1.Lloyd2-I Just Got Real Close To Him In The Past 5 Hours.
2.Hidanfan-She's Real Funny, Cool To Chat In The Chatroom With, And She's Just Plain Awesome! We Even Created A Spot Called "Giovannimtz&Hidanfan" I Thought Of The Idea, She Made It! I Also Created Her A Spot Called "Hidanfan" She's Also Obsessed With Hidan From Naruto.
3.Akatsuki_Otaku-She Loves The Akatsuki From Naruto Like I Do. I Was Her First Fan And She's Fun To Chat With Like Hidanfan.
4.Bond_Of_Fury-I Also Got Close To Him In The Past 2 Hours, Lol.
5.Rusty746454-She Was My Bff On Fanpop But She Started To Stop Going On Fanpop Sometimes And I Got Close To Other People. Sh Introduced Me To Fanpop.
6.Temari_-We Chatted Twice In The Chatroom And We Got Real Close Then. She Always Was On My Side On The Debates I Was In! I Was Her First Fan, Also.
7.Hinata1994-Temari_'s Younger Sister, She Was Also In The Chatroom When I Was Chatting With Temari_. We Also Chatted And Got Close, Too!!!!!
8.Sakura1992-Hinata1994's Twin Sister, She Was Also In The Chatroom When I Was Chatting With Hinata1994 And Temari_, Lol. We Also Got Really Close!
10.Dvirgueza-She Comments Very Nice On My Picks, When We Chat She Doesn't Overreact, And She's Not Mean At All! None Of The Others Aren't Either!
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2.Hidanfan-She's Real Funny, Cool To Chat In The Chatroom With, And She's Just Plain Awesome! We Even Created A Spot Called "Giovannimtz&Hidanfan" I Thought Of The Idea, She Made It! I Also Created Her A Spot Called "Hidanfan" She's Also Obsessed With Hidan From Naruto.
3.Akatsuki_Otaku-She Loves The Akatsuki From Naruto Like I Do. I Was Her First Fan And She's Fun To Chat With Like Hidanfan.
4.Bond_Of_Fury-I Also Got Close To Him In The Past 2 Hours, Lol.
5.Rusty746454-She Was My Bff On Fanpop But She Started To Stop Going On Fanpop Sometimes And I Got Close To Other People. Sh Introduced Me To Fanpop.
6.Temari_-We Chatted Twice In The Chatroom And We Got Real Close Then. She Always Was On My Side On The Debates I Was In! I Was Her First Fan, Also.
7.Hinata1994-Temari_'s Younger Sister, She Was Also In The Chatroom When I Was Chatting With Temari_. We Also Chatted And Got Close, Too!!!!!
8.Sakura1992-Hinata1994's Twin Sister, She Was Also In The Chatroom When I Was Chatting With Hinata1994 And Temari_, Lol. We Also Got Really Close!
10.Dvirgueza-She Comments Very Nice On My Picks, When We Chat She Doesn't Overreact, And She's Not Mean At All! None Of The Others Aren't Either!
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Memories,
Confusion,
So many thoughts,
The end is near,
The darkness coming,
Now its here,
The show is over,
The lights are off,
We now say goodnight,
Goodbye,
As we begin 2 open the new chapter
It hurts at first,
Will the changes be extreme?
Please, just tell me,
This was only a dream,
I want to go back,
To relive this again,
This high point in life,
It can't end.
The stage lights dimmed,
The leaving spoke,
With happy faces on,
But tears in their eyes,
This show is over,
Now go home.
Confusion,
So many thoughts,
The end is near,
The darkness coming,
Now its here,
The show is over,
The lights are off,
We now say goodnight,
Goodbye,
As we begin 2 open the new chapter
It hurts at first,
Will the changes be extreme?
Please, just tell me,
This was only a dream,
I want to go back,
To relive this again,
This high point in life,
It can't end.
The stage lights dimmed,
The leaving spoke,
With happy faces on,
But tears in their eyes,
This show is over,
Now go home.
She fell to the floor and wept, and the jar shook
The day ended on a cold note for the cold night
He had her heart sealed in a jar, fragile and trapped
Until he had his moment and let go
With little strength, she had saved it and ran
She had ran until the darkness was unbearable,
As she wept, the jar shivered in her arms
Her dark blue eyes were drenched
And her mind was a dark, narrow corridor.
Her heat prolonged in entrapment,
Torturing her unknowingly with each eternity-like moment.
Finally, she ceased her overwhelming emotions,
Now silent and pondering
Distracted, the jar fell, and shattered at her feet
He’s gone. He’s gone! The words danced in her mind.
Her heart was free, and she was free
She got to her feet, no longer stumbling
And the shattered jar crunched under her feet
There was no more pain.
~~~~~~~~
...Yeah, I know it kinda sucks. Like I said, first attempt. :/
The day ended on a cold note for the cold night
He had her heart sealed in a jar, fragile and trapped
Until he had his moment and let go
With little strength, she had saved it and ran
She had ran until the darkness was unbearable,
As she wept, the jar shivered in her arms
Her dark blue eyes were drenched
And her mind was a dark, narrow corridor.
Her heat prolonged in entrapment,
Torturing her unknowingly with each eternity-like moment.
Finally, she ceased her overwhelming emotions,
Now silent and pondering
Distracted, the jar fell, and shattered at her feet
He’s gone. He’s gone! The words danced in her mind.
Her heart was free, and she was free
She got to her feet, no longer stumbling
And the shattered jar crunched under her feet
There was no more pain.
~~~~~~~~
...Yeah, I know it kinda sucks. Like I said, first attempt. :/
Ok, so I just want to write a little summary to my story that I want to write called A Place of Our Own I'm basically writing this to see if people will like it, and if they do, I'll write more. :)
So anyways, it's about a Hollie, 17 year old girl who has an alcoholic mother and a step father who abuses her as well as her 12 year old sister, Amy. Hollie's been in a 3 year on/off relationship with a heroin addicted boyfriend, Danny. When a close call puts Danny in the hospital, he promises Hollie that he'll quit and they'll find a better life. This causes Hollie to realize that she needs to leave home and find help herself.
So yeah, if you liked this, please comment and there WILL be more. Thanks. :)
So anyways, it's about a Hollie, 17 year old girl who has an alcoholic mother and a step father who abuses her as well as her 12 year old sister, Amy. Hollie's been in a 3 year on/off relationship with a heroin addicted boyfriend, Danny. When a close call puts Danny in the hospital, he promises Hollie that he'll quit and they'll find a better life. This causes Hollie to realize that she needs to leave home and find help herself.
So yeah, if you liked this, please comment and there WILL be more. Thanks. :)