Writing Article: That kind of darkness makes me moan

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posted by caramelmilk

That day I thought I was a failure. I was sitting outside our house on a bench in my white dress, just staring at the dark sky while raindrops were running down my cheeks. It could have been tears as well, all I knew was that it was raining pretty hard.
As she noticed I was outside, she opened the door and told me to come inside, where it was warm. Her soft voice told me she was going to make some tea for me and that everything would be okay.
I didn't even look at her when I got up and started to run.

The grass felt wet and cold under my bare feet as I was running towards the nearby forest, the rain making my white dress transparent, allowing birds to see my rather tiny breasts and the spongebob panties I loved so much.
A vivid flash of lightning turned the evening into day for a matter of seconds and at the same time I heard her calling my name. I turned around without stopping, just to see that she was following me.

I wasn't surprised that she was and to be honest it gave me a warm feeling inside. As much as I needed to express my bottled-up emotions by running I needed her to follow me and show me that I still was an important part of her life. My frustration, my sadness turned into joy while I was running in the rain being followed by the love of my life.

"Please wait!"
I slowed down a bit, showing her that I wanted her to be with me, that I didn't need to be alone right now.
I stopped when I had reached the small lake and without turning around, I waited for her. A smile appeared on my lips as I felt her arms hugging me from behind and I softly moved my body against hers. The rain had wettened us both.
The next moment I pulled away from her and jumped into the lake.

"What are you doing?!", she screamed, both amused and surprised.
"Are you coming?"
She giggled in response to that.
"Into the water!", I added.
"You're crazy." With these words she jumped into the lake as well. I swam over to her, pulling her in a tight embrace.
"It's really dark.", she whispered.
"Are you scar-" I became silent when I felt her hand touching and moving up my thigh.
"Ohhh that kind of dark..."

...END...

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J&K forever and always

posted by Dogluva363

My freind wrote a story wat do you think about it?

J+K Forever and Always

Chapter 1
The final day of summer was a normal one. The birds were singing, the sun was shining, and Juliet steerages was at my house [since I am her best friend] thinking of the days to come when school would start. She thought of her classes, her teachers, but most of all she was thinking of Kaleb Wese.Kaleb wese was the brother of her other friend Kara. All she wanted in the world was to be his girlfriend! Truth be told I never could figure...

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Perfect Tragedy - part 2! :)

posted by Liisamyts

CHAPTER 2
A picture of a young blond man was shining on the screen, it was Jacob, their brother, the one who always held it together when everything was falling apart. Adele snuggled closer to her brother. And for once, he didn't push her away, instead, he just held her, not speaking a word.”He promised! He promised he would come home early tonight!” she managed to say between her sobs. Then she burst into tears again. Simon held her until she fell asleep, tears still on her cheeks. He carried his sister up to her bed, where she could be far away from the pain. Dreaming, seeing mom, dad,...

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A different world ch.1

posted by Funnygirl77

Where am I? What happen to me? Who are you? What have you done to my sister and brother? These were the first questions that popped into my mind when I came to. The Boy who looked to be about 18 looked at me and smiled.
He took my hand, "all shall be answered in time." Is what he said, he sound older than I had thought him to be. He lead me to a room told me to sit and then close my eyes. I did as I was told, "You still haven't told me where I am, and where my sister and brother is, what happen to me, and WHO YOU ARE? I said in a tone that sound way to irritated.
He nodded, "I am Mark Lane."...

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A Flaming Wonderment

posted by starwarsfangirl

I wrote this is five minutes. Not that good, I know.
It's in the point of view of a fire.
It's in a fireplace in a living room.
Hope you enjoy.
Read to the rhythym you would
'The Night Before Christmas'

I flickered and jumped
and sat on the logs
and watched as the human
kicked off his clogs.

The dog soon followed
and sat by his side
and they soon were asleep
and my flame soon died.

But a flicker did linger
and I wondered a bit.
When would be the next time
that I would be lit?

-starwarsfangirl
5/4/10

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Love bites Ch.4

posted by Funnygirl77

love bites

Kisa woke up, when she rolled over it was 12:00 at night. Zack laid in his bed,Kisa smiled and went over to Zack. "Are you asleep"? Kisa asked Zack, he rolled over and smiled at her. "No, are you still mad at me"? Kisa frowned, she racked her brain to see why she should be mad at Zack. Then she remembered.
"No, I was never mad at you. So where did you go?" Zack turned away, he didn't want to tell Kisa that he was out feeding on humans, he didn't want to scare her. "I was just out for a walk" Kisa smiled, she knew Zack was lying, she also knew what he was, she just never wanted him to know...

