Writing Article: Broken Dreams Chapter 4

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posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

The next day, I was hurrying to school, which I had never done before. Ever.

I impatiently sped through History, English and Trig. By the time lunch came around, I was trying my utmost not to sprint to the cafeteria.

I felt so deflated when he wasn't there. The small brunnette girl, Tia, who had every single class, save for Biology, with me, was walking next to me. She talked a lot, she was easy to be around. She never paused, so as long as you nodded and smiled, no-one could tell you weren't listening.

I sat down with Tia and her friends. I didn't say a word the entire time.

Where was he?

Shaun

I watched everyone walk out of the cafeteria when she did. She looked upset.

At the moment I noticed her, she looked at me again, in the same strange way she had yesterday. She seemed instantly happier. Why would anyone be happy to see me? She looked away, and I became aware that I was already five minutes late for Gym.

I may as well have belonged to an entirely seperate galaxy for the remainder of the day. Not that I probably already didn't seem that way.

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Linda and Jared McClean had been fostering me for the past two years. The were both in their early thirties, and unable to have kids.

I wasn't sure why they were both still so friendly to me, I'd never done anything to make them.

Linda had, at first, tried to get me to call her mom. I'd declined the offer, but now, I realised that she was, in a way, more like a mom to me than my real one had been.

When she asked me how my day was, I told her, instead of my usual 'fine', "Great, thanks, mom."

My next words were cut of as enveloped me in her warm arms.

Nice-Guy, rose12345 and 7 others like this

_madz_ this is so good! its so good it's beyond words!! i love your writing so much! :)

brooki This is really touching!! Especially with Shaun and his foster mom! Great job!

aLeX-cHaP aw thats so sweet

xXjakeloverXx awww how sweet! loved it!

TDIlover4ever this is so good! :D

Liepe good, didn't, "She talked a lot, she was easy to be around. She never paused, so as long as you nodded and smiled, no-one could tell you weren't listening." come from Twilight? But still good!

123moo123 yeah, u did get that from twilight, right? but still AWESOME!

Injury LOVED IT

alliXcobber aww thats so cute! youre such a good writer!!!

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Edward POV: Coming Back to Bella

posted by kingdaka44

I had no sense of time passing as I stared at the wall. I couldn't move, couldn't relax the tight ball that my body was curled into. I tried to think of how long I had stayed in this position. I guessed it had been about two months. It had been two months since I last went hunting. I had gone alone, and when I had come back I had collapsed on the floor, unable to move. I wondered vaguely why I didn't feel thirsty. Then I dismissed the thought, for I couldn't feel anything anymore. I just felt numb all over, except in the one place where I would have welcomed the numbness: my mind.
I could...

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A Blood's Tale: Part 3

posted by DarkGirl23

Five years later, sixteen, and the experience of it still torments me.

I suffer sleepless nights in the dark, waking up from the strangest nightmares known to man.
The site of the body still clings to me like the stench of misery. It makes me wonder, all through this time, what actually keeps the average human going?

All we are is dead in the end anyways.
I mean, It’s not exactly like people get the opportunity to really DO something with their lives anymore. Like, for example, something heroic: slaying a dragon, assassinating the one who desires to kill and rule with tyranny, or maybe be the...

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The 7th Grade Guide: A True Story and Guide on How to Survive 7th grade-Part 2

posted by Poppygirl9904

Hey guys sorry that i haven't added a new entry for this in like 7 months, i have been really busy with school, homework, tests, etc. if your interested please let me know because then i will just try to recap everything that has happened very often. so read on, fav please it would mean a lot! thanks now on with the story

One the first day of school i still couldnt believe that Brent was on my team, that meant he'd be in a lot of my classes.On the day back i wore a pretty new red and black stripe top with a attached cover thing, but the shirt had a beautiful lace back with black jeans. When...

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blood stained heart

posted by meganhartxo

i suddenly felt a sharp pain from my chest before i knew it i had fallen to the ground not knowing wat had happen to me i struggled to get up i lifted my head and was shocked to see my own mother standing before me and a sharp kitchen knife that i had once used griped in mothers hand i was shocked i tryed to say something but couldnt i was in to much pain but i couldnt believe it the mother that gave birth to me, raise me and that i loved dearly had done this to me i suddenly felt cold and fell back to the ground i layed there watching my mother staring at me in discust i felt a pain in my...

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Arrowbound- Chapter 1

posted by Skitty_Love

Heather. Illustration(c)PhoenixRoyale

It was a cool Autumn, just like any other. It relaxes me, feeling the cold press up against my face. My elder sister, Allisyn loved this time of year, because that was the time of the Archer's Tournament. I never really cared, even if she asks me to support her. It was such a dull & tedious event. I've always thought that it was lame, even when I was little. Not exactly my cup of tea.
"Honey, do you think you might feel like going to your sister's Tournament this year? I don't see why you never want to go, you could learn a thing or two from her, if you decide to learn how to handle a bow...

