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All the houses were the same. All rather big but looked smaller to me now that I’d grown and extra foot. I closed my eyes and tried to think of my list reasons why I would want to come back here, to the place that swallowed my childhood in one bite. “New around here, Ma’am?” The cap driver asked I looked up to the elderly man, his lazy eyes twitched. “No, I grew up here” I told him, he nodded and smiled, his yellow teeth shining. “Right...I thought you looked familiar” He admitted, I looked down at my now shaking cold hands. “You’re Cybil Jones” he said, looking rather pleased with himself that he knew who I was. “Yeah, such a shame what happened here...well that’d be $20.70 for the ride” He told me, I smiled and pulled out my large brown bag. It took a while to find my purse be he didn’t seemed to notice the time. I finally pulled out the matching purse and pulled out the correct amount of money. “Have a nice day, Ms. Jones” The cap driver said nodding his head. I smiled and stepped out of the car.

I remembered the exact house that I grew up in...It looked just the same. The only real difference was the weeds I got so used to, was now replaced with pretty blue and yellow flowers. I walked up to the black rusty front gate. I pulled on it knowing from experience that it would take a bit of muscle to open. Finally after three tries it budged. I sighed in relief. I gently shut it and started too walked up the long path to the front door. “Excuse me...Excuse me!” I heard someone hell behind me, I turned to see a small lanky man behind me with glasses. “Can I help you?” I asked, he sighed and put the black briefcase he was holding beside him. “You can’t go in there” he said adjusting his glasses. I raised an eyebrow at the man. “Excuse me?” I asked he took another deep breath. “Unless you are the daughter of Mr. And Mrs. Jones you can’t step a foot on this property” he informed me, I smiled. “Well, then Hi I’m Cybil Jones” I said, his eyes flashed form surprise to Apologetic. “Oh, well I’m sorry, Ms. Jones...I’m Kyle Hunters. Your father personal assistant or rather was” he introduced himself putting out his thin pale hand. I smiled and then shook it. “Well I just came here to give you your keys, Ms. Jones” I smiled and put my hand put, he dropped the keys into my hand.

The key fit perfectly in the door, I quickly pulled it out and put it in my back pocket. I slowly opened the door not knowing what to expect. Once I finally got the courage to open it, I saw the all too familiar dark hallway. The painting’s that my mother collected hung everywhere; pictures of me and my sister were hung near doors and below some of the paintings. It was silent, except for the sound of a dripping tap and the creaks of the floor. There were empty cardboard boxes everywhere, obviously I was meant to do something with them, maybe pack some stuff. I turned on the lights once I got the living room. It looked the same, maybe a bit smaller, the couch, the fire place, the coffee table were all still in the same place. The only thing missing were the people who lived in the house. I sighed and sat on the yellow couch.

It was only two weeks ago I had got the call about my parents. I was out with my boyfriend, Kevin. The club was loud so it was lucky I heard my phone ring. All I really did here was loud sobs from a voice I knew as my sister telling me that there’d been an accident; I hoped it was that cat she loved so much. But no it was a car crash; a drunk driver had gotten in the car at the wrong time and went through a red light. I fell back on the couch, even the feeling of the soft couch was the same. It had been 5 years since I’d been at this house and nothing had changed. I sat up and put my head in my hands. “What am I doing here?” I asked myself. Amy could have taken care of everything with the funerals and all I really would have to do it just show up. Too much had happened for me to be here, everything with Ava. Ava was my best friend growing up here, her parents weren’t really all that reliable, and so she would stay with us. Don’t get me wrong I loved Ava like a sister but she got in some dangerous stuff...stuff that got her murdered.

I jumped when I heard a loud knock on the door. “Who is it?” I asked in an awkward tone not knowing if I had the right to do so. “It’s me your sister” I heard an angry sounding tone say. I rolled my eyes and walked over to the door. I checked the eyehole. “What are you doing?” She asked, flicking her honeycomb hair back. “Checking if it’s you” I said, she nodded. I unlocked the latch and opened the door. She hadn’t grown she had always been short; her eyes matched my colour a warm hazel. She walked up the steps and walked straight passed me. “I didn’t think you were going to show” She admitted, I smiled. “Neither did I” I said, she shrugged. “Anyway I took care of the funeral’s all you need to do is hang around and tie up some loose ends here and there, until this all blows over” She said, I nodded. There was a short silence; we just stared at one another. She finally broke it. “Anyway there’s a party tonight...at the beach and well a lot of people got excited about you coming back...coming home” I interrupted her before she could go on. “I’m only here to tie up loose ends, remember?” I said she nodded with disappointment in her eyes. “Look I’ll see if I can come” I said she smiled. “Okay, well I have to get back to the shop...it was good to see you again” She said as she walked away.

