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posted by Problematic129
*Hey guys, I'm back :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Summary:
Three years ago devastating news hit the Loreans, there eighteen year old daughter was found dead in the lake. For years police tried to find her killer, but never got anywhere. Soon, everyone gave up, even her parents. But not Destiny, everyday she would try to find police reports similar to her sister. Destiny is no ordinary girl, she has visions and can see things that no one else can, and lately she's been having dreams of her sister about her sister. When it looks like all hope is lost, a young detective comes to her aid, together they uncover the secrets and unanswered questions to her sister's death. But the more closer they get to solving the case, the more dangerous their lives become.
Prologue
All I remembered was running, or at least, that’s all that mattered at the moment. I was being chased, my predator a few feet from me. Why did I have to be so dumb to walk alone on a creepy night like this?
    All I wanted to see was my sister Destiny, it was her that kept me going. She was my little fourteen year old sister and she needed me.
    If I hadn’t taken Destiny away from our parents to live with me, she would have to suffer the shouting and yelling that you’d often hear in my parent’s house.
    “Help!” I yelled to no avail, this was a deserted grassland no one came to, except victims and killers.
    Which I’d soon be.
    I ran into the woods nearby, my breath becoming louder. My muscles screamed and ached, I felt like I couldn’t run no more, but I had too.
    And it was just my luck that I tripped over a small rock and fell, I heard a small crunch. I think I’ve broken my ankle, it burns, but right now all I feel is panic and fear. What do I do?! My killer could be here any second, I have to hide!
    I looked around quickly, but all I saw was trees, but they’d have to do. Despite the protesting ankle, I climbed up the tree as quietly and carefully as I could. By the time I was close enough to get a good view of the ground, but high enough to be obscured by the leaves, my ankle had this searing pain, but it felt dull enough to ignore. I stayed still and everything was silent for a full moment. But then I heard the sound of foot crunching and leaves, and I saw my killer walk past the tree. All I could see was there head, nothing else, not one single identification of who they were.
    They were all dressed in black, and either that was a black cap or hat on the person’s head, or my killer had black hair. But right now I was too disoriented to tell the difference.
    After a few minutes, I carefully got off my tree, and limped in the other direction. After a while I left the woods, I was on some side walk. Yes! Almost there!
    I was just going to step on the street, when something hard collided with my head. But I couldn’t process anything after that except the intense pain in my head, my vision swam, I couldn’t comprehend anything.
    Was I being carried?
    It felt like hours, but was possibly minutes, when my mind started to work again. I blanked for a second, but then I noticed I had a blindfold on, I tried to pry it off, but I was weak. I felt this weird like movement, even though I was sitting, then I realized that we were in a car. Yes! Driving in a car! But my joy at my brightness was short lived, when the car came to an abrupt stop. My head started to thud against my skull, as another intense pain came, but I managed to keep my insanity intact.
    I felt hands, going to my hands, and tying something there. I didn’t know what, but it was pretty hard, my hands ached at the weight of it. Then I was being pushed out of the car and dragged to only god knows where.
    Then my blindfold was off and I was faced to one of the most beautiful lakes I’ve ever seen, with an amazing waterfall. It was then I understood, at least I’d get die somewhere beautiful.
    It was the last thing I saw before I was pushed into the lake, I felt the panicky feeling grip me again as I tried to swim up, but something was holding me down. So I looked down and my eyes widened, my hands were chained together, and the chains led to a very looking heavy weight.
    I couldn’t get out, I was going to drown.
    Destiny! I thought, thinking of my loyal sister, who’d be there to protect her from mom and dad’s infamous fighting, to help her with her homework, to hold her in there arms. Our parents couldn’t, they never did with me, always too pre-occupied. Please, protect her.
    My throat was on fire, my nose felt ready to explode, and my eyes started to burn. I fought and I screamed in the water, being the stubborn person that I was. But that wouldn’t help me not now.
    I kept on moving and fighting until I altogether stopped, and I died. I’ve must’ve looked crazy, I knew I would look crazy. The determined look in my eyes mixed with the emptiness, the last thing on my mind was of my sister.
    
