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posted by FURRY
After a couple hours I had got use to my body again, jumping and bounding I felt wonderful "That's it, you got it Joel!" Alice applauded me with her wonderfully cute voice "Heh, thanks it's not hard now." I replied blushing bright red, soon I was able to do things that I couldn't do before.

I could shoot ice from my finger tips it was amazing I never knew I was able to do these things, "Wow that's amazing Joel!" she exclaimed, I could feel her presence growing in my head however, it felt like she was becoming more than just a voice, time dragged on eventually it got to the point where I could completely controll the element ice "Wow Joel you're amazing!" Alice exclaimed, by this time it felt like she was right behind me "Thanks! but you know I kinda wonder if I will ever see anything else then just this room." I replied looking down at the frost covered floor "Well with a little more training I'm sure you'll be strong enough to break free of you're mind Joel." Alice stated.

Wait was she holding something from me? Could she have known how to get out this whole time and didn't tell me, "Alice how come you never mentioned this before?" I repleid getting a weird feeling, it was silent... I asked once again but no reply still, the air got colder then it had been in days or so I thought, then an explosion blew me across the room, "What the...." I tried finishing me sentence but the blast knocked all the energy out of my body.

I looked over to where the explosion was, it was hazy I couldn't tell what happened, could Alice have manifested herself? "Hehehe, now we can do some real work." said a weird voice coming from the area where the explosion was, soon I could see a figure emerging from the smoke, it looked feminine however I couldn't make out the face.

It approached me slowly "So this is what you look like." the voice said getting even closer, I tried moving away however my hands were frozen to the ground "AHH!!" I cried out in pain it felt like knives cutting my skin, it was so cold I could hardly breathe, "Hehehe it's futile Joel just relax it will all be over soon." the voice replied coming closer, by this time I could barely make out the face the being was deffenetly female.

She bent down running her finger across my face, again it felt like knives cutting my face, her fingers were as cold as the air around us "Mmm you will make a fine partner, listen Joel I want you to relax and let me handle everything." she said in a seducing voice, it was almost like she was a fallen angel. I was shocked by her bearuty, it was unrealistict like something out of a fairy tail.

Sitting there helpless unable to move or do anything I felt like something bad was about to happen, "Joel do you know who I am?" the woman asked staring into my eyes with much content, "... Al... Alice?" I replied almost certain it was her, she laughed pulling my face closer to her, pushing my lips against hers, her lips felt like heaven, so soft, so smooth I couldn't resist them.

I knew something was about to happen, "Well we have a lot of work ahead of us so lets get started." Alice stated as she picked me up off the ground breaking the ice yet still leaving me unharmed, soon I found myself in the middle of a cold forest, snow was falling and I couldn't see anything except for the little bit of green that was showing on the trees it was pure white silence however I began hearing the same voice in my head "Joel now begins you're real test, I want you to learn to fully control the weather around, you have the power Joel look for it, awaken it!" Alice stated evetually fading out, I thought to myself can I really control the weather around me?

Well I wasn't going to get anywhere just standing here so I had to focus, soon I could feel the wind shift, I concentrated all my energy into pushing the wind to the south of me however by the time I was able to gather the concentration I needed I was out of energy, falling to my knees once more "Hmm looks like we wil have to work on you're magical powers it seems." Alice said slowly manifesting herself into an ice sculpture infront of me, she raised her hand placing it on my face peeling away some of the flesh, I screamed in agony "Why are you doing this to me? I thought you were trying to help me." I replied as blood slowly trickled down my face.

She laughed smiling contently at me "Oh but I am Joel you see pain is a way to make you stronger.. now be a good little boy and sit still for me." she replied laughing like she had gone insane... however form my point of view it looked like she was that way from the begining,
with little effort she spawned what looked like an ice shard of sorts, "Now hold still for a moment." Alice grinned wickdly slamming the shard into my wrist causing massive amounts of blood to rain down on the snow below, "AHHH!" I screamed even louder feeling the ice slowly freezing the blood running through my wrist.
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posted by Dudespie
Just to clarify for the others in my group story, this is just a prototype. I may ask you to rewrite this with your characters in it. I'm just starting with my two.