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Forbidden Love (CHAP. 7)

posted by DxCFan123

MONTH 12, DECEMBER 28, THE DAY SADAO IS TO DIE
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I ran away before Sadao woke up, taking my scythe with me. I was to be away from him all day, anyways. I walked around the town, looking for something to do until 1:10.

I really don't understand why I had to spy on him, he dies either way.

I just jumped around from rooftop to rooftop, watching random people on the street. I ended up doing this until noon, which is when I decided to follow Sadao. He did things that a regular person would do, went to the bank, bought some groceries, went out to eat, etcetera, etcetera, etcetera....

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Forbidden Love (CHAP. 4)

posted by DxCFan123

MONTH 7

Kat's POV
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"So, what's it like it heaven?" Sadao asked me while we were talking on the phone. "Well, it's like the normal world, except everyone's dead." "So, in heaven, they have this exact town?" "Yes, but there are only the souls of the deceased living there."

"This may be a personal question, but... how did you die?"

I just stood where I was, which was in front of the house, stunned. Why would he ask me a question like that? "U-U-Uhm.." "Please tell me? I wont tell anyone else!" I hung up.

Sadao ran outside and up to me. "Sorry for asking that." He brought me...

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A Dark Mark and a lightning bolt scar.

posted by GryffindorGirl2

Jasmine's POV

Harry and I walked to the park.The hot,dry,humid summer air blowing at out backs.My hair wipped around me,hitting my face and getting in my eyes.No sooner had I moved it away,that the wind blew it back.My sweat shirt fell around my shoulders,but I pulled it back up.The wind continued to blow,and as I listened,fell into a rythem.The sound of Harry and mine footsteps falling on the quiet street sounded like clapping.I raised my arms to the sky and began spinning in circles as I walked.I began to sing,my voice blending with the wind and our footsteps.
"What doesn't kill you makes...

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Una amistad

posted by shenelopefan

~Una amistad~

Hoy se lo iba a decir, estaba decidido. Se dirigió con paso firme hacia la casa de su amada. Debía ir de todas formas a tomar el té con ella. Igual que siempre. Era su mejor amiga. Él nunca se había enamorado así de alguien. Nunca se creyó capaz. Pero esta jovenzuela, Janice de nombre, era la más intrigante e interesante del mundo. Completamente excéntrica, rechazaba todos los protocolos y era una excelente negociante. Aun recordaba el primer día en que la vio. Él vio una mujer segura de sí misma, fuerte y delicada. Hermosa pero ruda. Tranquila pero inteligente. Estas...

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Darkness Locked Into the Heart: Chapter Three, HWSNBN (Who- Shh- Bin)

posted by InvadaMiz

Meggan slapped herself.
"Get yourself together!"She told herself.Kylie came in, Kylie is Meggan's cat.She's only a kitten but has all her colors.She is black with white stripes.
"Oh, hi Kylie."Meggan said.She got out of bed and went into the bathroom.About ten minutes later she got out of the shower, put her clothes back on, and lied down next to Kylie.Kylie purred and rolled over next to her.Meggan petted her, she smiled at the feeling of Kylie's soft, fluffy, fur.Meggan felt a strange presence.She looked at the side of her bed, and saw Kylie, she looked at the cat she was petting, it had glowing...

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Prologue:The Kill

posted by Dhampires

I pull back my bow and arrow,'The white dragon.' His words running through my head like a free train.I angled directly for my target gave a sudden jerk on the bow and release .I watched as my bow shoot over three buildings, at seventy miles an hour,through the glass window-like a bullet's shot- and into the back of my target.I watched as he dropped to the floor as the blood gushed from his body,after a few moments later he went pale and started twitching showing that my posion was taking it's toll on my victim.I smiled at my work and stood up striaght,more people crowded around the man's lifeless body.As I began my stroll back to my clan or covenant if you will....

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ELF; Part 3

posted by alejpatv

The light of the fire faded as I got further into the forest. I jumped over roots and ducked under branches that threatened to whip my face. I ran as hard as I could. To escape, I had to keep my sister safe and fulfill the wish of the village chief. My tears already used and dried, but the pain in my heart still wouldn’t leave. An emptiness had taken hold where my safety and secure feelings had once been.
On the edges of my vision, I saw a flash. I skidded to a stop and looked to where I thought I had seen it. There was a clearing where the full...

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My Beloved Puppy

posted by PotterLambert93

His name was Charlie Brown. We first got him in the fall of 1999. He was cute cocker spaniel with the color of brown and had dark eyes. For 13 years, he was a part of our family. We played with him, took him for walks, gave all the love we had and so much more. He was also a ruff dog as well. Whenever people would come over he would bark at them, thinking that he was trying to protect us from danger. He would also bark at other people's dogs when we took him for walks and, he was very capable of biting badly. Despite all of that, we still loved him, and he loved us.