posted by PonygirlCurtis7
My breath came out in a white, frozen cloud before me and smelled heavily of my mint gum. My footsteps’ sounds were wet on the sidewalk. It had rained just before I left the bookstore and, just by my luck, someone stole my car (boy, was my dad going to have a cow when he hears that…), so I had to walk all the way home in the wet night, all by myself. I prayed silently that I would be able to find my way because I was new in town and barely knew where everything was. I had to use a crappy GPS to find the bookstore. I was just lucky I found it.
    The town was Cassidy....
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posted by hippy-hoppy
Chapter one
A Hard Time

Christopher
Present Day

"Christopher, Christopher!" My mum shouted at me though I was barely listening to her," Christopher, listen to me! This is the last straw Christopher, a 2 day suspension and now your not even listening to your own mother," she gently smacked me around the head to get my attention back. As I slowly came back into focus of her shouting, my sister looking disapprovingly at me and my dad not paying any attention what so ever to what was going on," Christopher you've got to try harder at school, okay? you can't go through your life not trying your...
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posted by sadiebugz00
This is the first chapter of the novel I've been working on....




1
TORN
Derek’s Perspective

I look down at the little rascal, soundly sleeping on the floor. What a decision… I think to myself. I can’t believe that Jesse is making me get rid of him… I bend down to get Bailey, Carter’s old stuffed rabbit, so I can keep SOMETHING of his to remind me of him. I feel bad having to wake him up, he usually has nightmares and rarely sleeps well, but I have to if I am to do my girlfriend’s willing. “Carter…” I whisper, “Wake up buddy!” He slowly opens his one eye and thumps his tail...
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added by alicia386
Who is excited to see this? Stephanie Meyer is one of the few authors thats book is so brilliant that is becomes a movie and stirs the entire nation. Same goes to Suzanne Collins.
video
writing
songs
creation
love
break
books
upcoming book
poetry
queen
Garren wasn't nervous, which surprised him.

Most people would've been scared out of their wits, but he felt.... excited. He was finally learning where the hell he was. Garren absorbed every word Kayleen said, and he slowly understood more and more.

As they walked through the front door of the house, Kayleen began explaining everything.

"We, the residents of this land, call this land Feay. It used to be peaceful and a prosperous land. Even the government was decisive and kind, and they cared about their people. That is, until 500 years ago, when the high cha-gar passed away suddenly. No one knows...
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So you’re finally finished writing it – the thing that has taken up all of your free time for the past two years (or more), the monkey on your back that wouldn’t let you sleep, that had you pulling out your pen and paper while on vacation with your family because The Idea came to you…
Well, you’re finished. You want to print it out, slap on a title, and send it off.
Hold up, there partner! Pause, breathe, put the the manuscript down. Easy! There you go….
What’s the big deal with a title?
Everything! It’s the first thing that a potential reader will see, the line that will either...
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added by alicia386
Bella Thorne. Enough said.
video
posted by SilverWings13
The black clad mercenary clashed swords with a mechanical soldier. The boy pushed the android back away from the barricade.

"Commander Dire," a rough voice spoke over the speaker in the his helmet, "Report your position."

"Barely holding down the defense. We need backup." William launched the sword into the torso of an opponent. Sparks flew and the android fell to the ground, the demonic glow of its red eyes dead. Another soldier rushed forward to attack the young officer.

"No can do, Dire," the voice said. "We have all our other troops defendin' the Greater Tower. You will need to secure the...
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posted by 1999jacko
Rick stood awkwardly outside the co-op bruises causing him to lean more on his left leg than his right and making him old one arm in his pocket to stop it from getting very painful. As Alli came round the corner he out down the phone he was holding between each arm trying to text someone. Alli shouted out to Rick," Hey I'm here, so what did you call me over here for." Rick looked up and Alli saw his completely bruised face as he started to speak she cried out in sympathy for him," I called you here to call a stand still in this, war you could say, fight so I can rcover from my," he choked up...
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posted by alicia386
August 31

Chloe Sanders was in a wheel chair being wheeled by a handsome stranger. She was really confused about everything and couldn't remember much about why she was in the hospital. She couldn't remember much. She knew that her name was Chloe and from what the handsome stranger has told her over the days is that she had a very traumatic accident. He said the doctors would be letting her out today. She was enjoying the time she had with the stranger. She wish she knew his name. She knows she saw him before but she just couldn't remember.
"Okay Chloe," said the stranger as he wheeled her...
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posted by Dhampires
Life. . .it's painful, sick, twisted, cruel, anxious and exciting.