Hours past and I had only cleaned the kitchen and the living room. I didn’t want to go upstairs but there was a bit of curiosity...Did they keep my room? And if they did what did it look like? I finally decided to let the curiosity come over me. I crept up the stairs until I was at the ‘dead end’ me and Amy used to call it. I turned to see a door with the name ‘Cybil’s room’ in big bright yellow letters. I took a deep breath and slowly opened the door. The room looked the same; bed was there with the same butterfly sheets. Mirror’s and poster’s of Leonardo Dicaprio were everywhere. The window that once was my door stood there shut. I smiled and fell onto my bed. I opened my eyes and smiled. I looked at my roof and saw Photo’s I’d hung up and forgotten about. There were only about 6 of them, most of them were Amy and me...but one of them was of Ava smiling with a beer in her hand. I got up. “I need some air” I whispered to myself.

I rushed outside and breathed in as much air as I could. I looked down at my hands and saw that they were shaking. “It was 5 years ago...why can’t you just get over it?” I asked myself. I closed my eyes and breathed in more air. “Cybil Jones is that you?” I heard I turned to see Kristen Peter’s smiling. “Oh my god it is!” She said running over and hugging me. I laughed and hugged her back. “Oh my god...I owe Belinda a good 20 bucks I honestly thought you would chicken out” I smiled and laughed. “Yeah, me to” I whispered so she didn’t hear. She smiled and squeezed my hands. “I really missed you we all did” She said, I nodded. “I missed you all too...Tell Belinda I said hi” I said, she smiled and gave me one last quick hug. “I will, oh and there’s a party at the beach tonight it would just perfect if you could come...and catch up with some old friends” She said, I shrugged. “I might come” She rolled her eyes and then started to walk off. I sighed and licked my lips.

It was 7 o’clock just about the time the party would be starting. “You can’t go your parents just died going to a party wouldn’t be right...but Amy’s going...never mind that you’re not her...Go and say a quick hello have a beer and then get out” I argued with myself. I finally decided to go. I put on a pair of ripped jeans and random t-shirt and jumper. I put on a pair of flats and then opened the door. I quickly locked it and started to walk to the beach. I could see the bonfire the more closer I got. “There’s still time to chicken out” I told myself. No you have to go and face the people that you once loved...your friends that you once considered family. I finally walked up to the beach where I saw everyone I once knew. Everyone was gathered around the bonfire drinking and laughing. “Well, well, looks who I found” I heard a smug voice say, I smiled and turned to a smiling Caleb. ‘I knew you would come back to me some day it really was just a matter of time” he said smiling. “Hiya Cal” Is aid, he smiled. “Hey Cyb” He said. “So I heard you were coming back didn’t think you would though” he said, I rolled my eyes. “It seems no one did” I said, he nodded and took a sip of his beer. “It’s been a while since we talked” he said, I nodded. “Sorry, It’s been crazy in New York” I said he nodded. “No, No I get it...you got too old for me” I laughed. “Hey Cyb” I heard my name I turned to see someone people knew as Aaron but I knew him as Ava’s killer.
HEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP! I'm working on a story, okay? It's not a fanfic, and I no copy, either. Thing is, I can't decide on the name... So I have made a question in the picks section of the club and I’d really appreciate your help!

So, here's the plot: 'Nike is a normal girl... or is she? Well, here's the deal: when she falls asleep, she gets sucked into Nighteden, a place that reminds her too damn much of the Video Games one of her BFFs loves to play. There are elves and wizards and sultans and monsters and castles. And she's stuck in the middle of it all, fighting with her sword and staff her...
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posted by nomblahnom
December 24, 1997

“If we’re going to make it back in time for Christmas, we have to!” Jack Knight answered, sitting in the pilot’s seat of his boss’s Lear jet. He flew his boss everywhere around the world; his reward was use of the plane once a year for a vacation. This year it was Osaka, Japan. He, his wife Karen – eight and a half months pregnant with their second child – and their 17-month-old baby boy, Edgar, had just left the island country behind after eleven days in the Orient.

