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The picture on Linda's bed side table stared at her and she had had enough. Moving quickly she pulled her covers off and was slipping her feet into her runners.
Wearing the same thing she went to bed in, black tracksuits, a white long sleeve top and a puma jumper, Linda left the house and made her way to the old hospital on foot.
The night was dark and shadows seemed to be following her every footsteps. The lights from the street lamp didn't do much, only illuminating one circle making each imagined shadow larger.
She had made it through two streets and one alley way but the constant thought of being attacked loomed in her mind, causing only the imagination to take over. I should not have come, I'm going to die any second now...Arrgghh! what was that?
The sudden sound from behind stopped Linda in her place. She stood there unable to move with tears of fear running down her face. Her arms crossed over her chest, hugging her self for comfort.
Nothing had happened in the time she stood frozen and Linda started to relax, first her arms dropped to her side and she took a deep breath. But then the sound of approaching footsteps could be heard and Linda's relaxed mood was gone and she started into a sprint. Running as fast as she could, without looking back, until she found a dumpster and hid behind it. She stayed there crouched, arms wrapped around her legs and her head resting on her knees, for five minutes but Linda could still hear the sound of someone or something approaching.
It began to get louder and Linda didn't dare move. Suddenly it stopped. She let a sigh of relief escape her mouth, but then all of a sudden a large shadow blocked the little light she had and Linda let out, what was meant to be a loud, ear piercing scream but came out as a little squeak. Just audible for your own ears to hear. She sat there shivering, not due to coldness but because of the thoughts that raced through her mind of what may or may not be her fate.
The shadow still loomed over her, she expected to feel pain except nothing happened. Slowly Linda lifted her head and saw her scary attacker. It was a cat. What an idiot. How can you confuse the sound of a cats paw to the sound of human footsteps. The cat just sat there staring at her with its big green eyes.
Ignoring it Linda realised why she was out of bed at three in the morning, in the pitch black of the night and started running again. This time to the hospital which she knew was only two streets away.

There it was the big old Melbourne hospital. Linda crouched behind a over grown bush waiting for something to happen and then movement caught her eye. Twenty meters away from the entrance Jamie was pacing back and forth. Why hasn't he entered yet? Stopping and looking at the door trying to decide whether to enter and risk it or head home and leave it up to the police? A couple more paces and Jamie had made up his mind. One more look and Jamie charged at the entranced, the door opened automatically like it was still in use for all these years it's been shut down.
Linda watched the entranced for half an hour more and no one exited. Deciding that it would be worthless if she left without knowing Linda emerged from her hiding spot and crept along the front, trying as best she can to blend into the darkness. Just as they did for Jamie the doors opened and Linda entered. On the doormat Linda stood looking around and absorbing the scenery. Dust covered each floor tile, each section of wall and every surface. Linda looked down at the floor expecting to see the footsteps of Jamie's feet but nothing but dust covered the floor. "Jamie, hello?" Linda's voiced echoed and no reply came.
She started forward. Scared, but her determination of finding her daughter brought her foot in front of the other, starting to walk. Linda just noticed as she turned the corner that the blackness of the night did not occur in here. The lights were on and working, a shiver ran down her spine. Ignoring the fact that she was completely frightened she walked down the first corridor. Everything was silent besides the sound of Linda's own breath, it was cold and nothing was here. The rooms were empty and no one was there besides Linda. Half way down the second corridor she gave up and convinced herself that her daughter and Jamie, who she suspects left through another door, was not here. So she turned around and started back.

It was hot and the sun was out, blinding Linda as she adjusted her eyes. Stepping away from the hospital Linda began to walk home, the way she came.

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Should I go in? I should go. No, go in and find your daughter.
Acting for that moment Jamie ran, ran to the door. Where he was going to find his daughter and keep her safe.
Charging at the door he expected to have to force it open. To his surprise it opened automatically, just like it use to, when it was occupied.
He found himself looking at shiny white walls with bright yellow lights, too bright to be natural. It was an actual hospital.
Not sure what to do Jamie started to walk, unsure of himself he hadn't expected this. Everywhere was shiny white walls and bright yellow lights, it looked like a running hospital. Each room he passed had beds, plenty supplies and even very weird looking machines, but it was missing something. People. No one, no where it was empty and quiet.

Now on the fifth level Jamie came across the adolescent ward. Not sure why but Jamie entered. Straight through the door human eyes stared at him, well he thought human anyway. He stood there, scared. Staring into the eyes of another being Jamie heard something, beeping, from a hospital machine. A machine that could be hooked to his daughter, or even Ashley.
Walking around the lonely corridors thinking it was dead silent and now standing there finally finding what he was looking for, made the past hour seem like he was walking around a eighteenth party. Loud and confusing.
The receptionist looked scared, her eyes were large, like trying to send a warning. But she wouldn't take her eyes away. Why?.