Pt.1
It was a bright and sunny day on the coast of Australia. The sun was shining, people speckled the shore, and all was well. "Luna! Stop fooling around in the water! Your burger is going to get cold!" Melody shouted to Luna, the youngest of the group. "Oh relax, sis, it's only water. Besides, I can microwave it when we get home, we're not going to be here all day long ya know" Luna retorted at her big sister. "You are SO stubborn...
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posted by RandomOne
"Where are you going?" came Mother's soft, but scolding voice.

To hell. Melony thought darkly. "Just to the wood," She answered, not turning around, staring hard at the dusty ground. She heard a deep sigh behind her.

"Melony..." Mother's sad voice made Melony momentarily guilty.

The feeling quickly faded. "No, Mother."Melony snapped, turning around angrily. "I ain't caring what you say an'more." She swiftly opened the garden gate and ran down the dusty road.

"Melony! Wait! Come back!" Mother called desperately. Melony didn't turn around or look back.

Melony was half way through the woods before...
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so...her it goes:P

Actors:
~Ecem
~Sari
~selen
~sara
~rumeysa
~sevde
~sevde
~dursun
~sufian
~firas
~roberto
~alex
~anthony
...
Scene starts off in class,the first day at school,everybody looking tired,waiting for they're form teacher to be presented.
(a moment of silence as the door slowly opens...I'll be helping on that one!...and a creepy looking teacher steps inside the class-room)
(ACT 1)
Radu:(low and dark voice) Hello....everybody Im your new teacher as we all~~

Alex: yeah,yeah we know,we know

Radu:(laughs sinisterly)you'd wished you didnt say that.NOW...you've been..."disrespectful" to the teacher,come outside...
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posted by amandaj
Ok, this is my first attempt at writing a story, if that's what I should call it, I'm not sure. I'm not an experienced writer, and English isn't my mother tongue, so it's not flawless. Please bear with me a little. But please feel free to give me feedback on this, positive or negative, either way. :)

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There was a time, when she felt like she could do anything. A time when the world didn't seem as intimidating. When all her challenges and struggles was small, and forgotten by the blink of an eye. She doesn't seem to remember a single time when she was younger, when she found...
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posted by TheGoldenHeart
Hi there everyone!

I'm a writer and I'd love some international support for my story that I already gave to Colin Morgan personally as a gift. He inspired me for a certain character and it was given more as a sign of gratitude for the inspiration rather than for him to read it. No idea if he ever would, but I just hope the effort I put into translating it just for him made him happy that day. What a brilliant actor ^^ Anyways - I've created a club and this account itself for communicating with future readers. I don't want to bother anyone with it, but how else could you let people know your...
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posted by ButteBaby_K
Crimson blood speckled the wall. The air of a last scream was still etched in the breath of the murderer. Hands bloody and still clutching the knife the mysterious person walked away. A few hours later, another scream rented through the air. Again, the person screamed the same blood curdling sound. Tanya looked down upon the still face of her true love. Unable to tear her eyes of his limp body she sobbed and dropped to her knees unable to move or speak. Drowsily she stumbles to his body and clutched his hand, tears pouring down from her startling blue eyes. Tanya lay down next to him and drifted...
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hey i dont know where to go with this 1 so any suggestions would b great thankx,



Usual morning, usual day, wake up, breakfast, school, go the long way home, then sit in my room the rest of the night. But today wasnt normal, nothing was right.

I woke up, and sniffed the air, but it wasnt the usuall pancakes i could smell, it was just the coldness, and the emptiness. i jumped down from my bed and ran down the stairs, into the kitchen, no one was there, not my Dad reading the paper at the table, his brows furrowed as he read the sport section. My mum wasnt wearing her bright apron, that was covered...
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posted by Funnygirl77
Ian, grabbed my hand aging, "where are we going?" I asked him. He just smiled "first were going to get some food in you. second I'll take you back to my place and you can stay there."
"What about my stuff it's in my car, which is back there?"
I turned around, and then he grabbed me "do you mean that thing over there." I nodded, "Hey aren't you 16, you don't have your full license yet, so why are you driving." I looked at him, then walked to my car, what was that? I thought, wasn't my car back there.
Ian looked at me, "come on what's taking so long?" I turned away and then I got in my car, I...
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posted by UnderdogAsh
Chapter 1
Starting Point

    I find it funny where I can end up sometimes. In second grade, I ended up face to face with the biggest bully, Hugo. He was in fifth grade and practically had a moustache. There was even a rumor that he had two kids already with some girl up at my city’s high school. Hugo beat the crap out of me and why? Because I decided to play The Hero and stand up for my friend.
    Once at the zoo, I tried to save a kid’s balloon and ended up in the monkey pit because I broke through the net. I got tons of poo thrown at my face and a...
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posted by Cutebutcrazy--
The hardest part about saying goodbye wasn’t the leaving,
It was knowing that once I left you would forget about me.
You swore you wouldn’t but I know you,
Everything is a joke to you about me.
You’ll go on as if I never exsited.
As if what we had was nothing.