Jack was just turning 23, with light brown hair, an average build, and a thin mustache. He wore...
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posted by Insight357
    Elizabeth stood up, and left the room. She walked down corridor, after corridor. Stair case after stair case, when she heard a voice.
    â€œI swear to God, Lucifer. Instead of being such a damned bastard-” it sounded like Wyatt’s voice. She crept closer to the wooden door.
    â€œHey, I’m not the one who decided to bring her in. She’s not right for this Temple.”
    â€œHonestly Lucifer, you’re just mad, because she’s not drooling over you,” this was the angriest she had ever heard Wyatt. He almost...
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posted by sawfan13
We came back from the waterfall, as a gray wolf stopped in our tracks. Howl got onto all fours, and started petting and wrestling with the wolf. The wolf kinda growled at me, but Howl corrected him. The wolf started licking me, as I squatted down to their level. Howl told me he had to get something, so I watched the wolf until he came back. Howl came with some grapes in his hand. A batch of them. We both sat down under a tree, as he started feeding me grapes. I taught him a little bit more of English too. I also started teaching him about love. "What is love, Lilith? Is it...bad?" "No, it's...
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posted by hannah_vampire
I awoke to darkness, bloodshot eyes and pain that jolted now and again through my body. “As you know the hunt comes back then and again but this time was not for a friendly visit this time was because of the Demons of the night and Arielbelle’s obsession of getting in trouble and they have to be killed but Arielbelle has to be stopped and if you all wont the hunt will”.

ONE WEEK LATER.

Scarlett-Jane was in the shop getting a belly bar when I bumped into Damon oh just great.Niall saw Damon and me starting to dance with each other he made it pour down rain and then disappear, I smiled and...
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posted by ivanaoshea
Please don't mind if i have somewhere a mistake, english isn't my mother language.
i wrote better stories but only this is on english
i hope you will like it.




In my street, there are many family houses. Some are big and with parking garages and some are living in car on the street. Mine is somewhere in the middle, I have my own room, one bathroom, dad’s room and kitchen with living room. We don’t have one more floor. In the back yard is pool and house for dog. We actually don’t have a dog and every time when I ask my dad, he’s name is Mark:”When are you going to buy me a dog? “And...
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posted by I_DONT-KNOW
So I don't know if I'm even goiing to continue this or not. But could you do me a favour and give it a read?

Run, musn't stop running. Can't look back, it's too late now, he's going to chatch up any minute. She was going to get caught, she's going to die.

4 days earlier.

Fear.Pain.Death.Alexis Baker was having another one of her nightmares, ones that she could hardly remember the day after, but the pain and misery allways got left behind. Allways. A cold sweat covered her face and her whole body was shaking, her hands clenched and her feet twitched. She began to call out, muble words that were...
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I knocked on the large door and waited for her to open it. I didn't get the point of meeting here THEN going to the mall. The thought of Duncan made my blood boil. I don't know how this is gonna work. After that 3 second thought, the short but pretty brunette girl I call my best friend opened up the door. She smiled then looked at my hair, "You're gonna go to the auditions and meet hot guys looking like THAT?" Then she grabbed my hand and dragged me upstairs.

"This outta work," she beamed, grabbing the straight iron and the hair brush and took a lock of my long blonde hair.

"How long is this...
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posted by ttmrktmnrfn0830
This is a story that I wrote for a writing contest at school. It's called My Sweet Release... Here it is:

My Sweet Release

MY NAME IS DREAM, AND TONIGHT, I lay here to die. Just lying here is perdition, and my faithless mind reminds me that miracles don’t exist. My heart bleeds out, and my newborns are still unaware of my predicament. As my little kittens feel content now, I recall everything in my life that led me to this moment. 