"Hello Jamie" Where did that voice come from, how did it know my name? "come sit down and wait for your daughter and her lovely friend"
Jamie obeyed. Not seeming to distrust the voice or think twice about what he was doing.
Once seated Jamie's eyes went back to the receptionist, her gaze never left his. Her eyes grew wider, like she was scared.

Jamie sat there obeying the voice, until his thoughts became his own again. The doubts and the confusion of this place came back and that's when the receptionist actually moved and transported him to the basement.

...It didn't take long for Jamie to recover and remember that his daughter was in that hospital room being treated by a thing. "I don't care about your world just yet!" he yelled "I want to know if..if shes still.." He trailed off, not wanting his voice to crack. Danni understood and answered. "Stephanie and Ashley are still alive and are leaving this hospital alive but there memories of the past ten years of their lives will be gone"
"WHAT! WHAT DO YOU MEAN TEN YEARS OF THEIR LIVES WILL BE GONE?"
"Calm down will you. It's far better than what would have happened to you if the doctor knew you were still alive and if you don't keep that mouth of yours open he might hear you." Jamie gasped and quickly recovered "Can you just tell me what is going on, how can this old hospital, which has been unused for many years, be a real hospital when I walked in but the old building it is when the police came in? Just answer that for me." he hesitated and then added "please!"
"Well there's no point lying and I guess the truth straightforward is what you want, right?" Jamie nodded. "Okay then. The reason why you able to see part of our world is because we let you. We saw the police approach and quickly made sure that the building looked like the old building it is. But then the doctor saw you approach and thought he would have some fun. He's a cruel man, he wanted me to capture you and...and kill you. Then leave you lying on one of the beds so he could, oh I don't know if I could say it"
"Please, I need to know everything"
Danielle hesitated. Then seeing no point in keeping it from him he forced herself to say the words. "he wanted to cut you into pieces." Danielle flinched and so did Jamie.
"Why...would..he...do...that?" Jamie choked
"Well, the doctor created the other world.."
"What other world?" Jamie nagged
They were sitting cross legged facing each other and Jamie was taking this news pretty well.
"If you stop interrupting we will get there. Anyways the Doc started his first creation of this world in the 1970's.."
"Danielle! Where are you?" the Doc yelled through the walls.
Quickly Danielle yanked Jamie up and pushed him through the back door, then whispered in his ear "Run as far as you can, just go. Get out of the state. He knows your alive"
"But Stephi and Ashley and I don't know everything" Jamie pleaded
"Just go!" Dani shut the door and teleported back to the doctor.
"Sorry Doc." Danielle started
"Don't apologize to me. I know you let that human escape and before I could even erase his memory!" He yelled
"You were going to do worse than that."
"SHUT UP! I'll deal with you later." He shut the rooms door and went back to work.
posted by shenelopefan
Dejé mi corazón abierto. Pero tú no entendiste. No viste lo que en realidad ha sucedido. Quise explicártelo pero sabía que no entenderías. Me considerarías demente, loca, pensarías que he perdido la cabeza. Que la he perdido por ti.

No puedo decir que la perdí completamente, pero puedo contarte lo que he perdido por ti. Ahora soy normal y detesto ser de esta forma. No puedo volar si soy esto, sólo estoy encadenada a ti, por un vínculo que ni tú ni yo hemos podido decidir.

Pero no voy a quejarme de estar ligada a ti. He aprendido a aceptarlo. He aprendido a vivir. Todo gracias a ti....
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posted by shenelopefan
Para todos aquellos que hablen español o lo entiendan, aquí les dejo un poema que escribi hace mucho tiempo ya