Hope is fading from my lips.
With every breathe I take,
With every step that I take,
With every tear I shed,
You make it worse.
All my trust that I built up with you,
Is gone because of the stupid things you did.
I tried to give you chances,
But you pushed me to far,
I gave you one to many.

Now look whose back,
Begging for another chance,
Begging...
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posted by grissomsgirl
This isn't a timeline story Gilbert is three and this is my first try at fanfiction, so please be gentle!

All CSI characters owned by CBS except for Grissom Junior, he's mine, I hope!

When I woke up I saw three faces that I knew the other three I didn’t and me being a shy three year old I panicked, loudly! I cried into Daddy’s neck and shook “whoa Gilbert, what’s the matter baby?” asked Daddy trying his best to soothe me, I started to sniffle and said in a quiet voice “me frightened, strangers” and I snuggled into Daddy’s body “don’t worry Gilbert they won’t hurt you,...
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DUNCAN'S POV:

I really don't know what I was getting into and why I was here. This was rediculous,Chris was rediculous. I looked around and saw person after person waiting to go into a pointless little room just to make a tape. Why didn't they do this at home like the rest of us? And plus, I didn't like the "lovey-dovey" looks all the girls gave me, which made me think A LOT about Courtney, and Gwenn even.

Harold looked at me, "Duncan, the way to positive thinking is to observe."

"What the hell is that supposed to mean?" I snorted in his face.

He gave me a piece of paper and a pencil. "Wrtie the...
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Pretty much the image of Jamie XD
Pretty much the image of Jamie XD
"Welcome to the Auditions! I'm Chris, the fabulous host!" Chris greeted the thousands of people, smiling. He handed us forms and numbers (which we put on and signed the forms) and waited to make a video for our audition.
"Why can't we just do this at home?" I asked suspiciously.
"I wanted to try something different," he said smirking.
"Whatever," I shrugged and went into the back room where there was nothing but a chair and a camera. I turned on the camera and slowly went back to the chair.
"Alrighty," I began, "I guess you wanna know my audition and why I wanna go? Hmmm I honestly don't know....
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posted by pugglelover2000
Laura slipped and fell on ice,with everyone watching."OMG"said Josie and rushed over to Laura's side."What happened Laura,trip over those ugly,cliche boots of yours?"asked Rachel.Josie knew Laura had never liked Rachel.

Laura was starting to get teary-eyed."Hey,don't make fun of my sister like that!"said Josie.Rachel snorted,"Oh,do you need your baby sister to back you up?Maybe that's why you two are always hanging out together."Josie gave Rachel a mean look,but Rachel just laughed.

Rachel was the richest girl in the high school.She always wore hundred or even thousand dollar clothes that...
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posted by para-scence
I felt like I was in jail that Saturday. I was confined to my room, and only allowed to leave for the bathroom. I wasn't allowed anything to eat or drink. Luckily, after the first time this happened when I was nine, I always keep a huge stash of food and drinks in my closet dresser. But there's only so much to do in a tiny room. I read more than a hundred pages of a book before noon.

Then I heard the doorbell ring. I looked out the window, but I couldn't see who was at the door. I went to my door, lightly on my toes, and cracked the door open. I heard a voice that could only belong to Micah....
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I was literally green. I kept throwing myself over the side expecting to hurl but I never did. Rocking back and forth and side to side was about as uncomfortable and sick as riding on a rollercoaster that was not quite on the tracks. Man did I feel awful. I felt this way because I was sitting in a miniboat that was heading towards land. I was surrounded by water and by other crew members from the big ship we've been sailing  on since I was five. Now I'm twelve. Long time, I know. Also in the boat with me were Richards, the best captain in the world, Craman who loves to row and steer our ship,...
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