okay so i had to do this for an english assignment and wondered what you guys thought and if i should continue.
Muted meteor
Chapter 1
The daily news flash
“ welcome to the daily news flash today we will be showing the exclusive interview with a scientist called Murray gray, the new shampoo called sunny side shampoo and are we getting our fruit at a reasonable price”. “Murray there has been a rumour of a meteorite hitting earth is that true”. “As crazy as it seems yes it is true but there is more than one hitting earth so I’d get prepared if I were you ted”. “Mallory wake up”. I opened my tired sky blue eyes to emerald green ones who belonged to my best friend Harley. ~ What time is it ~, I wrote in my notebook handing it to Harley. “Its 10:00”. ~ come on we better go find some food~, I wrote handing it to Harley once again. You see I can’t talk and everything someone would say I would write it in my notebook. “About time someone mentioned the word food”. ~in how long I’ve known you for Harley and considering the situation your favourite word is still food~. “Yes and it’s not about to change”, he said with a smirk. I shook my head this child had not changed one bit considering that our parents where dead’ we lived in a cave, it was in the middle of winter and we had nothing to keep us warm and for all we knew we could be the only thirteen year olds left in the world wait I think that includes every age. “Mallory are we going or not”. ~ Yes we are~. I got up off the cold ground of the cave and headed outside with Harley. “What are we going to eat Mallory”? ~ There are some berries over in the middle of the bush and no there not poisonous Harley~. “Okay and seriously Mallory stop shoving your notes in my face”. ~sorry ~. “It’s alright”. Harley and I raced each other to the tree where the berries were and as I ran my curly black hair which went up to my shoulders blew in my pale face. ~can you help me pick some~. “Sure”. I picked some berries from the tree glancing at Harley’s brown curly hair and emerald green eyes. “Mallory watch out”, he said throwing a berry at me hitting me square in the face. “Ha-ha that is so funny”. Oh you little I thought and pushed him over in the mud and tackled him. “Hey hey Mallory stop it”. I shook my head meaning no. When he finally managed to get me of him he picked himself up and dusted himself off. “I’ll get you back for this Mallory”. ~ah no you won’t~. “Yes I will you just watch it”. ~no you won’t~. “Fine you think what you want to think then”. ~fine and come on Harley let’s get back to the cave~. “Race you back”. ~sure but be prepared to be beat by a girl~ “well I am prepared to be beat by a girl”. We both sprinted back towards the cave that we had been living in for three months now. I beat Harley by a complete two minutes you see I was a really fast runner to be precise I used to be the girls championship runner and had won the cross country since I was five and I am now thirteen. I waited for Harley to come. Harley came up to me breathing hard. “How can you do it”. ~I don’t know~. “That doesn’t help”. ~no but its funny watching you lose to a girl~. “Ha ha very funny Mallory”. Bang bang bang ahh. We both turned our heads. `What was that~.
Muted meteor
Chapter 1
The daily news flash
“ welcome to the daily news flash today we will be showing the exclusive interview with a scientist called Murray gray, the new shampoo called sunny side shampoo and are we getting our fruit at a reasonable price”. “Murray there has been a rumour of a meteorite hitting earth is that true”. “As crazy as it seems yes it is true but there is more than one hitting earth so I’d get prepared if I were you ted”. “Mallory wake up”. I opened my tired sky blue eyes to emerald green ones who belonged to my best friend Harley. ~ What time is it ~, I wrote in my notebook handing it to Harley. “Its 10:00”. ~ come on we better go find some food~, I wrote handing it to Harley once again. You see I can’t talk and everything someone would say I would write it in my notebook. “About time someone mentioned the word food”. ~in how long I’ve known you for Harley and considering the situation your favourite word is still food~. “Yes and it’s not about to change”, he said with a smirk. I shook my head this child had not changed one bit considering that our parents where dead’ we lived in a cave, it was in the middle of winter and we had nothing to keep us warm and for all we knew we could be the only thirteen year olds left in the world wait I think that includes every age. “Mallory are we going or not”. ~ Yes we are~. I got up off the cold ground of the cave and headed outside with Harley. “What are we going to eat Mallory”? ~ There are some berries over in the middle of the bush and no there not poisonous Harley~. “Okay and seriously Mallory stop shoving your notes in my face”. ~sorry ~. “It’s alright”. Harley and I raced each other to the tree where the berries were and as I ran my curly black hair which went up to my shoulders blew in my pale face. ~can you help me pick some~. “Sure”. I picked some berries from the tree glancing at Harley’s brown curly hair and emerald green eyes. “Mallory watch out”, he said throwing a berry at me hitting me square in the face. “Ha-ha that is so funny”. Oh you little I thought and pushed him over in the mud and tackled him. “Hey hey Mallory stop it”. I shook my head meaning no. When he finally managed to get me of him he picked himself up and dusted himself off. “I’ll get you back for this Mallory”. ~ah no you won’t~. “Yes I will you just watch it”. ~no you won’t~. “Fine you think what you want to think then”. ~fine and come on Harley let’s get back to the cave~. “Race you back”. ~sure but be prepared to be beat by a girl~ “well I am prepared to be beat by a girl”. We both sprinted back towards the cave that we had been living in for three months now. I beat Harley by a complete two minutes you see I was a really fast runner to be precise I used to be the girls championship runner and had won the cross country since I was five and I am now thirteen. I waited for Harley to come. Harley came up to me breathing hard. “How can you do it”. ~I don’t know~. “That doesn’t help”. ~no but its funny watching you lose to a girl~. “Ha ha very funny Mallory”. Bang bang bang ahh. We both turned our heads. `What was that~.
"Good by danny," I said kissing him on the cheek one last time."we may not see each other again but I will remember you." for the past week danny and i have been dating on a crusie. (sorry spelling? my mind is not working today.)We both knew the day would come when we would not be able to see each other. Now it had come. I hugged him and walked down the gang plank.
4 months later
I went to the camp I had worked at for two years now. It was all so familar when I bummed into my best friend Max. He reminded me off Danny. But when ever I saw danny he reminded me of him. Was it max who I really liked and not danny? There's only one way to find out "max?" I said to him "What?" he said. "Da ya think we could..... like go to a movie or somthing?" "sure!" he said. And we had a great time.
4 months later
I went to the camp I had worked at for two years now. It was all so familar when I bummed into my best friend Max. He reminded me off Danny. But when ever I saw danny he reminded me of him. Was it max who I really liked and not danny? There's only one way to find out "max?" I said to him "What?" he said. "Da ya think we could..... like go to a movie or somthing?" "sure!" he said. And we had a great time.