Nunca había visto caer la lluvia así

Sólo cae

Mientras tú vuelves a casa

La lluvia cae

Pasaron tres horas sin tu regreso

Aún te espero en la puerta

No busco la lluvia

Espero tu vuelta

Pasaron quince años

Te sigo esperando afuera

Aun contengo tu sonrisa

Esperando que llueva

Pero ahora es muy tarde

La lluvia ha cesado

Y aun espero tu llegada

Sigo esperando tu mirada
posted by Dhampires
I was back at the covent and in Mai's office waiting for her to give me my pay."Like always you gets the job done in no time.I'll have to start giving you a raise my dear.After all I can't afford to lose you can a I?"She prasied me as she went into her safe retrieving a small sack of gold coins.I smiled and said "No need to rasie my pay,I make enough and I'll never leave so long as you keep feeding me information like you promised." she sighed and turned with the gold and a package of papers "Of course that's the purpose on why your here." I eyed the papers then shifted my gaze toward her."Yes...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 4: Never Meant To Be.
After Roxana and Abe met once again, Roxana sat in her chair reading a book, until her phone rang, she reached to a table besides her chair and sees it was a unknown number, she answered it "Who's this?" Roxana asked "It's me, the bastard that arrested you" Abe said, Roxana chuckled at Abe's comment to her "Well how you got this number then police officer?" Roxana said with a flirty but playful tone in her voice Abe laughed at the tone of Roxana's voice "Well, I know we don't personally know each other but....I was wondering if you like to go out to town with me...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 2: I'm Breathless.
At night after Roxana was arrested, Abe lays there in his bed, while the moon shines through his large window and onto his bed, he tosses his body from left to right and couldn't sleep, all he had been thinking about was Roxana, about her beautiful seductive but innocent young face and her lime green eyes, Abe snatches his head as he tries to sleep but everytime he closes his eyes, all he sees is Roxana's face but then he falls asleep, then he begins dreaming, that he was in Roxana's apartment, he looks around to understand why he is in her house, then he sees Roxana...
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He woke up with a jump.

Dammit. Not again.

He had been dreaming about her. It happened every time he thought he was getting better. It seemed like she didn’t want to be forgotten. She kept finding her way into his mind. He sat up in the dark, shaking. He knew he wouldn’t be able to sleep in the bed for a while again. Too many memories there. Too many thoughts of her wrapped around him under the covers. He couldn’t handle it. Once she got into his head, it took weeks for him to drive her out again.

He went out into the kitchen and got some water. Then he stared at his reflection in the window...
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posted by animefangirlz
I was 13 when i had my first love.not my first boyfriend but someone i actually loved.
    
My name is Elisabeth Maddison,but everyone calls me "shinigami" it means " god of death",for my 13th birthday my older cousin Geettto took me to his gig.He plays lead guitar and vocals for their band. He kept telling me how much they kick butt and all the battle of the bands they won. I just kept walking in the rain as it poured down flooding the sky. We got to the place,it was an old former shed for shipping trucks. The small factory behind it turned into a music store.They give local...
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posted by coriann
The house lights were on bright. It was a lonely brick house, brownish cream and had a red galvenise roof. there was a square arch around the front door. It was big and had a light and a bench on the side. I walked up the one step to the open door. The boy had already run inside. Contrary to the arch, the inside of the house was black and dim and full of decor and dim lights. I should have noticed from looking at the glass louvers.
I saw a Muslim lady in orange on the phone. She was fair (light brown) and thick. The orange sari was high up over her knees. "Mam, Mam"
She was laughing, but she...
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posted by noahnstar1616
-The Next Day-
I peeked from behind the left corner of the school and saw Cameron carrying Mercury's book towards the school entrance. Perfect. I turned to Zoey and Francine, who were right behind me. "I'm ready. How do I look ?" I had on the outfit Francine picked out for me and the makeup Zoey put on me yesterday. My hair was in a french braid, courtesy of Zoey's mom.

"Beautiful", said Francine.

"I'm jealous", said Zoey.

"Thanks." I turned back to look at Cameron, who had probably forgot something because he was walking back to his car. "Wish me luck." I rushed towards Cameron. "Hey."

"Hey." He...
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posted by noahnstar1616
-The Next Day-
I woke up. The sun was shining in my eyes. I called my nurse and asked if she could close the blinds. She did. I grabbed my bed remote and pressed the button that allows new to sit up. Once that is done, I notice a table with a tray of eggs, baco, and orange juice on it. I reach for the tray and put it on my lap. I begin to eat. Not bad, but not good either. I grab the television remote and turn on the television. I decide to watch Looney Tunes. Then my Grandma walked in.

"Good morning, sweetie." She was carrying a ziploc bag with a bagel inside. "Don't eat that stuff." Shm grabbed...
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posted by noahnstar1616
My world was dark.

The only thing I could see was the events that just took place; me running into the road, me seeing the car, the car crashing into me. It was like someone put my mind on replay.

I opened my eyes. Everything was hazy. Something bright shined in my eyes. It stung. I turned my head. There are flashing lights everywhere. My eyes finally come back to focus.

Police cars. An ambulance. The car that hit me. My towns news station.

"She's waking up", I heard a man's voice say.

"Thank God", I heard Cameron say. I turned to look at him. Then it hit me. That was Cameron who hit me.