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Hate And Death

posted by EmoKidSteven

You hurt me,
Both externally,
And internally,

You twist a pin into my heart,
And gather my flowing blood onto a cart.
You think you can hurt me,

Just because you gave me money,
You think you can make my life like hell,
Just because I am the one who made you fell.

I wish you have never given birth to me,
I wish I can expose what you are for all to see.
I hate you,

And I hate you to the heart's core,
I want you to hear my vengeful call.
I respect you because I must,

Yet you blame me for not giving you my trust.
How can I love, or trust, a person like you?
Who makes me feel I'm feebler than cotton wool?

I am forever imprisoned to you by blood,
For as long as I live,
The relation between us cannot be cut,

But soon I will take my leave,
Hoping that forever you will grieve

Lisa and Minrough chapter 3

posted by Flana_2

The forest was so beautiful. Even though it was raining, I thought of the sun peering through the trees. There were animals all over. It was like Japan only slightly less busy. Lots of unfamiliar animals gave Minrough high-fives and hugs. After a moment, I scanned his mind. Patients? I thought he said he was a soldier not a healer! After a minute, I demanded to know who they were.
“Patients”. Just like I thought.
“I thought you said you were a soldier at the war”!
“Yeah, a war of diseases”.
“But you’re only a kid! How could you be a doctor”?
“Not a doctor, healer”.
“How...

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duncanxgwen

posted by Fangirl99

ok,this was my FIRST article i wrote when i joined fanpop.i just copy and pasted it. the characters are from Total drama action *a show*,so you may not understand to well if you dont know the show.but,hopefully,you'll catch on.

Gwen
It was a normal day, most likely for Chris any minute now to announce the challenge. "I hope there's no challenge today" said Lindsey.
Beth: I know, that way we can do your hair and nails and stuff.
Lindsey: Oh i know, right?
Chris: Morning, everyone! I know you expect us to think of a way to torture you. But Union rules we have to take a break.
Heather: What?
The rest:...

Maybe

posted by I_love_Mikey

They say you are only supposed to trust yourself, and build few reliable allies, and get to know everyone you trust. They say that only time will tell if you follow that advice. They say that you are supposed to make yourself happy first, for if not you cannot make anyone else happy. But what if you don't know yourself well enough to trust yourself? What if you can't get allies? What if you're dead before time can tell? What happens when you stay behind, and give up on happiness for the sake of others. What if they're moving on before they even realize you're sad?

They say that world peace...

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Chapter 5 of Sucky Sam

posted by coolie

Both Crack-a-bottle and Shatter-a-glass were teens, and their names had a lot in common. Crack-a-bottle and Shatter-a-glass. Hee Hee. The question right now is how the heck do we get out of here?” said bill. Shatter-a-glass searched in her pockets. Hey my phone, the only phone in the world that lets you text and do nothing else,” said Shatter-a-glass. How will that help?” asked Crack-a-bottle. I could text a plane to fly over here and pick us up!” answered Shatter-a-glass. Shatter-a-glass was thinking for a moment. She didn’t have a clue of what number she text so she did every combination...

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More Than Anything

posted by sapphire007

I love my mum. More than anything but my dad has always been my favourite. It’s not that I love him more than mum but he’s fun and understanding, he has wonderful advice and awful jokes. Two weeks ago, dad left. He left mum. He left me. Mum’s sad. She’s not up to much lately. I know she’s angry at him for leaving but she misses him. She’s unhappy and lonely.
Dad talked to me before he went. He told me to study hard, stay healthy and enjoy my life. He made me promise to look after mum. I think he’d be disappointed in me if he heard her crying at night. I...

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Sestina 1

posted by housefrk

Not incredibly good, I know, but it's a first attempt.

The woman, in the kitchen baking a pie,
Watches her daughter, getting ready to take the dog out for a wash.
The woman comments on the early spring
As she gets ready to put on the coffee.
The daughter takes the dog next to the car
And hums a song she learned long ago at school.

Down the road, the woman can just see the school.
She thinks about how, in home ec, she baked an apple pie
And how in the parking lot, she wrecked her first car.
The buzzer rings for the woman to hang the wash
So she pours a cup of coffee
And leaves it to cool in the breeze of...

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fiction writing(The Writing in Red)

posted by CHikHEN

Chapter1 At my school (St.John's) we have only two majoir athletic groups. Those would be soccer and football. If your not an athlete your a wanna-be or you wanna kill one. KIll not being an understatment.