When I was nine months old, I was a normal housecat; carefree, jubilant, peaceful. I still lived with my mother, as she took care of her latest litter. There were...
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posted by QueridaPantufa
It’s dark. I can’t even see my own hands. Where am I? I hear something! It probably just was a rat or something. What did they do to me? Can I escape? Are they watching me right now? Am I alone? My head hurts. I feel like someone is slamming a hammer against it. What do they want from me? Money? If it’s money, I’m in big trouble. I haven’t got any. Of course not. I live on the street for god’s sake. Why me? Why did they had to choose me? Haven’t I gone through enough yet? Is this some kind of sick joke? Maybe it’s a punishment. I haven’t done anything wrong though. At least...
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posted by lindizzle215
Today my brother Joey and I were going to drive down to our family camp that we help with every year, we still do but were all teenagers so were counselors now.

"Cam lets go I want to get there at a desist hour." Joey said
"Fine, I'll be there in a minute." I said back while sitting on my suit case tiring to zip it up.
"Need some help?" Duke asked leaning against the door frame.
"Yes, please." I said
He came over, zipped my bags up and took some down stairs. I grabbed my other bags and ran down stairs. I put my bags down and said goodbye to everyone and that I would see them all in a few days....
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posted by mia1emmett
my mother called us down for dinner. we have not fixed up the kitchen so we were going to find a restaurant or fast food. we leaved close to the shops but i had to drive to get there. we all jumped into our new car. Roxy sat up front with my mother. but i had to sit back her with my drooling 2 year old baby brother Ron. Ugh we were listing to Roxy's mix C.D she has not taste in music. i turned my ipod on and listened to it. after 3 songs we got to pizza hut. thank you! my sister really didn't like pizza hut but i didn't care. i was the first one out and went inside, i asked for a table for...
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posted by viju
Hmmmmm
. (This is a story) aha... (Of husband wife)
I’m not like them
Hmmmmm..... aha aha
That’s the way I am
La la la la la
I’m not like them
La la la la la
That’s the way I am

Be calm, why you’re screamin
Why you cry, when you see me hangin
With some, one else, why I feel
Like something burning

Stay back, why you’re comin
After me, now you’re feelin
Jealous, ain’t I feel
When you were with those bitchy babes when I was seeing you

With somebody else,
Like everyone else
All were watching your back
When you were flat
With those slut girls
You love to hang with them

.

Tell me
..

(Chorus)
Why...
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Goodnight and Goodbye

He shut the door silently behind him, but not enough for her to hear his fragile heart breaking.

When he re-entered the hotel room from the balcony, a sea of faces greeted him. "Do you wanna drink?" Simon gargled, as soon as he saw Niles' worn face.

He embarked to his room, without another word to Simon or any other members of Daphnes family. As soon as he stepped through the frame, he saw Mel in bed, waiting for him. She put down the book she was reading, on the side table and elegantly unblanketed herself from under the covers.
She embraced him and a warm smile spread...
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Chapter Six

After running away from Sean Connors because she was scared that she will do more stupid things in front of him, Jamie had tried so hard to not bump into him. To do that, Jamie ended the soccer practice session with Mac early and after having lunch with Mac, Michael, and Jake and for the rest of the day, Jamie did some chores that were completely useless and just relaxed with her family by hanging out with her three kids and at one time, having a very steamy make-out session with her husband in the basement to keep her mind off of Sean Connors who’s equally as sexy as the man she...
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posted by dragonrider
Alex froze up as his hunter came near him with his bag. Alex started crying again but silently. His thoughts were raging out of control Should I tell him? Nah then he'll just kill me and my family Alex looked up in time to get slapped again.
"Tell me where your family is Alex! or else," Alex's hunter roared raising his hand again
Alex started to shake bad.
"N..No I will not Dude just kill me now so at least I can be in a happy place," he said looking down his tears dripping onto the hard wooden floor
The hunter laughed a big belly laugh. Alex looked up in time to get slapped again. Alex glared...
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posted by Bella_Swan96
OK, so this is a short story I had to write for English class. Plaese tell me what you think about it- I hope you like it.



“Z, get up,” Erin whispered and shook my arm. I opened my eyes to glare at his golden-tanned face. Erin was my best friend and all; but he was so impossible that it wasn’t even stellar.
    â€œI can’t believe you. Blue hair? That’s so last month,” I mumbled sleepily and sat up in bed.
    â€œIt’s retro- purple is so not stellar
 and so is sleeping in, FYI,” Erin replied with a smug smile.
    â€œNo-...
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