he kept backing away...
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posted by Weasel1999
V The Bedroom
When Ember finally found a bedroom it was well worth the wait. A gorgeous raised four poster filled the centre of the room. The hangings were made up of crimson and indigo velvet square patches and the wood was jet black with intricate carvings of dragons, princesses and magical palaces climbing up and down the posts. The bedclothes were of dusky pink silk and embroidered with beautiful jewels of the most wonderful colours imaginable. Reds and purples green and blues, they shone and sparkled dazzling in splendour.
The walls were hung with beautiful portraits, satin scarfs and tapestries...
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posted by CatiePotter
"I'm not small, I'm as tall as you James!!!" I scowled.

James is the only one who also feels the same way I do about this dirty, loud school. He has dirty blonde hair(darker than mine) and smoulder golden eyes. He is a bit lanky but is very athletic, his long legs help him with his hard core track. He is probably the only person I can act naturally around. Especially when there is no Nick making me totally self conscience.

"Your smaller than Mr. Bova." He stated as he droped the book he had in his hands from his face.

"By height or by wieght?." I snickered at him. My music teacher is obese, very...
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posted by Weasel1999
IV The Bathroom
Ember had been wandering aimlessly around the endless corridors and baffling twists and turns when she saw how dark it was getting outside. She would have checked her watch if she had one, but she didn’t so she hazarded a guess at it being about 10, 11 o’clock. She was exhausted and needed to find somewhere to sleep.
But first she wanted to take a shower. She hadn’t washed since she arrived at the mansion and it showed. Her soft skin which was normally a delicate pale porcelain was now covered with a light layer of grime.
She had changed a lot since the fire. Her hair which...
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posted by alicia386
If i never fall in love, then i will never have a broken heart. This was my motto fo rmost of my life. I followed it faithfully utnil not. I think that i broke the only rule that i ever had.

It was summertime; I was forced to go on fthe family vacation to London. I wanted to stay home and quietly work on my novel. My Aunt Tracey, however, persuaded me into going.

I had the pleasure of riding with my cousin, Louis, and her five hcildren. Two of her kids were barely on. Imagine my joy once I found out the arrangements.

London was a sight ot see. The marvelous structures and exotic people made me...
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posted by CatiePotter
I hate school. I really hate it.Not because of the homework, or the tests, or the Gym classes. Its because he's there, like a ghost in the graveyard, he is the phantom of my dreams.

It started in the 6th grade when he finally told me that he liked me. Don't get me wrong, i like him..... ok I LOVE him, he is the dashing prince in my fantascies. But i was freaking out, we were really good friends and i really did not want to ruin things by breaking up. But it was want I always wanted right? Well in the mist of things I may have said no...... It was a huge mastake!!! it practally ruined our whole friendship!!!!! Now we don't talk anymore, we just never made it past the awkwardness. Now the moment stalks my dreams. It replays over and over again. Even now in 8th grade I still have those dreams. But we moved on! Its over! Done!
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posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 1

It was many years after those tragic events and Yajuu had grown into a young woman...

"Yajuu, ring the bell! You know what time it is?!" Himako yelled to Yajuu.

"Yes mom!" Yajuu replied as she ran to the top of the tower and rung the Bell as the Summer Festival started!

"Nice work, Yajuu" Himako sneered at Yajuu.

"Can i please go to the Festival mom? I did all my duties" Yajuu asked Himako in a kind tone of voice.

"No!" Himako barked at her, "Your a Monster who no one will ever care about!".

"I'm sorry mom..." Yajuu sulked as she walked back to her room.

"You better be sorry Monster" Himako...
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posted by MissCarolyn143
Hey Guys!
I'm so sorry for the 13 day delay!!
I had an awful case of writer's block!
So here's chapter 4 I hope you enjoy it!!
Oh! I might think of changing the title to something else!
But I'm sure to tell you guys before I do!
Lynn ❤

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Part Four:
It'd been two weeks since the incident and the doctors said that Autumn was well enough to be discharged from the Hospital and be put to rest at home,they also said that if she had headaches she should go straight back to the hospital to be checked.
She stood now in front of the...
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