You never know what's waiting for you two day from now nor two hours, you can predict but will it be correct? Maybe it will and maybe it wil not.

Life is like game bt one that's backwards and has no rules. Even though you play your cards right your outcome could be still be terrible. For example you bought a brand new Charger fresh off the lot, one you've been saving up for for years, yet when your down the street your pulled over. And the cops say that the vehicle your driving is stolen and your the one who stole it so you go...
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posted by Problematic129
It's more smaller than the other ones, because I'm in a rush, but don't worry more to come. I'm also working on my other projects and will post soon. This Inspired today is a special edition because I'm going to give you some of the pictures that I technically made and the others are not mine, I don't own the others, the ones that are kind of mine I made from microsoft word and what-not, and I made up some of these fabolouso quotes. So I kind of own some of this pics, or maybe not, who cares? And the others are obviosuly not mine, duh, you'll tell the difference. So I don't own most things...
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*Inspired from the awesome book by Jessica Warman, Between, you should totally check it out

Popularity, I was so known
Money, I was very spoiled
Boyfriend, how I loved him so much
Betrayer, how they betrayed my trust
Beauty, why the girls had loathed me
Parents, I don't think they ever did see
Friends, how I kept so much inside
Death, which is why I had died

Popularity, how could you poison me?
Money, was that really all I'd ever seen?
Boyfriend, did you really love me at all?
Betrayer, why didn't you save me from that fall?
Beauty, why'd you make me so cold and mean?
Parents, did you try to save me?
Friends,...
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posted by alicia386
August 31

Chloe Sanders was in a wheel chair being wheeled by a handsome stranger. She was really confused about everything and couldn't remember much about why she was in the hospital. She couldn't remember much. She knew that her name was Chloe and from what the handsome stranger has told her over the days is that she had a very traumatic accident. He said the doctors would be letting her out today. She was enjoying the time she had with the stranger. She wish she knew his name. She knows she saw him before but she just couldn't remember.
"Okay Chloe," said the stranger as he wheeled her...
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posted by alicia386
verse one

i can see the look in your eyes
of that fateful day july
that i told you the truth
about you

you denied every lie
that i had to say that day
but i promise you
that you are my baby

remember words that are spoken
have been wisely choosen
but i cant seem to shake
you out of this state

chorus

this is how its suppose to be
this is your destiny
i cant remember one time
when you werent with me

(sorry this is all i cant think of, does anyone have any ideas on how to finish this? It is official, i am not good at songwriting)
added by alicia386
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added by alicia386
That night when all the lights were dim and everyone, except James, had gone home. James, for the first time spoke to Kyle. "Kyle please, you have to make it! You HAVE to!" then there was a pause as cried and tears splashed the hard, cold ground. "I need you Kyle, I'm sorry for what I said! I didn't mean it! Please I need you!" he stopped and cried facing the floor. He was on the ground next to Kyle, tears streamed from his eyes. He felt cold, alone and abannded, then he felt a hand touch his shoulder, he turned around, expecting someone to be there, but there wasn't. He thought he imagined...
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posted by Problematic129
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    Stilere
    “Are you sure?”
    “Super sure! Oh so sure! Sure sure sure!” Brooklyn yells hysterically.
    “There looking for the book, they looked shady, and he said something shedding young blood being a pain. We have to get out of here!”
    “On it,” I say as I rapidly type the same message to everybody. When I’m finished I grab Brooklyn’s elbow. “Let’s go.”
    We walk through the crowded hallways as fast as we can, the...
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