Around a few years ago, he...

What I wish I was?What I am not ?Who will I be?part 1

posted by Lismine

If you like this check out more of my stuff.

"Hello my name is Jasmine P. Love,"she said slowly while looking to the ground."Hello Jasmine," said the other people looking at her.Jasmine stops to look at everyone as if she was going to scream and hide.She takes three deep breathes.And says," I am her because when I was four years old I saw my mother and father die by a crazed man.His face still haunts me in my sleep that's why I don't sleep no more.I spent my whole childhood in an ophanadge with no friends nor no enemies because no one noticed me.Not even my family who know about me and didn't...

Stay with me [short song]

posted by Lord_Anubis

Hope you mates will like it =3
Feel free to comment

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I'm looking at the black ceiling, in this empty room I sit.
I'm leaning my back on cold wall where light of the sun can't reach me.
I don't have any peace, same pictures are repeating in my head.

The grey clouds rise above and I'm goin out for the rain.
Let the cold drops from the skies give me peace and break my sadness.
But even hard rain can't clear thoughts of you.

And feels like I'm falling in deep abyss, dark water swallowing me as I close my eyes and turn my head up to sky.
It's eating my mind, taking away my dreams.
Oh please pull me out, stay with me.

Today I'm not goin out, I'll reamin in the dark waiting for you.
I'll defy to all my desires cause I can't ask anymore from you.
I'll be singing only for you my angel.
Oh please pull me out, stay with me.

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1/22/12

posted by Hermione-Fan361

This is a true event. It happened on 1/22/12. I just rewrote it as a short story.

I was in the snow.
Kevin, Noah, Mackenzie, and Jake were there too.
Kevin wanted to play Ice Yeti, a game in which some people are tackled, and the others are the tacklers. I was a tackler along with Kevin and Jake. Kevin said he and Jake would go after Mackenzie, and that I should get Noah. I blushed a little. I like Noah. A lot. We started out, splitting into two groups. Noah was fast, but he got tired quickly. He suddenly turned around, and we collided. We were in the snow, me on top of him. He grinned up at me, his brown eyes shining. I knew at that moment how much he liked me too. I could see in his eyes the longing. He wanted to kiss me, right then and there. But the others were still around... watching. He sat up, and I was then in his lap. He helped me up, giving my fingers a squeeze, and we continued our game.

the cobras part 1 story

posted by terra_rocker

The Cobras

I guess that’s what it is being called now my band ‘The cobras’. In this band we play all sorts of music types but we pride ourselves on wanting to play rock.
So my names terra but my band name is viper so sometimes you’ll hear me as terra but mainly viper. The 2 people I started it with are called Jezebel aka Scorpio, it describes her, and Francesca aka fangs, sometimes I wonder how she can have her head in the clouds so much. We have 3 more now.
I write the songs too, sometimes with Scorpio. So this is our poster I made ready for when we get a gig and to give to places so...

Perfectly Crooked - Chapter 1

posted by GummyBears_11

As screwed up as my life was, I always found joy in singing. I sang everyday, no matter what happened. Singing helped me remember a better time. A time when 'he' wasn't around. A time when my mother WAS around. A time when I wasn't alone.

Chapter 1- Ring Around The Rosies

I jerked awake. I was covered in cold sweat, and I still had flashbacks of the nightmare stuck in my head.

"No! Mother, please, don't go!"

There was no use in falling asleep again. It was already 6:40, and soon enough, my stepfather would barge in my room, yelling at me to get up, calling me names, threatening to beat me....

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Death Targets Ch.4

posted by problematic124

**Thanks for the comments and please don't copy**
Chapter 4
Light bills
It was a few days after the brownie incident, thankfully nobody knew who dropped the brownie but since it was on the floor the snack room was on lockdown for a few days.Today was the last day and people were jumping down in anticipation.
And I became one of the group when I was informed of a pizza/popcorn party I was invited to.
"It's on Friday night after school bring lots of candy and movies and prepare for the worst" Tweety informed me
"The worst?"
"The weathermen say it might rain and maybe with thunder and lightning we might...

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How to stay dedicated to writing a story, FF, etc.

posted by Pixalfirebolt

Steps for success
#1 ~ Find a subject
Find a subject that you like. Such as fantasy, historical fiction, sci-fi, or any other genre you like.
#2 ~ Find a topic
Think of an idea that you would like for your story. Make sure that it can fit into the category that you've picked previously.
#3 ~ Think of a topic sentence
If you don't have a juicy topic sentence, readers will generally lose interest.
#4 ~ Plan ahead
It's always a good idea to plan ahead. Make sure that your story doesn't lead to a dead end, become boring over time, and make sure that you have enough time in your daily life to type this...