I'm Kris and yes I am both a loathed and suat after person. My being the captin of the girls varsity soccer team. I was the first captin to reject the boys vrsity captin. As i presume you've taken it under usumption that he didn't agree. Tushay you say, well I've thrown a spin on it. I'm dateing the wonderful, the glouriuos, the perfect Dakota Dawning(he's the captin of the football team)....

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Song - One day

posted by viju

I'm sitting there reading silent, softly,
People walk by and they roll their eyes,
They don't even know who I am,
And who I could be.
Oooooh
I am more than what they think I am,
Someday I know I'll prove them wrong.
They walk around just like they're so strong,
When they know they're not.

(Chorus)
Well I guess,
Some guys, they just don't have their brains.
Some gals, they just see me as plain.
Some folks, they just don't have ability,
To see what I could be, to see what I could, I Could be
One day.

I step out feeling like no one understands,
Who I am, Who I am, deep inside.
They just don't get who I really am,...

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"Sometimes Goodbye is a Second Chance"[Ch.5]

posted by HarryPLover

"Mrs.Sanchez?"!!

My mind started to go off into wonderment.My dream that had startled the crap about Juan marrying me was really starting to get to me.But I just kept telling myself that it it was only because Juan had mentioned marriage the night before,but he was saying that he wasn't the marriage type at all unless he had found "the one."
But it was more of a joke than anything else.I knew I had to stop it though because Juaney was starting to wake up now and he would easily tell that I wasn't mentally there.So I took a few deep breaths and tried to not to ake him any faster,but then I realized that he wasn't...

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A Sea Tale - Chapter 3

posted by avatarluver990

GUYS, DO NOT READ THIS STORY!! I WILL BE RE-WRITING THIS!! IT'LL BE COMING UP SOON!! DO NOT READ THIS ARTICLE!!! Thank you.

Nynxa was still at shore, hiding behind the rock, and watching the humans passing by. She later noticed a castle. A castle far from where she was, it was old and it needed paint, but she still gazed at the castle and soon fell into a daydream where she was in that castle. Her mother and father and all of her sisters were there! She also imagined that all of the merpeople and humans would someday be friends, and forget about their differences. Her reverie soon popped like...

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"Sometimes Goodbye is a Second Chance"[Ch.2]

posted by HarryPLover

I felt completely laid back and excited to go to the arcade,I needed to play some Gears of War or something to get my frustration out.But when I saw Juan pass the arcade I started to get nervous.
"Ummm...Juaney...are you kid napping me?"
We joked around and laughed our butts off for a few minutes but Juan ended up explaining to me that he knew that playing some fighting game would just make me get even more upset and that I needed to cool off before I did anything I would regret.Therefore he took my phone away and turned off the radio just in case I decided to start cuss-texting Joel out or started...

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Life of a Princess

posted by XDRoseLuvsHP

I literally just wrote this five minutes ago. It popped into my head, and I was bored, so I jotted down a sort of preface of an idea. I probably won't end up using it, but I thought I might as well get some feedback. It would be historical fiction, which I don't usually do (I'm more of a fantasy girl), so bear with me. Here it is:

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I have seen many a young girl wishing that she could be a princess. Beautiful dresses, fancy dances, luxurious meals, flourishing gardens in a majestic palace... who would deny this?

I myself was born a princess. I was...

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Immortal Magic - Prologue and Chapter 1

posted by 1-2vampire

Prologue
“Witch! Witch!” they screamed. Willow ran from the angry mob behind her. She could feel their anger, and their fear. For her there was just fear. She didn’t know what to do; they’d caught her in the act of healing a leaper. At first he thought that she was Christ reincarnated, which was ridiculous, but she made the mistake of laughing at his absurd thought. And he figured it out. He may have been a leaper but he wasn’t stupid.
“She’s over there!” Someone shouted, Willow glanced back, and saw the flickering flames in the distance, and the pointed teeth of pitch forks....

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Never Silenced (A new story)

posted by ChickRiddler

Preface:

It gets harder and harder to see Dominic each day. Every day brings new pain, new longing, and new tears. I love my boyfriend but Dominic has a certain affect on me that I can’t control. I am a terrible person….
When I’m not with him, I feel a relief from deception. But also, an opening into a deep pit that swallows me until I’m with him again. When I’m with Jason, I am partially taken from this hole. But there is still a cloud looming over me, and the pit below me, threatening to swallow me at any minute. I try not to give in to the temptation if telling my love how I feel...