I tried...
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posted by tbone_21
okay sooo this chapter is very long... I don't think the others will be quite this long but I wanted to get the descriptions of the characters out of the way, enjoy and comment!
The first thing I was aware of was the smell of a fire, I closed my eyes and inhaled deeply, inhaling my new favorite smell. I was dancing, I could feel the cool grains of sand between my toes and could tell that the sun had long since sunk below the horizon. My friends and I were singing loudly to a fast paced song our feet pounding madly against the sand.
I didn’t pay attention to any of these things though I just...
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posted by problematic124
*******First of all before I start I would like to thank you for thanks for the comments. And I forgot to do this for the prologue but this belongs to me it’s my copyrights. Something I came up with. Enjoy!!!!!!!!
Present Time
Chapter 1
New beginnings
"I just don't understand why we didn't stay in Egypt...or England"
"Kyle your stepfather lives here"
"So"
"Were meant to live with him"
"So"
"Kyle"my mom said in her warning voice
Exasperated I sighed and held up my hands in surrender.
"Kyle I know it's hard now but you'll get used to it"she said gently
"Well will you at least let me check out that awesome...
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posted by problematic124
Laughing heals the soul. What makes you laugh? Were all different. As a writer in training I'm experimenting on the"fun factor". Down the page are some funny stuff and I'd like to know which one makes you laugh the most. If you found a funny pic please post it and please comment on the pictures.
Now like I've said we all have different tastes and it all is on you. Laughing is a very fun excersise.And these pictures are funny (or at least to me). Hold on to your socks lady and gentlemen it's time to get your laugh on.
Please comment!!!
Now let's have some laughs!
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posted by OfficialKate
Humphrey sad :(
Humphrey sad :(
Kate: I remember this day like it was yesterday when I was a young pup at wolf school there was a prom I made a huge mistake....

It was a warm spring evening the sunset was beautiful Humphrey looked at all the wolves dancing happily he frowned. He went over to his "date" Josephine. "Jossphine I need you to dance like you've never danced before I need to let Kate know I'm the one for her!" Josephine frowned and laughed. "Yeah well shes and alpha your an omega." "Well than why am I with you, your an alpha." Humphrey scolded. "We are a fake couple your impressing Kate I'm impressing Skeeter." Josephine...
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posted by Lore_Master
Our hero fell to his knee's "Wha....what....no all my work and research.....gone!" he said as he clutched his chest gasping for air, as day turned to night he sat there with an empty feeling eating him from the inside, he looked up at the star's "Why me why do.... why the fuck does this happen to me!!!" the hero yelled as he started pounding the ground violently, his whole body filled with rage and sadness knowing all of his work was just wasted he began to shed tear's it seemed the more he hit the ground the further it plunged him into dark thought's soon thinking of resorting to evil necromancy...
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posted by samuraibond005
Jiko went to a small school in a small town in Missouri where everybody was the same in likes, dislikes, and even very similar in personality, well, everyone but her and her parents. Jiko was just fine for a while, making all A grades in every subject with little effort, but then was the day someone pissed her off. Jiko had carried a knife in her sleeve, something most people there honestly didn't think much of, she wasn't the only one who did it, even some of the teachers, did it, but Jiko did something that most people don't dare to do, she kept a revolver in her backpack. Someone had called...
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posted by AshleyA-Brizzle
Sometimes its Easier to inore the truth

to forget about everything

to sit in a closet and hide forever

Sometimes its Easier, to blame yourself

To think its your falt

To show no emotion

Sometimes It's easier to keep everything inside

to not let anyone know

to hide everything.

To me, Its easier to say something

To talk

to cry

Its easier to Feel Emotions

Anger, rage, Sadness,

but not fear

Fear is my enemey

He wants to take over my mind

Keep me locked up inside.

I'm tired of being scared

I'm tired of being locked in my own world

I'm tired of being a prisoner.

I will not be afraid,

I will not Let him Win
posted by para-scence
"Do you have asthma?" the gym teacher asked me. My thoughts flickered to Emery. He had asthma, right? Breathlessly, I nodded. "Go get your inhaler. Emery, go with her." Emery helped get me up, and we went inside, as I was taking my last breaths.

"Give me.." I rasped. "Your inhaler."

"What?" Emery asked, unbelieving.

"Get me your inhaler," I said through my teeth. My head started to spin. Quickly, Emery ran into the boys' locker room. A couple moments later, he returned with his inhaler, and handed it to me. I pumped some of it into my mouth, and thankfully it helped a bit. I sat there on the floor...
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posted by para-scence
"Shelby? Are you ok? Kirsten said you've been acting weird lately..." Paige said, coming into my room. I laid back on my bed, closing my eyes so she couldn't see them.

"I'm fine," I sighed. "Just leave me alone." There was a long silence.

"...Has school gotten better?" I nodded, more than necessary. "Make any new friends?"

"Yep..." I said, opening my eyes. I stared at the ceiling, then closed them again and sighed. A fire started to burn in my chest. Why couldn't she just leave me alone? She was nosy and bossy.

"Have you done your chores yet?"

"No!" I whined. I pushed my palms against my eyes,...
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